Riansh OS - I , Wife of a Criminal - Page 2

Oh man!!

This is the best piece I have read till date.

What a re-interpretation of the show.

In fact better in the exploring and expression of Riddhima's POV.

This was brilliantly written. You have a flair for words and I could actually feel what Riddhima was going through. The transition was brought beautifully and the way you weaved in and out of the set narrative made me remember the entire show again from the start.

I have been slipping the episodes lately because of too much family villains vs Riddhima and with the absence of Vansh; I would just skim through WU.

Your fic just lit my interest again.

Keep writing.

- Niki

Awesome it was. So beautifully u have penned it.

Its really good OS amrita👍🏼

Very nice write up👏

Brilliant Amrita !!!

Your words provided much needed clarity from Riddhima’s POV

Hope someday we get to see such scene !!!

Do keep writing more 😊

this was brilliant. i just wished same would have happened without any of that over dramatic effect

Wahoo👏 brilliant. You should write ff

Wow Amritat, beautifully written viewpoint of Rhiddima's journey so far..lovely analysis and intruiging ending...I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue with the OS

Wow this was absolutely amazing!👏

You are a brilliant writer.

It was soo engrossing whilst taking us through Ridhimas thoughts, feelings, dilemma and conflict.

I loved how it started off with her having no feelings at all for him to bring unnerved with the reason she was here anymore.

Please write more.

Thank you for pm❤️

Amrita...🤗

Wow 🤩 just wow..

I always loved to read the episode updates given by you. And today you have fulfilled all of our wishes by giving us this OS..

This one is amazing..👏

You are a beautiful writer 😍

You have penned down Riddhima’s thoughts so beautifully... It was flowing from her first meeting to the lion to her entering into the lion’s den to becoming to lion’s lioness. ( yet she has not turned into lioness yet - I am looking forward to a continuation of this..)

She being absolutely hating the sight of this man to checking him out..😆😉

N then slowly the thoughts of her mind is totally captured by her husband. And shift in her POV towards him.

Just loved it.❤️

Keep on giving us the beautiful stories like this..

Originally posted by: Aromaticglitter

Very beautiful summeded up

👏

Ur writing skills wat a great deep note of change in expression n thoughts u poured into a beautiful wrote

I just love it

Keep writing more amrita

PS Cvs have a look at this get some idea

Thank you so much Arshu. 😊