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Posted: 6 years ago
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CHAPTER 5


KOLKATA



SHRAVAN'S POV

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deos


Every different city writes a different story in the chapter of one's life. Kolkata was patiently waiting with her pen to fill the vacant pages of Shravan's life. The coloured pieces of glass are preparing themselves to form a new pattern in the Kaleidoscope. Will the City of Joy be able to fill Shravan's life with vigour and colour ?


I absolutely loved how you wrote this part! The metaphors you use are so beautiful! Wishing you a speedy recovery. Stay healthy and take care❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deos

Was a little unwell !! Will be updating soon

Hope you're good now. Take care and be safe.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Shravan and Devika are engaged 😲


Sub conscious mind actually keeps on telling us whether we are on the right path or no, mostly we are not able to configure it.


Shravan is going to enter Kolkata? I guess he will meet Suman here.


Thanks for the update, it was short but well written so don't feel sorry for it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I absolutely loved how you wrote this part! The metaphors you use are so beautiful! Wishing you a speedy recovery.

Edited by Deos - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Shravan and Devika are engaged 😲


Sub conscious mind actually keeps on telling us whether we are on the right path or no, mostly we are not able to configure it.


Shravan is going to enter Kolkata? I guess he will meet Suman here.


Thanks for the update, it was short but well written so don't feel sorry for it.

Edited by Deos - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Thanks a lot 😘

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Important note

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deos

Yup , I am much better now. Thanks for all your wishes

You're welcome 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Hey Deos, great work! Loving the progress of the story so far. Loved how Aneesh is Shravan's best friend here and how the latter calls the former 'Ani'😆 Would be fun to watch it on screen too!


The medico in me took Aneesh's mocking at the doctors a little to the heart😆


The title to the story is so interesting. Loved how it's incorporated into the story.


P.S Sorry for me being late😒 Was tied up with two novels here and wanted to give our forum's FFs my full attention.


P.P.S Don't bother dear. Health is the utmost priority. Maybe now more so than ever. Take care.😊

Edited by Bucky - 5 years ago

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