ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] - Page 75

I am reading this again.. Few stories stick to u hard..this is one..I wud love to put in my time here..so happy reading to me again ☺️

U know what ...i totally find it not creeepy/stupid to read all the comments one by one on this thread..it’s just awesome to read another ones take on what u have perceived and weigh it..wait is that the right word???!! Well that’s what I am doing it now..and I have no complaints for myself on this 🤓

Originally posted by: coolpd93

U know what ...i totally find it not creeepy/stupid to read all the comments one by one on this thread..it’s just awesome to read another ones take on what u have perceived and weigh it..wait is that the right word???!! Well that’s what I am doing it now..and I have no complaints for myself on this 🤓

of course its perfectly fine. :-D

Originally posted by: Dee_J

Of i forgot to add, I loved how it ended. Perfect circle.

thank you, for your very kind and detailed review.

Quite frankly, I have forgotten a bunch of stuff from this story. When I read your review I confused it with another story of mine (another angst galore, if you will) and was scratching my head for almost a day. Finally read few chapters and then it all came back.

I am a little out of IF, posting on "Fan Fiction" category since IF is trying hard selling it and its just amusing me. Apologies for the delay. IF didn't send me a notification either. :x

Cheers! Stop by on blog. Am not active right there at the moment since real life is super hectic, but I should be back to normalcy from next week or so.

RB

Read this some time ago. Time to read it again. Will do soon.

Hi reread this story after a while..

The first time I was a silent reader but this time around, I just have to say that I loved the different relationships of the characters... The complex relationships ...the angst... the hurt and the want to move ahead and leave everything behind is so well portrayed...

Please let me know if you have any new stories... Would love to read ....

Originally posted by: sujata5

Hi reread this story after a while..

The first time I was a silent reader but this time around, I just have to say that I loved the different relationships of the characters... The complex relationships ...the angst... the hurt and the want to move ahead and leave everything behind is so well portrayed...

Please let me know if you have any new stories... Would love to read ....

much thanks for writing in. am glad you enjoyed reading this. I did start AND finish a story last month on my blog. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/5151055/flower-grows-from-my-knees-complete this is also IF link where I tracked its progress.

See you there!

RB

A fellow reader (Dee_J) read this story in a couple of hours and challenged me to follow suit. Always itching to win a bet, I took it up. 2 hours (and not even halfway into the story) later, I waved the white flag

The subject of morality stood out to me because of how you have incorporated it into the story. Even the staunchest person would let go off his/her values when it comes to blood relations. Not just because blood triumphs over everything else (haven't we had enough instances of that?), but also because the repercussions of siding with your moral compass can haunt you all your life, like they did for Arnav

I loved Arnav's character for the layers that you gave him (considering this was not a 'long' FF). His angst could very well have been categorized as self-pity, but you managed to keep it intact very well. After all, it is only the person who goes through an experience, knows that he has come out of it completely and irreversibly changed. Even his equation with his friends is marvelling. I wondered if his relationship with Lavanya was more because she loved him (right from the beginning) and had no relevance to whether he felt the same. Also, the scene with Aman when he lets his friend have that one moment which he has been pining for for years was extremely touching

Khushi's marital experience was a reminder of why the people you surround yourself with are important. Friends, family...they either make you a complete human being or chip off bits and pieces until you no longer recognize the person you have become. Khushi's case might have been extreme, but there are so many women out there who change beyond recognition just because adaptation is their responsibility

One never had a complaint about your ability to etch out secondary characters. This one was even better since I looked out to Aman or Anjali's presence more than Arnav or Khushi's.

I've liked all your stories; but this one is just on a different level. The reason I gave up on the above-mentioned bet was because I couldn't rush through the brilliance that the writing is. And I can understand when you said that this story took a toll on you; if it has a profound impact on the reader, one can only imagine what it must have been for the writer

P.S. What's the story behind the title?

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

A fellow reader (Dee_J) read this story in a couple of hours and challenged me to follow suit. Always itching to win a bet, I took it up. 2 hours (and not even halfway into the story) later, I waved the white flag

Here... and as always (like the rest of your works) the story off to a banging start.

so Aman is in love with his BF and the BF (best friend) loves him but not in love with him. Sister is desperate to understand their what the hell is on... more coz of the society.... hmmm... the playing for the court never seizes being important