PreRish: Moments P151 Just to say.. NOTE P153 new link! - Page 18

Originally posted by: esha143

One word for you.... Sensuous ❤

My only concern while Mr & Mrs Bajaj were busy romancing in the lounge was whether George made himself absent from the kitchen or not🤣....otherwise his master will kill him 😆

Loved this beautiful distraction 😛💕

I want something along these lines with the added bonus of Rishabh making her saying his name....like blindfolding and teasing but not giving in until she says his name....something like that....essentially, I want him to tease his name out of her mouth.... See if you can manage that, please... 😍

Hey I was temped to call this one subduction but then changed. I think it gets across the attraction element thats what I wanted.

George ha I did think that after posting this!! Oh well.
Erm not sure if the suggestion falls a little bit outside my style of writing but I’ll think of something.

I plan to write something on the use of “Mr Bajaj” from prerna.

Thank you the more popular this gets the more I’ll think to expand it but I’ve got a few ffs I’m neglecting at the moment hence I’ve committed to some mini moments.

woah... that was sensual as hell. another great moment that seems so natural to have happened between two people who have known each other & changed the dynamics of their relationship.

Your RB seems to be the most realistic progression of the RB that started of in KZK. Your Prerna, is however, a better version than what we got. can't wait to read more.

These are amazing stories. Very nicely thought and written.

Sensual! ☺️

Your writing is damn good.

Originally posted by: oa2019

woah... that was sensual as hell. another great moment that seems so natural to have happened between two people who have known each other & changed the dynamics of their relationship.

Thanks I'm glad it’s received well, Sensual but not offensive I hope.

Your RB seems to be the most realistic progression of the RB that started of in KZK. Your Prerna, is however, a better version than what we got. can't wait to read more.

I think I’m not very good at writing for prerna as I don’t really understand her well enough however I feel Rishabh character is very well defined and so much easier ..

will post another moment later today

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

These are amazing stories. Very nicely thought and written.

Thank you 🙏🏼 Keep reading

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Sensual! ☺️

Your writing is damn good.

thanks, please keep reading!

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Prerna hasn't been written well in KZK, they always sacrifice her character development in favour of the male ones, a shame really. yours is therefore an improvement, she's not exactly the one in the show but similar...with vast improvements.

OMG!! This is so domestic setup❤️

She is being full-on wife duty.

While she is busy watching him and getting distracted, he is also busy getting distracted by her🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

The Ending☺️

Awesome update, continue soon.

Originally posted by: oa2019

Prerna hasn't been written well in KZK, they always sacrifice her character development in favour of the male ones, a shame really. yours is therefore an improvement, she's not exactly the one in the show but similar...with vast improvements.

Interesting take maybe you’re right.

Thanks for bringing interesting takes on this ff..