ARIYA: DESTINED TO LOVE. - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

He he. Fun reading their pov

Please don't apologize for having strong female characters that is what attracts people like me in the first place

Suggestion .. please have index in first page and update the chapter number last updated in FF name ...that will help people in knowing the FF has been updated

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Thank you for your valuable feedbacks. As I'm not familiar in writing in this site, I'm learning things and would soon implement them .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing updae

poor Arjun lol

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Everyone's reaction to great ego altering experience of the Great ACP was hilarious 🤣🤣 I thoroughly enjoyed the chap😆


And yes, dont apologize for making your character strong😳 Strength isn't gender biased for me 🤪 it's only a few times we get to see our girl get the upper hand 😎

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow..awesome.❤️☺️😍😄.plz continue...keep it up

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Posted: 5 years ago
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POST 3 (PART A):

For some time , no one knew how to react . Riya and Arjun were indulging themselves in an intense eyelock while the others simply watched them. No one come out of their stupor for some time. Finally they did that only when they heard the land line ringing. Everyone assembled themselves in the living hall while Raghu sir attend the call not before Shree had tapped their phone and had started to trace the call.

Raghu sir:'Hello'

Kidnapper:'I have kidnapped your daughter'

Raghu sir:'What do you want ? Don't do anything to my daughter.'

Kidnapper:'Good.you came straight to the point.Bring 15 lakhs in cash to the godown near shipping port. Don't even breathe about it to police and come alone.'

With that the line went dead. Finally ETF felt relieved that the case atleast got a direction to investigate. Sameer asked Raghu sir to arrange the money since Sheen's safety was their first priority and they would nab the criminals once Sheen reaches him. But Arjun and Riya both were never convinced that they did this to get only 15 lakhs when he could easily give them 15 crores . So they started listening to the call recording again and this time they both got an idea that the locality from where the kidnapper had called them was near a mosque since they both heard a namaz prayer in the background.

Arjun:'Shree, immediately trace the call , find whether a mosque is situated near the location?'

Shree although first startled still started tracing and checking the location as per the orders.

But Riya was still not convinced, starting playing the recording again and this time a little louder noticed that it is near the shore since she heard boat's horn and a church bell.

Riya:'Shree this location should be near the shore . I could hear boat's horn and it also has a church nearby . check that also.'

Now the time to get surprised was for the team along with Arjun, Raghu sir and Commisioner .

Soon according to the finding , they find out the place was a slum near the shore. ETF along with Arjun zoomed out to the place only to find that the building was already breaked in and there was nobody in that building. Dejected, they leave the spot and plan to execute their plan accordingly when Raghu sir reach out with money .

Sameer(eyeing Arjun ):'Riya, stay with Rawte . Don't leave him out of your sight. I don't trust him. In case anything, inform me immediately'.

Riya:'Sure sir'

Arjun along with Riya were waiting in the entrance of the godown. Ajun was pacing back and front while Riya watching him calmly. Suddenly he came to her

Arjun:'Riya,ask Shree whether the place where Raghu sir is taking his money has cctv cameras?'

Riya without any question took her phone from her pocket and dailed Shree's number while Arjun looked shocked at her. He was expecting questions from Riya on his way but none happened.

Riya(to Shree):'Shree check whether there is any cctv camera in the money transfer location?'

Shree(after checking):'No Ri.'

Riya:'Okay'

with that she ended her call and turned to a restless Arjun,

Riya:'No'.

That was it, Arjun sprinted toward the money transfer location like water flowing after breaking a dam. Riya who was initially shocked, composed herself and informed this to Sameer and started running behind him.

Arjun saw a snipper aiming at Raghu sir who was totally unaware of this . He ran towards him and pushed him to the ground and was anticipating a bullet on his way was suddenly pushed to ground.When he turned back , he saw Riya holdong her injured left hand in her right hand.

He sprinted towards her and worriedly inspected her injured hand while she staring at him . He was finally revealed to notice that the bullet had just grazed her skin breaking it and injuring it and had passed away. He gave an apologizing look to her for which she returned her always beautiful dimple smile silently stating not to.

Edited by Lekha_Acharya - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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He outsmarted her 😆

Once again, thoroughly enjoyed this chap👍🏼

Continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Enjoying ur writing....

Glad to see riya strong ...

Conitnue soon

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Awesome update

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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POST 3 (PART B):

Arjun although not convinced called upon an oficer from the back up force.

Arjun:'Go fast and call a doctor . She needs medical attention till bring the first aid kit to me. Go fast.'

Riya:'Hey!relax. I'm fine. I don't need a doc.'

Arjun:'Oh yes! Very well I can see how well are you. Now stop bickering and let me do the first aid.'

Both long forget the man in the ground whom they pushed . Raghu sir helped himself to get up and was very much surprised to see Arjun caring for a women he meet hours ago. Still , he was happy since he was one of those men who were privileged to see Arjun's life stage at every phase. So he was happy to see him become normal and soft atleast to one of them. The summoned officer came fast with the first aid kit and told Arjun that the doctor was informed and would arrive soon , to which Riya had a frown on her face. At the same time , the team arrived only to witness the scene of Arjun about to tender Riya's wounded hand. They were hell shocked , Shree and Chotu to see Riya's wounded hand and Sameer to see both her wounded hand as well as his once upon a best friend cum brother to care and to be worried for someone after the death of his beloved wife. Arjun upon seeing them informed them about the incident yet did not leave her hand. Sameer was about to react when Raghu sir stopped him.

Team went to investigate further onto the case while Arjun made Riya to sit on the car bonnet.

He was tenderly handling her which made the back up force officers near to die out of heart attack.

Arjun:'What was the need to push me down and to take the bullet on yourself?'

Riya:' I didn't take the bullet on myself rather it just grazed out breaking my skin. so relax?'

Arjun:'Relax? What if the bullet had hit you some where fatal?'

Riya:' It could happen with you too. '

Upon hearing her answer , Arjun looked on her and they had an intense eyelock which broke upon hearing the sound of phone ringing.

Edited by Lekha_Acharya - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Uff☺️ Never leaving her hand

I am in total fangirl mode

Loved how he's softening towards her despite of being beaten by her with and with a wounded ego😆 that's the kind of thing I want to see.

Continue soon.

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