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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Sorry for the late response ani, but we have to enjoy it first then give reviews right?

A very nice update yaar, finally get to see some posessive vansh. Angre is always my favorite supporting character.

Sejal and karan are just the bonus, and well kabir and aryan stories end came a little too early, but thats okay overall a very nice dose of your story..

Keep it up👍🏼

Update us soon

And yeah thanks for the pm...🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Wow, amazing. Interesting.Waiting for your next update😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Who is Karan? Sejal's husband?

Great update Anika.

Vansh feeling bad for biwi. 😔K & A getting beaten up😆

Waiting for more. Update soon. Thanks for the pm🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Amekha

Who is Karan? Sejal's husband?

Great update Anika.

Vansh feeling bad for biwi. 😔K & A getting beaten up😆

Waiting for more. Update soon. Thanks for the pm🤗


He is Sejal's husband.. Riddhu adresses him as Jija.. Sejal is Riddhu's best friend.

Vansh feeling really guilty for his wrongdoings..

Will update soonish...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneel07

Wow, amazing. Interesting.Waiting for your next update😘


Thank you so much.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Sparklle801

Sorry for the late response ani, but we have to enjoy it first then give reviews right?

A very nice update yaar, finally get to see some posessive vansh. Angre is always my favorite supporting character.

Sejal and karan are just the bonus, and well kabir and aryan stories end came a little too early, but thats okay overall a very nice dose of your story..

Keep it up👍🏼

Update us soon

And yeah thanks for the pm...🤗


Thank you so much,dearie.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Awesome update.

Beautifully written...

Just loved it!!

Oh..my..now Vansh will be maanaing Dharampatni..😆

Do continue soon... thanks for the pm..😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Fa13

Awesome update.

Beautifully written...

Just loved it!!

Oh..my..now Vansh will be maanaing Dharampatni..😆

Do continue soon... thanks for the pm..😳


Yes yes!!! Biwi ko manao mission on hoga abhi!!

Thank you so much.. will update sooon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Ch 3.


The doctor called Vansh in his cabin to discuss about her health. An unknown fear grasped his heart about the doctor's briefing.


"Riddhima kaisi hai,Doctor? Is she alright? Kab tak uthegi woh?" Vansh asked with a tired yet worried face.


"Mrs. Raisinghania ki condition abhi stable hai par puri tarha se khatre se bahar nahi hai.. Jis type ka zeher diya gaya hai unhe,woh usually criminals ko ek second mein maarne keliye dete hai.. Unki kismat bohut acchi hai ki bach gayi.. Anyways,maine aapko yahaan isiliye bulaya hai ki Mrs. Raisinghania ko bohut strict bed rest ki zarurat hai. Due to poisoning,kabhi kabaar body shock mein chala jata hai jiski wajah se respond karne mein deri hoti hai.. Other than that,koi baat nahi hai.. Take really good care of her. Aur haan,main ek bharose mand senior nurse ko appoint karta hu jo aapki patni ka dekh bhal karengi 24 hours."


Vansh thanked the Doctor and came outside. He said everything what the Doctor said to him about Riddhima's condition. Drops of tear fell from their eyes' as they heard about Riddhima's current condition. It was never meant to be like this. It broke Vansh's heart even more.


Just then,Angre came with some important news that Kabir and Aaryan has been arrested and is in jail. Vansh couldnt control his anger as he fisted his fingers tightly. Angre asked him to control his anger as it will be needed there,not here.


For a moment,he closed his eyes to gain some strength. As if preparing for a war. He opened them again and requested Sejal and Karan to stay there with Riddhima. They nodded in yes while Vansh went to the Police Station with Angre.


Police Commissioner entered alongside Vansh and Angre. He took them to the cell where Kabir and Aaryan was kept,tying them upside down. They kept wriggling under the tight hold of handcuffs while saying that they will be released in no time.


Vansh comes face to face with Kabir and Aaryan.. Indian Intelligence officers were present there as well to take Kabir in their custody. He comes near them like a beast, takes a big stick in his hand and starts beating them really hard,making them scream and wail.


"Meri biwi maut se lar rahi hai.. Uspe ungli daal ke tum dono ne bohut bari galti kardi hai.. Vansh Raisinghania ka lakshman rekha par karke bohut bar gakti kardi dono ne.. Tum dono soch bhi nahi sakte ke main kya hashr karunga tum dono ka.. Insaan kehlane ke layak nahi ho dono.." Vansh warned Kabir and Aaryan as he was seething in anger.


Seeing him proceeding in such a way, Kabir and Aaryan blurted out the truth about how Ragini was kidnapped by Aaryan and killed her to avenge his insult,how he also put the blame on Vansh of her murder,how Aaryan killed Ragini's father so that he doesn't reveal anything. This time Kabir confessed about how he wanted to finish off Vansh by poisoning him but their plan failed when Riddhima drank that poison laced drink to break her fast.


Vansh couldn't control his anger and launched himself on Kabir and Aaryan like a hungry lion,beating the hell out of them. Vansh was pulled by Angre and his bodyguards while Kabir and Aaryan were handcuffed again.


"Commissioner sahab!!! Make sure ki yeh salakho ke andar se bahar na aaye kisi bhi keemat par!! Faasi par charhaiye dono ko!!" Vansh said,in an ordering tone.


Saying this,Vansh and Angre left for the hospital.


After a few moments, Vansh and Angre sat infront of the ICU where Riddhima was bring treated. Sejal and Karan stayed with them,for giving them moral support.


"Thora aaram karlijiye, Mr. Raisinghania." Sejal said.


"Jab tak Riddhima thik nahi hojati,tab tak nahi." He replied in tired voice.


Karan bought brought a plate of food near him and started to make him eat. Sejal also brought food for Angre,Karan and herself..


"Mujhe ek baat dohrane ki aadat nahi hai!! Riddhu ka jija hone ke haq se kehraha hu, agar tum chahte ho ki Riddhu thik hojaye jaldi se,toh khud pehle khao aur fresh hoke aao.. Aise rahoge toh Riddhu ko kaise thik karoge aur baad mein tumhe maafi bhi toh maangni paregi na usse,samajh aya?" He said with a small smile and made him eat.


Vansh was really happy to be taken care of. Like a group of siblings caring for their brother.


"Maine Riddhima se itna bura bartav kiya aur usi wajah se yeh accident?" Vansh asked with sadness laced in his voice.


"Isme aapki galti nahi hai. Agar aap uspe thora vishwas karte toh yeh sab nahi hota.. Aapko jo dikhaya gaya thha,samjhaya gaya thha,uspe hi aapne vishwas kiya.. Riddhu aapse bohut pyaar karti hai,isiliye woh yeh sab sehti rahi aur kuch bhi nahi bataya aapko.. Sirf Angre ji ko pata thha,par usne inhe kasam di thi aapko kuch na bolne ki.. Thora time dijiye,sab thik hojayega. Mata Rani aap dono ke rishte ko lambi umar de." Sejal prayed for her friend's happiness.


Sejal's words worked like magic. He was relieved of the guilt to an extent.


Sejal and Karan forced Vansh to go home and take some rest while they will be here. Vansh didnt want to leave but one take of reassurance from them made him smile a little and went home.


As he reached home,he took a cold shower which calmed his nerves down. He came out from the shower and had dinner,since he also needs to stay healthy to take care of his wife and also to apologise for his deeds.


Precap: Riddhima comes home and avoids Vansh


The fanfiction u had written was incredible/awesome to say the least.Hope VR is not like this in the ongoing series.His inherent anger & stupidity could lead him to lose his love/wife Ridzi.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Wonderful. Please update

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