Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 36

Awesome chappy Di

Wish to read their love confession

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

when will the next chappy come?? 😆

Originally posted by: kriya_12

when will the next chappy come?? 😆

Fabulous update Rashmi😉

Jo was restless and also not able to sleep (Ofcourse bcz of her devil husband🤣)

Jalal too was not able to sleep (bcz of his own action 🤣) even when he was spending his ni8 with hukka 😡

Yippiieee finally jo get freedom (Good one devil husband)🥳

Its good that they both wanted to give a chance to their relation. Jalal trust her😳😃 thats soo nice & Positive. Jo was unsure about their relation but Mainavati's advice works as a positive for their relation. 😊

The game of dice part was so amazing (because they started to share their secrets & opinions). Jalal is smart ha hukka ko ullu bna k jo k pass aa gya🤣

Maham 😡 Such an evil person, she try to kill mainavati, but our maan saves her😎. Hahaha the way maan was talking with Adhgha & Munim is so brave even he has not fear of jalal.

Uff the sword fight (My fav part of jodha akbar serial)❤️ Awesome😉

Maan - jo part was hilarious🤣 jealous jalal (I was laughing so hard by reading this), Jalal is actually a love sick puppyand I love to read maan's part, he is cutieee😉❤️

Wrong time pe ending diya😆 He kissed her 😳 "You're mine Jodha I won't let you go away from me"! Get that in your head"! Jaan' e' Jalal"! I love this possessive jalal.👏

Again an awesome update, enjoyed alot.

Thanks for the update.😃

"As I told you I will give my review later on with each update 😃the lack of time didn't let me do it back then so here I am with my review on your masterpiece from start"!😉

However when I start writting about it🤓 I find a change and realize you seem to working on it 😲 nevertheless enough of my talks let's start with my review

.Chapter 1👏

"No one can stop me"! From getting what I desire to get"! No one mean no one"! than how that little chit will stop me"? Huh..

"Well that's so overconfident"! 😳 "men you better don't underestimate women"! Cause they out-smart you anytime any-moment in any-way 😆

"Well even a fierce unbeaten warrior"! Get to taste defeat once in his life"!.. no matter what "! , You shouldn't underestimate your opponent little brother"!..

"Woo that's one hell wise advise 👍🏼 "that's how elder should be"! A mentor a guide wise one"! 👏

"Neither I underestimate my opponent"! Nor I give importance to them"!

"Well that's sound so me"! 😆

"If you ever got defeated by Girl"! Then your heart will be blame for your defeat"!

"I see a prediction of love here already😉 "but that's so like words of my friends"!😆

Seek your forgiveness Princess Do forgive me for being rude to you...

🤣"i bet he didn't mean it"! 😆

I will forgive you if you let me accompany you for hunting...

"Sister mode activate never leave a chance to take advantage of it"! To turn the situation in their favor"!😆

"I enjoyed throughout the update in-fact the sibling banter was best one till now"! Very much relatable and meaningful"!👏while the way you wrote description of scenes dressing style emotions and place mind blowing 👏

Chapter 2

"Before letting her highness injured why you all didn't died...how dare you let even scratch on her...is this your braveness"!

"Girl that's so rude of you"! They know better how to do their job"! I know it's her concern and love for her sister"! But again the way she is saying have me disappointed"!

No need to show anger on things which are already done... And I don't think our soldiers are the one at fault princess Jodha"!..

"Thank heaven someone try to put some sense in her"! Poor soldier I pity them"! They risk their life"! But a single failure in their job"! And they had to endure such a humiliation"!

listen Jodha I know it's getting intolerable for us to watch Mughals "! crossing their limit and do nothing to stop them but don't forget we had peace treaty with them"!...So be patient and do nothing to get entire Amer in trouble"!...

"Well I find it cowardly"! They know the enemy"! They know how much their people is suffering cause of their enemies pathetic move"! Yet just for the sake of mere peace treaty to keep promise"! given by former king they're ready to endure all this"! What about their oath as royal"!

"for making Victory your slave you need to know yourself and your enemy better"! "And here we know ourselves our enemy as well"!

"Commander Ajit sent a letter to Mughal which should mention"! all the destruction caused by their man's"! And dictate them we don't want war in the Honor of peace treaty made by late king"!

"I am impressed by the fact how she is so determined to teach her enemies lesson"! but she isn't being ignorant to her people feeling who is aware of their enemies strength"! And feel threatened by them"! she is boosting their confidence and trying to do everything which can avoid them going on the path of war"! that's a move of wise leader"!

"If they're known as lion", "than they should know we Rajput tear the jaw of Lions while playing"!

"Girl I prefer to have it as the dialogue of update awesome"! This was superb"!

"Fantastic update this gave insight of the people"! who Honor the word freedom and valued the life"! and emotion of human more then the desire to have power"! Well written update the first and second was more like giving insight to two empire dweller life and people who are in power and you did splendid job in it that's praiseworthy

Chapter 3

"yes you have entire time to think"! but i suggest you should accept the Peaceful Offer "! As who would like to go for destructive path of war"!

"No one but you definitely love to go on the path which led you under six feet ground men"! If you value your life get yourself out before they lost their cool"!

"shall i go for his head or his half body which is already hanging in grave Your highness'! Bloody old head I am so going to love sending him to his rightful place that's none other hell"!...

"Well the intention is pretty much threatening but the way it's come it's sound hilarious"! You have way with words author I must admit they're pretty much interesting"!

"so no matter how good we are in ruling we are girls ", you all can ditch us for own benefit "! There was time when Brave-hearts in our clan would fight to death for Honor of mere shelter seeker"! But now you people even fear the the thought of war even for your own queen"! You're ready to sacrifice us for protecting your neck"!

"Well that's sound awful not cause of what she said"! But the way it's been said"! I know the intention behind the words were to earn the support of people whole heartily"! But it's had odd effect on me the moment I read it even reading it make me feel bad for the people who sacrifice everything for their dear ones life peace happiness Honor and freedom"!

"True we might not be ready for war"! But we picked weapon to fight when time arrives"! History is witness of our bravery whenever our Honor our Subjects our Motherland been in trouble"! We fought till our last breath"! We cannot spare our life today by accepting marriage proposal and let them destroy us slowly tomorrow"!

why they use word of past why they don't act as per present I seem to read this phrase more then once as if they're just carrying out the legacy of righteous generous brave-heart warrior clan of Rajput"! In a way more then boosting confidence of people they're burdening them by the responsibility"! anyway their point was right they cannot accept proposal and give them free hand to destroy them slowly with ease no matter what

We don't need to go on war just to carry out the legacy of our ancestors ", which over-flows with their righteous generosity and bravery"! We had to fight for ourselves for own reason"! To protect our subject our Honor our culture"! But it's pity just for the sake of sparing our neck today we are ready to die tommorrow"! After all just by holding the sword people doesn't become warrior"! So I am ready"!

alright you didn't even take trouble to answer it was well spoken by Elder princess Jodha just remind them when you think to take step back remember the land the freedom was earn by uncountable blood loss and sacrifice of ancestors you cannot give up on thing which was serve to you in hard way whereas Avantika remind them we don't need to be at war just to keep up with what we get but for ourselves for our future for our present for thousands of people we held dear the ancestor who sacrifice everything weren't born with extraordinary power they with time polish their confidence and skills the courage to fight to go and extent for their love ones serve the strength like no other and that's what the people need today

"no your highness we are ready for war", "even we aren't prepare than we are going to prepare", "let them come as our foe we will make sure each one of them regret to even to even thought to have us bow"!

Wow what a line not bad that's warrior speaking I like how they're well aware of pro and cons of war yet they're ready for other it may sound they have option to back from war but in real it's not people with Honor rather die then live without dignity Raised heads can bow but bowed heads can never rise

let me get my hand on those two Little witch I will make sure ", "they pay for this aaah"!...

this line made me laugh lot his word little witch boy she is no less then you be respectful or you're going to pay badly

That Rajput look calm by outside but carried storm inside"!

That moved me this was to good it was inner thought of Jalal but it's give clear insight of how Rajput were just cause they doesn't seem to expressive of their emotion by action doesn't mean they're emotionless and this is for every human be it man women or anyone

Anyway don't know how other find the letter for me by Jalal view it was like rubbing salt on sore wound but I appreciate the courage of Shaurya and his cool head even though royal doesn't kill messenger but with their short tempered persona you can never be sure but the letter was very meaningful in my view one side it's say we wish to carry out the treaty we have and Honor the vow taken by late king, and other side it's warm we won't hesitate to welcome you with weapon of you're coming with intention to harm us I must say timing was wrong but it was good and very well written

"No don't do the mistake to think that ", cause Our highness believe to fight fairly"! a little misunderstanding can be never the cause of bloodbath"! that's the reason she wish to clear the misunderstanding before it's get to late"!...

"Ok how many of them talk about this one Jalal was right he isn't mere messenger he does hold some special position in court anyway while reading the letter and later seeing how he exploded I thought it's wrong timing but then I realized he didn't let him read it completely but the gift the real attacker hand over to him as prisoner make me know she was aware what happen with them and then I realized not only it was wishful and warning fill letter but it was teasing type as well but here Shaurya line make us know Jodha isn't short tempered hot headed girl but she is very much thoughtful when it's comes to her people as well true example of befitted leader

as like Rajput we Mughal to keep our words"! so we were friend we are friend we will be friend Always"!...

You sure of what you said Men or you said it just for appearance nevertheless it was cool as the misunderstanding got clear

Zahir is their anyway by which we can get our hands on That Princess Jodha"! " without any bloodbath she is pretty intriguing to me"! i will like to have a word with her personally and obliviously in private"!

"Someone seem eager to meet somebody and knowing our author by her previous work I bet she won't let the wish left as wish let's see how the story go and how they meet

"I don't care what trouble you go through we aren't going to buy such a pets for our Army"!...No matter what"!

"She seem to always have clear mind about what she want "! as much I find it appreciable it's seem very much odd as well"! Like she is royal a princess , she is girl a human there is always difference between two even if they're one"! A balance is always needed so far I think she just got her way around by turning situation and answer in her favor it will be worth watching when she even trying to get them in favor she won't able to do so how she will deal with the situation then

"Over all awesome chapter"! Even though I want to talk about every dialogue and view but it's not possible as it will increase your load"! anyway your update leave no confusion at all if one minute we are like this isn't cool then next minute we will find it appreciable and that's awesome

Chapter 4

"when they have no intention to revolt against us"! than why they are trying to get entire Rajputana as there Ally"?

"They're just trying to stay alert"! And prepared for worse"! In case you do something wrong"! after all you're unpredictable with you action more over as leader and very dedicated toward their responsibility it was ought to expect by them to stay alert

"No I don't"! but be careful"! In the land of enemy even predator can become prey"!

"Uff he and his lines so bang on the scene"! I like the way he express his concern and warn them to stay cautious

(The thing Jodha hate is when someone tell her what to do, what not to do).

That's so me and I bet it's so relatable for everyone but girl she control her annoyance not bad it's appreciable

"We didn't knew that the Princess of Amer will be such coward"! to turn her back to enemy to save her neck"!...

"Even I didn't knew"! you guys would be this cruel to attack on two lone girl that's so low of them to do

Forgive me your highness"! but You didn't taught us to run away"! ...instead of facing the enemy"! "Cause it's not bravery"!...

"Girl you got gut to cross questions your princess"! but you lacked the wisdom to know"! When and where to argue where not to it's not the time to talk or show bravery

"I know but bravery is not when we fight entire army and get ourselves killed"! "bravery is when we admit we can't fight alone and try to get our way out"!... "now do I say... be practical and run"!...

"Well said I give you ten point for such a line"! I am so glad to see she isn't bunch of Fame seeker fool who would prefer to die just to show bravery she is very much acting practical and wise for now which is appreciable

Lailita you go and reach the border and alert our people"!... I am going to help Her highness if death is what we are going to get by standing on her highness side"!... than let it be I am not going to let her face those attackers alone"!..

"Ok that's good plan as much I was expecting her to run away I wanted the attacker to pay for attack"! But here her words was really something I am touched by her loyalty jo is really lucky and sane goes for the people of Amer

"Even being enemy you know nothing about your opponent"!...but now you will know in better way"!

"Indeed they don't that's really foolish of them but no worries you will make them know that to in worse way possible

"So not coward to run away "! but not brave either to face us with sword"? huh...

"Playing the game manipulation to bad you're not even near the word call Warrior how come Ja have such a people by his side they're so opposite of him

"Your weapons are like you no strength to fight thus"! You need to manipulate your opponent"! Like coward and wicked person"!

"True I agree with her so far they attacked like coward, now when she is fighting back instead of defeating her by weapon they're trying to manipulate her into giving in by pushing her to get in combat fight to bad but I like her line so good

Where the hell on earth you guys went"? that you all are back in such a pathetic condition"!

"I don't know but this cracked me up it was hilarious the way he yelled and vented out his frustration by watching their condition was

From merciless well skilled warrior war strategist"! My man become Abductor"! What you all thought"? I will be pleased by this action of yours"!

"True bang on dialogues again seriously what makes them think for a Commander like Jalal anything can be worth than the blood of his men"! they're idiots for sure to think he will be happy by seeing someone being abducted by his men

You all should be ashamed that two lone girl"! Over power you look at yourself"! All of you look awful"!

that's spot on they deserve this humiliation for the sin they commit but the way Jalal is saying it's

"I know now it was your idea"! You fulfill my wish in such in-degnified manner"! At cost of my men blood putting Mughal empire Honor on stake"!

"I like his cool demeanor of venting out his frustration and disappointment and his words are so reasonable and right he is thinking about everything but he isn't oppose by the idea of taking advantage of situations either

you know what"? by the grace of Almighty "! I am blessed with two legs"! but being royal by birth Rajput by blood"! I am no coward"! who will run away turning my back to cowards like you"!..

gosh I so like this girl she is truly something, even in such rough condition she is venting out her frustration like they work for her and going to obey her but her line at what she is was

Damn you bamboo"! can't you hold my hand "! In a bit civil manner"!...

bamboo uff she is making fun of their height anyway more then their height it's their action the way she is yelling

God give me strength, so i don't kill her for Indecent behavior. she really have sharp tongue.

"Did I read correct"! kill seriously dude you even get the idea of killing her just by hearing her yelling what you would do when she would eat your head by her anger

"I dare you speak to me in this manner"!.. and next minute you will lose you very tongue"!...

"Oh my I am scared seriously men you have no idea how to be with women they can starve themselves but be quite of polite never specially if they're Stubborn head hot headed short tempered

so answer me honestly who you are"!...and trust me one lie by you and you will"!... find yourself under six feet ground soon"!...

"Ok that's so my line I often say when I am angry and want something in my way even though no one got under six feet ground at my hand but this threat work wonderfully

"I dare you step any closer"! I will sure make you pay gravely"!

This warning Their verbal spat and way of dominating each other by warning is so humor fill but this show how they match each other in a way of strong spirit an eye for eye way

"This chapter was very intriguing in the term of twist and humor emotion and action, didn't see the abduction the meet of lead the conspiracy on way in start but you done amazing job in writing each part I let Princess and her mother conversation part slid cause of word limit but I like the way how both were concern for Jodha true example of family person and loving human awesome update author keep it up

Jalal can be jealous of jodhas nephew too, but can also sleep around within a blink of an eye. Those times🤢

Awesome chapter jalal n jodha both are not able to sleep both are thinking about each other even jalal is with his other begum but kept thinking about geet n they thought to give a chance to their relationship n mainavati advice work in their relation n maham is really evil n try to kill mainavati but maan Singh save her n jalal is possessive for jodha n thnxx for pm me