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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Germanina

Gerade habe ich das neue Kapitel gelesen, es ist soooo gut, ich mag es sehr

Ich bin schon sicher auf die Fortsetzung und die Reaktion, die sich aus der Auflösung der landlosen und gesichtslosen jungen Frau gehören.

Wissen wissen wie alle, wer es ist. Aber Jo und Ja werden sich sicher offenbaren.

Freue mich schon auf die Fortsetzung, danke für das Update. Bleibe gesund!

"Ich bin froh😃, dass du das Update genießt"!😳

ich danke dir sehr"!🤗

Jalal weiß, dass es ihr Porträt ist "!

andere wissen nicht, dass es mit Jodha Ja oder seinen Bruder gibt im Porträt😊

Weitere Enthüllungen werden im kommenden Update stattfinden "!.☺️

Vielen Dank für Ihr Kommentar 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update update n misunderstanding were cleared between them n their moment was good n jalal looking awesome in rajput style in royal dress of rajput n jalal teasing jodha as she didn't praise him as he praise her n thnxx for pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

First thing i wants to mention is the update was very long...thats nice hihihi😆

Chapter was very good actually

(Awe 🤗Divya di 🤗 thank you 😍 the
The update was big because I wanted to make up for my delay 😆. I am glad😃 you truly liked it 😊).


Jo heard the convo between ja- ruk

(Yup she did and felt bad to 😒).


They (jo-ja) love each other but still the main thing which is trust is yet to be built...or we can say in process. They both have their own insecurities which is very much obvious and from jodha's side it is too much obvious as for her he is the only one, but for him their are many women.

(Absolutely correct 👍🏼 well said Divya di 👏each point well wrote by you 😎. Of-course they love each other, ☺️@the underline is self-explanatory true if not this then their roots will surely play a part between them they cannot get rid of 😒 Ja loves her but he cannot discard others in his life nor he can leave his ambition to conquer nation 🥱 similarly she loves him perhaps for him can cope up with everything 😊 but the fact he will use her people against own to win the thing he do for her benefit him diplomatically will play it's part to 🤔 they do trust each other they can tell everything but like Ja share his strategy with Ruk he cannot do the same with Jo not cause he don't trust her but because he knows it will hurt her. 😒 similarly it's the case for Jo she can tell him have faith over him but she cannot tell him cause it will hurt him that the women he love devoted herself to me but I cannot do the same for her 😒ghis guilt this hestitation play it's own game between them 😒).


Jalal said all those words just to make peace between his and ruk relation, as he know her very well how is she, but at the same time he should take a stand for his relation with jodha i would say (Means a bit more open up with her so she can understand his POV)

(At least he try his best 😎to make up with everyone 😃specially with Jo ❤️cause she mean more to him than anyone 😳 but you're absolutely right Divya di he needs to put more effort 😊even to make peace with other he shouldn't discard her at all but while in process to keep Ruk aside he end up discarding his emotion for Jo which made it hard for Jo to take 😒 just imagine how every time he say do things to make her feel special but with other he discard her like she's just medium for him to achieve his goal it's very demeaning😒 the@ underline is absolutely right 👍🏼).


She is very much hurt as she feels alone & insecure poor her, also she wants freedom not power😭 At the same time he also wants to open up to her but something is their which is stopping him.

(Their status as Emperor and Empress 😒 their fear of losing each other faith 😒 their roots as Mughal and Rajput 😒 thing they're proud at play big role in their life to kind of create a wall between them 😒 a wall which is on its edge of breaking but happen to keep them apart in says of opening up with each other 🤔 perhaps their love will overpower it soon 😎).


no matter where I am what I am doing you're mine"! - this line is soothing but she is his but what about him ? (This mere thought is disturbing her) Also her self respect is playing major role as how can she is in love with mughal and on top of that too with jallad itself? So easily and too fast?

(You penned down her side😳 within few words, 👏 awesome 👍🏼 this is what they don't know how to cope up with this is what play major role to to not let the wall of difference break 😒and this what make think did I got on consumption part so soon ).

But love is the most powerful thing in this whole universe
, and at the end they both will rise up through their love for sure.

(Absolutely 👍🏼 they will they already fall in love❤️ it's time they rise in love together 😎 the @ underlined is self-explanatory surely love will win just like good win over evil ).


"We are going to stay together"?..

"Till eternity"! (He mean it from his heart and she knows it)❤️

Jalal who is clever as fox, he easily can sense that jo is behaving a bit different that something is bothering her. (You know its very simple if they both can sense that something is not right, that means they both understand each other very well)

(Oh my the underline🤣 undoubtedly he's fox a crook clever one 😆 when it's comes to enemy he's cautious when it's comes to Jo he's always on his toe 😉 to make it Upto her to know the matter and comfort her 😎such a importance she have in his life in his heart 😳 surely they understand each other and that's what make them not misunderstand each other which is very important and good like you say already 👍🏼).


A boat ride - thats romantic

Jalal is really smitten by her beauty😳

Nothing lasts forever but love can. Love will finds its way till eternity.
Both are disturbed by each other's action but both fell solace in each other presence.


(👏 Marvelous 😍 Divya di 🤗)

Amer


All people are happy and doing preparations to welcome jo-ja.

(Yup yup after all it's first time they're coming together as relative 😃).


Jalal is impressed with amer preparation and royalty

(He should be it's Rajput Royals after all 😎 who are known for their hospitality towards guest 😉 ).


Nicely written about the welcoming part (Madho and brijesh singh)

(Thank you 🤗 so much I am glad you like Maan Singh's brothers and their ways 😃).


Jo- avantika part was very very nice, finally they both met and they are happy.

Teasing part....jo-her grandmother part nice

Ja- grandmother part was also very nice

"It's all ploy of fate effect of time and surely our actions"!. - true

(🙏🏼Divya di 😍Your words often left me speechless☺️, I don't get what to say back 😆you caught almost every part with detail😊 and gave your own view in such way that I just feel honoured to have you as my humble reader ☺️ thanks lot for this 🤗. I am truly blessed to know you truly enjoy these parts 😃).


Waah most awaited part our jealous and possessive jalal is here and its a treat to watch 🤣

i want more of this rashmi😆

(You will get more but in upcoming updates 😉 while writing that part I had you in mind 😆 you're absolutely right jealous Ja it's truly a treat for us 🤣).


Treasure room...oh so finally jalal gets to know about his nameless faceless girl😉

(Yup the identity is revealed😎 to him finally 😆 but there's more to come cause it's only his side till now what about her😆).


Past memories were too good😃 Jo-Ja moments was nice

(Thank you 🤗 I am glad😃 you enjoy the flashback part ☺️).


Conversation between avantika and jo was very much needed and its written very nicely

(Did you enjoy that"?😊 I was worried about this🥱 cause you were awaiting Jo Avantika moment😳 so I was concern you will like it or not ).


Avantika is also having someone in her life😊

(You do remember the Person 😃don't you"? ).


Jalal is rajputi dress waah he can do anything for her to make her happy😉

("I was wondering how many will think about Jo in Mughal dress appearance reading Ja in Rajput dress appearance 😆 I mean this was very similar she wore it for his sake, to Honor his mother, he wore it for her sake to Honor her mother grandmother surely they both did it for each other's joy 😎. Of-course our Ja can do anything for his Jo 😉).


Jo-ja convo is good....they both wants to open up to each other but have some fear.

(Which we all know already 😳let's see how they fought with their fear face it 😈and rise together with their love 😎).

Ja- and those younger princess princess part so lovely.

So over all very nicely written...Thanks fr the update

Tack care, stay safe.


😊

(Thank you 🤗 thank you😍 so much Divya di 🤗for reading ☺️liking 😊and putting effort to write such a long ❤️warming review each time you gave your comment I myself learn more 🤓 what I can work on😊 next update😃 what thing I missed what should add and what way I should shape the next update without going off track from my story plot 😊 your long review always help me to caught up with it 😳 thank you for this encouraging ⭐️very appreciative ☺️review 🤗

Stay safe 🙏 take care 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Nice update update n misunderstanding were cleared between them n their moment was good n jalal looking awesome in rajput style in royal dress of rajput n jalal teasing jodha as she didn't praise him as he praise her n thnxx for pm me

"Thank you 🤗 I am glad you enjoyed 😃yup misunderstanding got clear 😊 but they needs to work over their relation so such a misunderstanding doesn't occur again 😉 not everytime they're going to be lucky in having a advise from person 😆 yeah isn't our Jo is miser like he said 🤣 she indeed doesn't praise him 😆 when he pointed out she got angry 😆 cute couple 🤣.thanks 🤗 for reading 😍liking ☺️enjoying 😊and your review 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Haw 😍such a sweet 😳compliment 🤗thank you 🤗


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Posted: 5 years ago

"Seriously what's wrong with you"?.. why would you write something awesomely over the couple which were even couple is big question mark"!


"There are so many historical figure"! which were brave adored and of-course were victorious in battlefield"! Then why you don't write about them"? but these despicable people"? Who cowardly scum themselves to those who were oppressors and truly heretic by blood And those who were nothing but heretic creatures born in human kind"!


"You have skill to penned down your ways well, but this one is so disappointing"! If you truly adore or respect your anchestors and sacrifice of those who fought so hard for your's today and Motherland"!


"You here by wouldn't write it further"!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Listen, it's her wish to write on whom. If she want to write, she will. You cant force your opinion or view on others.


Coming to real or fake. Its just a story called fictional, even it doesnt matter to be real.


Get a life and stop being negative and dominating your view on others. Which doesnt matter to nyone


If you dnt wanna go through, dont noone is forcing you. Like u do to others


Stay safe, zubann ki hifasth dulath se bahut mushkil hotha hai. Kuch log karte pata hai wahi kahfi hai.

Better you understand.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pratikshabapat

Listen, it's her wish to write on whom. If she want to write, she will. You cant force your opinion or view on others.

Coming to real or fake. Its just a story called fictional, even it doesnt matter to be real.

Get a life and stop being negative and dominating your view on others. Which doesnt matter to nyone

If you dnt wanna go through, dont noone is forcing you. Like u do to others

Stay safe, zubann ki hifasth dulath se bahut mushkil hotha hai. Kuch log karte pata hai wahi kahfi hai.

Better you understand.


"It does matter and don't go on Shakespeare's quote what's in name"! I do know it's her choice and now it's my choice if I wish to put forth my view about the work I invest my time in"!


"Cause Not only on name but deeds to matter or else why people will say karma chase "?


perhaps you don't care but I do"!

Come on just for brief seconds,

imagine one who come with Intention to destroy your home your family later on others glorify the very person in the name of fiction work"!


"Are you seriously going to appreciate that"? And ignore it"? Will you appreciate if people started writting story on likes of Osama which showcases his good side"? Even knowing how much lives he taken"?


"Don't be so ignorant just cause it's happen to Entertain you in one other way"!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Eric12

"Seriously what's wrong with you"?.. why would you write something awesomely over the couple which were even couple is big question mark"!

("Honestly I don't know you just praised me for my writting skill ☺️or taunted me for choosing people on whom I penned down 😆 perhaps both anyway there's one thing I will like to clear "The relation isn't questionable but name is 😊 hope you can differentiate that😳)


"There are so many historical figure"! which were brave adored and of-course were victorious in battlefield"! Then why you don't write about them"? but these despicable people"? Who cowardly scum themselves to those who were oppressors and truly heretic by blood And those who were nothing but heretic creatures born in human kind"!

("I know there are many whom we adore respect love one is on your profile pic🙏🏼 Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj 🙏🏼 they're one who truly deserve to be glorified cause of the glorious deed they had done😳

"But Give me name 😊and couple you want me to write about I will do it right away😉tell me honestly has any of historical figure, who has dark side like ML in this story has 🤔will you appreciate if I wrote about such a fine historical figures in a way I had wrote here in this story won't you find it demeaning for them"? 🤓)


"You have skill to penned down your ways well, but this one is so disappointing"! If you truly adore or respect your anchestors and sacrifice of those who fought so hard for your's today and Motherland"!

"You here by wouldn't write it further"!

(Thank you 🤗 for praising my effort and skill of Penning down my idea 😊 and coming to anchestors part well I do respect them with all my 💓 but I needn't to prove it to anyone by stopping the work which not only I like to do but others adore as well"! 😊 put effort to read and appreciate . But yes in future I won't wrote this then"! 😊).

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