Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Hi Stuti,
After years I'm back on India forums and found out about your FF from Kriya_12. She recommended it to me a few days ago and I read all 49 chapters in the last 2 days.
>> Hello and welcome! 🤗 Thank you so much for catching it up so quick.
Let me tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I loved how JoJa met and their relationship progressed, all the hardships they went through, the way they discovered each other's identities, how Jodha alone handled everyone after reaching Agra, and finally she met Rahim and Salima, they will both share a wonderful friendship. Looking forward to Salima and Jalal's conversation about how he made his dream his reality.
>> Thank you once again.
This Jalal is very impressive, I especially enjoyed how smartly he dealt with all the conspirators around him. He was very upset and emotional but didn't lose his mind and acted as a perfect Emperor. It's a very gripping story, i couldn't stop reading till I read all the available chapters and am still craving for more. Hopefully you will update soon.
>> And thanks again. Seriously, you are spoiling me with the review...🤪
There are things that are still not disclosed, like what was in the letter that Mann delivered to Jalal?? Where did Sujamal go?? What happened to Jashwant??
>> Ok... The letter which Maan delivered was already there from Jodha's pov. Let me quote that here...
“Dear Chandrajeet,
First of all apologise me for going away fromthe hut all of a sudden in the morning leaving you all clueless. I hope youunderstand my situation and hence will not take it wrong. Keeping in mind thatwhat happened with both of us in the instant of time at the last night shouldnot have took place, I am writing this letter specially to clarify that I amnot a bit resentful to you, or do not blame you for any incident that happenedlast night. So please don’t feel guilty thinking that you broke the honour ofthe budding friendly relationship between us by crossing the line of dignity.The responsibility of the incident equally falls on both of us, and perhaps itis better to forget it if it leaves a bitter taste in mind.
But having said all these, I also want to sayyou something. You had asked me if I am coming to you earlier today or not butI could not reply… I have to say that now, that I am not going to your hut tomeet you tonight. Actually perhaps I am not going to meet you ever in thislife. You might think the incident of the last hours of yesterday’s nightresponsible for my decision, but believe me, that is not the truth. I had totake this decision as I do not have trust on myself… You know, there alwaysshould be a distinct borderline between dream and rationality. But in my heartboth of the worlds were overlapping. I was unable to balance between my brainand heart. My rational sense was being overpowered by my sentiments. I wasgetting obsessed with my imaginations. In this case, I need to buck off… forsake of me…
I have never seen a man like you, valiantwarrior! Each and every moment spent with you, be it the duel at the riversideor the chats of midnight at the hut, has been embedded permanently in thedeepest of my heart… I can’t forget you, my valiant warrior… I will neverforget you!
I will pray for your safety, and will wishwith all my heart that you will reach safely in your home very soon, where youhave your lovely family, where you have your Rupmati… who is waiting for youeagerly…
If possible, forget me as a dream… Believethat Purnima Bai never existed in this world…
You will not get any difficulty for foods andwaters. Vaidhya Ji will arrange everything. Forgive me for not bidding you aproper good-bye. Take this letter as a Good-Bye note from me…
Yours only,
Purnima Bai (As you call me…) ”
Big one. 😂
2nd: Sujamal will come again, wait and watch. 😉
3rd: Jashwant had been sent to jail by Sarifuddin as his work was over... It's also mentioned somewhere I think. 😂
As I read through the chapters, I also noticed your journey as a writer. You have developed as a wonderful writer in the last years👏 👏
>> Thank you again... Writing here came as a gift for me as well.
Keep it up and I wish you the best.
Do pm me when you update next. I'm eagerly waiting for the update.
Love,
Preet.
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