Faded- Suvan Story (Epilogue Page 21) - Page 13

Chapter 8-

This was a mixture of all emotions...absolutely loved it!

Drunk Suman is fun😆

Why did Vikku disturb them?😡😆

Shravan's reaction was fun😆

I am super duper happy that I already have a set of chapters ready for reading or my curious mind would have been impatient😆

Chapter 9-

Suman....girl has gone mad....still impulsive I see😆

Bassi knows Shravan so well😆

Shravan is going to be angry/jealous yet act cool I believe!

Great chapter!

Well written!

Chapter 10-

Can I say I love Bassi for this? Such a sweet Dewar....already caring for his bhabhi😆

That Vikku bhaiya for sure felt fishy! How did he even dare to fool Suman?

Atlast Major Malhotra is going to thrash Vikku🥳

Suman's allergy😆

Nice chapter!

Can't wait to read the next one!

Chapter 11-

Yes yes yes....Bassi punched that creep!👏

Suman too hit him

Awww....Suman apologised and met Kavita...

Kavita too is a sweetie! She is ready to accept Suman is the biggest relief!

Her words were really wise!👍🏼

And I forgot to tell you I love the quotes you add at the start! Do you write them on your own?

Chapter 12-

Such a soothing chapter!

Trust me Harshika you're a phenomenal writer!👏

Shravan's guilt, Suman's hesitation everything was so well written!

Amazing chapter!

Chapter 13-

Suman directly invited them for a dinner...smart girl...doesn't want to waste time on cups of coffee/tea😆

Suman is cutely evil....on purpose made Major Bassi's fav dessert😆

I hope she asks him about his tattoo☺️

Beautiful chapter!

Enjoyed reading it!

Chapter- 14

Lovely chapter...

The way these two open up is beyond beautiful....it feels serene!

Shravan is being sent on a mission! I am hoping everything comes out good!

The connection SuVan have where they don't even need to speak much is great!

Amazing chapter!

Originally posted by: alina.b

Spent my whole evening reading this in one go and I am amazed! You are a fantastic writer! You write so eloquently! 👏 Tbh I'm liking your story better than what we currently being shown.

Hi-5 Miyan....we two twin sisters for sure😆

Kudos to your writing Harshika...

The story of a militant's family is described so well!

I absolutely adore the Kavita-Suman bonding! We badly need this in the show!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hoping Shravan comes back soon!

And pls ignore me spamming your thread😆 I prefer giving reviews for each chapter!

I enjoyed reading this altogether....such a fab story!

Keep writing!

Originally posted by: SuVan_EDKV2

haaye yaar!! kaash aisa koi sweet sa scene dekhne ko miley show between Suman & Kavita

i really loved the way you portrayed the entire conversation between them.. felt extremely natural. do continue soon