FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#4 Ch-36 Pg-62 4thAug DTRem. P - Page 25

Originally posted by: oa2019

nice & long. so much to cover & understand. I actually threw a lot in this update. Hope it didn't confuse. the conversation between maasi & P was nice, they're all things that needed to be said & understood by P. at least P can now reflect properly. P is already on the track. She is not arguing or defending herself anymore. She has agreed that she was wrong. it'll also help her to realise her feelings for how the Bajaj's treated her, with respect, dignity & trust.yass yassss.. ekdam sahi pakde hain. She already knows it all but ab samjhegi things from the past. Psdt needs a closure to begin a future. I think now she is ready to take next steps. 'it's easy to fall in love with someone you trust but you can't always trust the one you love'. So true and beautifully said. I am tempted to use it now in the story your welcome to hun can I use it in any of the updates?? 😊

loved Mehra's inner thoughts, although it was hard to see in KZK () the peaceful presence of Prerna in RB's life, we did get to see RB's feelings towards her & i suppose so did Mehra. Yeah show mein to Prerna did nothing that'd give him any happiness but he stated more of RB pov. We did see him feel for her (how I never understood, but chalo theek hai) so that part of the show will merge with my interpretation and back story here. Hope it makes some sense it's great that your referring it back to the show, it makes it easier to connect it to KZK & the characters:) i love going back to that phase of the show. Anything till the Durga Pooja began was so beautiful. Glad this back and forth connection is working 🤗

now with your addition of P's retrospect & new found independence & confidence hopefully she'll be able to realise...if only a little. She will. Full force feelings like that don't change, so i assume RB still has feelings for Prerna even if his demeanour is formal. i look forward to seeing this crack a little when P starts making efforts towards him. He may have feelings but they developed too fast back in the show with no concrete base as Prerna did absolutely nothing. So jaise wo feel hua waise hi he is out of it. Coming back to Mumbai has also brought things back from his past. So it's not so easy for him thks time. She will approach and he will resist. All ulta i totally agree he fell too hard & too fast, it made it seem rushed & forced. they should have took time & developed proper family dynamics. so does that mean he has no romantic feelings towards her right now? I'd love to see P making the effort & fighting for RB rather than the other way around. It's gonna happen that way. Pre fighting for her place, she won't step back even if it's RB in front of her. It won't be RB going after pre this time. He may once they both fall in love 😃

loved the flashbacks of Menaka & RB, your M seems really nice, i like her. it'll be a treat to watch P's jealousy when she realises her feelings towards RB...i guess she kinda has already. She will feel little J but more of insecurity. Because Menaka isn't forcing herself but slowly creeping back into their lives. can't wait to see the dynamics change when the cat is out of the bag. Me too. Wish me luck I'm sure you'll ace this as well. You are tooo kind 🤗

I'm sure there's more analysis i could do but don't wanna end up writing an essay .

Ohh you can always write essays. I love them but it has to be at your comfort level I'm comfortable just didn't wanna bore you lol. Bore me?? 😲 that ain't happening. I just found such beautiful dialogue. Comments have helped me shape up scenes and dialogues. Most of what Masi said is a mix of all the discussions. Same goes for Prerna's brain vs Heart. But don't feel forced that you have to. All i mean to say is the Bore is not even an option 🤗

anyways can't wait for more.

Me will begin soon.

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

“I HAVE GROWN SO SO LAZY!!!!!"

Hello Sunn_shine/ Meenakshi

How are you? (Should I call you Di I mean I don't know what your age is?) Nd congratulations for the new thread!!!!!!

Please Call me by my name/id. Don't let age get in between as it doesn't matter. 🤗 Thank you for your wishes

God the update was amazing!!!!! I was there in the first 10 minutes tho!!!! Means since last 5 hours(not anymore lol) I have been rereading the update again and again to make sure I know what I m writing in my comment but looks like I haven't figured out it yet!!!!!

Thank you so much. I love how your comments sounds like your voice. Like you are thinking out loud or speaking to me while writing. I can imagine you (in my own way), may not be anywhere near the real you.

Ummm so from where should I start there are hell lot of things to write and I don't know from where should I start!!!! Ok so I will start from my fav part of the update!!!!!

That works, begin from your fav part :)

THAT TINY BIT WHERE RB WOKE FOR A FEW MINUTES ( WOULDN'T TAKE IT FOR SECONDS) KUKKI KISSING HIS FOREHEAD, THAN ON HIS HEART AND KEEPING HER HEAD ON HIS CHEST AND HIM KNOW VERY WHO IT IS!!!! AND WHEN SHE LOOKED AT PRERNA'S FACE WITH HIS BLURRY VISION THAN SMILING AT HER AND SAYING STAY IS SOMETHING THAT I LIKED ALOT!!!!! (LOL I GUESS I M THE ONLY ONE WHO HAVE LIKED THIS SCENE.)

I am soo happy you liked that scene 🤗It is possible that you are the only to like that scene. WaqtZaya also liked it. So you have company now :)

Moving on I would I like to start with MASI!!!!!! I liked her probably for the first time since I have started to read the story tho!!!!! Poor Mai finally gave you something to like her. She feels happpy hearing it. I can see her smiling in my mind :)

She given Prerna a reality check of what she has done in Kolkata!!!!! Masi and meneka's scene was good but I m not really a fan of this duo!!!!!

That's alright. They are part of the story and it's not neccessart to like all of it. So it's alright if you don't like them

And also is she forgetting what she has done in the past when she in Kolkata!!!! I don't think she have becoz she have gotten away with it easily!!!! (I guess I m the only who is going towards all the cons in a character / or should I say thinking negatively 🤦.)she has not forgotten. Rather she was guilty in today's update and a proper confession to RB will also happen when time comes. So don't worry she is not going to hide her doings and get away. Like Tanvi had a proper apology and conversation with RB, she will too.

Now MENEKA Till CHAPTER-33 she was behaving like an absolute teenager who wants to be with the person who hates her to the core of his life. And now she is behaving all mature!!!! I think she wanted Adi to help to get back him back made her look like a teenager but she told Adi on the way back from Pune that she has her own purposr to instigate or go near him. She wants him yes, but she will not force herself on him. She thinks staying near him will give her that chance. That Masi I don't want to be with him what if he wakes up in the night and sees me there with kukki and he is really not in a condition of taking stress OHHH PLZZZZ!!!! She would have met him if he was in best of his health but not when he is in such a condition. Isliye she saif ki baad mein bata do RB ko that she was there. She has no plans to hide. Anyways I m not saying she is not good or what so ever!!! I really appreciate her for what she have in past few hours since she have been in the hospital!!!! How she have Handled everything, helped Masi alot, toke care of kukki when she was not listening to Masi and was needing Prerna to there with her!!!! Her telling kukki few things from the past and everything!!! But still there something that I can't straight into my head!!!! One of those is that I can't connect with Meneka same goes with Prerna too!!!!! That's okay. About Prerna- ask me how I myself put in efforts while writing her. So i get it. I can only hope you connect with her in future, if not I'll take it as a scope of improvement :) Second is that how everyone have started to like Meneka all of a sudden whom they hated till chapter 33!!! Like how everyone does that but I can't sorry!!!!! I m someone who have been neutral about her character ever since everyone have started to like her probably I have started to notice way more about her character which is not good for me neither for you!!!!!( See I told you I m speaking hell lot of negative shit here🤦). You mean story character started to like her ya readers? Story mein to mostlu waisa hi hai. Masi ke sath you never saw her interaction and now you know she doesn't hate her. As far as readers are concerned I guesa they all connect with some or the other aspect. So not going to question thejt like or dislike. Some like her others don't. Some disliked her earlier but now like her. Might dislike her again as the story progresses :) picture abhi baki hai

Now who comes Yup PRERNA about her from where should I start I guess her inner turmoil!!!! She is really fighting hard with herself to reach a conclusion but looks like it's tough for her to do so!!!! She have a very long way to get to where she really wants to be!!!!! I really like the conversation between her and Mr. Mehra....( I m always out of words when it comes to Prerna). Ummm the conversation between her and Masi was also nice I mean Masi had hell lot of things to say to her and her realising every single bit of it now that she is not thinking from her heart!!!! And also kukki's that little question or a reality check that she have given her is replaying in her mind like a video on loop!!!!!

I agree. She is fighting a battle with others and herself. And she has noone by her side. So it's hard phase on her. She will rise once she is out of it.

And can I hope for apology from her side to RB!!!! Is there anything left Ahhhh Yes!!!!! Her face when Rishabh smiled a bit looking towards her I was partically laughing imaging her face in my mind!!!!!!

She will apologise for sure.

Now comes my favourite Person after Kukki and Rishabh!!!!!!! MR. MEHRA!!!!!!! He is a freaking angel sent from haven for Rishabh and Kukki!!! Maybe for Prerna too!!! Mr. Mehra's presence have an smoothing effect on everyone who is around him!!!! But what is the reason that Mr. Mehra doesn't want Meneka back in Rishabh's life I really want to know..... Like this very moment!!!! Mr. Mehra is giving whole lot of hints to Prerna but as always she goes on these hints like a snail!!!! He is a true gem that CVS have given to us fans!!!!!!!

I agree he is the best. He is just giving hints, no influence this time.

Now comes My precious KUKKI!!!!!!! God this girl is way too much mature for her age of kids to be honest!!!!! She loves her Dad so much. Ohh I cry everytime I think about her seeing her father in that condition!!!! Ish no child should go through what she gone through!!!! So I guess I love her a little way too much!!!!! Than I should!!!!!

She is a strong child. And like you I love her too :)

Now who? Tanvi!!!! Lord she was cute in today's update!!!! I can imagine her rubbing her arms to get rid of that itchiness from her skin!!!! I wouldn't say much about her but she was cute in today's update bas!!!! Her and Adi's conversation was cute!!!!

Haha. So sweet. Cute hai bas. 🤗

Now ADITYA!!!!! Why was he such an imature guy!!!! Like what was he thinking all these years!!!!! He truly loved Ara but his single mistake which toke him away from everyone!!!!! It's good that everything is going good for him now maybe he is behaving a bit mature!!!

He was young himself, has always been impulsivr ruled by his emotions and heart unlike RB. He doesn't hide or hold back like RB. Also his side and reasons are missing. He should have waited but he was an angry 27 year old back then. People act like that.

Now ARA!!!! What you have shown in the flashback!!!!! I guess she was strong willed women who knew what she was doing!!!! She promised him that she will keep all three of them together!!!! But what happened to her how did she die!!!!

She fulfilled her promise till she died. How she died, future updates. Is story ka yahi problem hai. 😆

What is left now? Yup what is it with 2 houses!!!! Is the other house where Aditya and Rishabh had an conversation in? The building which Rishabh brought and keeps going there? Yess that's correct. His house at Altamount Towers and the old one at Deonar where he met Adi.

And what was everyone talking in last thread I mean Who was going to get scolded from whom? Prerna kisko daatne Vali thi?

I didn't get this one. Prerna ko daant padegi Masi se ye to discuss hua but Prerna kisi ko dantne ka to nahi hai shayad.

I guess second longest comment I have ever written on India forum's!!!!!!!!

I am the lucky one. Thank you so much for your time to read and write this to me.🤗

“I HAVE GROWN SO SO LAZY!!!!! "

Ohh please no .. you are not 🤔

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

city of dreams hotstar par hai. Your Aamachi Mumbai and politics and everything around pe hai. Dekh lena

Haan uska banners dekha haj. Filhal to not watching anything but I'll check for Ara :)

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😏 yes. 😡🤬💔

Kuch karenge uska bhi 😊

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

aur kaun jaaga neend se? 😏 Hahaha mereko bhi hota 🤣

Mujhe laga kahi last update ka to.kuch nahi hai. Usme Kukki uthi ya .. in short update hangover tha

Originally posted by: eishe10

Great update!

Thank you soo much Eishe 🤗

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Ohhhh My God!!!! What an update!

Yaayyy readers survived this looong update. Thank you soo much for all the time invested and making extra time to share your thoughts

Loved each and every bit of it. Prerna's dilemma was on point. She is re-thinking about all her actions and words as well done and told to Rishabh. She's analysing everything to make a firm decision. She is finally thinking in the direction she should be. Wish her luck she truly needs it 😆Her conversation with Kukki was great too. This time Kukki wants her to become Rishabh's friend. It's like even she's saying to take one step at a time. Yess.. Kukki is taking her close to her father. She was always the reason for these to come together. Want to keep it consistent. This time Prerna initiates and Kukki becomes the connecting link again.

Menaka's conversation with Maasi and then her thinking of her realisation of love was great. She's never thought of moving on.

Glad you liked it. No she never did. Like everyone, she too is stuck in the past. Can Prerna please all these souls liberate so they are all free to move ahead in life. Prerna jaldi karo please. I always tell her, she never listens

Kukki-Menaka's conversation was so endearing to read. It was my favourite part of the entire update. I love it how different part of the updates connects with readers at different level. :) Menaka has slowly started to make a place for herself in Kukki's heart and life as well. Kukki's little mind works too fast for her age. Well, has to! Afterall she's "The Rishabh Bajaj's" daughter. She might soon discover Menaka's real identity and Prerna might lose her only hope as of now if Kukki accepts Menaka. Let's see if the little girl can. Once Rishabh is up, things may change. A lot is happening in his absence.

Adi and Tanvi may become great friends. Adi is so much in love with Ara. Breaks my heart to see him like this. I was waiting for you to hear on this. You wanted there scene. I hope it was tolerable. These two can definitely be good frnds and may be more However, Ara's flashback scene was great. Ara was the most sorted person among those four. Can't wait to read more of her. Oh she was. She kept them all together and maintained the balance between all thesr different personalities. But then Adi left and she still stayed to keep her promise.

Ahhh!! Maasi!! My second-most favourite part of the update. I'm loving Maasi all the more with each update. She's extremely possessive and protective of her family. And the way she showed her belief on Rishabh or a way on BI was something Prerna had not expected. She thought Maasi was misunderstanding Rishabh and tried to clear the matter and in-turn Maasi completely turned the tables on her. She did. Prerna thought kuch and nikla kuch. I was very uncertain about this part because of it's length but it's recvd so well. Guess hum sabke mann ki iccha hai that Mask fulfilled.😃Seriously yaar! The way she's been giving virtual slaps to Prerna in the form of her words is mind-blowing. Prerna deserves so much of this! Hope to see more of this! Ohh more is in the store, in parts here and there as Prerna's involvement in his life increases. Maasi had never liked Prerna. But mahn! Have to say you've given a complete different angle to Maasi's dislike for Prerna. I had to create a link between positive Masi here and Masi from show who was forced by makers to do stupid things. And I wasn't planning to brush aside her wrong doings so made this effort. So glad you observed such a little detail. 🤗Prerna is going to have a very very tough tome in convincing Maasi that she's here to stay. Maasi is not going to give in so easily.indeed. but like Mehra said, all she has to sort is Rishabh baki sab apne aap ho jayega.

Mr. Mehra knows and understands Rishabh so much and so well. He knows Prerna's trying to get back in Rishabh's life and it's great to see that he's not helping her directly. But rather he's just showing her the direction to think and decide for herself. He knows once she's back as Mrs.Bajaj, there's no turning back! True. No force this time. Mrs. Bajaj has to decide for herself if she wants to be Mrs. Bajaj or not.

Hope to see Rishabh getting better soon!

He will.

Waiting for the next part!

I will begin soon. Thank you again 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

dukhi dukhi aisa na karo.

I always tru but hota nahi ji🤔😒

Originally posted by: Sunita1986

Loved loved loved how Maasi ne dhoya Mrs.Bajju ko😆 Reality check given perfectly.😆

Haha.. I got inside Masi with all our thoughts and possessed her mind for that part. It wasn't Masi, it was us all talking to Prerna from behind Masi😆

Hamare Mehraji bhi apne Boss ki tarah baatein dil mein rakhte hain. But I like that Prerna has started seeking answers regarding her equation wid Rishabh.she is thinking so much. Mujhe taras aa gaya tha uske upar likhte likhte 😃 Frankly speaking I skipped half of Menaka's convo, coz she just makes me uncomfortable. Why is she so perfect??🤧 that's okay read it the way you feek comfortable. But haan I keep dropping things here and there which connect at a later stage. Waise I try to mention the concerned convos because itna time bad read karke bhool jate hain. But yeah wanted to share it. My girl is feeling jealous n finally accepting Mrs.Ex as her competitor. Gud going girl sahi jaa rhi ho. Yaass. Her brain called Menaka her competitor. Her brain is all of us making her life hell 😛

And that hand holding I love this version of Kukki. Yayyyy.. cupid Kukki. She was the connection baxk then, she will be the bridge this time to reach him.

Glad Prerna understood, all thanks to Maasi dear, that Rishabh was actually pushed by Anurag for whatever he did. Wo khud bhi soch rahi thi but confused, Masi said it without mincing a single word.

Meenakshi I've said it before n I'll say it again you are an amazing writer. Adding characters to a story isn't that difficult but to show them interconnected n having a past individually n with each other is not easy. Thank you so much for your kind wors Sunita. Credit goes to you all readers who chose to invest time in these char, sply the additional ones and accepted in your own way, as per your own comfortable levels. That's gives a lot of confidence to explore them all the way I have it in my brain. Like I always say, I am no writer but you guys have helped me go ahead with it. 🤗

U give every character its due importance, Even Chandu 😊 He's not just a house help but a member of Bajaj family. He exactly knows when his boss wants to be alone n when he needs someone to be there for him. Hahaa. Yeah I told you na ki sab ka apna space hain. Each one will outshine the other one but focus will always be RishKukPre in some or the other way.

Lovely Update❤️

Thank you again for reading and sharing this.

Waiting for the next🤗

Will begin soon.

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

🥺😭💔

Ab kya hui????🤗