Akdha Journey FF-Marriage at First Sight -Part 61 page 56 /28 aug 2020 - Page 28

Created

Last reply

Replies

392

Views

62k

Users

50

Likes

836

Frequent Posters

Scintilla12 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
Please please

Fantasy-ka-Love thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago

Hi dearies,

Sorry for no updates

Give me two weeks time i will start my update one by one

Thanks for waiting guys

dellaakdha thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasy-ka-Love

Hi dearies,

Sorry for no updates

Give me two weeks time i will start my update one by one

Thanks for waiting guys

Happy to see you after a long time...waiting for your updates...

Mavi_16_2 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago

Please next update... After ages m back on this forum

Alisanarahaya thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
This story is really wonderful pls update
Aliqua thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

This story is amazing pls continue

I m waiting for the next update😊

ParijatGirl thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago

Is this story has discontinue?😭

Fantasy-ka-Love thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for liking and comments dearies, if any grammatical mistakes in this part,Kindly ignore & I am sorry,Extremely Sorry Thank you so much for waiting..Love u allGuys.

Part58

Earlymorning

Sharmi come back to mansion for Jodha checkup ..& Asad jerk up from sleep &remember Jalal in Jodha room..almost he was running to Jodha room & same time sharmi push the Akdha room door as Asad eyes popped seeing sharmi hand ondoor, she tried to push while inside room Jalal was sleeping holding his jaan with his secure arms,Asad penetrate as slipped to floor with heavy pain sound, sharmi distract hearing Asad voice,her heavy steps near to Asad as left lightly open the door.

Asadsat in floor & held his foot with fake paining face and sharmi kneel down level to Asad.

Sharmi:bhai, what happened with concern voice.

Asad:oh .. (he saw one servant mopping floor, he got idea )my leg slipped because of floor water, servant gasped look at Asad.

Sharmi helped Asad to stand himself and made sat in near cough..

Sharmi:are u ok

Asad: haan..

Sharmi:u sit here I go to check Jodha..she turn..

Asadshout : no..sharmi werid gaze at Asad ..

Asad: oh……(sharmi curiously look at his face as if any word come out from his mouth rather than oh )… ha...i need water ..

Sharmi nod her head with confused face:ok bhai..wait I call anyone..servant come their side, sharmi informed bring water for Asad.. with in 2 minutes servant brought water for him, Asad drinking water same time sharmi reached Jodha room with long steps,Asad drop glass to floor and ran to sharmi before she enter room, Asad stood like wall between sharmi & room entrance.

Sharmibrain start doubt his behavior: bhai..now ur legs was fine

Asad: yeah..perfectly fine..see..he do little ramp walk infront of sharmi with hissilly face,she rolled her eyes and just ignore his stupid antics..enter theroom..Asad turn look at sharmi , she was not in corridor and he hit his forheadas enter room with his stormy step

Sharmichecking sleeping Jodha and his eyes searching Jalal,he got relief that Jalalleft before sharmi enter in room.

Asadcome near to Jodha asked sharmi: how she is with worries tone

Sharmi: she is fine…injection syringe fallen into floor and Asad bend take syringe,his eyes popped seeing Jalalhide under cot, Jalalsigned hi to Asad, his fumingface signed, what r u doing here..Jalalsigned send sharmi out.

Sharmi:bhai..what u searching in floor ,give me syringe ..

Asadstand straightly:oh sharmi..when Jodha get conscious

Sharmi:hmm.. (Jodha tried open her eyes with tired face)..Jodha with slow voice..

Jodha open her eyes with unknowing feeling around her no its not unknowing feeling for her,every sec wishing this feel come to real one not in her dream,today why she feeling that he is very close to her,she could feeling her skin filled withhis natural fragrance..Sharmi shake her arms, Jodha distract from her own beautiful thought.

Sharmi:Jodha,u have pain in ur abdomen

Jodha nod her head negatively but her mind & heart searching something inroom,her mind fighting is real or hallucination but her heart craving seeing his face who reason of her heart beat,After long time her face showing some expression was visible unlike previous days.

Sharmi:Jodha, today u come to hospital right with warning eyes.

Asad& Jalalsame tone: why..once sec Jodha full body has been shaken ,her eyes were roaming here & there..Jalal closed his eye with frustrated face even his voice very slow tone compare to Asad voice but Jodha should sense him through his breathing why not his whispering voice.

Asad: sharmi,why hospital..anything serious..wait i will call all specialist doctor from Mohammed hospital..Jodha signed sharmi stop him before he do something like that.

Sharmi:Bhai, nothing it just precaution nothing else.i already said she doing more work because of stress, her body already weak if she will admit hospital in two days means she stay away from work, she get some peace & rest..then only I asked come to admit hospital.

Asad: is it true with concern voice.

Sharmi: yes..bhai with little hesitate voice.

Asad: ok today choti,zoya & Mizra coming with Jodha,they stay with Jodha until she in hospital & siva also come with some bodyguard.

Sharmi: bhai..she was coming to hospital for rest purpose norshe was going to world tour bring everyone with her..i am in hospital..i takecare of her,nothing to worry.

Asad: No sharmi , I trust u but ..why she admit in ur Sanjeevani hospital rather than Mohammed hospital.

Sharmi: because I am not working in Mohammed hospital and also I am her doctor.

Asad : you get offer letter from Mohammed hospital within 10 minutes then u have no problem Jodha stay in KH with bossy tone , Jalal smirked hearing Asad bossy voice while Jodha rolled her eyes.

Sharmi glare to Asad : Bhai , No one decline offer from Mohammed Management but I am happy which hospital now I am working & my patient obey doctor order nor doctor obey by patient order ,if Jodha stay in KH means that only happen, sheis owner of KH, No one guts stop her doing anything in her Hospital & I understand ur worried about her but I am with her 24 hours..u don’t worry. Jalal getting fuming hearing sharmi stubborn word.

Asad signed: ok but siva (bodyguard) come with Jodha ..sharmi look at Jodha & Jodha nods as accept Asad decision.

Sharmi;ok.. Jodha come to hospital afternoon.. I am leaving now.. she left.

Jodhaget up from bed & she need answer from Asad.

Jodha: bhai..

Asad;yes,Jodhu..u need anything with concern voice

Jodha:who stay with me last night with hoping eye..

Asad: Oh.. I .. I stay with u, Jodhu with stammering voice.. her hopeful eyes changed into blank one,Once again.she could guess her bhai hide important thing from her No her soul from her.

Jodhastep down from bed and her payal fallen to floor,she did not noticed..and her zombie leg move on to door,her leg stop in near door without turning face to him

Jodhacold tone:when u using Jalalperfume bhai with cold voice.Jalal closed his eyes hearing her cold voice

Asad face changed into pale: Jodhu..yesterday mistakenly my hand hit into dressing table while perfume bottle broken down into floor.. Myself I cleaned floor,that perfume smell spread room as well as mine with signed relief face.

Jodhas miled weakly and look at her closed palm: oh really..with sarcastic voice..she left without saying anything to Asad..

Asadbend down : Jalal come out..Jodha left out..

Jalal come out from cot : Asad ,she deeply hurt..i am only giving pain to her..with painful voice.

Asad touch his shoulder : Jalal please this is not time,She is my sister I know howto manage her .time god No one wake up,go out before anyone seeing u.& back side of outhouse already car waiting foru.Jalal nod his head & left the room using another door..( this door connected to outhouse through brigde like corridor)

Jalal:hmmm..u also go with Jodha to hospital & after check up ,bring her medical report to my apartment..Jalal eyes down to floor ,his mishty anklet layed in floor and Jalal bend down take her anklet ,he just starring anklet with mixed of loving filled & sad face.

Asad: Jalal with sad face.. Jalal look at Asad & gave his weak smile and place danklet in his pant packet..left the place through door way.

***********

Jodha come out from dadi room before she instruct duty nurse : no one enter dadi room without her permission.with serious warning tone.

Otherside Mizra room

Zoya:Mizra bhai called us come to his room but he was not here..where he went

Choti: ur brother is mad person,he said one thing but do other thing with taunting tone.

Zoya:yeah like he love with one girl but roaming with other girl in smirked face

Choti hit her shoulder:shut up shona with irritating face

Zoyagiggled : cool down bhabhiji with teasing tone..

Choti:don’t call me bhabhi zoya with angry face..

Zoyaplaced her hand in choti shoulder: I knew everything,so hide with anyone not with me darling with teasing look

Choti smiled lightly: nothing re…

Mizra enter his room with smiling face : Girls, we got our first clue ..Girls smiled broadly

**********

Jalal apartment

Asad: Jalal why u not understand tomorrow, u must join hospital, Next week u have a surgery Jalal.

Jalal angry face: I don’t want surgery now. Still yet I did not complete my work.

Asad: Jalal don’t behave like child,ur not normal healthy person,u blessed man then only still u r alive.ur each breathe ,each second in ur life god gifts u.

Jalal:I know but my family with fear face . aaahhh..Jalal held his chest with painful face & Asad worried face held him he tried to calm down Jalal but he continues to explain his fear if anything happened to me after surgery,what they would do..now i am here protect them after surgery who save from them

Asad angry face: Jalal, they were also my family, this surgery very important for ur life & we need you ,ur mishty need u.plz believe urself nothing happen with u

Jalal closedhis eyes : ok but day after tomorrow I join hospital until I stay here.. I am alright…

*****

Abdul enter Apartment: Jalal I got their history with happy face

Jalal smirkedface: good Job Abdul ..

Asad: Now we got proof right atleast u accept join hospital early.

Jalal angry face: No Asad before I finish their chapter nor I never get peace in my life

Abdul:Jalal, we will do whatever ur wish but before ur health important for us

Jalal:Asad ,what about Jodha ā€˜s medical report

Asad:Jalal, today only sharmi did Jodha full check up ,tomorrow we get her report from hospital.

Jalal:no Asad,I don’t trust Jodha report by her.Dr.sharmi hiding something about Jodha health issues from our family with doubting face

Asad: don’t think wrong about sharmi,She ischild hood best friend of Jodha.

Jalal:hmm if she intention good ,its good for her otherwise she would be know who is JMK with angry face

Asad: hello JMKji,trust me she was good friend of Jodha

Jalal:whatever Dr,sharmi give Jodha report tomorrow or not but I need one more report from other staff who working in same hospital & working with Dr.sharmi after I compare both report then only Iwill confirm her intention good with my mishty or not & I want my mishty correct report,if she have any problem in her health, I am not accept my surgery.that my final decision with stubborn voice

Asadrolled his eyes: oh man,plz don’t start with initial stage & why u need two report knowing Jodha health condition. Jalal glare to Asad

Asadsigned : Ok .. I arrange one more report from other doctor without knowledge of sharmi & Jodhau. Jalal nod his head.

Abdulshowed that file to Asad: & Jalal: what about them..with smirked face

Jalal close his fist tightly: they will get what they were deserve with evily smile.

************

Anika sat on chair in her room balcony with deep thinking face,her phone ring brought her back to real world.without noticing ID,she picked up the call ..

Anika..

Anika face change to kind of disgusting with filled painful face : why u called meMr. oberai with angry tone

Shivay:Anika listen where is Jodha.. her call not reached ..where is she

Anika: u already snatched happiness from her now what u want from her..

Shivay: Noodu..plz tell me where is Jodha with painful voice

Anika: Noodu ..that noodu died when u killed …(her word struck in her throat ,tear flowing in her eyes) our friend no my friend that day not only Jalal died ,ur noodu also died..cut the phone ,kneel down cried loudly..

Anika: why u did it because of ur bloody revenge,we lost everything,I lost my friend,my love.i never forgive u Nandu (shivaay).

Flashback start with

Jalal college days or say fantastic four masti days with anika

Asad sat on canteen with mood off face.Jalal,Abdul & Rafik (shivaay) reach canteen, joined with Asad

Asad look at his phone every 10 sec with longing face & others confused seeing his behavior.

Abdul:Asad ,why ur face longing look at ur phone long time. are u waiting for any important call

Rafik:important call or ur special girl call with teasing look as Asad glare to Rafik..Jalal smiled lightly joined with Rafik join to tease Asad

Jalal: come on Asad why u glaring to flirty,ur behavior like that only,ur waiting with grin tone

Asad:I already tensed,she did not call me long two days but everyone teasing me &yeah she is very important person in my life more than anyone with angry face.

Rafik murmur to Asad ear : she is very important more than ur shona ( zoya) with slow teasing tone.. Asad embrassed but he did not say anything with Rafik & Jalal heared what Rafik said to Asad, he know Asad love his sister also he knew very well ,he scared for their friendship break insake of he did not confess his love with anyone except his sister (Jodha).

Jalal thought: Asad waiting for important person call even person is girl ..may be chances,he waiting for that Chennai express call light smile crept on his lip as remember previous phone conversation with Asad sis.

Rafik smirked face : see now Jalalin dream world …hey bros everyone come out from dream world yaar.. class going to start..

Whoare in dream land voice come their behind..

Abdulturn smiled: come Anika..

Anika smiled genuinely to everyone except Jalal,her face seeking something from Jalal & anika called his name , Jalal get up from chair , he went out without seeing her face, her tear moist in her eyes. Gang felt bad for her. Asad & Abdul left behind Jalal while gave sorry look to Anika ..Anika also move out from place.

Few minutes she sat in playground corner place, her eyes filled with water.Rafik come sit next with her,placed his hand in her shoulder. Anika look at Rafik

Anika:why Jalal not love me ,I am not looking good with innocent voice..Rafik chuckled hearing her baby tone.

Anika fumed face & hit him playfully: Moron, stupid, why u put ur face like donkey.. Rafik held her hand & bring her very close to him ,his breath touch her face,she have some goose bump in her body.

Rafik smirked face: first u must clear urself ,u love Jalal or its just attraction like other girls doing with him with sharp voice.Anika pushed Rafik away from him..

Anika(stubborn voice) : I love him , I know very well.. I don’t need anyone clarification in my love with him if I am not get him , I will die for my love with angry voice & her eyes searched something from her bag ,take small knife from her bag & cut her wrist ..Rafik scared seeing her madness

Rafik held her wrist & tried to stop her bleeding: are u mad, why u cut ur wrist with angry face

Anika smiled: its only small cut Rafik, if I did not get my love , I am not alive in this world ..i just shown my love for Jalal, she left the place but Rafik(shivaay ) got pain like someone sharpknife pierced in his heart

*********

Rafik house

Rafik thought: first I thought I just crush with you but day by day, I fallen love with you crazily Anika but u love with that Jalal who I want to wish kill him daily through my bare hand..u love him..why u did not see my love filling eyes for u..why..every bitterness happened in my life why ..my life became tragedy because of u Jalal,uonly destroyed my life,u snatched everything from me Jalal.. I am not leave u..he shouting like madness man

********

Rafik phone ringed ,he attend her call with little smile face: hello anika

Anika:Rafik, I need ur help..

Rafik:yes mam, am ur service any time with flirty tone

Anika:Flirty ..stop ur flirt..

Rafik:hey don’t call me flirty , Jalal only right call me to flirty with grinned tone.( opps actually he said fluently just forgot revenge with Jalal just few second..hmm not bad right)

Anika chuckled face: yeah I am not calling that name..ur friend Jalal only have copyright.(Rafik got reality back ..thought he is not my friend ,he is my enemy) I need ur help, plz collect my thing from xyz shop ..

Rafik:I send anyone collect ur thing from shop ..

Anika:No.. u only go collect my thing with bossy tone..it very precious to me..

Rafik:Precious to you more than Jalal with smirked face

Anika:yes ..she hanged down phone..

Rafik thought : then myself only collect for my Anika…precious ..let see what precious items that was

******

Shop

Rafiktold shop keeper Anika thing,shop keeper placed little box in table..

Rafik werid face: I thought big parcel but its very smaller than ring box.. what precious thing inside in this box.let open it then I found out why I giving stress my brain.. Rafik tried open box and same time his phone ringed ..he attend his call

Rafik:yes uncle.. I am coming ..placed box in his pocket left the place with hurried face

***********

Rafik uncle house

Rafik: uncle why u called me urgently..

R.Uncle: we get great chance to destroy Mohammed family,I bought Mohammed employee who Jalal & his dadi trust more than his own family. now that employee in our side.he would do anything for us

Rafik excited face: how u did it

R.unlce: money shivaay.. it bought anything in this world.

(Shivaay & Rafik both are same person don’t confuse ok)

Rafik: then ur plan uncle with smirked face

r.uncle: Mohammed cotton textiles my first target, Mohammed ā€˜s export cotton to other countries through ship container, our mens mixed drugs bundle to cotton bundle with help of Mohammed employee.. no one found out drugs in container before they placed their Mohammed product to ship , custom officer caugh drugs container in correct time.they arrest Jalal, drugs case is not simple case ,he cannot just like that come out from jail.After his Mohammed reputation gone, he killed himself with own family reputation otherwise we will kill him in jail then we spread news because of drug case, he did suicide with evily plan.

Rafik shocked face: why drugs case .. uncle.. with stammering voice

R.uncle held his shoulder : shivaay.. don’t forgot what he did with u.. he is ur enemy..dont say u also fallen his black magic ..outside only he showing he is pure person but inside he is cunning person like fox ..dontforgot ur father died because of them.

Rafik : I never forgot with angry face.. one sec anika face flashed in front of eyes.. I need time ..plz until I say don’t do anything& Rafik left the place.

R.uncle fumed face: he is changing …no ..i am not allow his grip loosen from me..he is my puppet who destroy that Mohammed.. I will find out soon why he did back from his revenge..

***********

Rafik come to usual favourite spot in mountain & shout : why Anika why anika ..why u come to my life..today I betrayed my father because of my love for you, I stopped my uncle to revenge with Jalal who u love him that person reason of my father died.u rnot love me but I saved Jalal from my uncle plan because u love him.i scared if anything happen to Jalal, you will kill urself why I caring about u.who love my enemy. why..i did not understand..he knelt down to floor ,his tear drenched muds.long time sat in same position..his hand touched his packet as remember anika precious box with him, he opened that box..his eyes widely seeing that thing.. he cannot trust his eyes.. he take gold chain from box.. it golden chain with half heart pendant hooked. His tears face smiled crept brightly.omg she is my..

**************

College

Anika curiously waiting for Rafik come to college, he enter in college casual way After looking anika eagerness,broad smile crept in his lips.

Anika : Rafik .. hey idiot, why u did not called me.. I amwaiting for ur call..where is my chain.

Rafik casual: which chain..

Anika: I kill u..yesterday night u received from shop right..give me..

Rafik hit his forhead : oh that one..i forgot in my house.Tomorrow I give u.

Anika fumed: no way we go to ur house.. we get chain from urhouse.. yesterday that chain broked u don’t know how to I felt ..Since my 10 years old that chain with me .without held that chain, I cannot sleepproperly.u know yesterday sleep away from my eyes with pout face

Rafik eager tone: why ..

Anika: because chain gifted by my Nandu ..my best best friend ..with happy face..

Rafik: oh friend only gifted right why u create big drama with uninterested tone

Anika hit his shoulder : idiot he is not my just friend ..he ismy best friend . u don’t know anything about my Nandu ..u did not understand mine & Nandu relationship..its is very unique ..its apart from friendship,love ..

Rafik: Aacha ji..then say u & chuckled face ur Nandu story..

Anika glared to Rafik & Rafik held his ear with puppy face ,she smiled..

Anika: I met my Nandu when my 9 years old ,he is serious & khadoos character...he just angryman sorry sorry angry child…with chuckled face .he don’t know how to smile..

Rafik shout : kya

Anika:shut up & don’t disturb.. Rafik nod his head with grinned face.. & Anika continues her & her Nandu story ..she don’t know already their class start and finish one session.One of their classmate interpret their conversation sorry anika speaking while Rafik listening.

( Note : part already long one so their childhood story I will add in upcoming part ..first I concentrate Akdha story & then I concentrate their love story blossoming ..yeah I add little story about them so you r not confuse)

Anika angry glare to classmate: why u disturbing our conversation ( Rafik thought when am I talking with her with weird face)moreover we have more time to start peter sir class ..

Classmate /friend taunting tone : oh yeah u have more time toattend peter sir class.. u just wait for next 24 hours.. person left the place.

Anika : 24 hours.. she look at her wrist watch & hit her forhead oh my god we lost peter sir class .next day he give me more lecture with pout face.. Rafik laughed seeing her face

Anika hit his shoulder : because of u,we lost our class lecture..

Rafik : oyie , I did not nothing, everything did only ur Nandu.. I had not taken this responsibility ..

Anika : go to hell ..she left the place & forgot totally she need to collect chain from him.. Rafik take chain from his packet & smiled broadly ..

**********

Class room

Lecture was teaching important topic everyone listening with pindrop silence except Asad..his look only with his phone.Asad phone ringed .its very slow sound because of silencce..it hear like drums sound, every one eyes shifted to Asad ..he gave sheepish smile mainly who sitting next with him..

Asad : sorry Jalal with whishper voice..he tried to attend call before he should do ..Jalal pressed call end button.. Asad sad look at Jalal, he signed listen lecture first with angry face.once again phone ringing. Asad excited face tried take his phone..opps Jalal end the call & kept phone withhis side .. repeatly phone was ringing time god lecture was finished. Everyone left except Jalal gang.Asad taken long breathe & asked phone from Jalal give back to him, he nod his head negatively

Asad : why u not gave my phone.. lecture finished na with grinned teeth.

Jalal fold his hand to his chest : No still my lecture is pending..with stern voice.. phone ringing continuously ..Jalal attend phone with stern face

Jalal: hello if u never use ur brain .everytime ur call cutted,udid not understand single thing ..who u calling that person was busy..why u thought about other suitation ..girls are selfish with angry face ..

Jalal: hello are u in line or run out ..

Girl shout: I am hearing mister ..u continues with calm voice.

Her calm tone making Jalal to hyper.

Jalal: you are useless,brainless person Girl interpret

Girl: no mister don’t say this word through phone with meeky tone.

Jalal grinned teeth : then what would I do.. come infront of you& shout in ur ears.

Girl : no mr.khadoos .. u don’t strain ur body like that..just go infront of mirror shout this word..then word reach to correct person withangry tone.

Jalal: You..

Girl: yes am I ..first u have any common sense….yeah first puton my bro phone to speaker mode ..right now with heavy bossy tone..one sec Jalal body little shaken hearing her heavy bossy voice & fantastic group giggled seeing Jalalface.. he come back to normal angry mode before he open his mouth Rafik said ur bhai phone already in speaker mood with naughty tone.

Jodha: thanks for information & my bro friend were eaves dropping habit person.Rafik pout look at everyone. U Mr.Khadoos.u want know right why I continuously calling my bhai.My maa in hospital.

Asad & Jalal unison:what with shocked expression..Asad continues..what happened to maa .why she is in hospital..with worried tone.other stand in silent spectator with concern face.

Jodha: bhai … oh .. threedays back she got accident.. her head & right hand injured with slow voice.

Asad: why u did not call me early with angry voice. Jalal placed his hand in Asad shoulder as tried to control him..

Jodha: sorry bhai ..with sad voice..Asad closed his eyes &control his anger.

Asad: how is maa now ..with hell worried tone.

Jodha: she is ok but right hand injured heavly so she got fractured & I knew very well ..After I call u ,u got angry with me but bhai have important project presentation last day. If I called u early, u left everything without consider about ur study,u come to Chennai. We don’t want spoil ur carieer because of small accident.with slow voice .

Asad :May be u thought small accident but person who got accident..my mother ,our mother, I really hurt ur ignorance and u hell concerned about my carieer & even papa not informed me.. No one consider asI am also one of the family member,his voice showing deeply hurt & painful voice.

Jodha closed her eyes : Bhai I am sorry & don’t say ur not our family member and oh. And papa also not here.he went to out of station,because of landslides ,he also struck that place.

Asad: Oh god without dad how u both girls mananged hospital situation.. u r crazy .. Jalalthought no she is not crazy ,she is brave &understanding girl ..

Jodha: Bhai, I am not kinder garden school kid. I am doing my final year & I could do face any suitation & don’t underestimate powerof ur sister with attitude voice.. Asad with everyone chuckled hearing her boldmixing of attitude voice.

Asad: I know u r Jhansi ki rani but be careful until I reach here.

Jodha: yeah come soon, ur mom stubborn like u.she doing big drama taking her medicines.This two days,I felt she is my daughter as I am her mother with chuckling face.come soon then only I relieve from mother job with teasing tone

Asad : Don’t tease my mom..with warning tone..

Jodha: Hello bhaiji.. don’t behave like over protective son with warning tone & mom alright don’t panic. U come here without any rush with concern voice.

Asad smiled: Ok sweety & take care u ,Mom & choti.

Jodha: bhai one sec.. Hello Mr. Khaddoos ji I hope ur hearing my whole conversation.first I am sorry disturbed ur important lecture but I don’t knew that bhai have class today.thenonly I called continuously. Sorry everyone with humbleful voice.. Jalal thoughtshe so sweet next sec his thought vanished & don’t dare underestimate powerof women & Women were creator & also destroyer with warning tone.

Asad look at Jalal face & his angry increasing more hearing Jodha attitude voice : sweety I call u later bye.

Jodha: Bye bhai.. call end

Rafik blast his laughter while other also joined with him except Jalal: Asad u r right she is unique girl.

Jalal thought: yeah very unique, single phone conversation shes howering all emotion angry,sweet,naughty,innocence & mainly her attitudewith smile smirked face.( Not bad Great Jalal Mohammed Impressed)

********

Days moving fastly,day after tomorrow farewell party for MBA student. One side Anika & Rafik friendship so deep.she shared everything with Rafik.even though she knew Jalalnever accept her as his lover, he always treat her as good friend but sometimes she hurt seeing his ignorance after sheconfession her love to him.May be she was missing her good friend.Rafik always making her happy,cheer up through his naughtiness & teasing.she unknownly fallen love with Rafik but she did not realize what relationship she was sharing with him.

****

Shivaay /Rafik shout : what the hell,I already said don’t excute plan until I say why uncleexcuted his plan.

Man: Sir,Saab only said mixed drug packet in Mohammed cotton container & he clearly mentioned that u never know about his plan.

Shivaay: So u did not say me ..stupid with angry face left the place..

One person also listen their conversation whisper voice: Jalal with shocking face..

*****

Jalal Speaking someone with angry face: you must find them soon who try to destroy my business & family reputation..

Abdul: Jalal what happened why u shouting in phone..

Jalal: Someone mixed drugs packet in our Mohammed cotton container.

Abdul: what.. with shocked face.

Jalal:Time god before custom officer reach harbor,our men disposed drug packets from container & handover to Police commissioner.

Abdul: how is it possible.we have high security arrangement, how its happened in our back..In our office only someone helping them

Jalal: yes Abdul.first we need found out who helping my enemy& After I will make them regrets why they mishaps with Mohammed with danger face.

Abdul : but Jalal how could u knew about this trap

Jalal: we Thanks that unknown lady. One lady called me &inform their plan but she did not say their names who want my destroy.i tried call her lady number once again but it phone booth.No one knew about that lady.

Abdul : whatever Jalal That lady saved from big problem.

Jalal: Hmm.. Both left from college.

Anika stood little far from Abdul & Jalal( mindthought):IKnew Jalal what u both talking,I called u Jalal,I cannot reveal my identity.Idon’t know why Rafik want to destroy u.even why I did not reveal his name ,heonly trying to destroy u.today I went to his home,I heared his conversation with guards.After hearing their conversation I totally shattered,why he couldharming u,Jalal.Why he was cheating u,he is ur friend but why.. I really confused I don’t know what I will do .. One side Rafik other side you Jalal.First I need to clear my doubt with Rafik then I will tell u everything

***********

Farewell day

Everyone enjoying their last day college celebration, Anika confusing seeing Rafik friendly behavior with everyone mainly with Jalal,shewant shout how this man changing his behavior like chameleon,but she did notvoice out.Rafik tensed face went out party without seen anyone.Anika noticed his exit, she tried to follow him but he already went from her sight.sh edirectly went to Rafik home, may be changes he came to his home she thought.she got one more shock in her life.her body shivering hearing their conversation no revelation.her heart beat increasing rapidly.

Anika scared face: I want to save him ..Jalal.. her shivering hand dialed Jalal number.. she tried many times but Jalal not pick up his phone because of heavy sound effects in party. Jalal please pick up..please..

Anika: oh god.. please pick up..he did not pick up my call..directly I will go to tell him..

Man: see that girl heared everything & kill her.. Anika panic..she run out behind man person chase her..

Party place..

Jalallook at his phone & saw anika missed call : why anika called many times.. where she was.. she was not here in long time.. Jalal is calling anika mobile.. other side anika running to escape from goons.

Anika : Jalal calling me… Anika hide behind in pillar,she attend her call .. Jalal clearly hearing her rapid breathing.. her breathed made his worry about her.

Jalal: anika where are you.. with worry tone

Anika: Jalal.. panic voice..

Jalal: Anika ..what happened..

Anika: Jalal….goon tried to attack behind her back.. Anika pushed goon to floor ..once again running while Jalalin line.

Jalal: Anika ..she was in trouble ..i don’t know where she was..Anika ..where are u..

Anika: Jalal..plz come soon… I am ..XYZ place… plz.. with tearface

Jalal: I am coming… don’t cut my call & dont panic.. iam coming.. Anika ..Jalal left the place..Jalal drive his car with full speed..

*******

Jalalreached that place still he did not cut his call.. : Anika where are you..

Anika saw Jalal car & she come out from bush .. Jalal also saw her.. he step down from car.. run to her side while anika also running to him..before Jalal reach her, car hit anika as drove out from their sight with speed..sudden attack Jalal staunt in his place.. his whole body numb in fewsecs.his shifted to anika , she in pool of blood in ground.his legs move to her, take her blood filled body in his arm & patted her cheeks..

Jalal: Anika..open ur eyes.. oh god.. who the hell .. didit..open ur eyes.

Goon hide behind the building & inform his boss: she was dead…

Flash back end

Anika tears flowing inher eyes : why I am not died that day if I dead means no one suffer because ofme..Jodha not lost her husband..dadi not lost her grandson.. mizra & zoya not lost their brother.. Asad & Abdul not lost their friend. today everything happened because of ur bloody revenge Nandu. I hate u too core of myheart.. I hate u..

( Next part how anika was alive & why she blaming herself for Jalal death ,I tell u later so wait guys for upcoming part)

**********

Sanjeevani Hospital

Sharmi: How are u Mrs Mohammed ..with casual tone

Mrs.M : I am fine Dr.sharmi.. with attitude voice

Sharmi raise her eye brow: Jodha u never changed yaar.. Now alsou behaved like Mohammed Empire MD ,JJMK.Dont forgot u r my patient so behave like patient with chuckled face

Jodha cough lightly and sharmi offer water to Jodha..

Sharmi : what happened..

Jodha: u only said right behave like patient.. so I did

Sharmi: very funny with mocking tone.. ur check up report in myhand.. u want to see

Jodha: keep it with you but be careful no one know about my original report & I asked right my fake report where that was..

Sharmi signed: both r in my hand only show her right hand this one its ur original report & left hand its ur fake report.

Jodha: Good, fake report sent to Asad bhai through guard &say same thing to bhai what in fake report.. he surely call u after seeing my report.

Sharmi: Jodha its necessary hide ur health issues from ur familywith concern voice

Jodha: just few days after everything will be alright soon thenI will tell everything to everyone.

Sharmi:.u r playing with ur life.. why u did not understand dammit with angry voice

Jodha: I know but nothing will happen to me.. Plz trust me..

Sharmi : ok.. then u would do what I am saying only..you will take complete rest & take ur medicine properly & u stay hospital atleast 2 or 3 days.

Jodha: I will do but I will stay here two weeks rather than 2 or3 days.

Sharmi shocked face: are u saying u r stay hospital even twoweeks not one or two days.. I m doctor ..dont making me to patient.

Jodha: don’t shock sharmi… i am saying truth.. u care on ur other patient.. I hope that I m not one & only ur patient.

Sharmi: yup..right ..take rest & i will be back..sharmi leftthe place

Jodha placed her head in bed post: I hve more work do without anyone interpret so this is right place with smirked face.

**********

Jalalapartment..

Jalalwas walking one side to other side with tensed face.. Abdul was watching Jalal movement without removing his eyes from him.

Abdul: Jalal calm down.. why u getting tensed.. Asad coming with Jodha report..same time Asad also reached

Jalal almost snathed report from Asad hand & his hands hivering open her report…

Abdul signed Asad is it anything serious..Asad nod his head negatively.

Jalaltake long breathe : time god nothing any big issues in her health but why her bp raised.. with angry look to Abdul & Asad

Asad : hello brother in law ji.. u r the reason increase her BP.. we were not..

Jalalsad face: I know.. Asad is it correct report right..

Asad : yes boss.. its correct report..show one more report to Jalal..this is sharmi send report to me & in ur hand I got my another staff from sharmi hospital.. & both report was same ..u only hyper think about her..she wasperfect alright..because of stress.. her body was weak nothing else.

Jalalyeah both report r same but still I felt something hidden from my eyes..

Asad : Jalalwait I call Jodha after hearing her voice ,you will be alright..

Jalalgive bright smile & Asad calling Jodha no.. she did not pickup his call..Asad tried many time.. she did not..

Asad : may be she was sleeping..

Jalalface fell down like 0 watts bulb: ok don’t disturb her..

Asad placed his hand to his shoulder : come on Man .. u r looklike teenage lover seeking single glimpse from his lover with teasing tone.

Jalal smiled sadly & Abdul enlighten his mood: Asad ur sistercurse come to truth one

Asad: what curse… Abdul chuckled face remembering Flashback

Flashback start ( Before Akdha official marriage)

Jodha lips moving with so many angles.. with fuming face.. hereyes shifted to infront of people face

Jodha: why everyone looking at me like I am doing bangra..

Zoya: Nothing bhabhi.. we were calculating how many languages ur cursing bhai.. with giggled tone

Choti: oh my poor jiju.. he just not call u one day only ..but uscolding him more than 5 languages with teasing tone

Jodha: jiju ki chamchi..u shut ur mouth don’t support him..itsjust one day for u but for me…

Its each sec passing like one epic for me with emotional voice..mizra side hug to Jodha..

Mizra: JB ,don’t worry I am ur side only..

Abdul come to dinninghall : Good Morning everyone

Everyone replied : Good morning.. except Jodha..she in Jalal land right

Abdul chuckled to Jodha: Jodha, he went to important meeting ..there is no signal there.. so his call not reach u.. after he come back fromsite ..he surely would call u.

Jodha grumpy face: jiju.. today what I feeling same way ..hewill also feel like me some day, One day he is craving to hear my voice thatday he never

Abdul giggled face: don’t curse my bro, Ok lets go to office..otherwise JMK back to office then shout no one do their work properly in my absence with Jalal imitate voice .. Jodha giggled ..both left to office.

Flash back end

Abdul : we were happy inour paradise. why God was playing cruel game with us.. with hurt voice

Jalal: No Abdul,we should not have blame god ..everything happened in our life because of that bloody culprits.i never leave that culprits to alive in this world with angry face

**********

Sanjeevani Hospital

Jodha working in her laptop in hospital and sharmi snatched laptop from her.. Jodha angry glare to sharmi..

Sharmi: hello madam don’t raise ur eyebrow ..i should not scareur look with dramatic tone.

Jodha:give my laptop back to me.. I am sending urgent mail withwarning voice

Sharmi: No chances.. give glass of milk.. have this milk &then sleep peacefully

Jodha: Peace with sad smirk .. my sleep left long ago from me sharmi with scarastic voice

Sharmi touch her shoulder : we know each other from childhood .. I never saw this Jodha in my life time. Ur my open book to everyone now ur mystery to me.i didnot understand ur single step Jodha..

Jodha smiled sadly :I am not mystery sharmi but my life filledwith mystery ..i am trying solve that mystery.. I don’t know I will win or losein my life game.

Sharmi: don’t confused more.. already my mind thinking what r u doing ,why , for whom.. more question running in my mind ..not anymore..& one person come to met u right.. who he was..u r not comfortable with him even he also stood infront of u in guility face

Jodha: u know sharmi.. some times we need shake our hand with our enemy.. life was really mystery or riddles we don’t know what would happen to next sec..

Sharmi give back to her laptop & fold her both hand : Icannot.. I need to go check my other patient.. u will do ur work but fewminutes only with strict voice..

Jodha give one report to sharmi : be careful sharmi ..

Sharmi confused look at Jodha and open that reports that Jodha original report but her report keep safe with me but how she got this file..

Sharmi: this report ..

Jodha: that report same time Jodha phone ring up ,gesture sharmiI tell u later & attend her call : yes Mr. Oberai.. You did what I said with bossy voice..sharmi left the room with confused face

Shivay: yes I did it what u said Mrs. Mohammed.. with slow voice

Jodha: Good ..i hope you r not stab me like u did to ur closeone.

Shivaay closed his eyes: This time you could trust me

Jodha: that good for u & that deal yours..

Shivaay: Jodha.. I am helping u not sake of our deal.. just get little peace to my heart.

Jodha laughed : Mr.oberai u r saying about heart..if first u have heart .,u never cheat ur close…(Jodha close her eyes controlled her emotion) forgot .. I did not need any favour from u .. it just deal from both of us.once again never say u r helpingme & never try to cheat me in ur dreams also.. if u will ..this businessworld would forget Oberai industries one company here in their association..one minute I will ash ur industries ..this is Jodha Jalal Mohammed khan promise..with angry face. cut the call without get his reply ..

Jodha closed her eyes : I hate u Jalal.. really I hate u.. I lost myself.. I hate u…

**********

Choti: stop the car

Mizra:why u shouting idiot ,people thought that I am kidnapping you in my car .

Zoya:both stop it yaar ,we r team, we don’t what we r doing ,whywe r doing everything , I already confused..between both of you I cannot tolerate with teary face.

Choti side hug to zoya : sorry shona

Mizra: I am sorry but I don’t know why everyone was hiding bigmatter from us,why my sense saying that its related to Jalal bhai

Zoya : I know bhai but we r lost our bhai

Mizra with angry face: even we lost him but we need to find outwho the hell separate our bhai from us

Choti: yeh calm down ..u said right we got clue what was that

Mizra: yeah my friend told that he saw Abdul bhai more time in forest side area,he is wild photographer.

Zoya: forest area …

Mizra: hmmm may be we will get any clue there & even my friend followed Abdul bhai & its lonely building in between of forest , hewas not enter in building because of heavy security

Choti : I cannot believe that why Abdul jiju was going that typeof place

Mizra: my doubt increasing more than before ,Abdul bhai know something but hidden from us

Zoya: then why u waiting start the car we need go that place

Mizra : I am also doing same right because of her stupid stund Is topped the car

Choti fuming face: sorry but you must inform early that ur fault..zoya rolled her eyes : enough

…………

Hospital

Sharmi with fear face : what the hell ,that girl make me crazy what would I say to Asad bhai ,he definitely kill me as he know that Jodha was missing in my hospital

.........

What the hell they were doing here... with frustrated even more concerned voice.

End

Precap

Man : Good to see you Mrs.Mohammed

Jodha with attitude face:I dont think it's good for you

Man: iam impressed even u r in my gun point your attitude never left from u……with evily smirk tone.

………

Hospital –

Asad : I don’t know how could I say about Jodha to Jalal.. I cannot

Abdul : Asad even me too in same state

Jalal: what happened why both of u tensed

Abdul : Jalal, its about Jodha, she was missing

Jalal with confused face : Jodha ….

>………

Gun shots for who...

Wait for next part

Thanks

Weekly once I will try to update.. Plz understand ..but I will complete my every stories ..

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 6 years ago
Peachie_wings thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Pleased to see you back...🄳


Thanks for coming back and continuing this story...

šŸ¤—

Fantasy-ka-Love thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

Pleased to see you back...🄳


Thanks for coming back and continuing this story...

šŸ¤—


Thank you ji 😳

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: So-So Ā· 11 months ago

Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 4 - 31/08/2025

Part 1 Two Worlds Here she was. Jodha Shekhawat stood in front of the gleaming glass and steel headquarters of Khan Engineering in Agra. The...

Expand ā–¼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: MideOfTheShadow Ā· 1 years ago

synopsis when he brought Amer's rose into his harem, she was meant to be a testament to his conquest. when she agreed to marry him, it was with...

Expand ā–¼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: MideOfTheShadow Ā· 1 years ago

character sketch jodha bai || mariam-uz-zamani, malika-e-hindustan, registan ka gulab , malika-e-muazzama paridhi sharma born to the Rajput...

Expand ā–¼
Jodha Akbar thumbnail

Posted by: lkdaswani Ā· 3 years ago

The Mughal Emperor Jalal has only ever known death, betrayal and Hate- he is the Devil with the face of an Angel. He is heartless and cruel...

Expand ā–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".