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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nandini thinking that she's boring and Manik explaining her was nice

MaNan playing in snow was cute

RagLak holi scene was sensual and dance scene was funnyy

AvNeil holi scene was romantic

CaVya scenes were very funny


Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry for late response


Part 4


Fabulous Update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks a lot friends 4 the cute comments


Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani: This Youth is Crazy Part 5


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Suddenly all others came.
Laksh:Why did you call us Manik?
Ragini:Is it to praise my beauty?
Everyone laughed.
Laksh:Ragini...you are too much.
Ragini:Just joking yaar.
Manik:I want to inform you all that I got admission in
a music college in Chicago.So after 2 weeks I will be leaving for Chicago.
All were surprised.
Rudra:This is so shocking.
Cabir:Wow.Good that you have finally become serious about your studies and career.
Cabir:Yes Sir.I am going to fulfil my dream to be a flawless singer.
Laksh:We will miss you Manik.
Manik:I too will miss you all.
Ragini:I will miss you my hot rockstar Manik.
Laksh stared at her:Now also joke Ragini?
Ragini:Then what can I say Laksh?
He smiled.
Maya:You took the right decision Manik.
Rudra hugged Manik emotionally.
Navya:Never thought that you can be serious also Manik.
He smiled.They all went.
Manik looked at Nandini.She was silent.
Nandini:So you are going?
Manik:Ya.
Nandini suppressed her pain:You will do well.I am sure that like you made me confident and cheerful in a few days you will spread happiness over there also.
Manik smiled.
Nandini:Leave your anger for your brother also.If you get his blessing you will prosper more.
Manik:I am not promising Nandini as it's not easy to forget certain things.
Nandini:Take your own time Manik.
Manik:You were going to say something.Right?What was it?


Nandini:I was going to say that I thank you for everything you did for me.In a few days you taught me to enjoy life.You made me confident.You made me realize that even I can be interesting and not boring.You made me realize that I can also have a friend ie you.You made me realize that my life is not boring.I thank you for everything Manik.I will miss you.


She controlled her tears and smiled.

Manik:No thank you in friendship.
She smiled.
She said in her mind:You also made me realize that I can also fall in love.But may be there is no your love in my destiny.
Her eyes became wet.

Neil was exercising in the gym showing off his muscles.

Girls over there was bowled over by his muscular body.They could’nt take their eyes off him.

Girls:So hot.

Neil felt weird seeing it.

Neil:Are you girls here to do exercise or to watch me?

They were embarrassed.

Neil thought:If it was Avni who was staring at me like this I would have enjoyed it.

Suddenly he heard a voice:Neil..

He turned back and was surprised to see Avni smiling at him.

Neil was surprised:Avni?You?

Suddenly Avni vanished.

Neil:Oh no…It was my imagination.

He started his exercise again.His eyes fell on the girl next to him and got surprised.

It was Avni who was doing exercise there.She was wearing a T shirt and leggins.

Neil:Avni…you are exercising?

Avni:Why I can’t exercise in the gym?

Neil:Not that…but in this dress….

Avni:It is not suiting me?

Neil:No..you look cute…

She blushed.

He kept looking at her sweetly.

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Hon(Repeat)
Ek Tuk Tumhe Dekhtein Hain

Suddenly he slipped and fell down and his back hit the floor.

Avni:Neil..

Avni came near him and started caressing his back.He was lost in his touch.

Jo Baat Kehna Chahe Zubaan, Tumse Ye Woh Kehtein Hain,
Aankhon Ki Sharmo Haya Maaf Ho

Suddenly he realized that her dress has changed.

Neil:How did you change your dress so fast?

Avni:What?

Suddenly Neil realized that it was not Avni but another girl.She was blushing.The embarrassed Neil moved from there.

Neil:Why are you touching me?

She said romantically:You fell down..so I thought I will do massage for you.You seemed to be enjoying.

Neil was embarrassed:Enjoying your massage?No way.I thought it was my Avni.

Neil left from there leaving that woman confused.

Neil reached home.Avni came:Neil…

Neil :Avni..why I am seeing you everywhere?

Avni:Means?

Neil shared his Gym experience with her.Both Neil and Avni started laughing.


Avni:Neil..you are so funny,

Neil was lost in her sweet laughter.

Tumhe Dekh Ke Jhukti Hain, Uthi Aankhen Jo Baat Na Keh Saki

Suddenly Avni realized that his eyes were fixed on her.She blushed.Neil smiled.

Jhuki Aankhen Woh Kehteein Hain,
Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan Maaf Hon (HDCS).




Navya went near Cabir:Sorry for everything Cabir Sir.I troubled you a lot.



chhuTeya na chhuTe mose
rang tera Dolna


Cabir:Why are you so guilty now Navya?
Navya:I failed to prove that mine is not just infatuation.You challenged me to prove it before our trip gets pver.But I could'nt prove that.So like I promised since i failed in the challenge I will not come to you again to disturb you.

ik tere baajo dooja
mera koi mol na


Her eyes became wet.Cabir became sad seeing her painful tears.

bolna mahi bol na
bolna maahi bol na


Cabir:Who said you failed in the challenge?
Navya looked at him in disbelief.

Cabir:If yours was just infatuation you would not have left all enjoyment by not going out with your friends just to look after me when I was sick.

Navya was stunned.

tere sang hansna main
tere sang rona



Cabir:Even If you had failed in the challenge I would not have ignored you as I started loving you.


tujh mein hi rehna main
tujh mein hi khona


Navya was surprised.

They both smiled emotionally and held each others hands.

dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
dil naiyo kholna


Navya:Sir....
Cabir:Not Sir..Cabir...
Navya was very happy.

mar ke bhi maahi tosey
munh na moDna


Navya::Ok Cabir.But in front of others in college I will call you only Sir.Otherwise others will tease us.

They both giggled.

bolna mahi bol na
bolna maahi bol na
(Kapoor and Sons)


Nandini saw this from behind and got surprised.
Nandini:Navya in love with Cabir Sir?Can't believe it.Cabir sir is nice.Navya is lucky to get his love.At least Navya got her love.I am happy for her.

Ragini was restless:I feel like seeing Laksh.

Ragini went to the room .She saw Laksh sitting there alone.

Ragini:Laksh..all are chatting,singing and enjoying to celebrate the last moments in Manali.But you are sitting here alone.

Lak:Even you are not joining them?

Ragini:Ya..because all are so busy that I am not getting a chance to flirt with them.

They both burst into laughter.Suddenly Ragini saw a paper in his hand.

Ragini:Laksh…what is that?

Lak:Seeing the beauty of Manali I wrote a poem.I could’nt resist myself from penning down this.

Ragini:Can I see it?

Lak:No need Ragini.A fun loving person can’t enjoy a serious poem like this.

Ragini:Don’t worry about that.Since I am beauty conscious I can enjoy you praising the beauty even it’s about nature.

They both giggled.

Ragini:Please Laksh..show me.

He opened her fist and kept the paper there.

She read the poem.

Ragini:So beautiful Laksh.I never thought that I can enjoy a poem this much.I decided to read it only because you wrote it.But I loved it.

Lak:Really you loved it?

Ragini:Yes I loved it Laksh.

Lak:You know while writing this poem I imagined you as Manali.

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Ragini was stunned:What?

Laksh realized what slipped off his tongue and he lied:No..I was joking.

Ragini blushed thinking:I know that you wrote this poem about me only.

Koi Toh Toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Ragini:I need it’s copy.I will take it’s photo with my mobile.

She took it’s photo with the mobile.

Ragini:I saved the poem in my phone after all it’s the first poem somebody wrote about me.

Laksh became shy.

Hai rom rom iktaara
Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo baadalon mein se guzre

Inorder to cover up his embarrassment he tried to walk away..but his face hit the door by mistake.

Ragini:Why are you so careless Laksh?

Ragini collected some water and poured it on that part.

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Lak:Why are you doing this Ragini?

Ragini:Otherwise this area will get swollen.Ice was better.But since there is no ice I used cold water.

She wiped his face with her duppatta.

Kaise tune ankahaa, tune ankahaa sab sunaa

She blowed air at his face softly where it got hurt standing very close to him.

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Feeling her so close to him he felt romantic.He looked at her deeply.

Tu din sa hai, main raat
Aa na dono mill jaayein shaamon ki tarah

She looked at him.Their eyes met each others.

A romantic eye lock took place.

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage…( Dum Laga ke Haisha)

They broke the eye lock.

Ragini:Let us join others.Otherwise they will feed bad.

Lak:Ok.

They went near others.

Maya to Rudra:Rudra…shall we go for a drive as we it’s our last day in Manali?

Rudra:Sure my Maya baby.I will take a car for rent.

Maya:Thank you.

Rudra took a car for rent.

Maya and Rudra sat inCabire the car.Maya was driving the car.

Maya:I will miss Manali..it’s coldness..the cold wind…

Rudra:Maya is getting romantic.Did you find your soul mate in Manali?Is that why you are getting romantic?

Maya thought:I found my man much earlier.But I had lovely moments with him in Manali.

Rudra laughed:I know that my Maya baby did’nt fall in any love trap.I was just joking.

Maya smiled.

On the way Maya stopped the car seeing a tea shop.

Maya:Rudra..shall we have hot paratha and potato curry from here?

Rudra:From the road side shop?

Maya:Ya..I think in the cold place having hot food on the road side feeling cool air would be nice.

Rudra:Ok sure.

They both ordered food there and had it.

Rudra:Yummy food.

Maya:Exactly.

Maya was enjoying the cool breeze.

Rudra:Maya…

Maya embraced him:Thank you so much Rudra for giving me these lovely moments.If you had not helped me I would’nt have had such a nice drive and Manali’s tasty food.

Rudra smiled:Anything for you my dear.

Maya smiled.





They all said Good bye to Nandini when they returned.



Manik returned home Avni welcomed him caressing his face:Manik..I am so happy that you returned.I was waiting for you to return as today you are Avni's devar.

Manik smiled.Avni fed him sweet.
Avni:Today is Neil's birthday too.What a nice day.
Manik's face became dull.

They all gathered to celebrate Neil's birthday.



Kokila:Manik did'nt come yet.

Avni:I will bring him Maa.
Avni went to call Manik.
Avni:Manik...come to celebrate.
Manik:Sorry bhabhi..I can't.
Avni:The first time I am asking you something as a bhabhi.Won't you obey me?
Manik:Ok..for you I will come.
Manik came with Avni to the hall and Neil Kokila became happy.
Neil cut the cake holding Avni's hand

and fed Kokila and Avni.Then he moved towards Manik.
Manik:I don't want it.


All became dull.

Neil:Please eat this Manik.
Manik took it and threw it down shouting:I told you I don't want it.
All became upset.
Manik:For me this cake this poison.Because your mind is full of poison.
Neil was shattered.
Kokila blasted at him:Shut up Manik.Enough.You are blaming him for what he has not done.Now I will tell you the truth.
Neil:Mom..please no.
Koki:No Neil.Today you won't stop me.It's time for him to know the truth.Till now I kept quiet on your request.But not any more.


Kokila stared at Manik:Now listen Manik..you hear the truth.


Manik:What is the truth which I don't know?


Koki:The truth which you can't even imagine.

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fascinating update... well written

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Part 3

Sad that Manik hates Avni & Neil. But Glad that Nandini made Manik realize that it was not Avni's fault as she had married according to her parents choice. Neil disguising as a salesman before Avni was funny. Avni removing the moustache and apologizing to Neil was cute. Avneil kising scene was cute. Manik calling Avni as bhabhi was very sweet. Laksh dresssing up Ragini's wounds was romantic. Mayra hug in the cat scene was romantic. Manan nok-jhok and dialogues was hilarious.

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Part 4

Manik persuading Nandini to take part in ice skating was impressive. Manik telling Nandini that she is not boring is very much like a friend. The song sequence was romantic. Manan playing with ice was cute. The Raglak ice scene was romantic. Rudra taking care of Maya after slipping down was full of passion. Loved Navya taking care of Kabir was passionate.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 5


Fun Filled and Fabulous Update

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Thank u very much friends


Kokila:Like you think your Anita bhabhi was not good.He never loved anyone in this family.She was only pretending to be good.
Manik was shocked:No..it's a lie.
Koki:Are you saying that I am also a liar?I swear on Krishna bhagwan that Anita was unfaithful.One day we found her true colour.We found her with her boy friend.I became very upset thinking that like my husband betrayed me and left me alone with my kids my Neil dikhra's wife also betrayed him.After that she became rude to us.But since you were too small to understand his true colour she continued pretending to be good to you.Though Neil forgave her and decided to give her one more chance she did'nt change.That day she and Neil had a fight regarding this matter



and she decided to leave Neil and go to her boy friend forever.She left the house.But on the way she met with an accident and passed away.Though she was unfaithful Neil loved her sincerely..so he was depressed.To get him out of depression I made Neil promise not to shed even a single tear for the woman who does'nt deserve his love.


For me my Neil hid his pain and tried hard to smile.I realized that only true love can heal his wounds.But Neil refused to remarry.But I forced him to remarry.I threatened him that I will die if he does'nt remarry.

Finally he agreed and I found a nice girl like Avni by God's grace.Avni is pure like Sita.


That is how Neil married Avni.Neil was sad while marrying Avni while Avni who was not aware of Neil's trauma was happy on her wedding day like any other bride.



I hid the truth from you as Neil requested me and Avni to hide it from you as Neil did'nt want you to hate Anita as he knew how much you loved Anita.
Avni was weeping:Neil did not accept me as a wife.It took a long time for him to give me a wife's place.


Kokila:Neil is not at all at fault beta.
Kokila cried:I can't bear you hating the innocent Neil.If you want to hate someone for Neil's remarriage you hate me as I'm responsible for it.
Manik was silent,but his were filled with tears.
Neil cried silently.He tried to leave the room.Suddenly Manik held his hand.Neil looked at him.
Neil:Manik..
Manik hugged him crying.
Manik:Please forgive me Neil bhai.I hurt you for many years for what you have not done.I trusted the wrong person.I don't deserve pardon.


Neil:Don't say like that.You were too young to understand the truth.It's not at all your fault.



I have always forgiven your naughty acts when you were small.This also I consider as your childishness and I forgive you.

Manik hugged Neil again:Thank you Neil bhai.
Avni and Kokila smiled tearfully.
Koki:Can we both join you guys?
Neil Manik smiled.Avni and Kokila too joined their hug.


5 years passed....



Manik is a famous rockstar who does concerts and sings for movies.

Maya's house is decorated.Rudra and Laksh came.

They had a friendly hug.
Laksh:Wow Maya..you are getting married.
Maya smiled.
Rudra:But Maya..you are modern.Then why did you agree for an arranged marriage?

Maya:Rudra...instead of coming and wishing me a happy married life you are discouraging me?You are impossible.
Rudra:Seriously I feel its a wrong decision.



Maya:Oh Rudra...in the last moment don't make me crazy.

Rudra:Ok leave it.
Maya went to take juice for them.
Laksh:Rudra...Maya is your best friend.Instead of becoming happy for her marriage you are getting restless.
Rudra:I know.But i don't know why.
Laksh:Are you feared of losing her?
Rudra:What do you mean?
Laksh:You know we always thought that you love Maya.But it never happened.But now I feel you love her.But you have not realized it yet.That's why still you are not able to understand why you are not happy with her marriage.


Rudra:What nonsense are you saying Laksh?What will Maya think?

Laksh:I am sure that Maya too loves you.
Rudra was shocked:What?Are you mad?
Laksh:I am not mad.But you are so mad that you did'nt see Maya's love for you.In fact you are so mad that you did'nt still realize your love for Maya.Duffer.If you had confessed your love to Maya she would not have agreed for this marriage.Instead this would have been yours and Maya's wedding.
Rudra was stunned.
Maya came with juice.They took juice.
Rudra:You have liquor here?
Maya:Rudra..still you have not got rid of your drinking habit.You are crazy.
Rudra giggled.




Navya and Cabir came.Maya was excited and hugged Navya:How are you Navya?

Navya:I am nice.
Maya:I am so happy that you came to attend my function Cabir Sir.
Cabir:How can I not come Maya.
Navya was wearing mangalsuthra and Sindoor.
Maya:You both are happily married.When will be Nandini's marriage?She is older than you.
Navya:Nandini di is a busy doctor now.She has no time for marriage.
Maya:However busy we are when we get our true love we will get ready for marriage.When will Nandini come?I had called her personally and she said she will come.
Navya:Nandini di will come for Sangeet.
Maya's mother Jhanvi called:Maya..get ready for the mehendi function.
Maya:Ok maa.

Mehendi ceremony....


Maya's fiance Armaan arrived.

They smiled at each other.
Arm:Hi Maya.
Maya:Hi Armaan.
Rudra's face became dull.
He thought:What is there in Armaan for which Maya is desperate to marry him?May be because he is a doctor.

Mehendi lady asked Maya:Which letter should I write in your palm?

Maya looked at Rudra and said:Write A.
My fiance's name is Armaan.So A.


Rudra's face became dull.Maya and Armaan smiled at each other.

Suddenly Ragini came:Hey..I came.
Maya hugged her.
M:But you are late.
Ragini:Sorry Maya.I had the shoot of an ad.
Maya:Oh ya..now you are a super model too.
Laksh went near her.
Lak:Hey beauty queen.We all were waiting for you.
Rag:I have come naa darling.

Kids ran fast pushing Ragini while playing and Ragini fell over Laksh.
They shared a passionate eye lock.


Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koyi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah yeh suljhe
Hai rom rom ek tara
Hai rom rom ek tara
Jo badalon mein se guzre-



(Dum Laga Ke Haisha)

Both of them blushed and broke the eye lock.

Laksh noticed that Ragini's one earring is missing.He saw it on the floor and took it from there.He made her wear the earring with his fingers.She blushed.

Rudra:Open romance.

Laksh Ragini were shy.

Navya,Cabir and Laksh Ragini danced....

Ye kudiyaan nashe di pudiyaan
Ye munde gali de gunde
Ye kudiyaan nashe di pudiyaan
Ye munde gali de gunde
Nashe di pudiyaan
Gali de gunde..

O.. o..
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Mehndi laga rakhna


Doli saja ke rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Oh.. ho.. oh.. ho..



O.. aa..

Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna
Sahra sajake rakhna


Chehra chhupake rakhna
Yeh dil ki baat apne
Dil mein dabake rakhna

Sahra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna

Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna(DDLJ).

Cabir pulled Navya closer.He was lost in her.Navya became shy.

Navya:Cabirji...what are you doing?

Cabir:You look so gorgeous that I can't take my eyes off you.

She blushed.
Navya:Cabirji...
Cabir:When you call me your voice sounds like a nightingale to me.
Navya:Oh really?Then why did you say earlier that my voice is irritating when I call you?


Cabir:That time instead of studying you were after me and you used to call me Cabir Sir..not sweetly like Cabirji.
Navya smiled.
Cabir:When you stopped calling me Sir and started calling me Cabirji I started melting before you.
Navya blushed.
Cabir:The wetness in your lips seem to be sweet honey for me.I feel like tasting it.
Cabir moved towards Navya's lips.
Navya became shy.

Navya:Leave me Cabirji...others will see us.

Cabir:Let them see...

Everyone laughed.Their laughter made Cabir come back to his senses and left Navya's hand moving away from her.

Both were shy.

Rudra:Long ago you were advising us about love and now you are loving your wife in front of us shamelessly?

Cabir was shy.

Cabir:That time I was not in love.So I advised easily.But now I am madly in love with Navya that I have become shameless.
Cabir Navya blushed.

Everyone laughed.

Jhanvi:Now let Armaan and Maya dance.

Armaan:Ok aunty.

Maya:Sorry..I can't.

Jhanvi:Why can't you dance Maya?This is your function.

Maya:Yes.But..my hand is full of mehendi.If I dance our clothes will be dirty.I am not comfortable dancing with mehendi in hands.Sorry.

Armaan:It's ok Maya.I understand that it's really uncomfortable to dance around with mehendi.

Rudra:In a way Maya is right.While dancing if her mehendi will get spoiled everybody will say that it's a bad omen.

Jhanvi became dull.

Laksh whispered to Rudra:Why don't you admit that you don't like Maya dancing with Rudra?

Rudra was silent.

Sangeet.....

Nandini arrived.All were surprised to see Nandini in a beautiful sleeveless salwar suit with no specs.
Navya:Di...thank God you arrived.Maya was waiting for you.

Maya and Nandini hugged each other.

Maya:I am so happy that you came Nandini.

Nandini:How can I not come for your wedding as you are the only scool mate who constantly had touch with me.

They smiled.

Ragini:What yaar?What a make over?How come you are so beautiful?You are giving me tough competition now?

They all laughed.

Nandini chatted with all of them over there.
Maya:Feeling very happy to see all after a long time.Right?
Nandini:Yes.But one person is missing.Manik.
Maya:He has promised me that he will come.I don't know when.
Nandini thought:Where are you Manik?I miss you.
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:I am here.When you think of me I will be near you.
Nandini's heart beat fast.She turned back along with others.They were surprised to see Manik.
Nandini's face blossomed.Manik was surprised to see Nandini's make over.Maya,Rudra,Laksh,Ragini,Cabir,Navya hugged him.
Maya:Hey rock star Manik...you have to sing for my sangeet.
Manik:Sure Maya baby.Without me how can sangeet be complete?
Everyone smiled.
Manik walked towards Nandini:Hey chashmish..sorry now no specs for you.
She smiled.
Manik:Would you like yo join me for a dance Nandini?
Smiling Nandini held his hand.

Manik started singing and they danced like crazy.

Badtameezee Ek Bimari Hai
Ek Aisi Bimari
Jo Dheere Dheere Waqt Ke Saath
Budhaape Mein Badal Jaati Hai
Main Kehta Hoon Jab Tak Budhaapa Nahi Aata
Thodi Badtameezee Hi Kar Lete Hai



Paan Main Pudeena Dekha
Naak Ka Nageena Dekha
Chikni Chameli Dekhi
Chikna Kameena Dekha
Chaand Ne Cheater Hoke Cheat Kiya Toh
Saare Taare Bole Gilli Gilli Akhaa

Pa Para Para...
Meri baat, teri baat
Zyada Baatein Boori Baat
Thaali Mein Katora Leke
Aaloo Bhat, Muri Bhat
Mere Peeche Kisi Ne Repeat Kiya Toh
Saala Maine Tere Muh Pe Maara Mukka



Laksh Ragini Navya Cabir Rudra Maya Armaan too danced with Manik and Nandini.


Ispe Bhoot Koi Chadha Hai
Theharna Jaane Naa
Ab Toh Kya Buraa Kyaa Bhalaa Hai
Fark Pehchaane Naa
Zidd Pakad Ke Khadaa Hai Kambakht
Chhodna Jaane Naa


Seeing Manik dancing with Ragini Nandini became dull and walked away.Manik noticed it.

Badtameez Dil, Batameez Dil, Batamiz Dil
Maane Na, Maane Na
Badtameez Dil, Batameez Dil, Batamiz Dil
Maane Na, Maane Na - yeh-jawaani-hai-deewani


He left dancing and followed Nandini.
Manik:Nandini..why are you irritated?We met after many years and still ypu are showing angry face at me?Why did you leave the dance?
Nandini:You deserve it.You know...You have not changed a bit.Still you are flirting with Ragini.And she too enjoys flirting with you.

Manik laughed.
Nandini:Why are you laughing?
Manik:Even you have not changed a bit.If you know the truth you will laugh at yourself.
Nandini:Then tell me that funny truth?

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MaNan conversation was nice

AvNeil scene was very funny

Manik leaving for Chicago was shocking

Ragini 😂

RagLak poem scene was nice

I wish u had searched for a poem for this scene

Maya Rudra scene was nice

Neil birthday scene was nice

Waiting for next part

Eager to know the truth

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excellent update... well written

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Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 6 months ago

Manvi Singh always believed in TRUE LOVE, she too dreamt of her PRINCE CHARMING who like ROMEO would take her to his KINGDOM OF LOVE. But, HER...

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Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 6 years ago

Intro: In the vibrant heart of Chennai, two sisters and two brothers are bound by fate. Mahima and Rajeev's secret love faces societal power and...

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