Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 22

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Sorry for the confusion. Thanks for mentioning. Yes, he slammed the door, and left. Got it.

Itna Kya formality bahen? 😆 Thodi na saare details yaad rehte hain.

Crazy thought, once to control Pari or teach her a few things, Piansh use a few powers on her. Like a full power v/s power thing, and show her who is the boss!

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Crazy thought, once to control Pari or teach her a few things, Piansh use a few powers on her. Like a full power v/s power thing, and show her who is the boss!

Did that in The Dark Before The Dawn story.

But yes, the more the merrier. 😈 😈 😈

Why don't you write another one? 😃

Well, writing in English is better in a sense that anyone can read that. There were some FFs that I wanted to read but couldn't because the writers wrote in their native language. 🤔

I agree... Writing in English is better as anyone can read that.

In my case, I write the story in English and dialogues in Hindi. This helps me to catch the exact style...

But if you really feel that the essence is getting lost then you should go with Hindi. Otherwise if it's only minor, then we both should continue in English.

Well, I guess I should write in English only... Cos it will look out of place that the first two chapters are in English and the next in Hindi.

About Piya and Naman - your wish. After all, you know how you want to proceed. So whoever needs prominance, you should focus on them.

Let's see how it turns out...

Fingers crossed!! 🤞🤞🤞

Piya heroine Hain iska Matlab thodi na Hain ki saara dialogue use he de denge! 😆

Obviously I am not going to give all the dialogues to Pia only... 😆

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Did that in The Dark Before The Dawn story.

But yes, the more the merrier. 😈 😈 😈

Why don't you write another one? 😃

Yes, you did it in a good way.

I am talking in a way, which will be in a strict way. Imagine Ansh being angry and being strict, for a change. Like ofc he can't be soft always. Plus Pari needs something like that.

Don't kill me.

I might.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Yes, you did it in a good way.

I am talking in a way, which will be in a strict way. Imagine Ansh being angry and being strict, for a change. Like ofc he can't be soft always. Plus Pari needs something like that.

Don't kill me.

I might.

Yesssssss!!!! 😈 😈 😈

Nushy and Madhura...

Apart from this one, I want to write one on Rishi and Neha too... Unke baare main kabhi zyada kuch nahi likha.

Any ideas or suggestions??

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Yes, you did it in a good way.

I am talking in a way, which will be in a strict way. Imagine Ansh being angry and being strict, for a change. Like ofc he can't be soft always. Plus Pari needs something like that.

Don't kill me.

I might.

Yessss!!! I would love it... 😈 😈 😈

And sorry, no one is going to kill you... 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Nushy and Madhura...

Apart from this one, I want to write one on Rishi and Neha too... Unke baare main kabhi zyada kuch nahi likha.

Any ideas or suggestions??

Sounds interesting. But a plot you will have to think over. Like they discuss certain issues, and go with Piansh for a trip and take Saavi along. So the bonding and Siblings reveal a few secrets, and have fun.

Nikki and Nushy, Thanks!

You seem way too excited. I was thinking about a simple thing and Piansh explaining calmly, but thought at points, they have to be strict.