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Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Sorry to bug u guys 😄 but did u read the update? Lemme know how it was. Kinda sceptical about continuing it since the characterisation is opposite to that in the show 🧐 I am still doubtful of writing it here. Coz I feel it may not suit Ronakshi. So counting on u guys to give me an honest opinion. If it’s not working then I don’t wish to continue on Ronakshi anymore.

Heyy mandy, I thoroughly loved it.. Plzzz continue it... I got a little late in replying coz I read both the parts and.. Had gone for dinner.... Plzz plzzz continue.. Nd update faster 😇😘

Aluu

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Anu Arjun ka frustration I understand yaar. Adi never fulfilled his share of responsibilities as an elder brother and Arjun had to step up on many occasions and handle the situation for him. In many ways in the beginning he was the older brother but during paak PooSh case it was ridiculous that he handed over the diary to Zoya. He might have got fed up with his own family coz everyone were molly coddling Adi and nobody spared him a thought. But him walking out after Harsh died and their mom’s mental health was deteriorating was so unlike Arjun. Makers ruined his character badly.

I can understand the frustration of every sibling on all the itv shows...becharo ko koi bhaav hi nai deta🤣 everyone's life revolves around the leads that I wonder inke life mein kuch aur hai ya nahi😂

That's y I love those which have parallel leads too. Kuch toh leads k story se break milta hai n realistic lagta hai. Though those parallel leads should be likable, not like our pari Rohit😂 I would loooovvvveee Mihir mihika in yhm, they were so cool😂 Bala vandu, romi Sarika, shagun ashok Suraj...all had such good tracks. Dekho toh their individual tracks n waise connected to the leads too. Not even once I would feel inke life mein Raman ishita k alaawa Kuch aur hai nahi. There were times when their lives revolved around IshRa n there were times where IshRa behaved like elder Bhai Bhabhi or Akka jeeju. That was such a well balanced show. Gosh I miss yhm now n I want to watch those episodes too😂😂😂

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Arey, pilot uniform look was cool. 😎

I don't like formals on HC because of his hair. Kitna bhi short haircut kare wo...Uske head Ka shape hi aisa hai k his hair look longer n I can't like formals on long hair😆

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Darcy I have a feeling readers are not able to connect with the characters or maybe my writing is not apt for a fan fiction.

You are over stressing it Mandy... Readers will like it.. In case you don't mind me telling... Don't include more raima parts.. Unless required as per your story... Coz it just reminds me of that bakwass face and her deeds.. Which makes me sour... (If others don't mind you go ahead.. It is just my pov... ) I am really sorry if I hurt your feelings...

But I really liked the story... Plzz don't stop it.. And continue.. However the story demands... It should be completely yours and only your creation and characterizations... Nd it will be the best..

Love, Aluu 😘😘 (sorry again if I have hurt you)

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

No no I meant do u think it’s worth continuing? That’s what I want to know.

U should. Mandy u r not the first one writing FF on different characters, isn't it? There r so many such FFs on forums. Rather FFs r mostly different than show...OS can be based on the show but FFs r ur own fiction n people understand that! I'll tell u I didn't imagine Karan dipika while reading the story at all. In ur first chapter I visualised Anupre because they r like that...shaant sa seedha saadha ladka n bakbak ladki. Now when I read second chapter, I visualised avneil because they r like that...lady don ladki n sensible but don't mess with me boy. So the point is just because u have chosen names from this show, it is not necessary that viewers have to relate with the same characters. We read n simultaneously imagine the scenes putting those people in place of these characters who suit the scenes the best. In next chapter I may visualise ronakshi or someone from my real life or anybody. So u see, different characters is not really a concern.

I'll tell u one thing. Be it any story, if u first tell that the character is gonna be like this n ur viewers or readers have to imagine it forcefully like that, it terribly fails. But if u just present ur story ur way n then they decide how to visualise this character n what to expect from it, the story becomes beautiful. This has happened with this kzk. Nobody promoted Anurag as iconic but they presented him so beautifully that viewers loved him. Whereas before bringing the character on screens, they promoted bajaj n komo as iconics...out of the world beauty, shaatir dimaag n all. They made random people sing these praises in every episode. N what happened? Audience couldn't connect to these characters because they were not even close to what they were told will be. So remember this, readers don't come with prejudiced thinking when they know what they r signing for is different than the original. They want to experience the characters and decide their character shape for themselves. So chill...n write the next update faster!!!!

Arjun's character left a lot to be desired. Bas lawyer bolke introduce kar diya but never once showed him acting like a lawyer. Never fighting any case or taking any stand. RJ by night was a night human touch, woh bhi raato raat khatam ho khatam ho gaya. That RJ track was abruptly introduced and abruptly ended. Arjun being a lawyer could have been shown looking for legit, solid evidence that could help Adi and Zoya if he didn't agree to his father's ways, but wahaan bhi kuch nahi. Woh diary toh court me useless hoti. Harshwardhan Hooda ka lawyer beta lekin koi wicked qualities nahi. Zoya being hurt and wanting to reopen thebcase was understandable but the way they wrapped the case by Adi taking the blame in front of media was disappointing. The Sakshi revelation and Adi taking blame before were two scenes/epis that I took with a pinch of salt and ignored the irritation that came with them.

Arjun being childish at the beginning of the leap was pretend to emotionally blackmail his parents to go to the retreat so that was okay. And then the whole friction in ArNoor relationship was forced. That could also have been handled so much better.

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Darcy I have a feeling readers are not able to connect with the characters or maybe my writing is not apt for a fan fiction.

See, Mandy, we're all saying the same thing. 😆

Don't fret. So long as you enjoy writing, keep posting! We'll be reading. :)

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Arjun's character left a lot to be desired. Bas lawyer bolke introduce kar diya but never once showed him acting like a lawyer. Never fighting any case or taking any stand. RJ by night was a night human touch, woh bhi raato raat khatam ho khatam ho gaya. That RJ track was abruptly introduced and abruptly ended. Arjun being a lawyer could have been shown looking for legit, solid evidence that could help Adi and Zoya if he didn't agree to his father's ways, but wahaan bhi kuch nahi. Woh diary toh court me useless hoti. Harshwardhan Hooda ka lawyer beta lekin koi wicked qualities nahi. Zoya being hurt and wanting to reopen thebcase was understandable but the way they wrapped the case by Adi taking the blame in front of media was disappointing. The Sakshi revelation and Adi taking blame before were two scenes/epis that I took with a pinch of salt and ignored the irritation that came with them.

Arjun being childish at the beginning of the leap was pretend to emotionally blackmail his parents to go to the retreat so that was okay. And then the whole friction in ArNoor relationship was forced. That could also have been handled so much better.

Sarcy ab Jo bhi Acha Nahi Lagta hai na show mein I end up thinking what I wanted was meant to be...unless that channel didn't interfere😂

I liked Arjun's righteous character though, it would be a good track if we got to see a face off between righteous lawyer and wicked lawyer. And here I believe it was meant to be like that... otherwise there was no reason for Arjun to go to any lengths to get that diary. Remember he broke into the police station n all? Both papa hooda n Arjun chasing that diary was very much an indicator that they'll stand face to face in the court of law. Chhodo😂

And trust me this was going to happen when adi chose to side with Zoya. But channel again interrupted and they had to go for the leap throwing all the blame on adi. When they were shooting for that Alvida poosh scene, media had asked them wo case Ka kya hua n Jenny harshad were like kya case Konsa case sab khatam ho gaya n they laughed sarcastically as if it's all over overnight 😂

Sakshee scene was horrible, only harshad's acting was the saving grace and made it one of my favourite scenes too.

Bp ka last episode you guys liked??? Mujhe to total waste lagi thi

Originally posted by: IFLove

Khkt k saath bohot saare shows sarcy ko muft muft muft mil rahe hai yaha se😆