REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 109

just started reading the story character sketch looks promising

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Part 1

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Part 2

Part 3-4 like how Maan is falling slowly for geet, but our Geet is in Akhil's land ..

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Part 30

Part 75

Geet’s dad appears and Akhil’s mother walks out of the room with him leaving Geet there

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While Maan is repeatedly messaging Geet on her secret phone in vain

He is getting restless and tensed every second as Geet said there is some problem in her home

And lack of replies from Geet is making him more and more worried

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Akhil was was looking at unconscious Akhil

Doctor enters

G-Hello Doctor, sab theek toh hai naa…koi ghabrane kibaat toh….?

Doctor-Nahi nahi, I told her mother; he indeed try to slit his hand but that was not even close to the nerves. So uski patti kar dihai. Aur thik thak neend aaye islie need ki goli di hai abhi

She nods as the Doctor walks away

As she is looking at Akhil her eyes are brimming with tears remembering the time she spent with him playing and growing up since childhood.

She keeps her hand gently on his

Slowly when sleep eludes her she doesn’t even realized

She falls asleep holding Akhil’s hand and her head rested on the Hospital bed

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Its middle of the night

Maan enters the Hospital room

He had been roaming around and using all his contacts to find whereabouts of Geet

He looks at Geet, who is sleeping in exhaustion

He relieved to see her

He had been worrying about her since hours

He gazes at Akhil face and then his gaze falls on Geet’s hand which is holding onto Akhil’s hand

Maan sits beside her and takes her other hand into his gently

He is gazing on her face as long as he could, he slowly closes his eyes

He leaves before Akhil or Geet could wake up

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Note:

1. Sorry for the small part. But this scene is my favorite scene so wanted to post it individually to maintain the gravity of it

2. Special thanks to my new reader change12 for reading and commenting on all the parts

3. Please suggest if you guys want me to open a thread 2 for the story or want me to continue on this thread

4. Don't forget, to add this topic to your watchlist to never miss an update

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Part 75

Note:

1. Sorry for the small part. But this scene is my favorite scene so wanted to post it individually to maintain the gravity of it

2. Special thanks to my new reader change12 for reading and commenting on all the parts

3. Please suggest if you guys want me to open a thread 2 for the story or want me to continue on this thread

4. Don't forget, to add this topic to your watchlist to never miss an update

Thanks you..

I agree small update... but looks like it is an important scene I am just hoping Maan won't take it in wrong way...hope this will not create any misunderstanding between Maaneet.

Please open second thread.

Why not open new thread

Yaar yeh kya tha?

Why did Maan drop by and not wake her up n why did Geet hold Akhil’s hand? He’s still the same useless person 😡

Lovely update waiting for next