FF: Tamanna Note and Promo: Page 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
wow Zuzu!!
r u plannin to make a zoo here as well😆😆😆..
well m lookin forward foe a great update..
plzzz cotn soonn.
i luv all characters.. haha Ridz older sis.. man shes hilarious😆😆
plzz cont soon..
n Mimi's FF sure r funni n guudd.
I luv readin em😳..
neways plz write part one soon..
m eagerlii waitin to read it😃

Thnxx foe da Pm hun

Lotssssa luv:Hira😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
👏 saachi the best intro ever read because its my first fan fic 😆 hahahah keep up the goodwork n i want a damn first epii RIGHT NOW 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
awesome intro. waiting for the first part.
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
hey zuzu
loved the last bit of the intro.. i like how u added new characters... can't wait for u to put prt 1 up....
:)

plz cont
Sonia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
aww!!! tht was an awsome intro!!!!👏👏...gr88 job!!!😉...i jus luv tamanas house its soo beautiful!!!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Thanks for the positive response guyss!!!
I will update Part one today and PM everyone 😳😳

Zainab
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Part 1:



Jhanki chewed on the gum, ocassionally blowing it, and then popping it with her fingernails... Her eyes crossed automatically as she tried focusing on the paper she was drawing on. She uncrossed her eyes, and drew lines over the paper.

The family room had become mess. Jhanki was sitting on her stomach, on the tiles, next to the entertainment center. Markers, pencils, and crayons were strewed across the floor.

"JHANKI!!!" Tamanna shouted, coming down the stairs. "What the hell do you think you're doing, huh?!?!"

"Tammii! Dekho, meri painting dekho. Maine sexy drawing banayi hai, dekho!!" said Jhanki, excitidly.

"Sexy drawing?? Let me see." Jhanki handed the paper to Tamanna. "What the... you call this a painting?? It's so freakin ugly, man. Get a life, girl. Pick up your retarded mess and carry your retarded self back to your room and find something useful to do," she said, rudely, and walked out of the door.

Tears streamed down poor Jhanki's eyes. She crumpled her drawing and threw it across the floor, to kitchen... where it landed hear Taahir's feet, as he was coming in from the garage.

"Jhanki?? Tum ro rai ho?? Kya hua meri pyaari behen ko? Kisne sataya??" He said, walking into the family room. She had now thrown all the markers and stationary all across the room, and was on her stomach, on the ground, crying. "Jhanki??" Taahir patted her hair. "Dekho main tuhmare liye kya laya..." He pulled out a Hershey Symphony (my fav :P) chocolate bar from his pocket and placed it on front of her. She immidiadly got up and hugged her brother.

"I love you, bhaiya! Tum sabse best ho." She'd call him bhaiya... even though she was older. Taahir hugged her back.

"Ab batau... Kisne meri pyaari behen ko rulaya?" He asked her.

"Tammi ne!" She pointed at the door with a growl on her face. "Ussne muhje retarded bulaya! I don't like Tammi, I only like you, bhaiya."

"Aww, Tammi itni bhi boori nai hai, chalo choro yeh sab baatein, chocolate khalo, jaldi se, warna Mumma dekh legi to..."

"Hehee!!" She wiped her tears and sat on the couch, munching on the chocolate, as Taahir cleaned up all her mess...

It's short, but I hope you guys like it!
Edited by Veiledbeauty - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

I'm the first, I'm the first, I'm the first... yes i am the first hehhehee😆

Yeh Jhaanki bari pyari hai zenny alien babes... par Taami itni rude kyun hai.. uff the complete opposite 😕

Aww Taahir is such a sweet brother 🤗

Abh batao next part kabh araha hai😆

Lubna😳

Edited by na2339 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
sweet part. Taahir is really sweet.
loved it.
will be waiting for your next part. please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
awww Zuzu!
first part was jus fab hun...
aww i luv da relationship bt Tahir n Jhankii.. shoo sweett..
n Tammy shes one attitude gurl ehh.. y is she like tht😕 Weirdo😆😆..
neways Hershes is ma fav chocolate too😉😆😆 YUUMMMYY😳😆😆..
newayss dis part was too gud over all.. kinda short par chalega.. sincce ur other FF was long!!
nexx tyme i want a long update okie dokie😃

thnxx foe da Pm hun

Lotsssa luv:Hira😛
Edited by hira_786 - 18 years ago

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