Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD V (Chp 23 19th July 2020) - Page 54

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Posted: 5 years ago

What happened ? Hope ur okay? Assuming all is safe with you and family.

it was a sudden surprise that you continued the story after 4 years. I request u to give a quick outline of the ending if you plan to not continue to write again. Thanks.


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I'm so glad you have continued this story. Though incomplete, it was on of my favourites on IF. I often thought about it and wondered how it would develop. Looking forward to reading the rest.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I hope you are safe and sound Radhika!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Take care Radhika, Hope u and ur loved ones are safe

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Posted: 5 years ago

It is good to have you back in the writing world. Any lost stories, updated by an amazing writer is always welcomed. Especially for a story like this one, that has a charm of it own. The way your story moves back and forth, the imperfections you have carved for your characters, the pacing of the narrative, it all adds up to a the making of a wonderful and addictive story. There are so many subtle underthings in this story, that make it so relatable and humane, that you wonder at how easily you brought out those emotions in words.

It’s good to have you back. This story is an important part of IPKKND fandom and thus, the fanfic world will be incomplete with your writing.

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Posted: 5 years ago

There is nothing that I can say about this story that others have not said before but still I just want to thank you so much YellowBoots, for crafting the world of Tewari and Sons, for coming back to it and leading us through this world. Every single character we met here has so much depth. Every single conversation seems to play out before our eyes. Not only are the interactions real, but the world feels so real in both its moments of poignancy and pettiness. With all that Delhi has gone through in the last one year or so, I took so much pleasure from the thought that your Khushi still continues to run her shop with the azaan of Jama Masjid washing over her days.

I know you yourself have been busy, challenged by life and so I doubly thank you for sticking with the story. I had read it long back and kept coming back to the last thread but then life took over and I forgot to check back. In a way that was a blessing since I had four whole chapters to savour my way through. Of course being an ArShi shipper and someone who has watched the show, I would picture the faces of the actors as Arnav and Khushi, but this story is a standalone masterpiece. I have said this in one of your threads before and I want to put it out there again, I want to read anything that you may publish. I want to see your name on the shelves of my local bookstore!

My thoughts are too scrambled still to say anything coherent about the chapters but that being said, the last chapter, An Evening in Nizamuddin, seemed to be a coming together of all the various strands of the story. Especially one particular thing that really moved me was this sense of a revelation that is happening here. One thing you keep playing with throughout the story is how much we see as well as don't see when we look around us or go through our daily lives...how our own demons colour the way we receive the world. And then when you have those curtains parting and characters suddenly coming across each others vulnerabilities, it is not only them seeing the other person for the first time for who he/she is but it is also when they are seeing themselves. And that just rang so true.

Anyway, all this is just to tell you how much I love this story. And you for writing it.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Coming back to check I hope you and your family are safe and sound....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Any one know Radhika personally? Then please let us know if she is ok.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow I didn’t know you were back in this story. I checked every year once in a while when I was on IF if this story was back on and this is finally back. I would love to see how this ends. Thank you for continuing.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello Radhika, Hope you are ok. Your fans have missed hearing from you. Let us know you are ok.update or not.

Thank you.

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