Originally posted by: selvi1275
I started reading with the euphoria of reading a PBD update...... but ended up with Double euphoria ..
.....three years..and you picked it up at where you left with such elan......Kudos to you...Jahnu.....
Breathtakingly written.....It was a roller coaster ride of emotions for them as well as US...
Prithvi....Straight from Party to work.... decoding the clues.......finally stops at ...a Trusted Friend........WHO...... friend of Raghuram or Jodha.?.?????...
oh ..a friend of Raghuram....but with access to Home or Bank lockers.....has to be Very Close friend or relative
..... Jalal shared a name too.....
Aiyoo....
at the end of all....I’m super confused about the suspect...... whose name could Jalal share?......will come to it later.....first the burning question..... why is Jalal late?
All of Jodha’s raw emotions laid thread bare......... she lived through the loss of her family again......... and the dread of Jalal joining that list........ in fact both of them living through the fear of Her- Fate and Him - the murderer .......
Well… it’s only fair that if her impulsiveness becomes of him, then his cool collectedness became of her. And boy... what a combination they make! Complementing each other at times when the other one is lacking…
The above lines relieved the simmering tension and despair and brought out a smile......not just for Jalal.....
I definitely like the list of restrictions she’s listing out for him...
Down there … at the abyss of her heart, she discovered a hideous debris graciously waving back at her for being finally acknowledged.
Beautifully penned....
.... Jodha living again the nightmare of her life of last one year........ her struggle to be not drowned in its wake........ constantly fighting to keep herself sane....... and finally ..even searching for the old self..........nailed it....Jahnu...
When Jalal decided to share the truth with her...I was
...mostly dreading her reaction.....but....her calm, collected....Come home Jalal.....was deafening for Jalal .....for sanity returned right away ....he calmed down....
Jodha frozen on the last step of the porch...... .... drew a parallel to that other famous scene. ....regarding not crossing the line...... here the imaginary one........
Jalal saw through her calm demeanour and cleverly decided not to out the conspiracy to her...... all her uncertainty, hesitation, and confusion came out exposing the fragile Jodha....
Jodha wetted her lips, taking that leap of faith with the only person she’d ever try.
Heart tugging ....Beautiful Jahnu.......Many like this sentence create a flutter in the heart...when least expected....
“I’ve a penchant for roses”, he drawled. “…but I draw line at having them in my garden, not in my conversations. As it is, I’ve blabbered enough flowery talk today to last a lifetime. Do a favor and spare me the roses and thorns language. You know you don’t need to hide behind metaphors to talk to me
Seriously Jhanu.....I was
..... but it’s full of beautiful emotions too....
The intelligent boss surmised the cause and badly wanted transparency between them........ coz this is her BIG ISSUE which is pulling her back all the time....and His BIG ISSUE is the murder conspiracy ........at least from her side this can be solved once for all...
That monologue addressed all her inner battles.... old ones from her parents accident.... which merged with new ones ....(which started when she found Jalal and Aliya together in Delhi...)...... to blow up in mega proportions.....BOOM....it has burst.....
All issues listed in one paragraph ...amazingly done ..Jhanu...
And I like his new technique......Long answer or short...
Mr.Miser-with-words.
His answers....long and short.........Dhak…. dhak… dhak….dhak...... indeed it was...
Jalal’s answers ....EPIC.....
There... she had done it!
There... he had done it!
I like these.......twins.......so synonymous with you
The shocker for Boss.
..... finally his heart has woken up....... which didn’t when he married Aliya...and which made her father think he’s an no-emotions person.......
And the undeniable truth is that he is simply a pitiable lone soul seeking its companion.....(No...not true...)… awaiting its completion?!(truth......undeniable)
I’ll leave that to you.”🥳🥳
Very Jalalish
Wonderful lines......me
You told me to come home,” he whispered right into her ear. “So did I.”
Girl.......how many such bombs will you explode in an update.........
I’ve already been soo into the clouds reading such one liners.. and you deliver this stunner of a sentence.....
Lucifer’s incarnate..
8th chapter........
Style....cuffs........... actually we’re Innocent
Actually, I want to hear your reasons first and then decide if you deserve an entry into home or not.”
Yayyy.......
Sleep with better half.......
Ok .... car has never been an inanimate object for me......... every time you say jaguar...my mind completely drifts from them both.............
And I loved that he got down to help and not just sit in the car.....
Lovely lovely intimate scenes........ his naughtiness helping her to get bold.........Now how can the Boss be NOT naughty....
Okay Mentor-student role...... first lesson imparted....... and graduated with fly colours.............. Wonderful....
.... but I don’t like STRAWBERRY
And I’m in Bangalore still and will be for few more years.......transfer..it was the other way round.......and then it was resignation ..... that was what happened last we discussed....
Seher Hone Ko Hai
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