“Timeless Love: An eternity to heart” Chap 14 (III) updated 04/24/2021 - Page 10

Originally posted by: kriya_12

My apologise yes i was stuck at 4 only 😂

Well i understand u hv certain plot in mind but i wanted them journey plausible way . There is still so much left.

Yeah.you're right..but I really wanna have a taste of a complete plot..But it really feels great that you want more :)

Thanks..enjoy the update..

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

We all will be happy to see them happily ever after, but didn't expected this soon😲

:) Really??Okay ...I thought I would be able to wrap everything in 4 chapters..not absolutely sure though..but honestly, I can see it concluding..I really felt happy that a few of you disagreed on ending it soon..but lets see how it all ends..

enjy the update for now..and Thanks!!

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Nice chapter...👍🏼

Jalal n Jodha's argument lead her to recover first ever memory of their Past...

Entry of Rukaiya😲... Is going to be a trouble maker for already suffering souls...

Was she feeling Jealous ??

Thanks for the update🤗

Waiting for Sunday...😃

Next time want a biggg update....

Yup..Im gonna make Ruks a tadbit trouble maker,,and sure she is the jealous vampy type..

here is the update..a long one, just as you ordered :P

enjoy :)

thanks

Originally posted by: PBDcrazy

Haawww You are back... Good lord😲 aayi ye aapka intezaar tha n then (I fainted here with an ekta kapoor's OTT BGM 😆) I was so depressed thinking you were gone to never return to this forum.... 😭 so much to say n tell.. But falling short of words...............Well enough of me fainting Welcome back writer 🥳

Hahah..ofcourse I'm ..n thankyou for waiting..n trust me, I'm never gonna leave any of the story incomplete..You somehow always remind me about the other story, "Ice and Fire", and I sincerely apologize for not having updated it since March..I'm gonna get back to it, at earliest..This one is about to close..So please bear with me..

Thankyou so much for the message..

take care, and enjoy the update..

It was a very very beautiful chapter. Your english is impeccable too. Though it was a big chapter, still wanted it to go on and on. Would love to have many chapters of this story but also dont want joja to suffer seperation for long. Less said the better about rukka hukka😆. Would love to read more romance between joja before you end this story☺️

Originally posted by: sm1308

:) Really??Okay ...I thought I would be able to wrap everything in 4 chapters..not absolutely sure though..but honestly, I can see it concluding..I really felt happy that a few of you disagreed on ending it soon..but lets see how it all ends..

enjy the update for now..and Thanks!!

Wish you wont be able to wrapup in 4 chapters, so that we can get few more of this😉, nevermind we will enjoy it though...

Originally posted by: sm1308

Yup..Im gonna make Ruks a tadbit trouble maker,,and sure she is the jealous vampy type..

here is the update..a long one, just as you ordered :P

enjoy :)

thanks

Yea, she is😉

Thanks for the update...

Thanks to make it as you promised...

Would love to read...

🤗

Wonderful update...👍🏼

Things are getting normal to them, although there are still lot to sort

Jodha's efforts to bring some happiness in Jalal life, unknow to the fact that they lies with her only😳 hope she realise it soon...

Loved the talk while walk, beautifully written.. their feelings, love &concern for eachother❤️

She want him to move on and see him happy, while he is admanant on getting her back😛

Evil Ruks, to her everything is show offjust to get the attention🤔sensed the changes in Jalal coz of Jo & trying to humiliate her😡

Pray their miseries ends soon...

Thanks for update🤗

Waiting to read further...

⭐️

Originally posted by: sm1308

Yeah.you're right..but I really wanna have a taste of a complete plot..But it really feels great that you want more :)

Thanks..enjoy the update..

We trust ur conviction.....😃

Chapter 7 ....

Ok i feel some strong role reversal on the characters , jalal actually getting soft over her while she is getting more rhan determined to push him.....😆

& ruks & the air changed i can totally imagine her expression in controlling her outburst in front of jalal....show experience....😉🤣

Well she is using jo for her gain , playing safe....can anytime put the entire blame on jo .

While loved the moments & falling + pushing of jajo....😎

Cannot wait for more .

Thnax for the timely update.....🤗