Chaahat: A RoNakshi Story- Chapter seven updated 23/03 - Page 24

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Posted: 6 years ago

WassssšŸ¤—

Babyyyy, I read your update last night and wanted to sit with much time with hand while putting a comment.


I have constantly stated about your outstanding descriptive writing hand, right there! Everytime I go through your write-ups, I fall and lost into the world in which you paint with your words. Its difficult to pace up with your readers expectations; most importantly when you have kick started your creative juices with the same cast but different plot.Its a whole new challenge for a writer and you have undoubtedly prevailed it. Again another beautiful memory to cherish ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Love you

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Posted: 6 years ago

God!!!!! This was definitely worth the wait! You are too awesome to handle! I was literally sobbing along with Ronakshi at certain parts. Their love....their emotions....their pain, suffering everything!!! Goodness me, i hope they reconcile....no! Scratch that! I demand they reconcile! Finally Rohit got the sense knocked into his thick skull! Plz darling update soon.... ye tera one month waala torture bohot seh liyaa yaar... update soon...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼ā¤ļø

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Posted: 6 years ago

You had mentioned this plot is bit sadistic at the start, also in this chapter you dropped hints but i really hope they reconcile.

This is one of most beautifully written story i have read on any platform. Kudos to you!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderful writing. Love reading your long updates. Waiting for next update šŸ‘ŒšŸ‘ŒšŸ‘Œ

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wasuuuu šŸ¤—šŸ¤—


This fab of a chapter ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤šŸ’žšŸ’žšŸ’•šŸ’• oh my I experienced all the emotions they go through from one point to the other

From his vulnerability, to her emotional breakdown to see him on that state, to being madly in love with each other.. Everything.. Like every little thing went in through such gradual growths ā¤ā¤šŸ˜šŸ˜

That thin line of consent even when he was not in his senses, still cared that he shouldn't hurt her and should take it only when she agrees... It was so so so beautifully handled.


I am in awww with this chapter ā¤ā¤šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’žšŸ’ž


I had tears while I read this.. Also I had blushed.. I experienced every bit of this chapter.


Chahat, Ronakshi's baby girl, the fav of all šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ’•šŸ’•ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤šŸ’žšŸ’ž she shooo cutely sides both her mom and dad.. She is absolute love...

Aww this cutie... She knows soo well that her parents love each other first the most...

These lines - "Mein sona ko Chahat se bhi zyaada pyaar karta hoon.. "

"Mumma aapko mujhse zyaada pyaar karti hai"

Moved me leaps and bounds here... I was soo emotionally happy here.. ā¤ā¤ā¤šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’žšŸ’ž


And then comes all the missing part ā¤ā¤šŸ˜­ā¤šŸ˜­ā¤ā¤ and finally seeing the CD..

Absolute amazing imagination and the best way to reconciliation. šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•ā¤ā¤ā¤šŸ’˜šŸ’˜šŸ’•ā¤ā¤


Ajit and Pooja .. I am sure these two Ronakshi shippers have definitely played something to bring them together now.

And why do I feel.. It's a part of Ajit's plan that sona isn't there.. šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Ahh.. I am looking forward eagerly to the next chapter... Come up with it soooonisshhhh... ā¤ā¤šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ’˜šŸ’˜šŸ’žšŸ’ž


In aww with your writing šŸ’•šŸ’•ā¤ā¤šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜šŸ˜


Lubbbb youuu loads and kishes šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜ā¤

Alu ā¤šŸ˜

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: F_P007

This was worth waiting for!!!!

The most beautiful writing I have came acrossed till now!!!

Really!!! Awesome! Just loved it!!

Eagerly looking forward for the update ā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤

Aww i am touched beyond words. Thank you thank you so so so much!!!!
all this love of you brought me way far in the journey. Means alot.

Hold on until i come back, soonish as i can.ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

I just read chapter 7. From the restaurant part, all I’ve been doing is wiping my eyes a lot. You’ve got me into tears. I came to IF after so long only to have this update read. I haven’t read chapters 3-6 though, will do it when I have time as COVID has been taking lots of time for work with the lock down in my country, more challenges than before. Nevertheless, this update got me in tears for what sonakshi has gone through. Veena was right, sona suffered a lot due to the father then, the son now. I guess that has knocked some sense in him. I suppose she leaving is just a plan pulled by ajit pooja n veena to get Rohit on track. The whole bathroom scene was very well written. The way they Rohit expressed his need was cute and funny when he kept reminding her what happened 5 years ago. Their romance was subtle with right spice considering they’ve not reconciled and accepted each other fully. That whole part was brilliantly written. Writing on Chahat was as cute as ever. She is a classic piece, too matured for her age, teaching her dad on how to check out. That was hilarious!!

The whole update was super long but no complains (ok just minimal cause I am not a Hindi speaker so to comprehend the Hindi part was challenging). It has been a beautiful, romantically exciting and cute update. Very well written

Thanks for the super long one and keep writing. Hope you’re doing well and looking forward to catch up with all the rest updates too.

PS it’s 215 am in my country. Hahahaha

Mo!!!! Hi and how good it is to hear from you.

Firstly as usual, thank you so so so so much for loving and appreciating chaahat. An ardent fan you always used to be and still nothing has changed. I am so very touched. All the love and motivation i have got from you, thank you again.

Yes with the past health situation, i am sure you have had lots of work piled up and now COVID adds extra to that. I hope you keep safe and get all your work done well and take all your time to read and let me know how those were-whenever you get free time.


I am so glad that the chapter has been received by all readers just as i wanted be it their romance, chaahat’s antics, family involvement, and rohit’s feelings. I was honestly wanting to be careful in the romance part yes since they haven’t reconciled so if you think that has been handled then i am way more glad!!! My work is done. Hehehehe


i had no idea that you are not a hindi reader, my bad. And i apologize. Seriously. I hope you could manage, if not please let me know so that i can balance out the dialogues into both languages the next time i write. So that it could be easy for non hindi readers. And honestly- me myself isn’t an indian so my hindi is not fluent and nice at the first placešŸ™ˆšŸ˜ apologies for that also.


I again wish you are well mo and do take very good care. See you around and thank you again, for all the love. Hugs.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavihegde

Soo good...

Please update next part soon...

Thank you so so so much vaishnavi.

Soonish will be back, as quick as i can. Tc.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thank you so so so so much as always for the love and appreciation and motivation. Means alot. See you soonish.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyankajain14

It was worth waiting for sooo longg

U have written beautifully.

Each and every emotion u have potrayed so nicely lovvee itt sooo much

Thank u for such a long and beautiful update

Hi priyanka thank you so so so much.
the love and appreciation of you all have pushed me for better always and it means alot to me. Glad that you enjoyed the update and sorry for the long wait.
tc. Hugs.

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