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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
I owe everyone a real big apology for disappearing. đđ I am so so sorry for being so late.
Apoligies accepted diiđ¤ for this beautifull update you have given...
Will read n comment soon..
Finally u updated...next time u better not make us wait to long...but i am happy atleast the chapter was long
That stupid father of stupid sharifff....is daring to threaten Jalal on name of Bakshi...he deserves to be ruined completelyđ
I liked Rahim better as a messenger but now i think its right time for both of them to stop playing hide and seek
Salima Begum wise words she is quite a personality...i hope jiji will help them to fill this gap and she will tease them both in future also
I hope jodha can target with guns and she can shut that harem Begum's mouth...jj â¤ď¸will go on hunting trippp
Jalal and ruqs scene was good but alas ruks cannot understand jalal...this trip can help ruqs to see the bond that JJ share is not of just a week and how well they know each other
Update fast...can never get enough of ur updateđ
from where shall i start di..
it was amazing..đ
the bond between Salima begum and Jodha is getting thicker than blood and it's so reassuring to see how there is someone other than Jalal whom she could call hers...my heart felt a tug for Salima's plight.. but her grace and poise won over me..
Because your togetherness will fulfill the urge of my heart!â¤ď¸
Ruqaiya really befits to be Padshah Begum.. but she's so lost in her responsibilities and titles that she fails to understand what Jalal actually needs..or maybe she does but is unable to detach herself from her titles that have been etched in her very skin..that's why maybe somewhere deep down she knows why Jalal needs to be with Jodha.. she has realized what Jodha can give she may not be able to.. but still she too is a human.. i feel sorry for her..
âI promise you, Jalal⌠I will keep on organizing your whole life like a picture till my last breath.â â¤ď¸
this speaks of her love.. this is the way she's going to express her love.. by sacrificing her feelings for his happiness and peace.. letting him find his true love and solace which he was unable to find in his glamorous yet lonely existence..
As for our Jodha.. she is indeed a tigress.. fierce, proud and a fireball.. but somewhere behind this fierce appearance lies a lover who is so desperate to reunite and mingle with her soulmate..but is still unable to convince her heart to accept the true identity of her lover and accept him who he is as a whole.. hope she finds the answers she's looking for soon.. because this wait feels soooo...what can i say.. i can only sigh..
You have given us the taste of their passion..their separation..their longing..and i am really looking forward to feel the warmth of a husband and wife between the two..it would be so surreal to watch them shed their inhibitions..their formalities and all the materialistic things and come together as one.. accepting each other's whole identity and finally be able to live their dreams in reality too..â¤ď¸
i hope this hunt gives them the opportunity to discover a whole new aspect of their relation..and the boat ride seems so magical..really looking forward for that too..
Thankyou so much di for this update..
and i hope to see you soon with another such magical update and many more too..đ¤
What an excellent masterpiece you have written...
Seriously no words to describe....â¤ď¸
Extremely beautiful đ....
Please give next update as soon as possible....
Originally posted by: suhaaana
Thread 1
Completed reading the first thread parts.
>> Thank you so much for choosing this story of mine for reading dear. đ¤ Hope you will like it all along.
It's such a nice take on the original characters. I have recently watched the show on YouTube and was wanting to read something and opened your fanfiction.
>> đ¤
It's enchanting
The way you have described Jalal is commendable. I have an affinity to like Jalal like the way Hritik Roshan portrayed and with the naughtiness of what Rajat portrayed.
>> I tried to bring that up on Jalal's character, touching both the way he has been portrayed in the movie and in the showđł
You have mixed and matched both the characters very well. I really like the Chandra and purnima story.
>> We all love Chandra and Purnimaâ¤ď¸
The characters are good, I love how each and every character has its own space in the story.
I loved Jalal a lot.
You have made him my weakness in this story.
>> He is my weakness as well đ
The introduction of the characters was so good. I was really enjoying the dialogues written in hindi and urdu but equally loving the English ones too.
>> I am not good in Hindi so had to discontinue đ¤
Would comment further after reading the next thread.
The slow development and handful of meetings of purnima and chandrajeet was really refreshing.
I hope when jalal and jodha meet, they won't be overly upset with each other.
>> Thank you so much again dear...
Originally posted by: suhaaana
Thread 2
Phenomenal story
I really can't satisfy my lust of reading by reading it just once.
>> âşď¸ âşď¸
You write beautifully.
The character growth in the story is very beautiful.
Salima Begum - I really loved her in the show and the way you have portrayed her is really appreciating. Her talks her friendship with jalal, her commitment towards the emperor and her motherland is commendable.
I don't know what to say about her but she has always left a deep impact for me. She did love Bairam Khan Sahab like a wife does but still that was not the love out of compassion.
Here I am thinking that you have left the scope of jalal loving Salima as his closest friend. She is the one who will guide him.
>> We all have a kind of affinity and respect for Salima Begam from the show. Hope I would be able to sustain that here as well in future.
Rahim- the little khane khana is a pleasure to read just like he is a pleasure to watch on television. His interactions with jalal were so cute. It was more like an adult friend and someone like a elder sibling who is always there for you. This little messanger is just so so good. His interactions with jodha begam are just so good. Him complaining that he cannot retain long messages đ
The bond that jalal and Rahim shares is very deep. Jalal declaring that Rahim will be a part of his court says everything.
>> Yes... Rahim is the sweetest!
The eunuchs are so entertaining, so are the rest of the Begum's. They are harmless as they could be a support to jodha in future.
>> They will increase the entertainment quotient and will make hell of a team in futuređ
Originally posted by: suhaaana
Rukaiyya begum- for me she is the best portrayed character after jalal ( he remains my favourite). She knew that she will have to perform her duties, she knew that Maham anga is just using her for her own motives, she is intelligent and she knew that her childhood friend is not her love or she is not his love.
>> You liked Ruqaiya! Phew!đ
Kidding... I always wanted to see her from a different perspective; she is a princess, an empress, and her actions should prove that all along. I hope I would be able to portray her properly all along...
She has an attitude of the main consort but she can't go against the emperor is very endearing.
Jalal and rukaiyya's scenes were a pleasure to read. Specially when the Begum sahiba was snoring and our poor Shahenshah was trying to feel guilty for loving his beloved purnima. đ
>> đđ
Hamida bano Begum- a very good character. Her equation with jalal is something I find so so beautiful that I can actually relate them infront of my eyes. Specially when jalal put holi colors on his ammijaan.
>> Another favorite character of mine as well. I love writing about the mother-son due. So its a pleasure to know you enjoying it. đ
The way jalal know that his mother is not at complete fault for leaving him is very deep.
>> Yes, Jalal here is very understanding to everyone. đđź
I believe her equation with the Hindu Begum jodha will be good as well.
>> Yes of course. đ
Originally posted by: suhaaana
Thread 2&3
Maham anga and her son- very nice character portrayal.
I loved how jalal know the deep functioning of the kingdom and he alerts Maham so many times. The gradual shift from jalal to emperor is commendable. Maham anga is an opportunist and it is very well portrayed.
>> Thank you so much for noticing and mentioning these small details. Maham Anga will remain the biggest vamp ever. đ
Adgha Khan and his wife's mention is such cute. I loved how adgha Khan subtly mention that he will like a father in law to jodha Begum and jiji anga's little talks with jalal are a pleasure to read.
>> There is something very soothing about the relationship of Agdha Khan and Jalal. Unlike the toxic relationship with Bairam Khan. Agdha Khan remains the greatest father-figure in Jalal's life.
I hope I would find chances to show more of Jiji Anga so that the difference between her and Maham Anga is clearly visible đ
Jalal's second servant ( after Abdul) he is hilarious and his and jalal's scenes were so so good. I could literally imagine the face that Hritik or Rajat would make of they have a servant like him. The way he said Purnima's letter as a coded message I end up laughing so bad.
He is very entertaining character.
>> Yes, he is cute and funny. Emperor like Jalal always needs such a sidekick.
I would really need to re read it to actually appreciate Jalal. He is all over my mind right now. Can't even find words to appreciate his character.
>> Aww yeah! We never can get over with Jalalâ¤ď¸
Originally posted by: suhaaana
Bakshi bano- I really loved when she showed her husband his place and I would really like to mention the entire chapter I think it was 39 when sujamal's wife was captive and jalal had a talk with shareefudin. The entire convo with him regarding his psycho friend had me in spilts. Jalal is so sarcastic at times and that quality of his I loved most.
More of Bakshi Banu and Sharifuddin will come in future... Glad that u have liked it.
Originally posted by: nyamburamoroc
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