Originally posted by: divyaJA
First thing i wants to mention is the update was very long...thats nice hihihi😆
Chapter was very good actually
(Awe 🤗Divya di 🤗 thank you 😍 the
The update was big because I wanted to make up for my delay 😆. I am glad😃 you truly liked it 😊).
Jo heard the convo between ja- ruk
(Yup she did and felt bad to 😒).
They (jo-ja) love each other but still the main thing which is trust is yet to be built...or we can say in process. They both have their own insecurities which is very much obvious and from jodha's side it is too much obvious as for her he is the only one, but for him their are many women.
(Absolutely correct 👍🏼 well said Divya di 👏each point well wrote by you 😎. Of-course they love each other, ☺️@the underline is self-explanatory true if not this then their roots will surely play a part between them they cannot get rid of 😒 Ja loves her but he cannot discard others in his life nor he can leave his ambition to conquer nation 🥱 similarly she loves him perhaps for him can cope up with everything 😊 but the fact he will use her people against own to win the thing he do for her benefit him diplomatically will play it's part to 🤔 they do trust each other they can tell everything but like Ja share his strategy with Ruk he cannot do the same with Jo not cause he don't trust her but because he knows it will hurt her. 😒 similarly it's the case for Jo she can tell him have faith over him but she cannot tell him cause it will hurt him that the women he love devoted herself to me but I cannot do the same for her 😒ghis guilt this hestitation play it's own game between them 😒).
Jalal said all those words just to make peace between his and ruk relation, as he know her very well how is she, but at the same time he should take a stand for his relation with jodha i would say (Means a bit more open up with her so she can understand his POV)
(At least he try his best 😎to make up with everyone 😃specially with Jo ❤️cause she mean more to him than anyone 😳 but you're absolutely right Divya di he needs to put more effort 😊even to make peace with other he shouldn't discard her at all but while in process to keep Ruk aside he end up discarding his emotion for Jo which made it hard for Jo to take 😒 just imagine how every time he say do things to make her feel special but with other he discard her like she's just medium for him to achieve his goal it's very demeaning😒 the@ underline is absolutely right 👍🏼).
She is very much hurt as she feels alone & insecure poor her, also she wants freedom not power😭 At the same time he also wants to open up to her but something is their which is stopping him.
(Their status as Emperor and Empress 😒 their fear of losing each other faith 😒 their roots as Mughal and Rajput 😒 thing they're proud at play big role in their life to kind of create a wall between them 😒 a wall which is on its edge of breaking but happen to keep them apart in says of opening up with each other 🤔 perhaps their love will overpower it soon 😎).
no matter where I am what I am doing you're mine"! - this line is soothing but she is his but what about him ? (This mere thought is disturbing her) Also her self respect is playing major role as how can she is in love with mughal and on top of that too with jallad itself? So easily and too fast?
(You penned down her side😳 within few words, 👏 awesome 👍🏼 this is what they don't know how to cope up with this is what play major role to to not let the wall of difference break 😒and this what make think did I got on consumption part so soon ).
But love is the most powerful thing in this whole universe, and at the end they both will rise up through their love for sure.
(Absolutely 👍🏼 they will they already fall in love❤️ it's time they rise in love together 😎 the @ underlined is self-explanatory surely love will win just like good win over evil ).
"We are going to stay together"?..
"Till eternity"! (He mean it from his heart and she knows it)❤️
Jalal who is clever as fox, he easily can sense that jo is behaving a bit different that something is bothering her. (You know its very simple if they both can sense that something is not right, that means they both understand each other very well)
(Oh my the underline🤣 undoubtedly he's fox a crook clever one 😆 when it's comes to enemy he's cautious when it's comes to Jo he's always on his toe 😉 to make it Upto her to know the matter and comfort her 😎such a importance she have in his life in his heart 😳 surely they understand each other and that's what make them not misunderstand each other which is very important and good like you say already 👍🏼).
A boat ride - thats romantic
Jalal is really smitten by her beauty😳
Nothing lasts forever but love can. Love will finds its way till eternity.
Both are disturbed by each other's action but both fell solace in each other presence.
(👏 Marvelous 😍 Divya di 🤗)
Amer
All people are happy and doing preparations to welcome jo-ja.
(Yup yup after all it's first time they're coming together as relative 😃).
Jalal is impressed with amer preparation and royalty
(He should be it's Rajput Royals after all 😎 who are known for their hospitality towards guest 😉 ).
Nicely written about the welcoming part (Madho and brijesh singh)
(Thank you 🤗 so much I am glad you like Maan Singh's brothers and their ways 😃).
Jo- avantika part was very very nice, finally they both met and they are happy.
Teasing part....jo-her grandmother part nice
Ja- grandmother part was also very nice
"It's all ploy of fate effect of time and surely our actions"!. - true
(🙏🏼Divya di 😍Your words often left me speechless☺️, I don't get what to say back 😆you caught almost every part with detail😊 and gave your own view in such way that I just feel honoured to have you as my humble reader ☺️ thanks lot for this 🤗. I am truly blessed to know you truly enjoy these parts 😃).
Waah most awaited part our jealous and possessive jalal is here and its a treat to watch 🤣
i want more of this rashmi😆
(You will get more but in upcoming updates 😉 while writing that part I had you in mind 😆 you're absolutely right jealous Ja it's truly a treat for us 🤣).
Treasure room...oh so finally jalal gets to know about his nameless faceless girl😉
(Yup the identity is revealed😎 to him finally 😆 but there's more to come cause it's only his side till now what about her😆).
Past memories were too good😃 Jo-Ja moments was nice
(Thank you 🤗 I am glad😃 you enjoy the flashback part ☺️).
Conversation between avantika and jo was very much needed and its written very nicely
(Did you enjoy that"?😊 I was worried about this🥱 cause you were awaiting Jo Avantika moment😳 so I was concern you will like it or not ).
Avantika is also having someone in her life😊
(You do remember the Person 😃don't you"? ).
Jalal is rajputi dress waah he can do anything for her to make her happy😉
("I was wondering how many will think about Jo in Mughal dress appearance reading Ja in Rajput dress appearance 😆 I mean this was very similar she wore it for his sake, to Honor his mother, he wore it for her sake to Honor her mother grandmother surely they both did it for each other's joy 😎. Of-course our Ja can do anything for his Jo 😉).
Jo-ja convo is good....they both wants to open up to each other but have some fear.
(Which we all know already 😳let's see how they fought with their fear face it 😈and rise together with their love 😎).
Ja- and those younger princess princess part so lovely.
So over all very nicely written...Thanks fr the update
Tack care, stay safe.
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