FF:Love Conquers, pt20&21(Last Pt)..pg13 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey 😊

Great update 👏 👏

Can't wait to find out what happens next 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part Three:


At DSGI Office…
Nahar finishes his meetin n rushes to Brijesh's cabin just when
Brijesh's secretary announces the Walia's..

Brijesh: Aayee Aditya Ji.. Come..

Aditya: Hello Brijesh .. Kese hain aap..

Brijesh: I am completely fine .. let me introduce u to my brothers.. Nahar and Daksh..

Nahar: Hello Gud Mornin… kese hain aap sir..

Aditya: I am completely fine n plz call me Aditya.. n this Ranveer mere chote salesaab and Pushkar our GM n a very close friend ..

Pushkar n Ranveer say hello..

Brijesh: Mr. Jai Walia nahi aaye..

Ranveer: Ji who Bhaiya ka ek important tele conference nikal aaya.. He will be joinin us shortly.. Lets continue with out meetin till then.. He will join us..

Brijesh: Oh .. Its okie…

They all get seated.. n Brijesh offers them tea n snacks.. n they start discussin abt there project..

Scene shifts..

We see Bani tryin to catch a taxi n out of nowhere a car comes n collides with her…….. tahhhhhhhhh… n Bani falls n screams in pain………

Bani: Uff……….. Ma… sayin so she faints…

A crowd is gathered there but no comes forward to help..

We see another car approachin… n comin to a halt..

Man in the car: Driver kya hua car kyun rok di..

Driver: Sir lagta hai koi accident ho gaya hai..

Man in the car: Uff ye accident bhi hona tha.. Main meetin ke liye late ho raha hun.. chalo dekhte hain..

And as the man steps out of the car we see a tall well built man in his well pressed armaani suit looking amazingly hot but havin a stern look on his face..

Man: Kya hua .. he asks the people standin near by..

Person: Sirji kisi car wali ne thook diya bechari ko kaafi chot aayi hai.. n then we see bani gainin consciousness.. Man approaches Bani..

Man: Hello.. I am Jai Walia… I think u need to go to hospital Do u think u can stand up..

Bani: Ji …… n tries to stand n falls n Jai catches her…

Jai: Here let me help u..
Driver mujhe paas ke hospital mein lejaao..

In the hospital………..
Doctor: jyaada chot nahi aayi shukar hai.. its only a sprain in ur wrist n abit bruishes on ur head nohin to worry.. .. I have written the medicine.. here u go.. tc..

Bani: Doctor mein ghar kab ja sakti hun..

Doctor: Oh aap abhi ja sakti hai paar plz apne wrist par jyaada stress mat dijiye ga..

Bani: Thank u Doctor.. n the Doctor takes their leave..
Thank u Mr.Walia Aap ne meri bahut madat ki.. n gives him a cute grateful type of smile..

Jai: Its Okie.. kya main aapko kahin drop kar sakta hun..

Bani: Ji main chalijaungi.. thanks..

Jai: No really its no problem..

Bani: Ji okie.. Bas DSGI Office tak main road par hai…

Jai: Oh I am also goin there..

Bani: I know.. I am Mr.Nahar Singhania's PA..

Jai: Aacha..toh chalen..

N then they leave for DSGI Office together..

At DSGI Office….


When Jai n Bani enter the guard greets her with a smile..

Bani: Namaste kaka.. kese hain aap..

Guard: Maine theek hun beta.. par aapko kya hua..

Bani: chotasa accident ho gaya.. khabaraye maat.. inhone bachaya..

Guard: Betiya aapna khayal rakho.. sukriya saab..

This whole conversation fascinated Jai a lot… The way Bani smiled n chatted to the guard though she was in pain.. he knew that as the doctor had said him the bruishes n sprain might start hurtin her later on…

Jai: Chalein.. Can u direct me to Mr.Brijesh Singhania's cabin..

Bani: Ji Aayee..

Jai n Bani move towards Brijesh's cabin..
Where Bani gives a friendly hi to Brijesh's secretary.. They knock n enter Brijesh's cabin ..
People in the cabin turn around to see who was it..

Before Jai cud introduce himself … Daksh n his brother's bursted out with questions..

Daksh,Nahar n Brijesh: Bani ye kya hua.. ye chot kesi.. tum theek tho ho.. kuch bol bhi chup kyun hai..

Bani: Daksh, agar tum chup ho jao aur mujhe kuch bolne do tho main kuch bolun na…

Daksh: Oh… Uff ye ladki bhi na.. says under his breath ..

Brijesh: ab tho khamosh hain hum saab aab batao kya hua..

Jai was so much surprised y were they so much worried abt her.. after all she was just a PA.. I mean he also worrie abt his employees well bein but this was really surprised to him…

Bani: Bhaisa.. who kya hain na mera chota sa accident ho gaya……. n we see Daksh palin.. n fallin in his chair..

Bani runs over to him..

Bani: Daksh main theek hun dekho.. I am completely fine.. Just a few bruishes..

Daksh now a bit angry: How cud u so careless kabhi socha hai agar tumhe kuch ho jata tho mein kya karta ..pagal… n takes her in embraces..
Seein this Jai frowned.. He didn't know y but he didn't like even this friendly embrace…

Bani: Bas Daksh.. I am Okie.. see.. Who tho Mr. Walia n Mujhe bachaya aur hospital le gaye..

Brijesh: I cant thank u enough Mr. Walia… Thank U so much u don't know what u have done for us.. Oh I am Brijesh.. Brijesh Singhania..

Jai: Its okie Mr. Singhania.. I just did what was my duty..

Daksh: Bhaisa theek keh rahe hain.. aap ne Bani ki jaan bacha kar hum khaas kar ki mujh par bahut bada aahesaan kiya hai.. Thank u so much..

Nahar: Daksh is rite.. Really thank u

Jai: Now u guys r embarrassing me plz..

Nahar: Mr. Walia Bani sirf humare liye Daksh ki saali hi nahi balki humari choti behen jesi hai….

Jai didn't know y but he felt relieved when he heard the term choti behen..
Aditya knew Jai better then nyone.. n he cud feel his earlier frownin when Daksh hugged Bani n also the relief when Nahar said that she was like there younger sister..

Adi maan maan mein.. Dal mein kuch kala hai... I hope jo main soch raha hun sach ho jaye.. n sighs..


Aditya: Chalo chalo come on guys its okie..

Brijesh: Ya lets start again with the meetin.. Bani tum bhi attend karo..

Jai: Mr. Singhania I know bani is like a sister to u n offence meant but since this meetin is a bit confidential is it rite for her to attend since she is is just Mr. Nahar Singhania's PA

Nahar: Sir firstly plz call me Nahar.. n apart from being my PA Bani is also our Business partner..
Let me introduce her properly.. She is Bani Dixit.. Apart from being Daksh's late wife Anamika's twin sister she is also 40% owner of Dixit Group..

And Jai though shocked with the turn of events didn't comment over it but said..

Jai: Glad to meet to u Ms.Dixit..n shaked hands with Bani…

……………………

what happens next.. n how jb's relation shapes lets wait n watch..

………….

Do leave your comments as to u like it or not..



Edited by kitkat_2002 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
plz continue soon.
it's so good so far
Edited by ****angel**** - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part.
liked it.
like the way JB meet...accident and Jai taking her to the hospital and then Singhania brother fussing over her....and Jai expression on knowing Bani identity
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am really loving teh way u have started off.. it seems like such a positive story.. cant wait for Jai and Bani's relationship to progress 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good for putting Jai in his place Nahar!!! Muah! <3
Edited by harshi21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
Hey 😊

Great update once again 👏 👏

Jai was getting jealous of the three bros 😆 😆

Can't wait for your next update 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4:

Jai: Lets resume with the meetin…

Aditya: Jai... As I just discussed with them the deal looks gud... But the only problem we might face is that they r here in Mt.Abu n project in Mumbai…

Brijesh: That won't be a issue Aditya... This project is very near to our heart... If required we r willin to shift there(Mumbai) for a while...

Jai: That is grt… he said with a smile... So if every thing is final then y not sign the deal...

Brijesh: Okie... Lets do so... I will prepare the papers n let u know... In the meantime I wud like to invite all of u with family to my place for dinner if u have no plans that is...

Before Jai cud refuse Aditya replied...

Aditya: Sure that will be a grt idea…
Jai gave Adi a amused look thinking what's goin in his mind n said...

Jai: Okie then we will take ur leave...

N the Walia's left...

Brijesh called up home n informed abt the dinner...

Daksh: Bhaisa if u don't mind I will join u guys after lunch... I am takin Bani out for lunch...

Brijesh gave him a knowing smile n said...

Brijesh: Haan haan u both carin on... and drop her at home... she shud rest...

Bani: Par Bhaisa main theek hun...

Brijesh: Baaniiii...

Bani: Ji Bhaisa...

We see Brijesh n Nahar engrossed in finalizing the last minute details abt the deal...

Scene shifts to a restaurant where Bani n Daksh were having lunch...

Bani: Daksh, Plz kuch bolo... Aap jab se hum yahaan aaye hain chup ho… plz... naaraaz ho aap humse...

Daksh: Bani tum jaanti ho main tumse naaraaz nahi ho sakta... its just that ki… he looked up to meet her eyes…
Bani mere liye tum mein, Pia aur Rano mein koi faraq nahi hai… But u were always close to anamika n when I see u or even Rano hurt I feel I have failed her...

Bani: Daksh… Anamika Di aap ko khush dekhna chahti thi... plz… zindagi ko phir se jeena sur kijiye... she looks behind n sees the members of Walia clan n says.. ye yahaan..

Daksh: Kaun…

Bani: Woh… Mr.Walia aur unki family…

Daksh: Haan who yahaan rukhe hue hain…

Bani: Who log humari taraf aa rahe hain...

n Aditya leads the group to there table.. n introduces everyone..

Aditya: Hello Daksh… Hello Bani... Kese hai aab tumhara haath…

Bani: Ji ab theek hun.. n smiles…

Aditya: Inse milo humari family.. Jigaysa my wife n we see a very heavily dressed lady,Nachiket mere sab se chote saale saab.. Meri ma aur massi… jai aur jigyasa ki aur ab humari.. aur ye hai meri beti anu… n we see a cute little kid of 10 yrs smiling at them …

Daksh: Namaste Massi n Auntie.. Hi Nachiket..Hi anu n bends n kisses her forehead
Bani: Hello Nachiket.. Namaste Massi n Auntie n bends down n touches their feet… they bless her n think even today girls follow our tradition.. n Aditya thinks hmmm… how I wish my wish comes true.. n then Bani hugs n kisses anu..

Daksh: Mr. Walia nazar nahi aa rahe…

Massi: Munna ka phone aaya tha.. abhi aata hi hoga..

Daksh: Aap log hume lunch ke liye join kyun nahi karte…

Aditya: Aaare nahi we wont want to intrude..

Bani: Kesi baat kar rahe hain aap Mr.Bali..

Aditya: Adi.. ye Mr.Bali kaun hai..

Bani: Okie Adi Bhaiya.. aab aap log humare saath hi lunch karein ge..plzzzzzz.. n gives him a pleadin look..

Massi: Haan theek hai.. chalo.. baath ke order karte hain.. at that moment Jai walks up to them looking a bit disturbed..

Aditya: Kya hua Jai sab theek hai na kis ka phone tha..

Jai: aaaaaaaa… Haan sab theek hai..

Aditya: though not satisfied says Chalo phir lunch karte hain…

After finishin lunch… Jai excuses himself n asks Aditya n Daksh to come for a walk as he wanted to discuss something important…
When Ranveer asked shud he join tho Jai replied..

Jai: Its okie not required ..its not related to business.. so seat n enjoy the view n smiled at the group trying to tell them that don't worry it's just a talk…

Daksh gave Bani a weird look at left with them…

Durin this time Bani was havin a nice time entertainin everyone n getting entertained in return…


When the trio(Jai-Daksh-Aditya) returned it was visible to everyone that they were disturbed ab something… especially Daksh..

Massi: Kya baat hai Adi putaar sab theek hai na..

Aditya: aa.. haan massi sab theek hai…

Daksh: Hum chalte hain… office bhi jaana hai… aap sab se shaam ko mulakat hogi.. will be waitin for u all..
Chalein Bani..

Bani: Haan par baat kya hai Daksh sab theek hai na.. u r looking……. Thinking for the right words n said.. angry n worried.. she gave a questioning look to Aditya n Jai.. Out of both Jai had a closed look on his face n Aditya gave her a reassuring smile...

Aditya: Bani tension ki koi baat nahi hai…

Daksh: Haan Bache.. sab theek n smiles reassuring at her..

Though not reassured completely… They pay there regards n take there leave…

…………………………….

What did Jai had to discuss with Adi n Daksh? Why was Daksh angry?

……………………………….


Do leave your comments…

Edited by kitkat_2002 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi all..

I have made a bit of changes in the age of various characters... the family tree is on pg1

n to all the readers who have commented thanks a ton... i never thought i cud write.. its just a try... hope u guys like it....

enjoy readin...
Edited by kitkat_2002 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part.
liked it.
what did Jai told to Adi and Daksh.
like Daksh and Bani relationship
plz cont. soon

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