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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rachufan

Mind-blowing 👏👏👏👏👏 very emotional


Thank you so much,Rachu di

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: amritat

Awwwww...☺️


Sad and yet passionate. Waiting for next part...


Thank you,Amrita!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Awww what a sad and heartbreaking updt😪😪😪poor Ridhu she wanted to confess her feelings and made all the preps herself but alas Vansh BD is such a bad souvenir for him🥺🥺🥺 that he couldn't control his anger and inner feelings thus he just blast.


Ridhu is so scared ....wondering hw She ll overcome it and cope with the situation❓


Looking forward to the nxt updt how Vansh ll make up to Ridhu and repent for his mistakes.


Thks for the updt 🤗


Riddhu is a smart girl but somewhere she is also hurt by his behaviour. She will come around soon. Vansh has realized his mistake and will do anything that will bring a smile on his sweetheart's face!!


Thank you so much for your comment,Ziva.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

"Dil laagi,
Kaise yeh aag hai
Bujeyna-miteyna-dhameyna kabi,
Yeh kasie pyaas hai...


Dil jaali..

Kaise yeh raat hai,
Rulaye-hasaye-sataye mujhe,
Yeh kasie aas hai"








Awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! I am just loving this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!! So, starts with happy Riddhima planning to surprise her husband for his birthday... kitne pyaar se saare decorations kiye, cake banaya and even planned to confess her feelings but beda gark! Poora ka poora plan flop as what she was planning to make the most memorable day for both of them had unintentionally brought the worst memories in forefront for Vansh... I can understand his grief and aversion to birthdays since his last wife used her birthday to crush his heart and in the heat of the moment Vansh was really very harsh to his Sweetheart. You know after reading the precap last time, I had thought that maybe Vansh would be blasting someone else and Riddhima would for the first time witness her gud-sa-meetha-pati in rudra-avatar... but yaha toh pati ka rudra-avatar toh dekh hi, upar se Riddhu pe hi barash pardha. He had hurt Riddhima's feelings along with her getting injured as well... at least we have our Angre here to put some good senses in his boss and make Vansh realize his mistake.





Now hurt Riddhima took up night-shift to escape her husband and when said husband returned home, only to not find her went frantic... Angre called her and Vansh requested her to come back home but Riddhu baby is in mood to avoid her husband at the moment... I felt like awwwwww he is hurt for causing her pain in anger and she is hurt for causing him unintentionally *Dono kitne cute hai*. Now Vansh has taken a day off and now plans on 'Mission: Biwi ko manao'.... This is soooooooooooo cute, their first-fight-and-maano session, can't wait to see what he does to pacify his roothi Sweetheart...




Update next chap soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!


Hey Kavya!!! Your detailed comment makes my day!!! I really love it a lot.. thanks dear for the appreciation.. ❤️

Will update soonish.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ArohaShah

Hi Anika

Awww !!! That was sooo sweet and beautiful and I was expecting some intense moments between riddhima and vansh but suddenly halaat badal Gaye jazbaat badal Gaye. Very interesting beautifully written now waiting for that how vansh will woo back his wifey😳 ... Really Hats OFF !!! Clap👍🏼

Love

Aroha


P.S: Thanks for the pm🤗


@bold: it reminded me of that "o bhai,maaro mujhe maaro" video!!! 🤣


Jokes apart,thank you so much for the comment. Means a lot.. 🙂👍

Will update soonish.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Fa13

Oh..my..it was a sad update.

Vansh ne toh sab kuch upar se niche kar diya..😒

Riddhima ne itne dil se sab kuch kiya tha.

Love the Angre Ridhu's bonding...😳

Good he's gonna repent.

Do continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.


Angre is a good man here and will support his Bhabhi,for sure.

Vansh is repenting and is thinking of ways to pacify his sweetheart.. ☺️

Will update soonish and thanks a lot for the comment.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: TC_FA

This was so beautifully written😳.

Can't wait for the next update


Thank you so much.. 😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Ch 4.


Riddhima came home after enduring an emotional turmoil and a night attending emergencies. Tiredness was clearly visible on her face. Moreover,the effects of painkiller injections were making her look pale and weak.


She walked towards their room and was about to enter when the memories of last night crept up in her mind.


Tears automatically made its way,grazing her cheeks. She closed her eyes tightly and let them fall. Mustering courage,she slowly opened the door and went inside to find Vansh sleeping on her side. A small,sad smile crept up on her face,seeing his intensity of love,as she kept her bag on the sofa and took her clothes and went for a shower,without disturbing him.


She came out after having a relaxing cold shower. Though she felt relaxed physically but her mind was going back to last night's happenings,every time. She wiped her tears but whimpered in pain,as the tears stung her wounds.


She applied an antiseptic cream and was about to leave when she turned and accidentally her hands hit Vansh's arms,making her stumble. Before she could hurt herself,Vansh caught her in his protective embrace.


Their eyes locked with each other. Vansh made her stand properly and took her in a bone crashing hug,drowning himself in her thick black tresses. He was happy to see her..


Riddhima was shocked by his behaviour and was about to reciprocate when his rude behaviour and words replayed in her mind. She gently placed her swollen palms on his arms and broke the hug,making Vansh look a little hurt.


"Woh. Daadi niche bula rahi hai breakfast keliye.. Aap jaldi fresh hoke niche aajaiye..", saying this,she was about to leave when Vansh held her hand and pulled her towards him. She crashed on his well built chest and both of them fell on the bed.


Riddhima wriggled in his embrace,struggling to move away. The more she tried to come out,the more he tightened his hold around her.


At last,she started to sob and tears fell on his face. He knew that it was due to him that she cried and he hated her tears. He raised his palms and wiped them away. He rolled over,making her lie under him.


Riddhima couldnt control her emotions and pulled him for a tight hug. She continuously muttered her apologies near his ears,while he placed feather like kisses on her face to calm her down.


"I am sorry,my love..." Vansh apologised from the depth of his heart. She looked at him in amazement and replied as she carressed his face, "Its okay,Vansh.. Mujhe samajhna chahiye thha.. Meri bhi galti thhi na!! I am sorry,Vansh.."


"Nahi Riddhima.. Galti meri hi hai... Tumhe sach na batake bohut hurt kiya hai.. Tumne itne mehnat karke sab kuch kiya,par maine sab kuch barbaad kardia... Infact,yeh birthday aur zyada special hota,agar main waisa nahi karta.. After all,yeh mera pehla birthday hota tumhare saath shaadi ke baad!! Tumhe meri wajah se itni chotein aayi aur ek uff tak nahi kiya!! I am really sorry again,Riddhu.." Vansh apologises.


He took her hand which was injured and placed a sloppy kiss to soothe her pain,leaving his lips to linger on that spot,for a while. She felt blissfully happy. He again brought his face forward and bent down to place some feather like kisses on her arms. She closed her eyes and held his arms,tightly.


"Maine tumhe bohut dard diya hai na,Riddhu? I am really sor..." He couldnt finished when she placed her finger above his lips,making him silent.


"Ssshhh!!! Main toh woh baat kab ki bhul chuki hu,Vansh.. Aap bhi bhul jaaiye!!! Hum ek dusre ke saath hai,khushi khushi,yahi bohut badi baat hai.. Haan,main hurt huyi thhi par yeh dukh toh aapke uss dukh ke saamne bohut chota hai.. Itna seh kaise lete hai aap?" She said,joining their foreheads,cupping his face.


He didnt want to reply and lose this moment. She placed a sloppy kiss on his cheeks and replied, "Agar aap comfortable nahi hai,toh koi baat nahi!! Jis baat se aapko dukh pohcchi hai,uske baare mein humein baat nahi karni,thik hai??"


He laid down beside her and opened his arms,inviting her in her embrace. She blushed big time,and hid herself in his warm embrace.


Vansh missed this moment a lot. He tightened his hold around her and pecked her hair. She laid her head on his chest and placed a kiss over his heart,assuring him that she will always remain by her side.


"Baahon ke darmiyaan,
Do pyaar milrahe hai,
Jaane kya bole mann,
Dole sunn ke badan,
Dhadkan bani zubaan.."


Precap: Ek Dil Ek Jaan... RiAnsh ka pehla karwachauth.

Edited by Anika_PreRish - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Woow very nice thankfully vansh knows where sorry n thank you

Please update pretty soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Cannot wait for the next chapter now...

Please update soon 😊

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