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Yes,its hands.I don't know why i typed arms.U know that i always write hands usually.

Ha ha..its true that whenever I replace Sid and Om such errors happen


Originally posted by: salley145

He cupped her face in his arms:In my eyes you are the most beautiful girl Ragini.


Not arms but hands

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splendid update! well written

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Part 8


Fantastic Part

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Thank u friends


Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani: This Youth is Crazy Part 9

Armaan:Sorry,I can't marry Maya.

All were shocked while Cabir Navya were relieved.Maya and Rudra too felt relieved.
Jhanvi:How can you say that you can't marry Maya on the wedding mandap?How will my daughter Maya bear this?
Maya:Maa..relax...I am not sad.
Jhanvi:You keep quiet Maya.Tell me Armaan.Why can't you marry Maya in the last moment?
Armaan:Because I can't love her.
Jhanvi:In the last moment you are saying that you can't love Maya?What is Maya lacking?
Armaan's dad shook him:Why did you embarrass us in public?
Arm:Sorry dad.
Armaan's mom:You made an innocent girl cry beta.
Manik slapped Armaan:If you were not interested in Maya then why did you agree to marry Maya?
Nandini:Manik...don't get violent.
Cabir:Manik...Navya and I only told Armaan to not marry Maya.
All were shocked.
Jhanvi:My daughter respects you so much Sir.You are her favourite teacher.Then also you...?
Navya:Aunty..you are misunderstanding us.We did it for Maya's better future.
Armaan:They are right.If I marry Maya that would be like spoiling Maya's life.I love another girl.
All were shocked.
Armaan:Due to misunderstandings we got separated and I decided to get married to the girl chosen by my parents.But now I realized that she was innocent.

Cabir:Maya will never be happy if she marries Armaan who loves someone else.
Rudra:Cabir Sir is right.Maya should marry someone who loves her very much.
Jhanvi:When a girl's marriage gets cancelled public will blame the girl only.It's your fault Armaan...but people will blame only Maya.So who will marry Maya?
Jhanvi burst into tears.
Suddenly Rudra said:I will marry Maya.
All were stunned.Maya looked at Rudra in disbelief.
Maya:Rudra!You are feeling pity towards me ..so you are marrying me?No need of marrying me out of pity.
Rudra:No Maya.I am not marrying you out of pity.I am marrying you as I love you.
Maya could'nt believe it.

Laksh:Maya..Rudra is right.He loved you always.It's just that he got late in realizing his love and expressing it.


Maya was surprised.
Rudra:Maya..tell me.You also love me.Right?
Maya was quiet.
Manik:Maya..why don't you tell him openly that you love him since our school days?
Jhanvi was stunned.
Jhanvi:Maya..if you love Rudra please tell beta.I will be only happy if you marry the person you love.


Rudra:Maya..look at my eyes and say whether you love me or not.
Maya smiled tearfully:I love you Rudra.
They embraced each other.All of them clapped hands happily.
Rudra married Maya.




He looked at R written on her palm and smiled.They shared a sweet eye lock.

Ragini:Maya..you are lucky.
Maya smiled:Yes I am lucky that i got Rudra finally..it was my dream come true.While the lady wrote R on palm I was thinking of my Rudra only.
Rudra Maya smiled at each other.

Armaan smiled seeing Rudra Maya together.
Rudra:Thank you Armaan for not marrying Maya.Because of you I got my Maya.
Maya:Because of you I got my Rudra.God will bless you to have a blissful life with your beloved.

Armaan smiled:I am happy that my mistake united you both.
Cabir:You took the right decision.
Navya:Thankyou for listening to me.
Armaan:Thanks to you both Cabirji and Navyaji to make me understand what is right.
Cabir:Now go to your lady love.
Armaan smiled.

Armaan rushed to Riddhima.She was sitting and crying in the garden.
Arm:Riddhima!
She looked at him in disbelief:Armaan!

Kaisa hai khumar

Kaisa nasha

Duniya lage nayi

Naya sama

Sapna hai mera

Tu hi armaan



Arm:I have come back to you Riddhima.

Saason ne dhun chedi

Pooche mujhse bata yeh kaise


Riddhima could'nt believe it:Then Maya?
Armaan told her everything.She was relieved.
Armaan cupped her face in his hands:God is with us.No one can separate us now.

(Dill Mill Gayye

Dill... Mill... Gayye

Dill Mill Gayye)- 2


They both smiled and shared an emotional eye lock.

Kitna tha pyasa

Kitna tanha

Man bhuja bhuja, suna jahan

Khali khali har ek lamha

Mili tum Rang mile

Jhoome zindagi yeh aise jaise


They embraced each other emotionally.

(Dill Mill Gayye

Dill... Mill... Gayye

Dill Mill Gayye)- 2

Neil was working hard in his office.

NEIL:I am so tired.Feeling hungry.Unfortunately I forgot to take lunch box from home.Will order something from the hotel.

Suddenly Avni entered his cabin.Neil was surprised.

NEIL:Avni..you?

AVNI:Neil..you forgot to take the lunch box.So I thought I will bring it here.

Neil smiled:Avni..you dont know what a nice thing you did.I hate hotel food and I was thinking how to bear hotel food to get rid of my hunger.

Janeman tujhko jo paya, pyar me jina sikhaya jina sikhaya

Dhadkan me too rehne laga, dil yeh meraa kehne laga

Too meraa pyar hai - (2)

Avni smiled:Dont worry Neil when Im here you will get to eat your favourite food.

Janeman tujhko jo paya, pyar me jina sikhaya jina sikhaya

Neil smiled.

Avni served him lunch.

NEIL:All my staffs are nosy pokers.Otherwise I would have asked you to feed me.

Tujhko najar me basa lu, aaja gale se laga lu - (2)

Avni blushed.

Kuchh hosh pehle aane laga, behkhudee me jane toh do

Yeh bekhudee na jane kya kare

NEIL:Did you have lunch?

AVNI:No Neil.I will have it after reaching home.

NEIL:Now we can share the lunch Avni.You also eat with me.

Janeman tujhko jo paya,

She smiled.

pyar me jina sikhaya jina sikhaya

They ate lunch from the same plate.

Pake mujhe na khona too, dil se juda na hona too - (2)

Neil got a phone call.He attended the call.

NEIL:Avnimy meeting got cancelled.So shall we go out together?

Avni smiled:Sure Neil..I am very happy to spend time with you.

Kismat me kya hai kisko khabar, too sath dena ay humsafar

Neil Avni went for a long drive in the car exchanging romantic glances.

Tere bina mai jee nahee sakunga

Avni:Neil...concentrate on driving.

Neil:When you are near me I'm losing my concentration Avni.

She became shy.

Janeman tujhko jo paya, pyar me jina sikhaya jina sikhaya

They reached a beach.They look at the waves.

Neil:Wow..

Avni:Neil..let's move towards the water.

They held hands together and wet their legs in the waves.

Dhadkan me too rehne laga,

Then both splash sea water at each other.

dil yeh meraa kehne laga

They sat down and wrote holding hands together Neil and Avni=AvNeil.

Too meraa pyar hai

They smiled at each other romantically.

Too meraa pyar hai('Khwahish').




Navya took bath and came.
She saw Cabir sitting.She went behind him and shook her hair purposefully to make the water drops to fall on him from her hair.Cabir smiled:Naughty Navya..trying to seduce Vishwamitra as Menka?



Navya smiled holding onto him more tightly:Who told you that you are Vishwamitra?You are so naughty and romantic that I don't need to seduce you.


Cabir:Really..?If you say that I am naughty I am going to be more naughty with you.

Cabir pulled her closer and leaned towards her cheeks romantically.She blushed.

Navya held his hand:Cabirji...I used to be very sad when you were avoiding me when I was trying to woo me.But you fulfilled my dream by showering love more than I expected.Now I am very happy.Thank you so much Cabirji.

Cabir:Thanks to you too Navya for loving me so much that I could'nt resist falling in love with you.Otherwise I would have missed a gem like you.

She smiled:Love ou Cabirji..

Cabir:Love you too Navya.
They smiled drowning in each other's love.



Rudra Maya's reception party....

Ragini was going to the hall.Suddenly somebody pulled her from back.She screamed.Suddenly he closed her mouth with his hand.
He:It's me.
She looked at him.It was Laksh.She was relieved.She bit his hand.
Lak:Ah...
He took off his hand from her.
R:What is this Laksh?Attacking me like a goon.
L:Oh..my dear model..I was'nt attacking you,I was taking you to an isolated area where no one sees us.
Ragini smiled.
R:You are mad.


But why?Why you don't want anyone to see us?
He caressed her face sensually with fingers.She closed his eyes feeling his love.
Lak:Seeing you so beautiful I felt like romancing you.That's why I did it.Sorry dear.
Ragini opened her eyes giggling.She tried to run away.But Laksh held his hand and brought her closer to him.He embraced her from back.She blushed.Slowly she pushed him and ran to the party hall and Laksh too went there smiling.

Rudra Maya,Manik Nandini,Laksh Ragini,Cabir Navya danced.

Yeah.. O what a look
What a grace


Tennu hi karaan main chase
What a naksh


What a nain
Dil tera toh kar gaya pain


What a smile
What a style


Looking in to the file
KManik soft
KManik rude
Killer tera attitude..

Tere liye hi toh signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke
Ho tere liye hi toh signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke

Ho teri ankh da ishaara mujhe taunt lagey
Tu toh majnu awaara by god lagey
Ho kasme waade khaake


Apni pocket money bachaake
Aaya tere liye paise vaise jodh-jadh ke

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye shye bhol-bhal ke
Aaya dilli wali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke


Tere liye hi toh signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilli waali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke

Teri galli mein bhi aana start kar diya
Ik tera naam apna heart kar diya


Karne laga aankh mattaka
Ab toh aashiq ban gaya pakka
Aaj yahan bhi maine tera boycott kar diya


Teri saari harkatien main toh note karoon
Tujhe thaane mein le jaake main report karoon

Jhanvi too danced.Maya Rudra too joined her.

Tu na kar aise fight

Tera mood karoon main light

Tujhe scene main dikhake film golmaal ke


Naam tera hi likhaya maine wedding card pe
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke

Tere liye hi toh signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh…

Haaye..
Yeh toh ishq mein dekho badtameez ho gaya
Bina baat ke hi mujhpe yeh freeze ho gaya
Refuse kiya sau baari Phir bhi kar na jaaye yaari
Fashion tere liye mera increase ho gaya
Tuhi mere lage mujhe meri night lage
Mujhe future mera tere sang bright lage

Tujhse bhi zyada sona

Koi handsome munda honna
O leke jaaye ga sone mein tol taal ke… Oye..
Tujhe le jaaunga main toh yahaan jhande gaad ke..
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chodh chaadh ke..

Chal jhootha mere liye signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke
Ho ghar waalon ko bhi bye shye bhol-bhal ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke
Tere liye hi toh signal todh-tadh ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chodh-chadh ke-Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani


While dancing somebody entered the hall.
Nandini was surprised to see him.Maya went and hugged him.
M:Finally you came Prem.
P:Yes Maya baby.I came.Sorry for not attending the wedding.You know that we doctors very rarely get time to spare for themselves.
Maya:At least you could come for the reception party.I am happy.


Prem and Nandini saw each other and Prem was surprised.
Prem hugged Nandini.
Manik got irritated.
Prem:Nandini..how come you are here?
Nandini:Maya is my dear friend.I am here to celebrate her wedding functions.And how come you are here?


Prem:I am Maya's cousin.

Nandini was surprised:Really?
Maya:Yes.He is my dear brother.
Prem patted Maya:She is my dear sister.
Everyone smiled.
Maya:You both know each other?
Prem:Yes..we are colleagues.We work in the same hospital.
Maya:That's a surprise.

Prem Nandini were chatting a lot.They ate food together.


Manik was really irritated.


At night ...

Nandini sat in the garden after the party.
Manik went near her:Nandini...
Nandini:Hi Manik..

Manik:why are you sitting here?Not going to sleep?
Nandini:Yes...going to sleep now.I was just relaxing here breathing fresh air.Ok Manik.Good night.


Nandini got up and was about to go.Suddenly Manik held her hand.

Manik:I came here to be with you.But you are going away.
Nandini:It's really night.So...
Manik:Nandini...you have no time for me.But you have time for Dr.Prem.
Nandini:Nothing like that Manik.You simply feel like that.Why are you talking like this?
Manik:It's like that Nandini.You hardly speak to me now.But you were chatting with Prem a lot.Why?
Nandini:Manik...
Manik:You talked as if you are single.Right?But Prem..tell me Prem is your boy friend.Right?
Nandini:Oh Manik..you are thinking too much.Prem is not my boy friend.We are just good friends.And for your kind information Prem is married to Dr,Heer who works in our hospital.Heer is having an important surgery,So could'nt come .Tomorrow Heer will arrive and you can meet her.
Manik was embarrassed:Sorry..I over reacted.But why do I feel that you are ignoring me?I want you to spend more time with me.I love it.But when you spend your time with others avoiding me I feel hurt.
Nandini turned back.He held her:Please Nandini...stay with me here.
Nandini:Leave my hand.I can't stay with you.
Manik:But why?
Nandini:If I spend more time with you I will fall in love with you again.
Manik was stunned.Nandini realized what she said and sweated.
Manik went closer to her.
Manik:What do you mean Nandini?
Nandini became emotional:Manik...
Manik:You need to answer me now.I won't leave you without answering my question.
Nandini was nervous.


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terrific update! well written

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Part 9


Fabulous Update


Beautiful song choice

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Thank u so much friends 4 commenting.Plz write ur fav character,y u liked this charac.fav scene n fav jodies


Part 10

Manik looked at Nandini deeply:Tell Nandini..tell..

Nandini:During our Manali trip I fell in love with you Manik.

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi

Na Dhoop Chune Na Chhaaon

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi

Kisi Thor Tike Na Paaon (x2)

Manik was shocked.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Ban Liya Apna Paigambar

Tar Liya Tu Saat Samandar

Phir Bhi Sookha Mann Ke Andar

Kyun Reh Gaya

Nandini:But I realized that I have no place in your heart.So I suppressed my emotions.But I could'nt give your place to anyone.So I did'nt get married.Years later again we met each other.We spent time together and I realized that again I am starting to dream of you.I don't want to fall in love with you again Manik.If I love you again I would'nt be able to bear a separation again.

Her eyes were full of tears.

Re Kabira Maan Jaa

Re Faqeera Maan Jaa

Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan

He cupped her face in his hands painfully.He wiped her tears with his lips.

She looked at his face in disbelief.



Re Kabira Maan Ja

Re Faqeera Maan Ja

Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya



Suddenly she realized that it was only her dream and felt sad.

Manik became upset:Nandini..

Nandini:Don't worry Manik.I just told you what is in my mind.It does'nt mean that you have to love me back.I won't force you to love me.

Tooti Chaarpaai Wohi

Thandi Purvaai Rasta Dekhe

Doodhon Ki Malaai Wohi

Mitti Ki Suraahi Rasta Dekhe ..


Manik:Nandini...listen to me...

Nandini:Don't tell anything Manik.I understand your mental state.You may be in shock.It's ok..relax.Let us forget everything.


Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi

Lab Naam Tera Mera Mishri

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi

Tujhe Preet Purani Bisri ..

Mast Maula, Mast Kalander

Tu Hawa Ka Ek Bavandar

Bujh Ke Yun Andar Hi Andar

Kyun Reh Gaya..


Nandini walked away weeping.Manik watched her go tearfully.


Re Kabira Maan Jaa

Re Faqeera Maan Jaa

Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan

Re Kabira Maan Ja

Re Faqeera Maan Ja

Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya...yeh-jawaani-hai-deewani


The next morning....

Heer arrived.Maya hugged her happily.Maya introduced Rudra to Heer.

Heer:You both are truly made in heaven.That's why overcoming all obstacles you both united.

Prem:Absolutely right.Soul mates are like this.

Rudra Maya smiled at each other.

All of them went to meet Heer.

Heer:Where is Nandini?Prem told me that Nandini is also here.

Manik thought:After what happened yesterday night she may be finding it difficult to face me.

Nandini came.Manik Nandini looked at each other emotionally.

Heer:What a surprise Nandini!

They hugged each other.

Maya:Manik...meet my bhabhi Heer.

Manik:Hi...

Heer:Manik..the rock star.I am so surprised to see you here.I am your big fan.Can I take a selfie with you.

Manik:Sure.

They took a selfie.

Prem:I am always jealous of you Manik.My wife Heer is crazy about you and she has a big collection of your music videos and audios.

Manik smiled thinkinAvni:For some moments I too was jealous of your Prem seeing your bonding with Nandini.

Heer:Manik..I have a wish.Can you sing a song for me?

Manik:Sure.

Manik started singing.His eyes were fixed on Nandini.Both were reminded of the moments they spent together and Nandini's confession.All others including Heer was immersed in Manik's song.

(Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Kahan shuru kahan khatam

Yeh manzile hai kaunsi

Na voh samajh sake na hum) - 2

(Yeh roshni ke saath kyoon

Dhuaan utha chiraag se) - 2

Yeh khwaab dekhti hoon main

Ke jag padi hoon khwaab se

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Kahan shuru kahan khatam

Yeh manzile hai kaunsi

Na voh samajh sake na hum

(Mubaarakein tumhe ke tum

Kisi ke noor ho gaye) - 2

Kisi ke itne paas ho

Ke sab se door ho gaye

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Kahan shuru kahan khatam

Yeh manzile hai kaunsi

Na voh samajh sake na hum

(Kisi ka pyaar leke tum

Naya jahan basaaoge) - 2

Yeh shaam jab bhi aayegi

Tum humko yaad aaoge

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Kahan shuru kahan khatam

Yeh manzile hai kaunsi

Na voh samajh sake na hum


Heer:Wow Manik...listening to your song in real is so much more magical than listening to you sing on TV.

Prem:Really magical.Like Heer even I am becoming your fan.

Heer:You friends are lucky to be Manik's friends.You all can make him sing whenever you want.

Rudra:Don't worry bhabhi.Now onwards Maya and I will get Manik to your house whenever you want to hear him sing.

Everybody laughed.

All of them got ready to go back to their respective houses as all wedding functions are over.

Manik thought:It's my last chance to talk to Nandini.If I don't talk to her today I will not get an opportunity to speak to her ever.

Manik went near Nandini.

Manik:Nandini..I want to talk to you.

Nandini:No need Manik.I know what you want to say.You want to apologize to me.You want to console me.No need of all that.Leave it Manik.Let us forget everything.

Manik:Stop it Nandini.Why are you always telling me to forget everything?I can't forget anything.You get it?

Nandini was confused.

Manik:Like you I also loved you always Nandini.

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main

Tera intezaar karun

Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko

Tere hi naam karun

Nandini could'nt believe it.

Manik:But I thought I am not your type of boy as you are very serious and I am a fun lover.You were going to be a doctor and I was not even sure if I would be a good play back singer ir not.So I too suppressed my emotions.But when I met you again I realized that I can't be away from you.

Khudko main yoon kho doon

Ke phir na kManik paaun

Haule haule zindagi ko

Ab tere hawaale karun

Maya was surprised.

Rudra Maya,Laksh Ragini,Prem Heer,Cabir Navya were stunned to hear Manik's confession from behind.

Manik Nandini shared an emotional eye lock.

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re

Tu mera sanam hua re(Sanam re)

Manik:I love you Nandini.

Nandini:I love you too Manik…

They got into a sweet embrace.

Nandini looked at him:You are not telling lie.Right?

Manik:You really think that I can fool you?I love you so much that I can't even think of fooling you.

Nandini:I am sorry Manik.I am scared to lose you again.That's why.

She embraced him crying.

Manik:I promise you that I will not leave you and will never break your heart.

They both joined their foreheads and wept.

Nandini:No need of any promise.I trust you and our love.

All others clapped their hands.They broke their embrace hearing them clap and smiled at them shyly.

Rudra Maya went to Mauritius for honeymoon.They stayed in a beach resort.

They enjoyed a lot in the beautiful beach water.

Rudra screamed:I love you Maya!

haan hansi ban gaye

haan nami ban gaye

Maya became so happy that she ran towards him and embraced him.

tum mere aasmaan

They looked at each other deeply.

meri zameen ban gaye

He pulled her closer to pamper her sweet face with his lips.She blushed.

haan hum badalne lage

They took their selfie.

girne sambhalne lage

They went boating.

Maya forgot herself in Rudra’s arms.

Maya:Rudra..I can’t believe that you are mine now.It’s like a dream come true.I never thought that one day you will also love me.

Rudra:I am sorry Maya.I hurt you by not realizing your love.

jab se hai jaana tumhein

teri ore chalne lage

M:Don’t say sorry Rudra.It’s not your fault.We should be happy that our union happened at the right time in the most beautiful way.

Rudra smiled:Yes..it could’nt have been more beautiful.

har safar har jagah

har kahin ban gaye

M:But I am scared whether I will lose a gem like you.

Suddenly he kept his finger on his lips.

maante the khuda

aur haan wahi ban gaye

Rudra:Don’t you trust our love?

M:Yes.

Rudra:Trust me.We will never be away from each other.God only united us.Our bond can’t be broken.We will be always together.

haan hansi ban gaye

haan nami ban gaye

They shared a romantic eye lock.

tum mere aasmaan

The enjoyed boating and in the mean time Maya slept in Rudra’s arms.

meri zameen ban gaye

He caressed her softly.He leaned towards her forehead

and placed a soft peck there.

pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe

meri nigaahon mein bhi hain dhoondhte wo tujhe

The next morning..

They had break fast in the resort and went to the sea shore.

Rudra wrote Maya on the sand whereas Maya wrote Rudra on the sand.

hum the dhoondhte jise wo kami ban gaye

Rudra Maya saw what they wrote each other with a happy smile.

tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye

In the after noon Rudra took her to a yacht which was decorated with red hearts.

Maya was surprised:Rudra!

haan hasi ban gaye

Rudra embraced her from back.

haan nami ban gaye

Rudra:These are my hearts which I am giving you.My one heart is not enough to love you.So lots of hearts filled with my love for you.

Maya embraced him tightly.

tum mere aasmaan

meri zameen ban gaye

He smiled.

M:I love you Rudra.

Rudra:I love you too.

haan hansi ban gaye

haan nami ban gaye

They enjoyed watching the beautiful surroundings from the yacht.

tum mere aasmaan

meri zameen ban gaye

At night…

Rudra arranged a decorated table and chairs at the beach.Maya came wearing a frock.

Rudra could’nt take his eyes off her.She blushed.

haan hum badalne lage

girne sambhalne lage

M:It's beautiful Rudra.

Rudra:Not as beautiful as you.I became late in seeing your beauty.

She blushed.

jab se hai jaana tumhein

They embraced each other romantically.

teri ore chalne lage

He held her hand and led to the Chair.

Rudra:Maya…won’t you feed me like you used to feed me during our college days?

Maya giggled:Naughty..

har safar har jagah

har kahin ban gaye

She started feeding him.He fed her back.

maante the khuda

aur haan wahi ban gaye

He extended his hand towards:May I have the pleasure to dance with you?

She held his hand smiling.

They danced feeling romance in the cool breeze.

haan hansi ban gaye

haan nami ban gaye

tum mere aasmaan

meri zameen ban gaye (Hamari Adhuri Kahani)

Navya entered the room and got surprised to see red balloons all over the room.

Cabir went near her.They shared a romantic eye lock.

Cabir started to remove Navya’s salwar kameez shocking her..

Navya:Cabir ji...

Suddenly he kept his finger on her lips.

Cabir:Don't say anything.

He removed her salwar kameez completely.

She was shy.

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Behad Aur Beshumar Aaya Hai

He took a blouse and made her wear it.His fingers rubbed on her back while tying the dhori.

She closed her eyes feeling his cold fingers on her skin.

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

He blew air at her back.Not able to control herself she embraced him.He caressed her.

Behad Aur Beshumar Aaya Hai

Toote Toh Toote Teri Baahon Mein Aise

They broke their embrace.He took a beautiful blue saree and started draping on her body.

Jaise Shaakhon Se Patte Be-Haya

Bikhre Tujhi Se Aur Simte Tujhi Mein

He tucked the pleats into her skirt.She closed her eyes when her fingers touched her belly.

Tu Hi Mera Sab Le Gaya

Na Fiqar, Na Sharam, Na Lihaaj, Ek Baar Aaya

Slowly she opened her eyes.He showed her the mirror.

Cabir:I draped it well.Right?

She nodded her head blushing.

Phir Zarre Zarre Mein Deedar Aaya Hai

Phir Zarre Zarre Mein Deedar Aaya Hai

He gave her red roses.

Cabir:For you my darling.

She was surprised.She:What a fragrance!

Cabir:Not as fragrant as you.

She blushed.

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Behad Aur Beshumaar Aaya Hai


He started smelling her face.She became shy.

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyar Aaya Hai

Behad Aur Beshumar Aaya Hai

He cupped her face and moved towards her lips passionately.

Tu Hi Meri Awaaragi

Tu Hi Duaa Har Shaam Ki

They drowned in passionate romance.

Tu Khamakha, Tu Laazmi

Tu Hi Razaa, Tu Hi Kami

Aur Tu…(Hate story2).

A year after….

Neil bought family pack icecream for Avni.

Neil:Ice cream ready My Avni.

Avni was very happy:Thank you so much Neil..

She opened the ice cream pack was got shocked.

AVNI:Hey God..what did you do Neil?

Neil:What happened?Is’nt it icecream?

AVNI:Yes.But it’s strawberry.I wanted chocolate icecream.You spoiled my mood.

Neil:What nonsense!I bought icecream for you in my busy schedule and you are saying that I spoiled your mood?

AVNI:Then what else should I say?

Neil:You are supposed to thank me.

AVNI:Why should I thank you for this icecream which I don’t want?

Neil:What?So arrogant!

AVNI:I am arrogant?You are arrogant Neil.You bought the wrong flavor and now you are expecting me to thank you?Never.

Neil:Ok..even I am not desperate for your stupid thankyou.

AVNI:You said my thankyou is stupid?That means I am stupid?


Neil:Yes.I am right.

AVNI:How dare you Neil?

Kokila and Manik were laughing seeing their cute fight.

Neil:By the way you used to like strawberry ice cream.Right?Then why you don’t want it now?

AVNI:Because now I am in a mood to chocolate ice cream.

Neil:Why your mood is only to have chocolate icecream?

Kokila came near them:Neil Dikhra..calm down..

Neil:Mom..see..this Avni is fighting with me unnecessarily over a silly icecream.

AVNI:I am fighting?You are fighting.

Neil:You…

AVNI:You!

Avni looked at Kokila:Maa..see how Neil is always blaming me.

Koki:Neil…Avni bahu is pregnant.So she is having mood swings.That’s why she is getting irritated over small things.During pregnancy women can have only what they feel like eating at that moment.

Neil became calm and Avni became embarrassed.

Koki:You should fulfill Avni’s wishes.

Neil:Ok mom.

AVNI:I am sorry Neil.I got angry with you for nothing.

Neil:It’s ok Avni.I will get you chocolate icecream now.

Manik came with a packet:No need Neil bhai.I have bought chocolate icecream for my dearest bhabhi.

AVNI:Really?

Manik:Yes bhabhi.

Manik opened the packet and started feeding chocolate icecream to Avni.

Neil and Kokila smiled.

AVNI:By the way Manik..you like strawberry .Right?It’s your favourite.So you can have strawberry icecream.

Manik:Wow bhabhi.I love it.

AVNI:I will feed you.

Avni fed him strawberry icecream with the spoon.

Neil Kokila smiled seeing their bonding.

Avni:Don't eat much icecream Manik.Tomorrow is your wedding.You should not get cold.

Manik blushed.

He thought:I can't wait to wed you Nandini.

Ragini got ready for Manik Nandini’s wedding.

She was dull:This is my first birthday after marriage.But Laksh does’nt remember at all.All our gang members wished me.Even Manik Nandini who are busy with their wedding preparations rang up and wished me.During our courtship the first birthday we celebrated together was so nice.Laksh threw a surprise birthday party for me.He fed me cake in front of all.It was so romantic.

Ragini took that birthday photo and said sadly:But he does’nt remember my first birthday after marriage.

Suddenly Laksh came:Ragini!

Ragini hid the photograph.

L:Are you alright?

Ragini lied:Yes Laksh.

L:But you don’t look alright.I can understand my Ragini very well.I can understand every expression of yours.

Ragini became upset.

Suddenly Laksh put a cake piece in her mouth.

She was surprised:Laksh!

L:While talking to you I cut a small piece of cake.

She saw a cake on the table near by where it was written Happy birthday Ragini.

Ragini was surprised.

NAVYA:I am such a fool who did’nt see the cake near by me.

L:Of course you are a fool as beauties has no brain.

Ragini:Laksh!

She hit him softly.They both laughed.

Ragini:I thought you forgot my birthday.

L:I was pretending to be forgotten your birthday to surprise you like this.How is my surprise?

Ragini:I loved it Laksh.You are so sweet.

L:No return gift for me for this surprise?

Ragini blushed.Laksh moved closer to her rubbing his cheek on hers.

They took a selfie to cherish this birthday.

Cabir screamed:Navya..Navya…it’s time for the wedding.

Navya:I know.It’s my sister’s wedding.But…

Cabir:But what?

He entered the room and got shocked:What’s this?You are not ready yet?And why your dress looks wet?I am sure you were not bathing.Or did you bath wearing clothes?Get ready fast.You have no punctuality.


Navya stared at him angrily:Cabir ji…stop teasing me.Earlier you were my Professor.But now you are my husband.So don’t behave like a professor and scream.

Cabir:But when I see you still not ready how can I not be angry?

NAVYA:I am not free like you.I cooked.I fed Sanju.I was bathing Sanju.And my dress got wet because I was bathing Sanju.Without understanding that I’m a busy mother you are screaming at me.And m

Cabir:Oh..I am sorry.I understand.But Navya..get ready…

Navya:Ok.But I have some demands.

Cabir:Demands for dressing up?Oh no..ok tell me.

Navya:I just bathed Sanju.She has not worn any dress.So you dress her up.

Cabir:Oh!But which dress?I don’t know.

Navya:Don’t worry about that.I know that if you choose dress for Sanju you will choose her night wear thinking that it’s a party wear.

Cabir was embarrassed.

NAVYA:So I have kept the dress on the table.Make her wear it.I am going to dress up.

Cabir:Ok Navya.You wait and see.I will dress my Sanju like a fairy tale Princess.

Navya smiled and went to bath and dress up.

Cabir took the little Sanjana in his hands.

Cabir:Sanju…papa will dress you up.

Suddenly Sanjana passed urine on his shirt.

Cabir:Oh no.I wore the best shirt for the wedding function and now I have to change it.Naughty girl.

Sanju laughed.Sid’s irritation melted seeing her cute smile.

He made her wear diaper.

Cabir:Cutie pie Sanju..hope you don't remove your diaper and pass urine on papa's shirt.

He made her wear party wear.

Navya came back after getting ready.She smiled seeing Sanjana ready and took her in her arms.

NAVYA:Mumma’s princess looks so pretty.Thanks Siddhanhji for getting her ready.It was a real help.

Cabir smiled:I can do anything to get you ready.

They both laughed.

Suddenly Navya noticed Sid’s costume.

NAVYA:You changed your shirt?Why?

Cabir:Because Sanju did suzu on my shirt.

Navya laughed.Cabir who was embarrassed too laughed.Without understanding anything Sanjana laughed.

Cabir Navya held Sanjana together smiling.

NAVYA:Cabir ji...you carry Sanju.

Cabir:Ok..

At the wedding place of Manik Nandini...

Everyone hugged Ragini wishing her happy birthday.

Cabir was tired of managing Sanjana.Sanjana was pulling his hair ,ears and nose.

Cabir:Navya..please carry Sanju.I am tired.

Navya:No Cabir ji.You carry her.If I carry her she will pull my hair,earrings and necklace.If so I will look messy.I am the bride's sister.So I should look nice,not shabby.

Navya walked away giving him a naughty smile.

Cabir:Oh God....

Manik Nandini got married by exchanging garlands,

Mangalyam Tantunane Naam

Mam Jeevan Hetu Naam

taking saath phere,

Kanthe Bhagna Nishu Bhage

Twam Jeev Sharda Shatam

Manik tying nuptial chain around Nandini's neck

O Humdum Suniyo Re

O Jaaniya Suniyo Re

and filling her forehead with vermillion.

O Jaaniya Shaam Ko Khidki Se

Chori Chori Nange Paon Chand Aayega


Nandini:Manik..I feel that I am in heaven.I can' believe that like I wished we will get married one day.My dream came true.

Manik smiled:I too feel the same Nandini.Like you I too hid my feelings for you thinking that we can never be a couple.But see now we are a couple and no one can break us apart.

O Suniyo Re O Jaaniyo Re

O Suniyo Re O Jaaniyo Re

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Rudra Maya,Laksh Ragini ,Neil Avni,Prem Heer were also present there sharing their happiness. Sarla hugged Nandini:I am so happy that finally I could see you as the bride of the person you love the most.

Nandini smiled.

Navya hugged Nandini:Wish you a happy married life didi.

Nandini smiled.

Manik:Cabir Sir...Navya..please give us marriage tips.

Cabir :Sure.Why not?Enjoy ..romance a lot.But delay kids.

Nandini:Why Sir?

Navya:Because if we have kids there will be no time for romance and we men will have time only to work hard for our wives to help them.Wives have a tendency to take advantage of husband's helping nature.

Navya frowned staring at Sid.

Cabir gave her a pale smile:Relax baby...I was just joking.

Rudra:Earlier Cabir sir used to scare Navya as a typical professor.Now Navya is scaring Sir.

Navya felt like laughing while Cabir was embarrassed.Everyone laughed.

Nandini Manik were welcomed home by Avni and Kokila.


Mangalyam Tantunane Naam

Mam Jeevan Hetu Naam

Kanthe Bhagna Nishu Bhage

Twan Jeev Sharda Shatam


Manik Nandini entered the house holding hands together.


Mangalyam Tantunanae Naam

Mam Jeevan Hetu Naam

Hey Mangalyam Mangalyam

Kante Bhagna Nishu Bhage

Twan Jeev Sharda Shatam

Mangalyam

Kokila:I am happy that my Manik too got a beautiful girl who has a beautiful heart.

Avni:Maa is right.Your heart is so big that because of you I got Manik as my Devar.That time itself I wanted to thank you.But I could’nt meet you. Thank you so much Nandini.

Nandini:Don’t thank me.Instead please take me in your arms.Avni and Kokila smiled hugging Nandini.Neil Manik smiled happily.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Manik's song was for Nandini. Rudra planned a nice surprise for Maya. Avni high on homones, so Neil has a tough job.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Good that the wedding got cancelled and MayRa marriage happened

Loved the romantic moments of all the couples

I will give detailed comment on next part

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

lovely update, thanks for the pm

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