“Timeless Love: An eternity to heart” Chap 14 (III) updated 04/24/2021 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sm1308

So sorry for the delay..here I'm ..

Enjoy

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Originally posted by: sm1308

Thank you so much for the lovely review..I'm glad you enjoyed..n yup I brought in a quick reversal in jalals demeanor..I thought that a whiff of happiness that Jo brought him in that simple walk.. being a quick wit..he should accept that he wants more..I have tried to justify his reversal in this post..hope you like it..n just because he is adamantly Persuing Jo unlike before, Jo is being over cautious..

Not sure if the reversal is too quick to accept for the readers..let me know pls..if it sounds odd..

Thanks..and enjoy the fresh one :)

Maybe it did occur to me like that as we were quite under impression of what jalal revealed to us in previous chapters....😛

As u say he is quick wit , very well knows so what he wants so focusing on that , & jo behaviour also must hv convinced him hence taking confident steps.....😎

Desperate to read more....😆

OMG , what a chappy jalal already making hid mind & then whoosshh what a lesson to ruqs....😛 she cannot play a fast one on jalal.....😆

Mirza...😆 , jalal all possessive but satisfied with the appreciation...😃...for his smart work.

What a love this man carries in his heart for his girl , already letting the unpleasentness go & wishes to make most of what he has now....

Come on jo , now ur turn just say out to him just reveal to him ur part he deserves the truth which u're not telling , he is still there with his love ready to take u with all ur woes , so go go get on with ur lovestory.....❤️

🤗to dear author.... we want full romance from now....😉😆

Fabulous update
Waiting for jo answer

This one is Fantastic

Surprising though..

Jalal's all hurt pain he endured for whole decade faded by just a small gesture for him in flick of moment with Jo

I'm loving this Ja so much sensible, didnt held any resentment for her, he just made choice and then came streight forward confesion that was a hard blow to Ruks

And what he want in return just simple confesion from her whatever it may be not the explaination or Sorry he is ready to make it upto her for whatever they missed...

Now what Jo is waiting for when she got a loving hunk?

Waiting desperately for their dinner date and Jo to reveal her story

Hoping Jo to express her heart ...

Thank you for this Lovely update...

Amazing chapters. I'm impressed with Jalal's frank talk with Jodha regarding his feelings. Thank God, there is no dragging in expression of feelings. Hope Jo will respond with same passion.

Please add me to your pm list.

Very mch surprising di hope Jo does not hurt jalal again and hope she 2 accepts him and continue their love story pls continue it soon di

It seems like our sakt launda pighal gaya.... 😃 way to go jalal I thought jo has to grovel his feet for some kind of repentance... But no now jalal is after her to make her realize that they r worth it... I hope she gives in... But I loved how the tables turned on ruks 😆 that was fuffing amazing.... 3 chapters to go & I am waiting desperately to know how this ends... next chapter plz.... N ohhh don't forget a tale of ice & fire... U r lacking behind writer buckle up the speed pretty plzzzz 😎

Originally posted by: PBDcrazy

It seems like our sakt launda pighal gaya.... 😃 way to go jalal I thought jo has to grovel his feet for some kind of repentance... But no now jalal is after her to make her realize that they r worth it... I hope she gives in... But I loved how the tables turned on ruks 😆 that was fuffing amazing.... 3 chapters to go & I am waiting desperately to know how this ends... next chapter plz.... N ohhh don't forget a tale of ice & fire... U r lacking behind writer buckle up the speed pretty plzzzz 😎

Is your name related to ff pale blue dot?

What's your actual name... you're there in njapa and hiding behind the stranger..

Amazing update

I thought jalal will be angry on jodha

But jalal reject lunch date with ruks

And invite jodha

Hope she confess her feelings

Update soon