Originally posted by: Sunn_shine
Hey there. It's been a while. Hope all is good 🤗
hey good with me, hope you're fine too x
first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.
Dwindled??? It flat lined. It was on ventilator barely surviving the trauma. It was mercilessly killed. 😭
🤣lol
now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, yes I guess, something before she gets into action. Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. I hope the differenciation was visible because it connects to a conversation how Rishabh turned into Mr. Bajaj. So it will only work if there was a slight differnce visible in his two versions. it really is, it'll be nice to see how he became Mr Bajaj (much needed backstory we NEVER got either 😡)
Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them. She has to act now before it's too late and not just because of Menaka but Kukki more importantly and the family she came back to Mumbai for. She needs Rishabh for all that. so true, will also be nice to see start of romance?
loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well. Thank you sooo very much :)
the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. I wish I could sum it up so well myself. Thank you. She was closest in that moment yet soo far. She wouldn't even be there if he was awake.🥺 😭
i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M.
May be because her love at present is unconditional. your talking of Menaka's love right?
Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)
KZK ka yaad bhi nahi karna hai mujhe.
🤬 mujhe aise wali feelings aati hai, soo glad stopped watching. Prerna ko kya progress karte. her characterisation is Unhone to jo tha woh bhi ajeeb kar diya. But yes here she is way more clear in her mind about Rishabh. Now she can take steps in his direction knowing he could be anything but he is not a bad person as everyone back Calcutta projected am so glad she's a fully fledged character in yours, very well written & thinking with her own mind.
can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.
The conversation where it ends will continue. From a single sided monolgue (that's what i meant lol) to proper conversation between two individuals is where we head next.
Thank you soo much for alll your time and for being so patient with me. Appreciate it 🤗
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Its like Meenakshi on an mission RB ko mukti do...
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