||Love, Forever|| - |ArIya + SaIsha + BhaVeer| - Ch3/Pg13 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Asya99

Loving it .

Thank you, I am glad that you liked the chapter.

Originally posted by: dmegha

This is really a wonderful story Sho! When aate youth going to put this on wattpad.

P.S. I will comment in detail later.

@bold - what's that😆🤣

I am in two minds about posting this story on Wattpad🤔

Waiting for your detailed comment🥱

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Wow so much thrill shonali ka mock drill sab 10 members ne coordination ke saath kaam kiya arjun ko handle karna thoda mushkil hoga now etf ka nirmaan ho gaya fabulous update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

I am glad that you liked the second chapter of the story. The next chapter will have bits of Karan-Bhavna and everybody accepting to be a part of the ETF. Which I will be updating soon.

Thanks a lot for the comment.

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fabulous update

Love it

Beautifully written

Continue soon

Thank you so much for commenting.

I am glad that you liked the second chapter, will update the next one soon.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

There were teams split in 3, where is the #10 guy?

Sakshi stayed back in the security office to watch over the CCTV footage. She was giving the team instructions over the conference call about any suspects that she found and other things😳

Shonali is like scary mad genius, brilliant but maybe can go off the rails. Also Raghuveer is he doing to be her partner in managing team?

Shonali is indeed a scary mad genius, brilliant too and yes, her behavior and her style of working sometimes is not liked by others. Plus the major factor regarding people doubting her is gonna be her age for they think that she is too young and immature to be handling such a major responsibility.

Raghuveer is like her second-in-command and also the chief instructor is training the Trinetra agents so he will be working with Shonali as a partner indeed.

Interesting update, loved the mock drill. Now wondering how they will work together in real case

Oh, the cases are about to come and so are Bhavna & Karan. The next chapter will start with a scene of Bhavna-Karan-Malika.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

FORCE2! He and Jun will be awesome combo. Also you can add Sonakshi from FORCE2 as well she was part of RAW I think they had great partnership going on there. Him getting hurt and attitude like no big deal will horrify the rest 😆

The whole team is gonna be an awesome combo😆Sonakshi is not a part of the story but she might do a cameo, maybe.🤔

Ok now I know why Shonali is like this, you are inspired by Teja. Also ooooh Ejaz and Iqbal (Raghu❤️☺️) now I want bigger roles for them.

Shonali is indeed inspired by Teju but she is also inspired by Meryn (one of my fav book protagonists). Eijaz & Iqbal ❤️ they are there to play major part in this story. Just wait and watch/read or whatever😆

I wonder if there are so many characters how you going to give more preferences to the main 3 ships

Yes, the story has many characters but they are not gonna enter all together. Like we have this basic Team-10, and the other characters that I am gonna make a part of the ETF will arrive late into the story. So there will be time enough for the love stories to develop and friendships to be mended and all the other stuff.

plsss update the next part plsss

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Originally posted by: lizakutti

Really interesting..loved it..plz continue soon...

Thank you for commenting.

I am glad that you liked the chapter.

Plz update the next part..eagerly waiting for it..

Awesome story so far

Cont soon