Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 64

Yeah pls finish the story. And I have full faith it will turn better than what you really expected yaar😁😁😁😁😁

Yippee Waiting

Heyyyy please finish what you started don't abandoned us.... We all love your writing... Please keeps these characters alive through your writing. All beautiful stories have been incomplete... Just some closure will be great !! Hoping you will continue soon.. :)

Please finish the story 😭

Please please please finish the story yaar.. have been waiting for sooo long.. ! Hope you will not abandone us.. please finish the story..!! ❤️

Omg Hyeeeeee ! I’m new here on your story ! It took me 2 whole hours to finish EVERY CHAPTER IN ONE GO !

Okay lets start from the beginning. I’m actually not that much of a fan of the show, I mean I keep tabs through insta on Serials In passing so I pretty much know whats going on. I only started watching the show when ‘Mr Bajaj’ ki track started. The show was too much of a mess back then and I honestly can’t stand Prerna’s blinding trust and sacrificial tendencies and Anurag’s overwhelming helplessness. It wasn’t really a balanced relationship as I didn’t see any give from Anu’s side. Anyways, after the track ended I stopped watching again and then now that he’s back I started to keep tabs on the show again. And let me tell youuu, YOU’RE STORYLINE IS MUCH MUCH MUCH MORE BETTER THAT WHAT THEY HAD ON THE TRACK. I love how Rishabh is slowly making Prerna a stronger person, while at the same time maintaining her warmth and loving nature by having her focused on Kukki. I know in your storyline that Rishabh doesn’t have any extramarital activities as he’s actually so FAR FREAKING GONE ON HIS OWN WIFE (for god sakes the sexual tension). it’s just Prerna’s insecurities and confusion for her own feelings that made her heart hurt. And Rishabh isn’t helping by not sharing anything with her. Though I’m positively sure that he would not deliberately break Prerna with this. This just made him more gentlemanly and it goes to show what Rishabh Bajaj himself won’t admit. That he does have a heart. And it beats for his wife MRS PRERNA BAJAJ.

Now, all of that aside, I do hope you continue this story. I’m not forcing you or anything because I know well enough that ideas and creativity can’t be forced. But I would like you to know that sometimes, Fanfic gives us fans more closure than the serial would. And sometimes it’s even okay to write them even if you no longer like the show itself. We are in love with the CHARACTERS, not what the CVS ARE MAKING THEM DO DUE TO SOME STUPID TRACKS. And with that said, I do hope that you can find it in you heart for any more inspirations to continue to write this story. You have a gift of storytelling and somewhere somehow, you’ve helped some people escape their realities and give them respite from the world through it. Never stop writing, even it’s small ficlets or even a poem. Just know that somehow, you’ll have people that will be your fans and awiat your updates.

Thank you for this story ❤️

A fan from Malaysia ☺️

Originally posted by: Sohali19

A annoying new idea struck and this teaser was born. Everyone who has written with their lovely and kind words, I cannot tell you how grateful I am. It makes writing worthwhile.

Teaser:

She was spitting mad and she was too far gone to care that she was making a spectacle of herself.

“Hey, you’re up late. Something the matter? Kuki okay?” Rishabh asked worriedly, rubbing his stubble. Her husband looked more than a little rumpled, jacket and tie laying forgotten on the table, his shirt unbuttoned. The kind of messy that made her see red. She ignored the curious eyes of Varuna Sehgal, walking over to her husband, their gazes locked.

“Everything is fine. Just came to get you. It’s pretty late.” Prerna replied, a sultry purr to her voice. She intentionally swayed her hips a little, her skin prickling with suppressed anger.

She leaned in close behind him, draping her arms over his chest in show of possession and dominance.

Was Varuna watching? Good.

Prerna nuzzled his ear for a second before taking a sharp bite to his ear. This was war. And she was going to render her philandering husband bloody. “Time to make a deal. If you don’t send her packing, I will walk into your 11 am conference tomorrow to remind you to apply your anti-rash cream and that will just be the beginning.”

He let out a strangled groan, eyes heated, a smirk spreading across his lips. “Trying to play my—”

“10 minutes. You have 10 minutes to get her out of here. Or I’m going to make your life a living hell. Leaning in closer, she pulled him closer, cupping his face in one hand.

“We’re working—”

She kissed him then. A harsh reminder of her threat. Her lips aiming to bruise. How fitting that their first kiss was born in conflict and anger. And just as quickly she broke contact before she got swept away.

“10 minutes.”

She stepped off from behind him and sauntered out of their study.

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Cheers,

Sohaa

hope all's good with you? you haven't updated in a while. anxiously waiting for the next update but sending you lots of love either way.

Hey hey hey,

I'm fine. I don't really check in too much for several reasons:

1. I didn't have much inspiration once they messed up the earlier Bajaj track.

2. I stopped watching, so no idea what is happening on the show. saw some promo of him being back and prerna looking for revenge. 'Oh, Ektaaa. Hire some better writers.'

3. I didn't think anyone wanted to read after I took a huge break.

I do have a half written update which I will try to post. <3

Stay safe and practice social distancing no matter where you are,

Sohaa

You should definitely continue with this story. It’s one of the best in this forum.

Hi I am new to india forums,just came across your ff and I read it all in one go.every chapter was amazing.

I really hope you continue.😊