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Finally Kabir for once acted like a good loving brother. Good to see him like this with Geet for a change. That was a smart move by Prem, not restricting Geet, but trying to put her off dating, that guy is a good combination of brain and heart, close to perfect in every aspect, so far. Was Maan able to hear their talks? Was he affected by the idea of Geet having a boyfriend? Again the sad part. Until now he was just narrating what had already happened, but for the first time it was happening for real and even though there weren't many words, it was even more painful. His father is a sick man.

Waiting for the next update. Please update soon.

Firstly Eid Mubarak to u as well!!!

I feel sooo bad for Geet because I can relate to her. She’s only trying to help him so him being a lil rude would’ve definitely hurt her😒

I felt terrible for Maan in the moment he said that he won’t be able to study further and that broke my heart 💔 He may have wanted to study but he can’t because of his given situation 😭

Prem and Kiara are sweet. It’s nice that Kiara is getting along well with Geet! I hope she’s never neglected by them!

Geet worrying it's disturbing Maan more he used to his situation

It's bad Maan not able to study further . Maan not want Geet to think about him every moment he is keeping everything private it's upsetting him to share his life

Prem kira needed time and Geet too pushing him to marry he right not intro kaira to his mom and nani Geet hi kafi hai

Damn poor Geet here she is like ill be away from my brothers when I go to college nope one is riding there with her lol. Prem really knows his way to be overbearing. Kabir is the same. Jay wouldnt make it anywhere near Geet with Kabir Maan and Prem around. He is keeping himself distant so she doesnt keep carrying his emotional baggage and hurt. Geet will get it but I feel like she wont back down.

First Eid Mubarak to you. Now come to the update ,I loved it. Geet and kiara seem to be in a good bonding. She is more excited to bring her home than prem himself. So geet is planning for her university . she is excited for this as well but some part of her mind keeps thinking about maan and maan seems to have noticed this. He asked her to stay away from his business . obviously geet is hurt but I wouldn't say maan is wrong as he is just worried for her. He doesn't want her to think about him and take any kind of distress. Waiting for next dear

Nice update 👍 loved Kabir and geet relationship they are perfect brother sister but poor maan has to skip his studies no he should do something for his situation and he hurt geet also she only want to save him

What will happens now waiting to see

Update soon waiting eagerly

PT 6

I am crying for Maan...and the daily torture he is suffering in silence in the hands of that monster...I really hate it...That monster does not deserve to live. And Maan deserves a family, with all the love & care in the universe... I can so feel that ache in his heart...And ache that goes all the way one's soul & being...

PT 7

It hurt to see Maan in such a state...keeping everything under wraps...not wanting to burden anyone with what exactly is going on with him...And especially Geet worrying over him...All of it is scarring him...I can feel his yearning for a family that loves him...for someone of his own to love him...Will Prem really take him on as an intern? But can he stop living with that monster? Can Prem's internship put him in the same college as Geet & Kabir? I am just thinking how to get Maan out of this whole torture.....

If I'd vij10/vkrish

Eid Mubarak !

I had missed reading this one . A completely different flavour of pain and concern. Maan is having a terrible childhood/adulthood , yet he is so mature . Geet is feeling his pain and wants to help and he feels he has burdened her with his issues. It is a very very different relationship of Maan and Geet . The writer in you has done a fantastic job in articulating the trauma and pain. We can so visualise the conversations. Looking forward for the next phase with Maan working and Geet joining college.