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Posted: 6 years ago
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She chose to go for lunch instead of getting kidnapped and eloping? Who does that?

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Chapter 9

Saiba didn’t know what to wear she went to her wardrobe opened it and looked at it for 10 minutes when finally she made her choice.

She took her long red skirt with a black top and went inside to change. In a matter of a few minutes, she came out looking at the mirror combed her hair and made a half-open ponytail. She never used a lot of makeup even if there were big functions she always liked being simple, she applied kohl in her eyes, a light lipstick on her lips and she was done. She looked on more time at the mirror picked up her purse and mobile and headed out of the room.
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Veer was looking in the mirror fixing his hair when he was done he applied his perfume and put on his leather jacket. He was wearing blue jeans with a white t-shirt. He looked one last time in the mirror and made his way out.


Veer made his way to saibas hostel feeling really happy it was the first time he was taking saiba somewhere... Usually, people think a lot about what they will do in future or with who they will complete their dreams with but for him, it was crystal clear, for him there was no future without her.


Whistling happily with himself he didn’t realize when he reached the girl's hostel, his jaw suddenly dropped on seeing her, he just stood there watching her how impatiently she waiting, she was looking at the watch in the mobile and then around her.


Veer hid behind the hostel wall because he wanted to look at her.


"Kuch to Karlo rahaim hum paar, kahi maar na dalo en adaosi,hum to khushi khushi maar jaye likn humein marna bhi ghawara nahi is bhaat ki daar se ki tera didar karenge kaise," said veer looking at saiba.


finally showing some pity on saiba he started to go towards her.


Saiba turned around to see veer was coming she sighed shook her head, and she holds her waist in anger.


"I am sorry I am sorry," said veer holding his ears.


"You are not forgiven," said saiba turning her back to him.


There was mischief in his eyes.


"Can I tell you a secret?" said veer slowly in her right ear.


"What secret," said asked?


"I was standing there looking at you, I was thinking how can anyone be so beautiful and mesmerizing, couldn't decide if you are human or a fairy," veer said romantic tone.


Saiba didn't say anything she just got quite her blush said it all.


veer slowly kept his forehead on her right shoulder.


"I will make you wait all your life because you know why? Because I have all the right on you and no one can take that from me, not even you", said veer taking off his head, slowly he slides his hands around her waist.


Saiba was melting like ice on fire she didn't tug him off or tried to escape his arms which were holding her tightly, it was not the first time remembering the last time he had held her, she couldn't help and blush harder than before even beetroot was not red as she was right now, her heart was making it difficult for her to breathe she wished it could stop beating so fast.



Veer held her close to himself tightly their faces touched, saiba couldn't hide the blush and the smile she closed her eyes leaned back to veers chest comfortably keeping her hands on veers where he was holding her.


Moments passed by when veer realised they had a date or perhaps lunch the covering name of date.


" saiba," he said slowly.


"Ya," said saiba who was not in the mood to leave the hold.


"Am I forgiven?" veer asked with a grin.


Just than saiba realised she was angry at him he tugged him away move away from him.


"No never," said we saiba teasingly.


"Ok I don't mind repeating all that again," said teasingly moving towards saiba.


"Don't you dare, or I will not come with you?" said saiba warning him.


"Okay you're lost now can we go or we have to keep this going on," said veer.


"Let's go," said saiba.


Veer moved forward rolling his eyes, while saiba followed him chuckling at his irritation...


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"Veer it looks so expensive are you sure about having lunch here," saiba asked not believing her eyes.


"Of course I am, now let go inside I am already starving", said veer.


Saiba couldn't help but look around anxiously around the 5-star hotel veer brought her, she had never seen such a spectacular hotel everything so beautifully crafted, the marble floor the designs on the wall, a huge chandelier, she just stood there silently until an impatient voice was calling.


"hey, saiba why are you waiting here the restaurant is over there," said veer impatiently.


"nothing let's go," said saiba.


veer took her to the restaurant there was a place near the window they went on sat there. saiba was looking a little lost it was the first time she had gone to such a big restaurant it felt weird.


"saiba why are you so lost didn't you like it here" veer asked suspiciously.


"no don't think like that veer I like it but honestly it's the first time I have been in such a big and expensive place," said saiba nervously.


"don't worry you will get used to it," said veer he smirked.


what does he mean I will get used to it saiba thought with herself, does he mean he will continue taking me out saiba eyes widened.


"hey, are you going to kill me with those eyes said veer teasingly?


Saiba knew her blush wasn't hidden from him so she looked down trying to hide her face but it was no use because no matter where she looked his eyes were fixed on her, veer was smiling at her while she was trying to hide her blush.


"Excuse me, sir, what can I get you"?said the waiter.


Veer and saiba looked at the menu to their luck they had an Indian food section.


They both give their orders and waited for the food.


"Veer are you planning for us to go somewhere else to," saiba asked.


"Ohh yea snow white the day has just started," said veer grinning.


Ohh boy that smile he is so up to something saiba thought looking at his grin.


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They sat on the beach closed side by side it was nearly sunset, no one was really in the mood to go home, saiba smiling at the events that took place she was never this much happy it was like a bird that was locked down in her golden cage was now freed.


Veer took her to the six flags that were newly opened in Canada there was so much to enjoy the water slides, the music, the swing ship, everything was really great, and then they went to cinema watched a movie and the final place was just for today the beautiful beach.


"It's really beautiful veer I really enjoyed today," said saiba appreciatingly.


She couldn't stop smiling today.


"You are welcome snow-white," said veer.


He glanced towards her, she had closed her eyes looking towards the ocean the sound of the shore was really beautiful and peace full.


Saiba hand was next veer barely inches away veer looked at it and took her hand into a finger lock, saiba felt his hand on hers but she didn't dare to open her eyes but even in closed eyes she knew he was looking at her who had turned into a red tomato.


Veer knew she was not daring to open her eyes it was not hidden from him she was turning red by the minute. finally showing pity on her he left her hand.


Saiba opened her eyes and slowly looked at him who was staring at her she turned to her right side rapidly.


Without a warning, veer turned around his back to her and laid back keeping his head on her lap.


"Now blush all you want," said veer mockingly.


"Veer what you doing," saiba asked who's cheeks we're burning and the colour was worse than red.


"What you think I am doing, you blush like hell every time I even touch your shadow," said veer looking In her deep eyes.


"I can't help it," said saiba trying to look away but veer held her chin demanded to look at him.


Saiba heart was racing so fast, she looked in those hunting eyes which don't let them sleep at night, she was so lost in him she had her eyes locked on him.


Veer slowly touched her red cheeks on the back of his hand it was so soft her lips trembling to say something but she had no control, he touched those lips and saiba heart skipped beats.


A few of saibas hair strands came in front of her face veer slowly took it and put behind her ear and slowly went to her neck, saiba closed her eyes with him touching her neck and she felt like her head was spinning. She didn't know why was her skin so sensitive on his touch, Veer went further deep in her neck towards the clip that was holding her hair locked he took it out, and the wind started to play with her hair.


Saiba opened her eyes and saw veer was smiling and realised her hair was open.


"What did you that for," saiba asked?


"The wind was unhappy that their favourite toy was locked so they requested me to free it and I being the gentleman couldn't refuse said," said veer innocently.


"Give me the clip back," said demanding.


"Nope," said veer.


Saiba tried to take it but he was too quick to let her have it. He suddenly got up and so did saiba.


"Veer return it to me," said saiba.


"Nope," said veer admittedly before saiba could do anything he looked at the shore and threw the clip into the water.


Saiba looked at veer in anger and started to run after him.


"Why you veer just wait I will show you," said saiba angrily.


They started to run on the seashore, saiba was after veer who was running fast looking behind, when they finally stopped to catch the breath, saiba looked at veer bend down and took water in her hand threw at veer.


"Hey, you are making me wet," said veer trying to make saiba stop.


Saiba repeated again and again and when veer was half wet he started to run after saiba and this time it was her turn to run but she was not fast enough, veer caught Saiba's waist yanked her towards himself and spun her in the air, saiba was laughing loudly while veer who was spinning saiba was enjoying himself.


"Sorry sorry please don't make me wet," said saiba pleading.


"Ok, I won't but take it as a dept on you, I will get you next time," said veer warning.


"It's getting late let's go back to the hostel," said saiba since it was getting dark.


"Ok, let's go," said veer.


While walking she reached for his hand automatically, veer looking at her smiling and he tightens the hold.

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At night.


Saiba was awake in her bed thinking about the events that happen today so far the best day of her life. She was smiling to herself when she remembers events on the beach, she blushed to herself.


It was nearly 6 when they arrived at their hostels they were really tired, veer was really tired and wet. As always veer took saiba to the hostel and told her to wait for him in the morning and wished her good night and headed back.


Saiba knew one thing no matter what happens she can never lose veer the step she has taken towards him could never be taken back and she would never to......


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Veer was laid awake on his bed, lost in thoughts smiling, he didn't know why the day had ended so fast, he just wanted to be with her 24 hours, her blush, her smile, her anger, the confusion in her eyes, he has almost seen every aspect of her moods and it affected his already lost heart.....


veer got up and made his way to the balcony, he saw the door was open but she was no where to be seen.


na yun talpa humein oh bedardi tere didar ko, kuch to rahaim ka apni dewanai paar, to tu so raha hai chain se or yaha tadap rahe hai him.... veer said looking towards her empty balcony.


it was going to be difficult getting sleep tonight veer thought sighed and went inside...

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Important note.


Chapter ten there will be leap soon and will be a shocking one a lot of secrets will be revealed. The chapters of past will, coming to the present and I will introduce new characters..... Keep reading thank you.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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greatly written...when veer caressed saiba's hair it was a great moment and so was the beach one...lovely work dear

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Originally posted by: meenachem

greatly written...when veer caressed saiba's hair it was a great moment and so was the beach one...lovely work dear

thanks dear.. Your comment gives me motivation to keep writing. Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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They had a nice lunch date and some romancing.

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Originally posted by: coderlady

They had a nice lunch date and some romancing.

hehe yes, first and the last time coming up with a bomb in next chapter. ur comment means alot thank so much. updating just for you two.
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Lovely update. I just love the line - There is no future for him without her. ❤️

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chapter 10.


In college.

Veer and Saiba sat in the canteen having their meal in the break time since their exams were nearing they were focused on them.


"I think we should skip that chapter saiba I don't think it's that much important," said veer looking at the textbook.


"Ya, maybe I think I can remember that part easily but I am more worried about chapter 4 and 6," said saiba worried.


"Me too it okay we will study hard and practice," said veer assuringly.


"Hello, can we set here," said a girl?


Both looked up and saw a girl wearing glasses, average lose clothes, and a boy with brown hair second-hand clothes holding a tray of meal and looking rather nervous.


"Yes, sure," said saiba.


"Hi, I am Emma," said the girl nervously.


"I am ron," said the boy.


"Hello, I am veer and this is saiba," said veer happily.


"thank you for letting us set here," said Ron looking his left and right.


"you are welcome," said saiba frowned looking at Ron.


Saiba and veer looked at each other, they knew something was wrong because Emma too was looking really scared-looking around.


"Are you guys all right," veer asked.


"ya, everything is fine," said, Emma.


before anyone could say anything a basketball hit ron on his as he was about to drink water, but the water bottle fell off his hand as he chocked some of the water, ron was coughing badly, Emma starting tapping his back, veer got serious and looked around to see who it was but he was not surprised to see it was mike.


"hey, ugly so this is where you hide your ugly," said Mike his group started to laugh.


"n, no, no I, I was not hiding Ron," said stammering.


"then what were you doing, making out with your so-called nerdy girlfriend," said Mike again his gang started to laugh out loud.


"you don't have the right to call someone like that," said saiba furiously.


"what are you their bodyguard* said, Mike?


Watch your mouth, Mike, if you know what's good for you," said veer turning his palm into fists.


"oh, here comes the other one you must be the nanny," said Mike pointing towards veer.


"veer noo leave them this is what they want," said saiba holding veer hand.


veer turned around to look at the mike, his eyes were full of rage looking at mike. for some reason mike forehead was sweety as he gulped seeing the rage in veer eyes.


"who are you scared of veer your girlfriend or me come one, you can not be so a week or you don't have the power let go of a stupid girl be a man veer don't tell me you are not," said, Mike.


"saiba let go of me", said veer raging with anger.


"noo veer let them say what they want I don't care, remember we have already got a warning," said saiba pleading.


"aha, I can see how much strength, tell me something veer are you good in bed with her, are you man enough to satisfy her, if not give me a chance I will show how it is to be a man," said Mike disgustingly.


"saiba let go of me," veer said but saiba had already let go of him, how dare he said that how dare he if veer doesn't kill him I will saiba thought.


veer felt the hand let him go even if she didn't he would still kill that ba$%&rd.


veer got hold of mike's collar and punched him in the ribs when his mates saw this they came around veer in a gang. But veer didn't stop veer kept giving punches to Mike when a boy ran at him, he didn't even get close when veer gave him a kick and he flew inches away and the second boy came behind and got hold of veer around his neck but veer smashed him in the stomach with his elbow as he screamed veer turned gave him a punch on the side of his face which started to bleed. the 3 guys ran of just seeing how the others were.


Mike knew he can't win in the fight, so he took a knife and ran at veer.


"veeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!" saiba screamed.


Before mike could stab him, veer turned and got hold of mike hand which held the knife, he twisted and the knife fell while mike screamed in pain but that was not enough veer hit him with his elbow on his arm and he yelled in pain and the sound of the broken bone reached everyone ears.


The injured boy who was with Mike got up and took the knife since everyone's eyes were fixed on mike no one saw he was moving towards veer and suddenly saiba came between them pushed veer towards the table the knife tore saibas shoulder.


"arghhhh" saiba screamed.


veer turned to see saiba was holding his arm and her hands were covered full of blood the drops fell on the ground he looked around for the guy but he had already vanished veer ran towards saiba.


saibas head was spinning she didn't know what was happening the pain was getting worse, she felt cold and her eyes got blurry everything went dark she couldn't see anything.


veer got hold of her waist as she was falling unconscious due to the loss of blood. veer took out his handkerchief put around saibas shoulder and took her in his arms and headed to the college medical room his mind getting blank.
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veer waited outside while the nurse checked said as hand, his clothes had gotten red because of her blood, he banked his head on the wall in rage, he should have been careful how can he let her get injured, he held his head in fury, what would I do if something happens to her nooo he would turn the world upside down but not let anything happen to her.


"excuse me," said the nurse.


"How is her sister" veer asked urgently?


"she is fine I have given her stitches the wound is quite deep she will need to rest as much as she can since she has lost a lot of blood, she can rest here for few hours and then you can take her home said the nurse.


veer breathed with relief for the first time since he brought her here. he went inside and saw she was sleeping her face was pale, he went closer and kept his hand on her forehead and kissed it and sat on the chair next to the bed.


2 hours later.


Saiba slowly opened her eyes and saw veer was sitting in the chair next to her and was holding her hand, soon the event started to flash in her eyes.


"veer are you ok, did they hurt, did they do something to you," said saiba panicking.


veer stood up seeing her panic.


"I am ok saiba I am completely fine to relax," said veer calming her down.


she looked at him knowing he was telling the truth he calmed her down and moved rapidly to hug him.


"I got really scared veer seeing the knife coming towards you," said saiba worriedly.


"it's over now forget it," said veer knowing it will be difficult.


there was knock on the door, they looked and saw it was the principle they let go of each other and looked at him.


"do you mind telling me what the hell has happened," said the principle?


before they could answer someone else said.

"It's our fault, sir," said, Ron and Emma together.


"yours, how come," the principal asked?


"Sir, before you get into some conclusion can you please see this," said Emma holding him her phone.


the principle started the video and looked carefully. after a few minutes when he saw everything he gave back the phone.


"It's not their fault sir, they were only trying to help us," said Ron sadly.


"I agree it's not them who started it but the injuries you have given them is really serious veer," said the principal.


"I am sorry sir but it was necessary," said veer who was still in anger.


"no, it was not I agree they are goons but did you had stoop so low what difference did it make," veer said the principle.


"I have expelled them from collage but you deserve the punishment too," said the principal.


"But sir"Emma and Ron tried to say something but they got quite with the look they got.


"from today itself you are expelled from the college till the exams, be happy I am leaving you in the exams," said the principle he strode out before anyone can say something.


everyone was stunned, veer got really tensed what would he do now, how would he give exam if he didn't attend the college.


"We are really sorry for all this if we didn't have come to sit with you all this wouldn't have happened said," Emma.


"If you guys hadn't I would have come no matter where ever you had been so stopping thinking like this," said veer gently.


"what would you do now veer," saiba asked?


"don't worry at least I am going to be an exam that relief," said veer.


"Take some restful sleep," said veer sadly.


As the four of them looked at each other.

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A day before the exam.

Saiba and veer were going to the college, saiba looked at veer sadly knowing how much he wanted to go to college, but since he was banned he couldn't, but he didn't miss out the studies because saiba would bring him notes and give details of every class which helped him a lot in studying, they would spend a lot of time in the garden area studying, but at the same time veer never let saiba go alone to the college he would take her and wait for her till the college ended. veer was scared to let her go alone.


"I will be here as always ok come straight to me," said veer gently


"don't worry I will come back, and it's just today from tomorrow we will go together," said saiba holding his hand.


"ya it's just today now go," said veer
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veer was waiting outside the door when a few boys and girls were making way to the college, he didn't cast them any look, it's been weeks since that incident took place yet it just kept hunting him, he couldn't live without her even in dreams, he had made his decision he took out his phone and dialled Indian number.


"Hello, ma are you awake," said veer.


"veer are you ok it's late at night what happened," said Sakshi worriedly.


"yes, ma everything is fine I wanted to talk about," said veer.


"wait," said Sakshi looking at her husband she slowly made her out of the room.


"yes, honey now tells me what happened," Sakshi asked.


"ma, i.........." veer hesitated...


"Are you finally telling about the girl?" Sakshi asked smiling?


"How did you know ma," veer asked embarrassed.


"I am your mom nothing hidden from me," said Sakshi.


veer was silent, how stupid of him thinking he would hide it from his mom.


"Now tell me who is she," saiba asked.


"maa, her name is saiba, Indian, and the best girl I have ever seen," said veer proudly.


"Send me all the details in email with a pic I will talk to your dad," said Sakshi.


"really ma, I love you so much" veer asked happily.


"I love you too, I will be waiting don't worry we will fix everything now bye," said Sakshi.


"ok, ma bya good night," said veer and disconnected the phone.
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"oh, my my my look who we got," said a girl.


veer looked up and saw what he hated the most it was pinky.


"what do you want veer," asked annoyingly.


"you," said pinky getting closer to him.


"dream on," said veer rolling his eyes.


"come on veer it's Valentine day coming up in a few days, as always our college holds a ball and contest for the king and queen of the ball," said pinky.


"so, what should I do," said veer.


"so many boys are waiting in line just so they make me their Valentine and I dieing to make you mine," said pinky touching his cheeks.


veer grabbed her hand and tossed it away from him.


"I have told million times don't touch me and stay away from and forget about me taking you as my Valentine baby, it's only going to happen in your dreams," said veer angrily.


pinky couldn't take the insult she knew why was he doing all this, looking at the gate behind and she saw saiba was making her way. She looked at veer knowing he would never allow her.


she moved forward and held veer face and kissed him on his lips...........


veer pushed pinky away as she fell back on the ground.


"are you out of your mind, look pinky stay away from me if you know what good for you," said veer seriously?


he turned around and walked away.
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veer looked at the student who made their way out but saiba wasn't seen anywhere he looked worried.


"hi, veer," said, Ron.


"hi, buddy," said veer.


"you looking for someone veer," said, Ron.


"ya, I was looking for saiba," said veer.


"but she already left," said, Ron.


"Left!!! What you mean she left" said veer angrily.


"I don't know but she was looking very upset she was looking at this direction and suddenly left I called after but she did not even turn back it was unlike of her," said Ron curiously.


Veer understood she actually saw pinky kissing him, that's why she got upset and went, veer got really angry he knew pinky had seen her that's why she kissed him, he turned with full rage and saw pinky was standing and grinning.


"You know veer I always get what I want and you no one can stop me," said pinky.


Veer came forward and gave a tight slap on her face. All the students looked at them and some laughed at pinky.


"Now the ou remember one thing, I was quite all this time because I respected your mother and now you have crossed all the limits, I am not a toy that you get to satisfy you ego, I love saiba one and only and I am never going to leave her and come to a cheap girl like you who might be with one today and someone else tomorrow and I sure you know what a girl like that is called," said veer seriously and left...


all the students just started to laugh at pinky, with anger she just left from swearing she will destroy them.
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Saiba just felt like someone just stabbed her heart she was angry and hurt at the same time. she went into the bushes, sitting under a big tree, leaning back lost in thoughts.


she closed her eyes and all she could see was them kissing and she opened eyes and shook her head. what to me if he kissed her how does it matter to me, he can move around and snog anyone he can like she cares. she started to plug the grass harshly.


"poor the green grass enduring my punishment," said a voice which startled saiba.


she looked to see it was veer.


"what do you want," saiba asked furiously?


"you, what else," said veer.


"in your dreams," said saiba and turned around to walk when veer got hold the wrist.


"Leave me alone veer I don't want to talk," said saiba trying to break the hold.


"saiba listen to me please," said veer pleading.


"I don't want to listen to anything, I should have known what kinda fool I am trusting you," said saiba.


"saiba that was nothing".... veer tried to say.


"of course, it was nothing for you because you are a boy it's just a game for you," said saiba


"you really think that about me," said veer every word she said was tearing his heart apart.


"Just let me go veer," said saiba not being able to hold herself together.


"no, I won't," said veer.


"I don't care veer whatever you have to say just keep it with you," said saiba she was crying but it looked like her tears were invisible.


saiba was trying to leave the hold while veer hold was getting tight. saiba turn around and bend down to bite his hand but it was no use.


"saiba."..... He tried again but she just refused saiba turned around to him and started to beat him in his chest. but veer refused. saiba finally gave up and finally, her knees became week as she knelt hardly on the ground. veer let go of her hand and bend to held her......


"I wanna cry veer please make me cry I can't take it anymore," said saiba breakingly.


he sat in front of her slowly took her in an embrace. while she hugged him back. the pleading tore his heart it actually hurt him more than her words.


"she means to me nothing saiba she is just a nightmare she did that on purpose because I refused her offer many times even today when I refused her she did that I pushed her and humiliated her in front of everyone you can ask Ron," said veer hoping she would believe him.


when she didn't reply he moved a little back and to his utter shock, he saw she had felt unconscious.


"saiba!!!!!! saiba!!!!!!! saiba!!!!!!!!" veer repeated again but no response.


he took her in his arms and heading towards her hostel...
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Note...

I am writing the 10 chapters in two parts since it's too long... I promised to reveal the secrets as I will in the next part. Keep reading love you all thanks so much for the time.

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chapter 10 sec part.


"Ohh Jesus what happened to her veer," said sister mary.


"I don't know sister she just fainted," said veer worriedly.


"Wait let me call the doctor," said sister mary.


After the doctor came.


The doctor turned to veer curiously.


"Is everything alright doctor?" veer asked?


"Yes and no," said the doctor.


"What you mean doctor" veer asked.


"It looks like she went from some sort of shock which left her in trauma in her early times and that's the reason her eyes, they are so dried up like there is no water, mostly when someone is sad or hurt they cry but in this case, it feels like she wants to cry but there is no water, which can leave a deep impact that's why even the smallest trauma can have a bad effect," said the doctor.


"I want to cry veer please make me cry" veer remembered how saiba begged.


"She needs rest but take care of her if you can make her cry so she feels the burden is lifted from her heart crying can actually give someone a new life," said the doctor and left veer in deep thoughts...
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After 3 hours.


Saiba opened her eyes slowly and her head was aching badly as she tried to get up her head started to spin she sunk back and closed her eyes.


"Hey, sunshine how are you," said veer with the hope she would talk to her.


"I am fine, "said saiba not looking at him.


"Here these are for you," said veer holding a bunch of red roses.


"I don't want them," said saiba.


Veer got sad but he didn't say anything he just kept the flowers on the table.


"Saiba I..." Veer tried to say something but saiba cut him in between.


"Leave me alone veer," said saiba refusing to hear anything.


Veer looked at her and left silently, feeling like he was walking on a path of thorns.


Saiba turned her head where veer disappeared her trust on him was broken and it tore her heart when finally she thought she had some happiness coming on her way everything just shattered into pieces.....


she closed her eyes trying to get hold of herself when her phone beeped she took her mobile and saw it was from Ron.


"hey, check this out it's going viral" rons message included a note.


she opened and saw a video she played and saw veer and pinky kissing she was about to turn off when she saw veer pushing her away and warning her.


next video came she opened it.


veer turned around and slapped pinky and told her he loves saiba only and will never leave her..


the mobile dropped from her hands, what has she done how cruel was she, she trusted pinky more than veer who was the love of her life, who could do anything for the happiness she thought, she stood up and walked out in hope to find him...


...............................................................

veer was feeling like something was dragging him forward he couldn't feel anything, he felt like his whole body was num like there was no life in him, it was hard to imagine his life without her and now she refused to even listen to him, his eyes were red and the tears that dropped on his shirt was clearly visible he didn't know where was he going what will he do but he knew he just has to keep going.


"veer!!!!! veer!!!!! veer!!!" someone was screaming behind him it sounded like her but no it couldn't be her but the voice the scream it sounded familiar.


he closed his eyes and suddenly images started to flash in his eyes, a small girl was running after him he couldn't see her face it was blurry but she was shouting, she was angry at him. when suddenly he heard a gunshot and the image got cleared his saw himself looking at his hands which were covered with blood and he saw a body in front of him he tried to see who it was but he was taken from there,
veer snapped open his eyes what the hell was that, what did he just saw his head was paining as if it will blast any moment.


"veer!!!! veer please stop" someone still screamed the same voice.


veer turned around and saw saiba was running towards him, she saw he looked at her and she smiled, veer just kept looking at her knowing how difficult it had been this 20 minute without her, how can he spend his life without her.


Saiba just ran towards him without any stop when she was near she just put her arms around his neck and embraced him tightly while he returned the hug.


"I am so sorry veer I am so sorry I didn't listen to you I should have trusted you I made a big mistake, how stupid was I thinking you would hurt me veer, I am sorry I can't live without you veer I just can't please don't Leave me veer I love you," said saiba confessing all her feelings.


veer face and heart enlightened with her confess it was as if someone has given a new life to a dying person.


Veer backed a little bit but was holding her around her waist and the other hand slowly touched her jawline demanding him to look at him.


"What makes you think I will leave you saiba, it's not easy to get rid of me, and for this entire life you are stuck with me," said veer confessed.


veer held her more tightly there was no room even an inch he slowly touched his cheeks which was redder than blood. Saiba closed her eyes on his touch feeling like the places will burn where he touched, she was feeling like she wanted him to hold her and touch him because from now on she belongs to him forever, he slowly moved his face for her lips looking for hesitation in her features but there was none.


Veer moved his lips towards her kissing gently it was a soft kiss but the moment he touched her lips a fire started to burn within him, his kiss started to get harder by the minute.


saiba sensed he was waiting for her to hesitate so he could step back but she wouldn't back away today the thought of losing him nearly took her reason to breath. she closed her eyes as he gently kissed, her trembling lips and already red checks started to burn as if it would be started to bleed, his kiss was getting harder and harder she didn't know when she put her hand In his hair and started to kiss him back the action triggered a havoc emotion between them and it made saiba hard to stand she clutch on to his shirt before her legs could give away.


saiba was going back without breaking the kiss when she suddenly banged to the tree, veer's both hands were around her waist crushing her In his arms, after a long time he left the poor lips but he didn't stop, he kissed her cheeks, coming down to her chin, and slowly kissing her neck, saiba throat became dry as she moaned, her closed eyes rolled in her head as he was kissing every part of her neck, he slowly pushed her sleave down making room for him, he pushed her close to him as he buried his face into her neck and kissed her ear. saiba wanted more she didn't have the ability to think anymore every touch every kiss was making her crave for more she didn't know the touch of her love could actually reach her soul.


veer just wanted to keep her kissing, until she would forget everything he just wanted to love her, not once he tried to come near her thinking it would upset her but deep down he was going crazy to hold her like this to smell the scent that always made him want her badly to kiss the skin, to crush the rose petals lips and now when he started it was difficult to stop.


after what felt like forever.


They finally stopped after it felt like years have been passed breathing hard their raised heartbeats said it all.


"I love you" saiba said veer looking at her eye's.


saiba hugged him tightly.


"I love you too," said saiba.


they held to each other for a few minutes.


veer backed away looking at saiba.


"Stay here I will be back," said veer excited.


he ran off while saiba waited thinking where could he have gone.


veer came running holding a canvas and colours saiba was surprised.


"what you doing veer," saiba asked confused.


"shhh!! I don't want you to talk for some time and let me do what I want" said veer keeping his finger on her lips...


he fixed her hair the way he wanted the already swollen lips were already red and didn't need any lipstick the cheeks were red because of her blush she was just perfect.


He made her stand and went back to start the painting. while she just stood there looking at him lost in thoughts.


"you know saiba I think I can use more red on your lips," said veer teasingly.


"but I don't have any lipstick here," said saiba disappointed.


"I was not talking about the lipstick I think my lips can do wonders in turning pink to red it's free of cost you know the best chance," said veer.


saiba blushed hard and started to laugh at the same time she felt like a huge burden was lifted from her heart.


"Finally, the perfect pose," said veer smiling while looking at saiba laugh.........


................................................................

veer in his room.


veer was looking at the painting he made of her, he captured her look after her official confess that she loved him, it's hard to wait anymore, he thought he has already told mom about it, and now if only she talks to Dad hopefully everything will go his way. He opened his email started to attach Saiba's photo and her details and send it to his mom, And now he only has to wait.


"hey, snow-white" veer messaged saiba.
............................................

saiba was studying when her mobile beeped and saw it was her prince charming.


"hey, prince charming" saiba messaged.


"guess what" veer typed.


"what" saiba typed eyebrows raised.


"I have talked to mom about us" veer typed happily.


"what, really but are you sure about us," said saiba excited.


"yes, I am sure more than anything in this world" veer typed.


"then I have to talk to dad too" saiba typed.


"yep, you have too I know we have a lot of studies to do but I just want us to get engage and marriage can wait" veer typed.


"me to thinking the same" saiba typed blushing.


"I love you" saiba veer typed.


"I love you too now let's get back to study the nightmare starts tomorrow" veer typed.
......................................................

India.


Sakshi read the email veer send him and saw the picture of the girl and he was right she was the beautiful girl in the world and now only if her husband agrees.


"Sakshi what are you smiling at," said Sumer sing.


"veer has me an email, I told you yesterday how he called at midnight, telling me about that girl," said Sakshi.


"oh yes, you had mentioned it to me show me the picture," said Sumer sing.


Sakshi gave him the mobile as soon as he saw her picture he was impressed.


"my son has a great choice, I will talk to his grandfather let's see what he says and I will do a background check and find full information because his grandfather would wanna know everything," said Sumer sing worriedly.


"why him Sumer I mean you know he can create a problem," said Sakshi.


"But we don't have choice Sakshi you know that, he would wanna know about this and besides if we don't even tell him he has his men everywhere he would soon find out," said Sumer sing.


Sakshi hugged her husband, that man was like a curse on veer"s life, years ago the same thing happen but it ended up in blood path and today again veer has found someone, she feared for him praying deep inside that history doesn't repeat itself.
...........................................................

one month later.


"Finally, the nightmare is over veer," said saiba happily hugging veer.


"Ohh yes, snow-white it is over," said veer hugging her back.


"guys!!! I have an announcement to make tomorrow is Valentine day the day of lovers and like every year we are hosting a ball night and a competition for the prince and princess or you can say, king and queen, the competition is simple, wear the best clothes, dance the best way, and be with someone who makes you look like you are born for her or him, we will decide by the looks by coordination and by the dance who is our king and queen there is no theme wear what you want but remember to make a perfect entry" said the principal.


...........................................................

India.


Sumer sing was setting in the living area with Sakshi drinking tea.


"sumer veer's exams are finishing today and I think he might want to hear out the answer I am so excited we are meeting their family, at last, said Sakshi.


"hey, mom hey dad," said Karan.


"hey, son where have you been," Sakshi asked.


"oh to find bros in law which I did," Karan said.


"you did that's so great I wanna meet them today itself," said Sakshi happily.


"no mom you have to wait till tomorrow," said, Karan.


"why Sakshi," asked frowning.


"because the door was locked when I asked from someone they said they are not home and will return tomorrow," said, Karan.


"It's ok Sakshi we will go tomorrow," said Sumer seeing how excited his wife for her son.


...................................................

"veer where are we going," saiba asked.


"for shopping," said veer.


"but what will I buy," said saiba?


"anything I want," said veer winked.


they were coming from Saiba's hostel, to go shopping for Valentine day.


saiba slowly reached veer hand and held it tight.


since it was their exams last few days they barely had any time to spend with each other the only time they spend with each other was the small conversation and it held only 5 words good night and I love you.


veer stopped her and tugged her towards himself held her face in his hands and kissed her lips it was not gently it was a hunger kiss like he has seen her after a long time. she held him tightly and started to kiss him back. veer slowly put her arms around her waist. slowly his lips made way on her neck, losing way on her chest, biting and kissing like there is no tomorrow.


after a long time, they stopped, breathing hard veer kissed Saiba's forehead and took her in her arms.


"veer we should go for shopping," said saiba.


"ok," said veer, saiba smiled seeing him, he had no intention of leaving.


finally, they broke apart and left for shopping.
.................................................

Valentine day.


veer looked in the mirror combing his hair, fixing his tie, today was special day he was officially going with saiba as partners and his mom was going to Saiba's house to fix their allies.


"you look handsome veer," said veer smiling to himself.


he was wearing a black tuxedo with a moron tie and black shirt, gosh anyone could fall in love with him in first sight.


....................................................................

saiba's room.


a long red backless gown was covering the floor with sleeveless her skin was glowing, she was fixing her hair, she didn't like to leave it open but it was a demand from the princess, with limited makeup she looked like fairy.

her favourite bracelet in her hand, a small diamond locket was shining around her neck.

finally, she was done and headed out of the room.
..................................................

Karan, Sumer sing, and Sakshi rang the doorbell, they were all waiting patiently for a response.


the door opened and a servant came out.


"Yes, how can I help you," said the servant?


"Is your boss home?" Karan asked?


"Yes, he is please come in," said the servant.


they followed the lead, they sat in the couch and looked admirably around the house.


"Mom relax everything will be fine," said, Karan.


"I hope so Karan, "said Sakshi looking at her husband who nodded hopefully.


They were waiting when they heard some footsteps coming to throw the stairs.


They looked at each other and looked at the stair's when the man came in view, Sumer sing raised slowly from his seat and Sakshi eyes widened while her heartbeat slowly raised.


How is this possible Sumer sing thought no this can't be it's not possible. Sakshi holds Karan hand tightly making sure she doesn't fall because of the shock.


Vijay saw the people but the surprise was more of a shock, saiba had called him telling him a family was coming for asking her hand and make sure I say yes and she will tell me everything later but was this the family no it can't be history cannot repeat itself.


Sakshi and Sumer looked at each other and the shock was visible on each of their faces but they can not forget who they are mere servants of the 2 remaining royal family.


They bowed to Vijay as Karan stood there shocked as to what was happening.


"You can stand straight Sumer sing" Vijay ordered.


"Your highness I don't have the right to look at you in the eyes," said Sumer sing.


"This is not our palace and neither am I a king here so do as I say" Vijay ordered.


"yes, your highness," said Sumer sing.


"Now tell me why are you here all these years later is there anything left to do those years ago," said, Vijay.


"I am sorry your highness but we have not come here to create problems, with your permission I would like to narrate the whole story," said Sumer sing.


"you may proceed," said, Vijay.


Sumer sing narrate the whole story to Vijay everything that veer ever told to Sakshi, Vijay was shocked to hear the truth about saiba being In love with someone who she hated the most, how could it happen, after ages, she got her daughter and now when I tell her the truth who he is what will happen then.


"you know what has to be done Sumer sing, I promised my wife I will not let history repeat itself but I didn't know destiny was waiting just for the right time," said Vijay angrily.


"What should we do your highness," said Sumer sing.


"what you mean," Vijay asked.


"reveal the truth to him and I will reveal the truth to her it's the only way and one more thing don't let his grandfather know about them right now, if he does find out later he can't do anything if everything will be over by than," said, Vijay.


"but he doesn't remember anything you highness the medicine that we have him years ago it still has his effect on him if he remembers his past he will remember that we are not his parents Sumer I don't wanna lose my son," said Sakshi pleading.


"but there is no other choice Sakshi the same medicine was given to saiba as well but the doctors said the moment they get to know each other they will remember everything and saiba hasn't forgotten some parts are still remembered who killed her mother," said, Vijay.


"it will kill him your highness isn't there any other way," Sakshi asked hopefully.


"no there isn't," said Vijay clearly.
...............................................................

"no Sumer I can't tell him if I do I will lose him forever," said Sakshi crying.


"it the only way to save them," said Sumer sing.

"mom, dad I don't understand what's going on what are you talking about," Karan asked anxiously.


"We are talking about suryaveer sing son of his highness king Raghu veer sing and we are the only servant of his father's alive my name is Sumer Walia said Sumer proudly.


"what," Karan asked shocked.


"yes, and his real father the king has died a long time ago while his mother is in a mental asylum," said Sakshi sobbing.


"but who killed his mom," Karan asked.


"princess Nandini Rudra prathab now known as saiba R prathab," said, Vijay.


"you mean the person veer is in love with is his dad's murderer said Karan shocked.


............................................................

veer was waiting Infront of Saiba's hostel impatiently, usually, it's saiba waiting but today it was veer, he looked at the door and then the watch and back again at the door. suddenly veer heard the voice of her heels. he turned around and was lost completely.


"ouch, that hurt".. said veer keep his hand on his heart...


veer felt like he was about faint, looking how utterly beautiful she was looking which she didn't have the right too.


"shall we go," said saiba snapping her fingers?

veer came back from dreamland.


"yes, let's go," said veer happily giving her his hand.


she took hold of his hand and started to go.
.....................................................

In college after 2 hours.


"oh, gosh veer I am so tired," said saiba.


"The night has just started and you already got tired," said veer smearing.


"haha very funny I have been dancing since we have arrived" saiba complaint.


veer took a small box from his pocket and held it in front of her.


"for me," said saiba excited.


"no for pinky of course for you," said veer teasingly.


she opened the box and looked at the heart shape locked which held 2 names saiba love veer she smiled looking at the locket.


"it's really beautiful veer," said saiba.



"well, it holds a special thing," said veer.


"What is that," saiba asked?


veer went stood behind her and took the locked in her hands and twisted in half, it became 2 lockets.


"ouch, you just broke my heart," said saiba.


"hahaha, one will stay with you and one with me and the special thing is that no one can replace it," said veer kissing saiba shoulder.


and finally, an Indian romantic song came and veer hold saiba wrest and took her to the dance floor. he kept his one hand on her waist while holding her hand on the other, while she kept one hand on her chest and the other holding his hand.
....................................................................

"Sakshi what happens," Sumer asked.


"It's unreachable," said Sakshi.


"There is only one-way mom," said, Karan.

"what," said Sumer.


"Message him and tell him everything," said Karan.


"it's the only way," said, Karan


Sakshi took her mobile and started to type the message.
............................................................

"what the hell you mean you can't change it" pinky was screaming at someone.


"look all the teachers and the principle choose the Indian pair what the hell are we suppose to do just chill pinky I have to go," said steven.


"I need a drink," said pinky.


she went to the drink counter pinky it was the last she wanted and now it was snatched away from her as well.


she started to drink when she heard a beep, someone's mobile was kept on the counter she took it too see who was it, she unlocked it saw a message after few minutes an evil smile came on her face. she kept the mobile back.


"Ladies and gentleman and now it's time to announce the prince and the princess please hold your hearts,". Said the principal.


"saiba I am going to get a drink," said veer and left but the voice was loud and he could hear it very clear he wished this could end soon he had a big plan for him and his snow-white.


the king of this Valentine day is

"Suryaveer sing" as the applause began.


Surya veer sing saiba repeated the name in a whisper, no how could he be here, this cannot happen her body became cold, lost the sense to think anything.


veer was so excited he was walking to the stage people saw covering him from saiba view.


saiba tried to see who it was but she couldn't see as he went to the stage, his back was to them when he turned she saw it was veer, she stepped and banged into the pillar, her heart was screaming it can't be it's not possible this is just a dream her heart was slowly breaking into pieces while she lost the ability to think.


veer head hurt again and this time he closed his eyes and again he heard the same voice, that voice was hunting him again, he saw the same small girl but this time the picture was clear and he saw a gun in her hand, the blood dripping from her hands. and he kept asking. why Nandini why did you kill him why I will never forgive you never.


"are you ok veer," said the teacher?


"yes I am fine," said veer not believing what he just saw, he remembered her but how did he forget her in the first place the person who was responsible for his father's death, he was trying to remember what happened but he couldn't remember anything and his head started to payn.


and now ladies and gentleman time to revel the princess and this year Valentine princess is...


Saiba rudra prathab the applause started.... but saiba was so shocked she didn't even hear her name.


veer was confused where was saiba why wasn't she coming on the stage.


"Saiba goes on the stage," saiba Emma.


"yes, saiba goes," said, Ron.


she started to walk not knowing where was she going who are all these people.


"now place this tiara on each other heads and veer give this bouquet to saiba," said principle.


everyone applauds and started to dance, they came down from the stage.


"wow saiba, you do get away with everyone," said pinky blocking their way.


"stay away from her pinky," said veer.


"oh really veer you are actually taking her side than one who betrayed you," said pinky.


"Just shut up pinky leaves us alone," said veer angrily.


"I will veer why don't you ask her what's her real name," said pinky

.

"my name is Nandini Rudra prathab," said saiba with a dead voice.


pinky smiled with a smile that said the victory was her she succeeded in destroying them......
..................................................................

At the hostel.

Suddenly the beautiful night turn into a stormy night lighting struck again and again where the winds turned everything upside down.


They were walking silently without any emotion in their faces, veer couldn't believe pinky till he saw his parents message and then he knew his life was over, his first love turned into a nightmare. But this time he had already thought about the punishment for them.


"How can I help you, son," said a priest?


"We wanna get married," said veer.


Something in veer and Nandini expression told him not to argue further.


"Ok, come here," said the priest.


He started the rituals the mantras and soon they exchanged the virmalas and started the 7 round of pheras. It more felt like a marriage of dead bodies.


The 7round were complete veer was offered the red sindoor he put in her forehead.


"have you brought the mangalsutra," the priest asked?


"No, we have a different type of mangal sutra," said Nandini.


She saw a knife in the plate of the rituals she took it and stood up, so did veer, they turned to face each other, saiba reached to veer shirt and tore it took the knife to his left side of chest and started to write saiba the knife tearing his skin apart the blood was making his way down on the knife but veer didn't move an inch until the name was complete.


Saiba held the knife to veer and pulled the string of her gown down so her chest was clear. Veer hesitated but he began to write his name veer saiba closed her eyes when the sharp object cut her skin but she didn't move an inch the blood covered his palm and soon he let go of the knife and it fell on the floor.


Few drops of water fell on their faces but they didn't bother to look soon it started to rain but it didn't affect them they just kept walking, they were going to Their hostel the priest put a huge bandage on the wound which stopped the bleeding but they removed it once they got in the car.


They stopped and turned to each other, they knew nothing could change the fact they are enemies, veer held her waist looking into the dead eyes and moved his lips to hers and kissed her hard. They broke apart and looked at each and walked away from each other

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