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Nice OS

I really enjoyed reading your story 'In This Moment'....It's such a beautiful tale & you have written it so beautifully.It's really sad that you didn't finish the story. Can you please continue writing that story, I would love to read & I'm sure all the readers will be waiting for a closure of that story

Whatte beautiful OS!

Dammit! So beautifully written down! Painful and the yearning was so pure and shown so well!

Beautiful that love won over and a chance has been given.

Beautifully written man! So glad to have you back!

Cheers

Welcome back!! You haven’t lost your touch..

Hi

So happy to see to that ur back. Very heart touching closure to Arshi story. Would love to read ‘In this moment’ whenever u wish to continue it. Waiting eagerly.

IT'S AMAZING...

First of all Zaruri Tha is my favourite song, and whenever I hear this song, all I imagine is Arshi's love hate story.

This OS is amazing, I also feel that, at that point their seperation was Zaruri Tha.

Because Arnav never respected her and it's always him, who has the last say, even at the Diwali when he gives a lecture to khushi on earning money and all.

I'm in love with your OS. ❤️❤️

Omggg!! Can't believe that you are back, Ritz..

that was an amazing os as usual.. the trust part what you have mentioned was true.. its kushi who didn't trust him in the first place and there was no communication from both sides.. beautifully written dear.. thanks for the PM..

Awesome wish it was longer

Being equal in a relationship is such an important necessity that without it I don't think any relationship can survive. So Khushi's decision to find her real self was a wise one because if she had accepted Arnav a year ago, she could still have those ugly red marks on her wrist after every word she uttered much to his dislike.

Khushi always sacrificed her self respect for her loved once. However not once she thought that she is the most important person. Not once she considered herself as an individual who has rights to object, to refuse, to say no to something she doesn't want to. In this one year of separation, she managed to learn her real worth.

This was such an amazing read. The equality here was integral. One of the traits to a successful relationship. I felt like though Arnav and Khushi very very much in love, there were a lot of other things they lacked in their relationship. Being equal being one of them. Loved this one! :)

Love,

-A

Awesome writing

I loved it

It's true they should gain some equal ground in their relationship.

U have protrayed it so well which is missing in the show.

Welcome back dear