MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 35

Very nice story....excited to see the possessive Neil😍

Part 13

Main kya leap ke baad aayi ?.

Anjali ..itni fast ya main late ?

Araamse padh ke comment karungi

Pehle se padh na padega

Nahi toh feel nahi aayega

Originally posted by: zalima

Part 13

Main kya leap ke baad aayi ?.

Anjali ..itni fast ya main late ?

Araamse padh ke comment karungi

Pehle se padh na padega

Nahi toh feel nahi aayega

Nahi

Mineil ki yaad mein maine roj update kiya🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Nahi

Mineil ki yaad mein maine roj update kiya🤣

Humari v jaan bachi 🤗

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Humari v jaan bachi 🤗

Aww😳🤗

Very nice writing. You have kept Neil bit grey here that's nice change compared to your previous writing.Mini's character is very cute and sweet and she is yet modern girl .I actually imagined SouNoor.They would have nailed the scenes .

Ek dum Chant kahika

I love chant tezz aadmi

Kamina,harami, rude ,akkadu and kadoos.,sexy

Lekin phir b pyaara

Yaar Anjali I love ye wala Neil

Total package hai

Iss type ka mard sache hote hai

Loyal hote hai

Straight forward.no bakwas wale mard

Neil b bilkul waise hi hai.

I love this passionate loyal wala love commitment

Grey shade ka tadka hai jo natural hai aur ye character ko aur b zyada mazedaar bana raha hai

Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hai

Ek ek frame ko imagine kiya maine aur khub enjoy b kiya

Mini ek dum pyaari cute Kitten hai

Apna banda ek dum wild sher

I love this Kitten sher jodi

Tera usage of words bahut hi accha hai to discribe their character, mannerisms

Neil ne kya current diya Mini ko

Bechari

440 volts wala

Banda ek dum talented skilled aadmi hai

Haye ..I love such meethu kaminas

Ye banda

his style of wearing removing clothesbada talented hai iss matter mein

Natural tha

Honeymoon wala accha tha...jo trust wale scenes wahan tume likha tha sundar tha ek innocent , sundar bonding.

Aur mini jumping on Neil I loved it

woh March kar ke aana Neil ke paas

Chest ke paas folding hands

Perfect likha

Neil shaana enjoying aakir billi ko aana hi pada sher ker paas

Sab 440 volts ka kamaal

Naam change karna wala mera favt hai

Bahut hi sundar tarike se likha hai

Unka fight ,ek ek mannerisms, beech beech woh tension bahut hi acche se likha hai

Imagine kar li( mujhe SouNoor ko iss type ke scene mein dekhna hai)

Neil ne saasu mom ko kya bewakoof banaya ye mera Favt hai mast tha hai maza aagaya .

Kamina kahika

Neil ka wicked evil smile i love it specially jab woh mini ko deta hai

Mini scared billi cute si pyaari hai yaar

Sher issi liye tempt hota raheta hai

Imagine kar li

Nayeem b

Jab b ye frame mein aati hai I just go ROFL

Kya likha hai ek ek dialogue , mannerisms

Pura badla le rahi ho

MiNeil ka challenge

I love how Neil welcomed her back

Evil sexy aadmi

Mini ka plan accha tha to escape and sleep before he comes lekin sher ne billi ko pakad liya

Phir unka jo convo

Neil ka akela pan

Mini understanding him.

Accha tha ..

Mini ko apne tarike se handle karna hai iss sher ko

Aur wild game jo hua

Bahut hi acche se likha

Morning wala convo accha tha

Neil sab kuch ho sakta hai lekin he shall never force himself on her

Finally mini ready hai name change kar ne ko chant ne mana liya kuch b kar ke

Precap mein crappy

Yaar ..ye eyebrow wali yahan b aagayi

Abh kya hoga ? billi sherni banegi ?

Ya MiNeil ke beech kuch mu hoga ?

Neil ne mini ko nahi bataya Guest ke baare mein

Mini ne shaadi se pehle poocha b tha

Neil babu ka parade honi chahiye

Ek doubt hai ...kya Mini course join karegi ?

Ya next year karegi ?

Kyun ki wild nashe wale game ke baad ..mini ka preggy hona pucca lag raha hai

Anjali🤗

Bahut hi acche se likha sab kuch 👏

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Fight got over ,? I was expecting it will go on for two three days atleast😉😆 this Neil is unpredictable 😆 Mini only have to understand and handle him. I liked it . Beautifully written each characters points 😉

Precap Crapfest🤢 end her chapter in next itself please don't drag this Crapfest.

thanks

aur kitna ladai karwani hai becharo ko😆

glad everyone liked this neil. after my first ff i was worried whether anyone would like this neil or not

Originally posted by: kit0kat

THANK YOU.....So beautifully written.., Why did it had to end now?? Hell with Isha...

Anxiously waiting for the update..

thanks dear

glad you liked it this much

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Neil is really unpredictable....

Uska wo bhashan to babita was funny I say... Such a wicked he was there....

But he really wants a belongingness and that's Minni.... Lovely.... His pain was written so well...

Loved it.....

Precap looks scary... Together matlab....🤔

thanks

yes this neil is very different

he is wicked and also dont mind to take advantage of situation in his favour😆

mini is his family now...a place where he belongs