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Posted: 6 years ago

loved it

superb

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Posted: 6 years ago

Aww arjun was about to confess but got interrupted

Who is this Karan???

Lol boys r getting jealous

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome storyline...read all the parts in a go...😅😅waiting for u to continue .....update soon

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When r u going to update the next one..?

Dont make us wait for long plzzz...😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice Part

Sakshi hurt her finger watching Virman fight🤣🤣

The case is interesting.

Before Sameer was being jealous now Arjun also will be😆

Why Riya hugged Karan if he was ex ??

Thanks for PM.

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CHAPTER 55

Manvi and Shree went tothe rest of them while Arjun looked shocked, Virat came towards him and said:

Arjun, they just saidex. That means she is not in a relationship with him now

A: you sure? (Confused)

Vir: ARjun, I thinkafter falling in love you have forgotten that ex means not in a relationship,break up, not more together

A: oh right (he took adeep breathe)

Sa: sir, why do youlook so unhappy?

Arjun and Virat gotscared because they didn’t notice that Sakshi was standing behind them

Vir: Sakshi, you scaredus

Sa: why?

A: we thought that youwere someone else

Sa: someone else?

Vir: oh ho Sakshi, ifbefore Riya, someone else finds out that Arjun likes Riya, then won’t it be weird for Arjun?

Sa: I don’t know what you mean but you guys should join the meeting, they are talking about the case

A: oh yes, how can I forget? Thanks a lot Virat (sarcastic)

Vir: for what?(Shocked)

A: I was going there when you came and talked to me

Vir: me? Haw Arjun that`s so mean. I came only to help you

A: help?

Vir: because you looked so miserable when Riya ran to Karan

Arjun cleared his throat and went to the dinner table where everyone was

At the dinner table

R: oh god, I can’t believe that I am seeing you after so many years

Kar: nice to see you too, my sweetie

Sh: hi bhaiya

Kar: oh Shree, you haven’t changed a bit. Except that you turned out to be handsome. You must have lots of girls waiting in line for you

Shree laughed sheepisly while Liza just shook her head

L: more like his gadgets waiting in line for him

Sh: hey

Kar: so this must be your disaster ki malkin

L: wait, you know me?

R: Shree was close to Karan before Shree went to college and Karan went to USA but they kept in contact

Ay: hello Mr Karan

Kar: call me Karan, naam to suna hoga

Ay: ofcourse (she giggled a bit making Sameer roll his eyes)

Man: hello ji… I mean bhaiya

Kar: choti, nice to see you again

Arn: looks like we don’t have to introduce them

Kar: oh wait, this is my fiancé Anushka. We met 2 years ago at Arnav and Khushi`s wedding and just 6months ago, we got engaged

Anushka: hi everyone, I am Anushka Khanna

https://media1.bollywoodhungama.in/wp-content/uploads/2017/12/Zareen-Khan-and-Karan-Kundra-do-a-photo-shoot-for-their-film-1921-2.jpg (Karan Kundra)

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https://ste.india.com/sites/default/files/2017/01/07/561007-anusha-dandekar.jpgAnushka

R: oh finally I am meeting you Anushka. I thought you were going to be a bachelor for the rest of your life Karan

KaR: so mean yaar

Sameer sighedin relief

An: it`s nice to meet you, Riya. I heard many thingsabout you

R: I hope not bad things

They laughed

Ay: but Riya, how do you know one of the most topmodel?

R: actually we dated, when I was 19 and he was 22 but we knew each other from high school

L: you dated him? Why did you break up?

R: because we found out that we just liked each other as friends and nothing more so we decided to stay friends

Kh: how long did you date?

R: 6 months, more or less, maybe less

Kar: I am happy that we stayed friends

R: me too

Maan: okaaay. Now shall we go back to the case?

Sam|M: sorry MAan, we got carried away

Maan: no worries. But we need to hurry because the show starts day after tomorrow

Arjun then entered the dining room

S: where were you, Rawte? We need to start the meeting

A: why, RAhtor? Without me, you can’t even start a meeting?

S: oh shut up, RAwte. Don’t give yourself that much importance. I only said that because you are second in command and I don’t like to repeat myself to you

A: whatever. Just start already (he saw that Riya was sitting next to Karan and Anuskha, he tried not looking at them but failed,he and Virat didn’t know that Karan and Anushka were engaged)

Riya in her mind: what happened to Arjun sir? He was so sweet just 5 minutes ago and was nervous about something. But now he changed like 360 degrees

Maan: I have an idea. Why don’t you guys go as models for the fashion show? No one knows that you are from ETF

S: Mr ACP Khurana, we don’t have any experience and do you think that the clothes will even fit us which they designed?

Arn: no problem, I can make the changes myself. Afterall I am ASR

Kh: and I can give you tips plus we got the best models here to teach

Sid: I agree with the idea. What do you think ARjun,SAmeer?

A: I don’t see any other options to protect the models and find out who is behind it

S: fine (he sighed); we have only one day to learn and prepare ourselves. Also we need to secure the location

Maan: don’t worry. I already asked my men to do it.We need to check tomorrow

Arn: and I have already told the security gaurds that no one should enter unless it is me or Khushi

Ay: that’s great jiju. But should we do now?

Arn: start training

Man: huh? What do you mean?

Gunj: he means ramp walk

Vir: don’t you just have to walk?

Man: no, you chep. We need to learn how walk better and stylish. But how would you know that?

Vir: Listen, dedh futiya, you …….

He couldn’t complete his sentence because he saw Liza and Riya glaring at him and Manvi so he kept quiet

R: so, let’s begin

Ch: even me?

Ar: don’t worry Chotu; we also have room for you

Ch: thank you

Arn: so let`s get started. Girls, you give yourmeasurements to Khushi and boys you should tell me yours so I can begin with thechanges. But I think not many changes are going to be needed.

Sa: why jiju?

Ar: because you girls are already beautiful that Iam afraid no one will look at my designs

Kh: ha ha very funny. Flirt

Ar: you are fida at my attitude

Kh: arnav! Shut up. And let’s begin our work

So the modification started and the training started

The girls were learning from Anushka and the boys were learning from Karan (Arjun was being Grumpy but he knew that this was necessary for the case)

They were so concentrated that they didn’t realize that it was lunch time but Liza noticed Gunjan looking tired and she saw the time and she said:

Guys, we need to eat. Don’t forget that we need to rest and eat to reenergized

S: I agree with Liza, we should take a rest

Maan: if you guys don’t mind, I know a place it delivers food at home and it`s totally safe

S: oh really? And how do you know that?

Maan: because the owner is my wife Geet

S: wife? You are married?

Maan: ofcourse, why can`t I be married?

S: no reason

Ay: I saw her picture, she is really beautiful

R: really? Can we see her pic?

Maan: here, I carry her picture in my wallet, look

https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-UnW4Hybq-r4/Tbkpj7YMwLI/AAAAAAAAAX0/6BJEHEqK1rE/s1600/Drashti%2BDhami1.jpg

Everyone including samjun looked at the pic

L: she is so pretty, right guys?

Everyone including samjun agreed

Man: how did you meet her, maan bhai? Oh sorry, may I call you bhai?

Maan: no problem, issi bahane I get a sister free and I met her during a case, she was a witness and I was protecting her for awhile and we fell in love during it

Ay: how romantic, I thought that this only happens in movies. Kaash I can get someone like that

Sameer looked at her when she said that

Maan ordered food and they all ate while Arjun was looking at Riya who was talking with Karan and Anushka, Virat shook his head at ARjun`s desperation

After eating they resumed at their practice and work, after dinner Maan left from there and they all decided to rest early. Riya was going to her room when Arjun called her

A: riya, I have to tell you something

R: ji sir, boliye

A: I…I (in his mind deep breath Arjun, you can do this)

Riya was looking at arjun while thinking: what happened to sir, first time he is in loss for words

Karan: arre sweetie, come here I want to ask you something

R: coming, wait (to Karan), sir you were saying?

A: nothing important, you can go

R: sure sir? I mean I can listen, I have time

A: later (he left from there)

Riya looked at him going to his room

R: what happened to aRjun sir? Is he fine?

Kar: sweetie, where are you?

R: coming

The next day was so going to be hectic so Riya didn’t get any time to talk with her Angel, she went to sleep early

Next day

At the noonat the venue where everyone was practicing

Anushka was walking on the ramp but suddenly she lost her balance and she fell but didn’t fall on the ground because Arjun was holding her with her one hand

A: Are you ok?

An: yes, I am fine. Thanks for helping me

A: no problem

He made her stand and she thanked him again. Riya was talking to Sakshi about her research about the drugs trafficking when she saw the scene and she broke the pen which was in her hand

Sa: Riya, you broke my pen (sad)

R: oh sorry (shocked), I didn’t mean it, I will buy you a new one

Sa: promise

R: promise

L: Ri, come here. Khushi di is waiting for you

R: coming, I will be back (to Sakshi)

Sa: ok

After Riya left, Sakshi jumped with excitement

Sa: yes, I thought that only Arjun sir will get jealous because he doesn’t know that Karan and Anushka are engaged but here di knows that they are engaged but still she is getting jealous

Sakshi did a mini bhangra, Sid saw that and smile to himself and said:

Pagal but cute

Sakshi saw that Sid was looking at her and she blushed

Sa: what is this feeling, why is my face feelinghot? Lagta the temperature is getting warmer

She left from there when she heard Riya was callingher

Liza was helping Gunjan with the guest list when Virat came to her

V: yaar, super star, where is your phone? Mom was calling you and because you didn’t pick up, she called me

L: oh, I left it accidently at home but thanks

Virat gave her the phone and she was talking to her mom

L: haan mommy, it’s final? Everything is done? Ok love you bye

L: thanks rockstar

Virat looked at her faced flushed and asked:

Are you ok?

L: I am fine, why what happened?

V: you look red

L: oh, it’s just the weather

V: ok (Not satisfied with her answer)

Shree was talking to his mom on the phone at the same time

Sh: Hyām̐ mā, Satyi'i?Hogaya? Mā, tōmākē bhālabāsi, bye (yes, maa, really) (I love you maa)

Sakshi came and she stood behind him and asked: kya hogaya (what is done)?

Shree got scared and looked at her

Sh: SAkshi, you scared me

Sa: am I so scary? (Pouted)

Sh: no ofcourse not, you are so pretty and cute but I thought that it was someone else

Sa: oh, kyun?

Sh: I will tell you later but first let`s go and work before the sadu sir and khadoos sir see us and will saywhat the and samjhe ya samjhavoon

Sakshi laughed and said: let`s go

Scene shifts to Ayesha

She was standing on a stool;she was looking for something from the cupboard, she found it and was climbing down but lost the balance but Karan helped her to balance herself

Ay: oh thanks, Karan

K: no probs, can you get down?

Ay: yes

She got down and Karan and Ayesha got busy with talking

SAmeer was talking to ARnav about the security arrangements when he saw Ayesha and Karan talking to each other, he almost couldn’t concentrate on what he saw saying and what Arnav was saying

SAmeer in his mind: this Karan is such a flirt, much bigger flirt than Virat. The way he is talking to Ayesha it doesn’t look like that he is engaged

Chotu was helping Riya andKhushi when Chotu suddenly asked Riya:

Ri, tell me something, how did you and Karan meet?

R: actually when I was a junior at high school, it was my first day and some seniors where ragging the juniors. They told me to kiss a senior

Kh: such bullies

R: I know, but they though tthat I was an easy target but I showed that I wasn’t weak. I twisted a senior`s hand and pushed him on the floor

Ch: kya? And then what happened?

R: another senior tried to hit me but that`s when Karan showed up and held his hand

FLASHBACK

Karan: don’t eventhink about it

The senior: she hit us first

Karan: don’t think that I don’t know what you were doing,the principal already saw you and get ready to be expelled

The seniors got scared when they saw the principalglaring at them

The principal took them to his office

Kar: Are you ok? That was some awesome moves

R: yeah, I am fine. Thanks for the compliment, you knowaurat ki kabilyat par kabhi shak nahi karna chahiye (you should never doubt awoman`s ability)

Kar: I agree by the way I am Karan Kundra

R: Riya Mukherjee

They shook their hands

Flashback ends

Kh: o wow

Ch: wow Riya, you are so cool

R: I know (she pulled the invisible collar)

They laughed and concentrated at their work again, they didn’t notice that ARjun was standing behind them and was listening at their conversation

Arjun in his mind: I have to confess very soon, it seems like Riya and Karan have a long history together.What if they want to rekindle their love again? I have to hurry

After finishing their work,they went back home and slept early as the next day was important so Arjuncouldn’t even say anything to Riya

The next day

Last preparation was going on; Maan was checking the venue with his team while our ETF were getting ready and the guests were already seated

In the female dressing room,the girls were ready

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1RBkgHVXXXXaFXXXXq6xXFXXX4/Red-Romantic-Sexy-Trumpet-Mermaid-wedding-dress-with-white-embroider.jpg(Ayesha`s dress)

https://image.dhgate.com/0x0/f2/albu/g5/M01/87/C1/rBVaJFkme5mAH3FJAANlvsmgNcU826.jpg(Manvi`s dress)

https://heavyeditorial.files.wordpress.com/2016/09/616bg-uotl-_ul1500_.jpg?quality=65&strip=all&strip=all(Liza`s dress)

https://jaksflowergirldresses.com/bridal116.jpg(Riya`s dress)

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1lu9rSFXXXXaBXVXXq6xXFXXXy/ADLN-Twee-Stukken-Trouwjurken-met-Bloemen-Scoop-A-lijn-Witte-en-Rode-Bruidsjurk-Aangepaste-Robe-de.jpg_640x640.jpg(Sakshi`s dress)

Ay: Ri, you really look like a real bride

Ri: thanks, you look like a princess

L: and me guys? (She twirled around)

R: hm, like beauty queen

L: I do, don’t I?

Man: di, and me?

Ay: like a prom queen

Man: aww, thanks di

Sa: and me?

L: you look like an Angel

Sa: thanks Liza

Gunjan, Khushi and Anuskha came from outside

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https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1mLiQSFXXXXbmXVXXq6xXFXXXN/red-champagne-party-gown-women-one-shoulder-long-greek-goddess-bridesmaid-dress-gowns-under-100-for.jpg(Khushi`s dress)

https://4.imimg.com/data4/KF/GL/ANDROID-41690576/product-500x500.jpeg(Showstopper) Anushka`s dress

Ay: wow, guys. You look like as if you have enteredfrom a fairy tale

Kh: awww thanks and how are the dresses? Anyproblem?

R: no, it fits just perfectly

L: GUnjan di, are you feeling allright?

Gun: yes, I am fine

Man: Di, are you still not fine?

Gunj: just feeling tired but tomorrow I am going tothe doctor

Ay: ok

kh: Arnav just messaged me, everything is undercontrol, let`s hope nothing goes wrong, you ok Anu?

An: I am fine, just some anxiousness that I amfeeling

R: don’t worry, Anu. We are here we will protect youand Karan (She squeezed her hand)

An: thanks Riya, you guys really are great, you dothis everyday and I am here getting scared

Ay: don’t think that we don’t get scared; we justdon’t say and show it. We need to be strong for each other

Kh: guys, let`s hug

Gunj: di, are you emotional?

Kh: ofcourse I am

The girls hugged each other while laughing, Khushigot a message that they need to be on stand by

Kh: girls, let`s go, we are going backstage

R: oh, I need to use the washroom

Sa: Riya, you go, we will be waiting outside (Sakshi messaged Virat with Liza`s mobile and deleted it)

R: ok, I will be there before you know it

Gunj: let`s go

The girls went outside and Riya went to the washroom

The scene shifts to the male dressing room, the boys were ready

https://www.tartineetbeurre.co.uk/images/cate_6/640/2018-New-Men-Red-Suit-ThreePiece-Set-Highgrade-Elegant-Mens-Wedding-Dress-Size-S6XL-Male-Suit-Jackets-amp-Vests-amp-Pants-Suits-maz0.jpg
this for Arjun

https://cdn11.bigcommerce.com/s-pkla4xn3/images/stencil/1280x1280/products/14966/145117/Jackets-Vest-Pants-three-2018-New-Men-Suits-groom-wear-Slim-fit-Custom-Bridegroon-Business__35948.1544527018.jpg?c=2?imbypass=on

(for Sameer)

https://www.dhresource.com/0x0/f2/albu/g9/M00/32/77/rBVaVVyFza-AaNz0AAFVOvWtPOA870.jpg

and third is for Sid)

https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/5190xMjALlL._UX385_.jpg(Virat`s suit)

https://cdn.shopify.com/s/files/1/0935/1466/products/White_1_ec87f467-fc67-4871-8b62-f4de502ba591_large.JPG?v=1522854022(Chotu`s suit)

https://www.studiosuits.com/images/suits/groom-tuxedo-wedding.jpg (Arnav`s suit)

https://www.dhresource.com/0x0s/f2-albu-g7-M00-1E-09-rBVaSlpnBXaACh0vAADdJTb8PuA486.jpg/new-brand-luxury-men-wedding-suit-male-blazers.jpg(Samrat`s suit)

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1Pui3LpXXXXXmaXXXxh4dFXXXE/Real-Photos-2016-font-b-Red-b-font-Jacket-Groom-Tuxedos-Formal-Best-font-b-Men.jpeg(showstopper) Karan

https://www.libbyjoanna.co.uk/images/cate_27/640/Black-groom-wedding-suits-for-men-blazer-boys-prom-suits-mens-slim-latest-coat-pant-designs-singer-stage-vest-pant-coat-CBw5-xbk0.jpg(for Shree)

Ar: so any problem with the clothes?

Ch: no, jiju. It’s awesome

Sam|M: ok guys, let`s do this

Virat looked at the message that Sakshi send to himwith Liza`s mobile:
it says: Virat, tell Arjun sir that Riya is alone in the dressing room, hewon`t get such a great chance to confess. Hurry up

Ps: and by the way this is Sakshi

Virat shook his head at her message

V: guys, you go ahead. Arjun and I need to check therooms for security reasons

S: what do you mean? We already checked

Sam|M: last minute check up, I will bring them withme

Ar: ok, then. Let`s go

They all left minus Vijun and Samrat

Sam|M: you have 5 minutes Arjun, so hurry up

A: wait, you know?

Sam|M: ofcourse

V: leave this talking for later, Sakshi justmessaged me that Riya is in the changing room alone, so this is our last chance

Arjun took a deep breath

A: let`s go

They left for the changing room

V: ARjun, go for it. Be brave

A: I am brave, samjhee ya samjhaun?

V: arjun, look riya

A: where? Where?

V: I am just kidding but you should have looken atyour face, you were so scared

Sam|M: guys, only 3 minutes are left

A: what, thanks a lot Virat

V: don’t talk to me Arjun. Hurry up

He pushed ARjun in the room

Arjun shocked at the sudden push, he couldn’t stopand he bumped into Riya, She almost fell but Arjun held her hand and pulled hertowards him, they had a mini eyelock

Arjun looked at Riya and was mesmerized by her; hecouldn’t take his eyes of her

Riya saw how Arjun was looking at her, she began toblush

R: woh sir, I am fine now

A: huh? Oh (he let go of her)

R: ahh, my ear

A: what happened, Riya?

R: my dupatta got stuck on my earring, my ear ishurting

A: wait, let me help you

He removed the dupatta from her earring with hisfingers, he saw how Riya closed her eyes and she shivered

Arjun took a deep breath and said:

Riya, I have to say something to you

Riya opened her eyes and got a little embarrassed

R: what sir? You have been trying to say somethingto me for a few days now, what is it?

A: Riya, I …I

R: boliye sir, we are going to be late, is somethingwrong?

A: Riya, I have been feeling kind of weird with you around me (Riya pouted), I dream about you, miss you and get jealous when you talk to Sid and Karan. I don’t know when I started liking you, maybe it started a month ago or when I first saw you, I don’t know but I know that I like you a lot, no wait it`s love, I really love you riya, can you give me a chance? i know that i have temper issues and i shout most of the time but can you this akdhu a chan...?

Before he could finish his sentence Riya hugged him

R: yes sir, what took you so long?

Arjun was first shocked by her hug but when he heard her answer, he hugged her back❤️

precap: 2 revelations, mission over and secret meeting with maan and who knows first date


finally updated, this is a long chapter, CONFESSION
thanks for all the likes and comments for the prev chapter

hope you like this one as well

first time writing a confession, hope you guys are not disappointed

HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE, wish you all happiness, good health and wealth in this new year😉
SORRY IF I AM A LITTLE LATE

this is the last chapter of this thread, see you guys on the next thread


Edited by VirMan505 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

U made us wait for long...it was worth...fan of ur writing...😍

It was an amazing update

I just hope its not a dream..😅😅😅like sriously arjun confessed his feelings to riya...🤗🤗

Continue soon...

Edited by Mokshata - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Omg finally arjun confessed his feelings lovely

Nice dresses

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Welcome back

Super awesome update

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow..


Awsome update


Love it..


I guess shree n liza's marriage is fixed..


Wow..finally Ariya confessed..


Plz continue soon


Thanks for pm

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