Tiara's write up corner- Mayra/Beyhadh2 update pg 12( 18th April) - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hotness level increase ☺️

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow!!! This is awesome...

You are absolutely fabulous when it comes to writing MayRa passion.

Loved reading it... ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Uff so passionate mayra☺️❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hai garmii.. This is extremely hot ☺️ Awesome! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#55

TFS keep updating

An amazing write up 😎

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Well well well. It’s like the talented soul is here once again to present us with yet another beautiful story ❤️ My dear, you write romantic scenes so well! I love how you described their emotions - the nervousness, the hesitation on Maya’s part, the longing on both of their parts and finally when they unite. You paid so much attention to every little emotion :’)

Keep writing more please! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiaraa

He swore he won't return at her door again but then something was tugging at his heart.. Why? Why did she lash out? Does she feel.. what I feel?

but what i feel? what do i want?

Although his legs were taking her away from her , but mentally he was still there, standing outside of her door and waiting for her to open.

he soon reached home , clouded with her thoughts. No one noticed as usual, as he made a bee line to his room. He sat on bed holding his head. He subconsciously kept repeating her words. "Jab kiss karne ka man kiya, to maya ka chehra dikha ...per jab sath dena tha , shadi ke liye bestfriend hai na."

what was she trying to say? His heart beated fast as if they were answering his question but he had his deaf ears to them.

"Mujhe zarurat hai tumhari maya." he whispered as he closed his eyes and imagine her hands around him in a side hug. He could feel her presence next to him on bed. The mere thought of her being in the same room, relaxed him.

Rudra very slowly let her fingers do magic on him, as they rub his back to provide him comfort.

"Maya.." his voice broke and he opened his eyes to pull her more closely to him for more comfort.

He looked around there was no sign of maya in the room. He came out and began looking for her but she was not found.

He felt a sharp pain in his guts. He felt he was loosing his life in that moment. "what id she doesnt want to see me? what if she stops talking to me? No!" He was scared for himself, he was scared to loose her.

and before he could realize he was already hitting road with a jet speed. His eyes were pool of tears, he couldnt breathe, he couldnt see..he wanted her in his arms and no matter what! he was going to get the sukoon from her , whether she was willing or unwilling to give. Rudra roy have made up his mind and nothing could change this, Not even her!

"Main aa raha hu Maya!"

Go Rudy boy! Go get your princess! Don’t let anyone steal her away! ❤️

This story filled my heart :’)

Thank you for writing this!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is insanely beautiful

Please write more ☺️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

This was so hot and utterly romantic

Loved it. No one writes #MayRa passion like you..

thankyou so much tanu🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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shurkiya🤗

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