MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 12

ahhhh..so beautiful......Neil is in action..... Thank you..

CVs.. please use some ideas from here...

First kiss 😆Neil 🤣 Smart fellow must say. Mini have long way to go😆I liked the progess you are showing in their relationship. Talk of parents was good . I agree what @zalima said you have kept kind of mystery in Neil's character say layers which we will get known in future. Mini have started to have expectations from this relationship . She is acting her age and it's cute and beautiful. Looking forward for next.

Anjali, yaar I am out of words for this part particularly. Idk kuch tha is wale me which made it extraordinarily beautiful.... I guess the honeymoon destination part . The whole call . Bohat pyaar tha ye and the Tharki Avani as usual loved Kiss and the f**k joke 😂😉

Superb update

Love it

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Continue soon

Superb anjali.... It was so beautiful.... Kiss and the fcuk Joke was center of attraction...loved how Neil character is being shown by u... And loved how u have shown parents worry....

Waiting for the next one...

Neil nahi handle kar sakta thoda thoda yahan jab Mini ignore Kare🤣 pareshaan hota hai kahi kahi😉

Saroj and her jhalli 🤣🤣 item wali aunty hai 🤣natural ek dum🤣

MiNeil ka mobile unlock, password wala moment accha tha ..ek dum natural scene 👏

Mini and her signatures style of folding hands near chest 😆 bada hi cute hota hai ye aur apne aap se baat karna b 😳 aur neil jab irritate hota hai iss baat se aur b zyada cute lagta hai ye moment b

Kiss ☺️

Anjali ..ye pura kiss wala execution bahut hi acche likha hai 👏

Imagine kar li

Dono kitne cute lag rahe the

Ek ek mannerisms wahan badiya tha 👏

Cute tha, Naughty tha,sundar ,natural

Ye Neil bada chant aadmi hai☺️🤣

Sahi hai ..south delhi munda hai☺️

Issi liye toh mujhe pasand hai ☺️

HS papa kitna cute hai mere papa ki yaad aagaya mujhe

Papa maa conversation accha tha aur woh maa ka woh Maldives wala dialogue sahi hai🤣🤣

MiNeil ka honeymoon baatien cute tha

Neil ka pause wahan accha laga

Accha kiya uss ne bola mini to take initiative in few things.

Mini ka sapne suhane about Maldives🤣

Ye bandi badi hi cute hai

Neil mini ka character acche se shape up ho raha hai

Neil ka b layers abh ek ek bahar aa raha hai

Mini iss emtional bond mein zyada doob rahi hai

Anjali bahut hi acche se tightly likh rahi ho

Accha hai

Maza aa raha hai

👏

Very nice .Story is moving forward now. .

Originally posted by: kit0kat

ahhhh..so beautiful......Neil is in action..... Thank you..

CVs.. please use some ideas from here...

thanks🤗

glad you liked it this much😳

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

First kiss 😆Neil 🤣 Smart fellow must say. Mini have long way to go😆I liked the progess you are showing in their relationship. Talk of parents was good . I agree what @zalima said you have kept kind of mystery in Neil's character say layers which we will get known in future. Mini have started to have expectations from this relationship . She is acting her age and it's cute and beautiful. Looking forward for next.

thanks

yes neil is smart fellow. mauke pe chauka maar diya usne😎🤣

i wanted to see such kind of hanita part in the show also....but at least i wrote it here😆

Mini is now more excited for foreign tour just like a kid😆🤣

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Anjali, yaar I am out of words for this part particularly. Idk kuch tha is wale me which made it extraordinarily beautiful.... I guess the honeymoon destination part . The whole call . Bohat pyaar tha ye and the Tharki Avani as usual loved Kiss and the f**k joke 😂😉

thanks yaar

glad you liked it this much

i really enjoyed writing that honeymoon destination convo😆 and that fcuk joke was my fav part too🤣