OS: Unlocking the heart

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Posted: 5 years ago
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" First of all thank you Krishna for coming back with such a gem⭐️. And sorry for late reply. "

Unlocking the heart

Anirudh was always busy with his case studies...clients....thoughts ...and bondita's studies...But still he found his own time to enjoy reading something every now and then. It was basically his 'Me time'.He has read innumerable works of all kind..Afterall a barrister should not only have clarity in thoughts but also be able to play with his words.....

He was never an avid follower of mythology...but he has tried many. One such mythology that recently got stuck in his mind was the 'greek mythology'....He tried it for the first time while he was in his London university for barristry....He was not truly fascinated by it then.....but years later he feels like reading it again ..it was as if his intuition is attracting him towards the book as if a magnet attracts an iron key. ..He felt as if it is the key to some secret that not even he was aware of himself....

" I hope in the show, ARC has some sense to play with words. ARC believes in Greek Mythology is a new thing, a great thing to attract the readers, Krishna👍🏼. Now, the secret to be unfold is thrill here. "

So he finally gave it a try and sat in his study room reading it without wasting any time....He got stuck in one particular chapter..' Pygmalion and galatea ' .....'a sculptor who never loved woman finally falls deeply in love with his own sculpture....He named her galatea....' 'Galatea---the best work of his life.....he would never create one more galatea ever again...'

@ bold the title is enough to keep up readers hook to story, great Krishna.👍🏼

An artist falling for his muse never amused him but now something has changed this opinion of him, he felt....Don't know why but he could strongly feel some similarities in the story and his life...

'Bondita'...the only word he uttered that gave him a chill through his spine....he sat there still for a few moments.A beautiful smile spread on his lips.....his eyes glowed like never before....he could feel an unbelievable energy in his mind and body....it is like finally he has unlocked the door to his heart. He has fallen in love with his creation.....his bondita....

No he corrected himself....."she is not one created by sculptor.....she was the one created by her own aura and personality who searched her own sculptor to be more enhanced hence giving the sculptor a chance to shine bright too....it was she who searched for him and reached his hands seeking her rights through her wedding letter....he thought he was the one who chose her....but the revelation of the letter girl changed his opinion....she was the one who chose him.....he reached India long back with the mission of fighting for women rights...but he had no idea where to begin from....the letter girl gave him hope that someone like her is existent in this otherwise messed up women's world...his mind and heart wanted to meet her right at the moment to join his mission .....

" Ohh! You've beautifully explained the role of Bondita in ARC in life. The destiny's play with crucial words of him is like petal of roses on the flowing Brook. I got mesmerized with ARC thought that she has chosen him not He... Yes, to set a mission, two people of same thoughts and bravery should join hands. You have elucidated it in a beauty. Loved reading ARC PoV"...

Her bed wedding issue not only showed him her true self but also the kind of strong headed person that she is capable of becoming in the future if moulded well....her inborn intelligence and talent to play with words amused him....he always had a dream picture of his ideal girl which she surprisingly turned out to be.....she never muted herself from questioning the wrong notions of the society....standing for the right.....keeping her promises....fierce....fighting for women....truly a beauty with brain....

" This is what Bondita is!!.. You have done great extinction in explaining her. Bravo Krishna for putting it in words with so much efforts of affirmation. "

It's true he is a gold medalist in barristry but still there were occasions where his anger took over his words and turned the situation against his favour....but she indirectly taught him to convince others suppressing the anger...handling others more calm and quiet....at times she too acted like his mentor....and finally she turned out to be the charistamitic young woman she is now......and nothing can ever stop him from falling for her day after day... "Bravo...!!! Dear. 👍🏼


She is the definition of 'Creation that creates a true artist'. Whether the creation loves him back or not but the creator would always love it unconditionally. Whether she would love me back or not but Anirudh Roy chaudary would always be hers only .....Anirudh came out of his thoughts and smiled realising what treasure he has discovered in his life.....

" Now, this part is the heart of your Os....❤️ You have enchanted the readers by these beautiful and extraordinary selection of words. This is the best of entire Os. You have explained Bondita in just two sentence in an applausible way...👏

Loved this Os to the core..!!


The end

Thank you guys for reading this patiently....I just thought of writing something without any dialogues....only meant to show some realisation by anirudh...smiley4....it might be boring please tolerate itsmiley9....Pygmalion and galatea story always amused me and I think rudhita fits in the scenario perfectly.....right now I have shown only anirudh's pov ...if you really enjoy this I will try to write bondita's pov in other os. ...Os or whatever you call it please don't forget to give your suggestions and the improvement I should make.....just wrote what came in my mind this morning.....smiley24

PS: I always root for anirudh realising his feelings without any third party.

Feel free to throw tomatoes .....but try to throw fresh ones as I like tomato soap a lotsmiley16smiley36

Krishna, you're superb dear. Do continue please. Wanna read Bondita's PoV in a similar fashion. The Greek Mythology have added beauty to your Writings...😊

Waiting for the next one, Krishna. Do write more. Update soon.

Edited by Home786 - 5 years ago
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The sheer beauty of this One Shot robbed me of my senses and ability to form a proper sentence even! This was extremely well written and the reference to the Greek Mythology won me over. I personally love the tale of Pygmalion and Galatea, and it was a pleasant surprise for me to read about that here. You clean bowled me by your gorgeous write-up. 👏


I'm so glad that I could read this beauty.

Thank you so much for penning it down, Krishna.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's beautiful. Loved the self realization part❤️

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Originally posted by: Briti1107

The sheer beauty of this One Shot robbed me of my senses and ability to form a proper sentence even! This was extremely well written and the reference to the Greek Mythology won me over. I personally love the tale of Pygmalion and Galatea, and it was a pleasant surprise for me to read about that here. You clean bowled me by your gorgeous write-up. 👏


I'm so glad that I could read this beauty.

Thank you so much for penning it down, Krishna.

Thank you briti...I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it😳

Will try to write more..eventhough I wouldn't be able to write like you people😅

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Originally posted by: shirin04

It's beautiful. Loved the self realization part❤️

Thank you shirin😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey Krishna thank you for this wonderful OS. 🤗

The story, the concept and your choice of words are amazing 👏

You beautifully depicted Ani's emotions. I loved the way you described Bondita.

She is not one created by sculptor.....she was the one created by her own aura and personality who searched her own sculptor to be more enhanced hence giving the sculptor a chance to shine bright too 👍🏼

And the ending was ❤️

She is the definition of 'Creation that creates a true artist'. Whether the creation loves him back or not but the creator would always love it unconditionally. Whether she would love me back or not but Anirudh Roy chaudary would always be hers only .....Anirudh came out of his thoughts and smiled realising what treasure he has discovered in his life..... ❤️

Do write more. ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prit_007

Hey Krishna thank you for this wonderful OS. 🤗

The story, the concept and your choice of words are amazing 👏

You beautifully depicted Ani's emotions. I loved the way you described Bondita.

She is not one created by sculptor.....she was the one created by her own aura and personality who searched her own sculptor to be more enhanced hence giving the sculptor a chance to shine bright too 👍🏼

And the ending was ❤️

She is the definition of 'Creation that creates a true artist'. Whether the creation loves him back or not but the creator would always love it unconditionally. Whether she would love me back or not but Anirudh Roy chaudary would always be hers only .....Anirudh came out of his thoughts and smiled realising what treasure he has discovered in his life..... ❤️

Do write more. ❤️

Thank you so much prit😃

I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it.....❤️

I will definitely try to write more.....please never hesitate to point my mistakes if any....I always accept criticism since you all will be the ones who can help me in improving🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Thank you so much prit😃

I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it.....❤️

I will definitely try to write more.....please never hesitate to point my mistakes if any....I always accept criticism since you all will be the ones who can help me in improving🤗

I am not that great behen who can find mistakes 😆 The wonderful writers of the forum are for that. ❤️

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Originally posted by: Prit_007

I am not that great behen who can find mistakes 😆 The wonderful writers of the forum are for that. ❤️

It's very humble of you prit.....I can say one thing out forum has an excellent scribe of writers.....❤️

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