~AbhiGya AT #278 ~ - Page 26

Originally posted by: Ralulo

Well i think they already did,at least after the 7 years leap.

They showed them being in 2018,at Abhi bday party,then Kiara appeared,in the same year she was conceived and turned 7 years too. 😆 Asking for too much logic. When they can celebrate 2 Valentines,2 Holi's with Tanu being pregnant...not a problem to show a baby being "prepared",born&grown-up in the same year.

🤣 Useless writers.. imagine getting paid for this ...humei bhi Aisi naukri dedo

Originally posted by: columbia

@FKP

Read the first one. It’s very well written, you are truly a very good writer. Your command over the language is perfect. I loved your concept and idea of how she stayed back but punished him with cold treatment. I wish you had written more chapters on that angst..her coldness and his pushiness. Little bit of nok jhok in between that would have been fun to read, like maybe interplay between taking care of the babies and intimate moments - breast feeding, changing nappies, supporting his wife in front of strangers, would have been nice.

The second very very strong point you have about your writing is the way you write love making. It’s truly an art to be able to write the way you write..you have talent. My only request is have them speak in Hindi during the most intimate moments... especially since your command over Hindi is so good.

uou are a superb writer, you should write longer stories. You are too good

😊😊 Am blushing. Thanks for the feedback, compliment. The first one, yeah, now that I go back to it, it does feel a bit rushed. I wrote it cause I had these 2 vague ideas in my head and wanted to put it on paper. So just wrote based on those 2 ideas.

🙏 you're too kind.

Originally posted by: columbia

@ FKP read your second OS. You are an emotional writer. You should write more. Really. You are too good. Pls write more and if you ahem written others pls send me links. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing, thank you so much for sharing your talent

🙏💕 will try to write this week. Got some inspiration but let's see if it translates into anything.

Missed wedding in MM (episodes 1292-1293)

Originally posted by: Ralulo

Missed wedding in MM (episodes 1292-1293)

Perfect she looked. Hair, outfit, jewellery, make up. So on point. 🥳💃