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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: FQ27881

wah wah kya bt ha vry exciting. already waiting for nxt 😃

Thank you 😊. Hope you will love the next update as well.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: myprimechicago

Beautiful update... I expected bigger punishment of tau-tai’s crime

Thank you so much dear. Haan badi punishment milni thi par ab shaadi mein yeh sahi na hoga so they have been left with a warning. Nut if they irk Sameer may be they vl get a severe punsihment.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi0410

Thank you dear sajida for early update, so happy to see shadi prepration start already and sameer's unique idea for gifted silver coins with the tag" beti ghar ki shaan"(Sajida you beautifuly put another social massege so naturally. Love you yaar for thisšŸ‘) you are such a pure soul and heartā¤ļø. A daughter is equal like a son when you accompany to fullfell their dreams and understand their desires. (pankhon k sath apno ka vishwas b cahiye) hayee naina teasing him with the song of raaz filmā˜ŗļø, aur hamara sameer b kha kam h naina ko apni harkton se tang karne m. Love to see mundit ,(ab aayega double maja, samaina agar samosa h to apne mundit green wali chatni h.😁😁 unke bina samaina ki shadi kaise hogi. Sorry I am samosa fan islyšŸ˜‰) sameer ko taiji ka muft ka gyan or uper se rakesh ka tameej sikhana. (inko khud ko to kuch tameez h nahi dusro ko gyan khub dete h😔😔. They teach him badon se baat karne ka tarika per insan apni izzat khud kamata h khud gavata h,they are so irritating no one respected them for what they doing with naina.) Love to see sameer reply for teen tigada. And so much fun to see mundit fell them jealous with show their haapinessšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚. Sameer so much impatient for kiss and mundit teasing him with name of naina. Love this updaye very much. Samaina so much happy and exited mundit for shadi ( nazar naa lage teen tigada ki).hayye next update m haldi fir sangeet,mahendi m to bhut exited hu). Sajida yaar kya sayeri likte ho aap. Main to sochti thi sirf love ya motivation ki hi sayeri hoti h. Sameer ka jawab with the sayeris dil le gaya.(so beautiful šŸ‘) love you yaar har baar aur jyada pyaar ho jata h)

Thank you Adithi šŸ¤—. Daughters are special and I think we need to realize this. Yes the sweet teasings are on-going. Shaadi aur dostoun ke bina kaise ho sakti hai though I add not muh about them . Taiji and Tauji are not part of the marriage , so only good souls are here to bless them.

Shaadi se pehle to besabri aur bechaini toh hogi. Hope you will love the next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you Very much šŸ¤—Hope you will love the next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhudhu

Sajida yaar awesome bahut attach hogaya iis story se feeling as if Samaina's marriage taking place at my home reading this part . Amazingly written everything loved it . Shayari's just mesmerizing yaar . Lots n lotssssss of loveeeee . Take care . As u know we eagerly wait for the update.

Srilatha

Thank you So much Srilatha šŸ¤—. Lots of love to you too. and hope you will enjoy the next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: munchkinland

This was beautiful di

sbko Sameer maheshwari ka kya dose dia aapne

maza hi aagya

haini haini haini

I am so loving the shayaris you add

that is so different seeing samaina talk to other that way

I would want you to write another story after you complete this one please

Thank you Dear šŸ¤—. Sameer ne apne Shayaran style mein sabko dose di, ab himmat kahan se hogi Sameer Maheswari se bhidne ki. Glad you loved the shayari's and foudn them apt. Yes Samaina conversations are a little different, I try a lot not to bring in my Urdu here but somehow shayari and Urdu words do come.

Agli story ka pata nahi bas yeh khatam zaroor karoungi ā¤ļø

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Disha2712

Hi Sajida dišŸ¤—. Again an amazing update. Loved it ā¤ļø. Very excited for their wedding . The wedding gift choose by Sameer is so nice. This is like our Mr.Maheshwari always unique and adorable. Mundit ke aate hi khusiyaan aur masti double ho jaate hai. Mr. Maheshwari se toh kuch dino ka intzaar bhi nahi ho raha. Taiji, Tauji aur Rakesh sir ko kya handle kiya Sameer nešŸ‘šŸ¼. How Naina described the rituals as their journey was so beautiful ā¤ļø. Your shayaris were amazinggggg as always. They expresses their feelings beautifully. Shaadi ki taiyaariyaan padh ke Sameer aur Naina ki show wali shaadi ki yaad aa gayi. And you beautifully added "le jaayenge" song sequence ā¤ļø. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Disha

Hi Disha Dear

Thank you so muchšŸ¤—. Gift ankha hona hi tha Samaina anhoke jo hai.. Ab dostoun ke bina shaadi kaise ho sakti hai par zyada nahi likha hai unka so that I am able to finish it in a crisp way soon. Glad you loved the rituals connected with their journey so far. I hope you will love the next update as well.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: FQ27881

please samaina ki shadi ka part jldi post kr do

Will do soon and will finish the story

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sona_G

What unique return gifts. Kahan se aati hai tumhe aisi ideas.

Thanks for the switch, Naina pehle Pandi ki bhabhi hein hogi, dost baad mein 😜

This might be a repetitive phrase in my comments bu true shayaris are amazing especially the ones during the rendezvous between Sameer and Taiji family.

And I am really glad you didn’t give a changeover to Taiji’s character overnight. I personally feel that it is difficult for people to change especially someone like Taiji and Tauji to the extent of suddenly showering Naina with love. Thanks for keeping it realistic.

Le jayenge le jayenge again took me back to the show additionally Sonam and Divya ko imagine karlenge

So true about envy. Must be worth paying to see Taiji’s reaction 😜😜😜

Agle update kal hai kya ??

Hi Sona

Thank you so much dearšŸ¤—. Bas aise hi socha jab Naina ko uske ghar waloun ne bhoj samjha hai toh aisa kuch dena chahiye jo uska jawab bhi ho aur logoun ko message bhi mile ki ladki anmol hoti hai.. Thank you dear for loving the shayari's I put in .

Haan yaar SaMUndit saath honge aur Naina unki bhabhi.

Yes, Taiji will not change in a night and its hard. When we can't change someone its better to be away from them than hurt ourselves.

Haan yaar kar lena Divya aur Sonal ko imagine kar lena, ab office ke collegues toh aayenge hi na.

Glad you loved the update and found it realistic. I hope you will love the next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi All

As you all know there is an announcement that this Forum will close. This has been a great place and I made lot of friends whom I love a lot. IF platform is also special to me because here I shared my first story and got to read some wonderful stories.

Please do put in your comments in the given link to save the forum.

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With that here is the next update. I hope you will love it. Read and Enjoy it.

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Sajida

Rasmein

The Haldi ceremony marked the beginning of the wedding rituals signifying an auspicious start for the bride and groom purifying their heart and soul. Naina wore a yellow salwar-suit with Gotta-Patti embroidery. Her dress was the yellow of a thousand warm suns, the promise of light that gives energy to nature.

Sameer wore a light color lemon yellow t-shirt even after pestering, he didn't remove it. " Lagana hai toh is par hi lagao yaar ".

" Lagana nahi tujhe toh hum toh nehlayenge haldi ke pani mein" saying this Munna Pandit drenched Sameer in Haldi water after the initial rituals. Naina was not spared either Swati, Preeti Kamya had smudged Haldi everywhere. Laughter, leg-pulling, camaraderie and the pungent, tangy whiff of turmeric in the air - a Haldi ceremony began with all this.

Sameer called her at night and narrated the entire incident "Tumne baal acche se sukhaye ya nahi ? Sardi ho jayegi tumhe" . Her love and concern gave warmth like an old duffle coat, friendly and soft. All his life everything he once loved or cared about, always broke him, tearing apart his soul bit by bit. But this time he felt like everything in his little tiny universe was right for the first time and the journey ahead would be beautiful with his soul mate.

"Haan baal acche se sukha liya, khud ki shaadi mein thodi hi bimar padhna hai" he laughed and then in an ardent voice he said

Rang chada hai haldi ka,
Intezaar hai tujhse milne ka
Aang Aang Peela ho gaya hai
Bas ab intezaaar hai tere saath laal hone ka

She gasped and stepped away, heart pounding. Sameer could hear the sound that came from her throat and smiled imagining her state.

"Good Night Jaan " is what she said in an almost inaudible voice and cut the call.

"Good Night Sweetheart" he replied chuckling, looking at the mobile, he kissed it. Though she never said all these sweet endearments, she always made him feel special with her care and love. His heart murmured" Meri Naina sabse alag ! "

In the array of pre-wedding functions, if there is something that the bride and her tribe enjoy the most, it is the Mehendi. Naina chose full of floral, leaf and paisley motifs design which was traditional, intricate and beautiful. Sameer's name was hidden within this design. She had Mehendi till her elbow and on her legs a little above the ankle.

"Tumhare haathoun ki mehendi mein apne naam ko dhundna chahata houn " a memory flashed bringing a smile on her face.

"Jijaji toh saari raat shayad apna naam hi dhundge, nazar hi nahi aa raha. " Preeti teased Naina.

"Aur tu na naam dhundne tak kuch karne mat dena " Swati pulled her leg.

Sameer had a heart symbol on his hand with Naina written in it. He smiled, thinking about finding his name in her hand. He wanted to see intricate henna patterns on her hands before it turned red more than that he wanted to see Naina. Everyone tried to drill some sense, but Sameer didn't budge.

"Bas do minute, bas ek jhalak please" he requested.

The Mehendi function was still going on. Sameer and his friends all joined on the pretext to check the arrangements for Sangeet. A more lovely sight awaited him. In one corner sat his petite Naina. She wore a dark green churidar embellished with beautiful thread work. The neck and sleeves yoke part, highlighted to perfection. The printed green dupatta complimented her looks. She had loosened plait that fell over her shoulder. Her lips were carefully tinted red, with her large, two-toned eyes, flawless skin, she resembled a doll.

Mehendi lagaye baite hai kuch is ada se woh
Mutti mein unki de de koi dil nikal ke

Naina's expression went from surprise to joy in the blink of an eye seeing Sameer. When she had caught a glimpse of him, he seemed still more handsome dressed in pastel green Kurta. Not only his looks, but he was also handsome from the depth of his eyes to the gentle expressions of his voice. His courtesy to all the relatives, even to strangers and children who called to look at him, or who, not venturing to call, hung around the gate in order to catch a glimpse of him.

She observed him secretly as it was not possible to see him openly with so many people around. As their eyes met he winked at her, the blush that accompanied it was a dead give-away

He wanted to talk to her, so he asked Preeti if she could help him.

"JIjaji Shaadi tak koi milna vilna nahi ,aur akele mein toh bilkul nahi. Thoda dhiraj rakhiye aa hi jayegi aapke ghar " she teased mischievously.

"Please yaar, aise chupke chupke milne ka mouka ab kahan milega , please sirf das minute" he pleaded like a small kid.

After thinking for a while "Jijaji aisa toh nahi manugi , rishvat deni padegi aapko " Preeti replied

"Kya chahiye aapko Saaliji " Sameer replied with a smile.

"Woh toh mai aapko Shaadi ke din bataoungi, bas aap vada karo jo mangogi woh doge"

"Thik hai Saali saheba , bas Naina ko chodke jo maangna hai maang lo"

"Toh phir pakka abhi karvati houn aapki baat Naina se". She asked him to wait on the terrace.

"Kahan le jaa rahi hai Preeti bata toh sahi, wahan toh sab hai aur woh " Preeti cut her and said "Woh jo tere hai na woh yahan terrace par wait kar rahein hai, jaldi jaa aur baat karle Jijjaji se" .

When he spotted her, right at that moment the song from Aashiqui was playing in the background

Mera Dil Tere Liye Dhadakta Hai, Dhadakta Hai

The full lips curved into a shy smile as she saw him as if her heart was singing the same

Dekhun Jo Tujhe To Yeh Dil Behakta Hai, Behakta Hai,

His sweet chocolate gaze locked on her, visually embracing her, the words of the song conveying his feelings for her. As these words played they kept looking at each other, the eyes saying it all.

Zara Paas Aa Tere Lab Choom Loon
Mai Kya Chahti Hoon Mai Kaise Kahoon

True love doesn't need proof. The eyes told what they felt for each other at that moment, the words were deciphering their feelings,

Sameto Na Baahon Mein Ye Gora Badan
Bujhegi Bhala Kaise Dil Ki Agan
Koi Shola Seene Mein Bhadakta Hai, Bhadakta Hain
Mera Dil Tere Liye...

Her feelings were not easily hidden on her innocent face, she lowered her gaze and blushed even deeper as he pulled her towards him

With a gentle finger, he reoriented her face so that he held the gaze. There was no smile on his lips, only the hot intensity of his gaze. He raised his right hand to her hair, tucking the black wisps behind her ear.

Zulfoun se kehdo gaaloun ko chumna chod de

Ishq rusva huva toh katal hazar honge

"Yeh galat hai na Naina , mai chum nahi sakta aur yeh zulfein kabse mere sabr ka imtihan liya jaa rahi hai "

His voice was rough, but the arm that encircled her waist held her gently as he slowly brushed her lips with his finger. She bit her lips to keep them from quivering. The wide-eyed innocent look blushed scarlet cheeks and those full lips reminded him of a fairy tale princess.

He cupped her face and said "Bahut sundar lag rahi ho bilkul ek pari ki tarah .Yun toh yeh zindagi chal toh rahi thi par tumhare aane se maine jeena sikh liya hai. Kis Kahani ki Pari ho tum Naina?" .

"Tum bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho. Jis Kahani ke tum Rajkumar ho, usi kahani ki pari houn., jo tumse beinteha mohabbat karti hai" she whispered.

Suddenly the fear of getting caught clutched her heart. "Sameer tum jao yahan se ? Koi dekh lega toh" Naina said in a voice that sounded stricken.

"Shhh! He placed his fingers on her lips. "Koi nahi dekhega, Munna Pandit neeche sab sambhal rahein hai aur Preeti bata degi koi aaya toh. Do din mein shaadi hai hamari bas tumhe dekhna tha aurrrrrr is tarah sab se chupke milne bhi tha. Tumhe nahi milna tha mujhse ? his voice came out in a raspy whisper

"Aaai saa Aisa kuch nahi, mujhe nahi milna tha " Her heart was racing, but she forced innocence into her voice.

"Acchaaa ? "Sabke saamne toh chup chup ke mujhe hi dekh rahi thi

" Chup Chup kar mujhe padte ho,

Ufff mujh par yun bhi nazar rakhtein ho "

She blushed it was tough to look at him without giving in, so she tried to change the subject. " Chalo bahut der ho gayi , koi aa jayega " .He admired her shy grace.

" Arey ruko toh mehendi toh dekhi nahi hai tumhari " saying this he took her hand "Bahut sundar lagi hai and his gaze was fixed on it "Mera naam nahi likha?, dikh nahi raha hai ?? " he tried to search.

She pulled her hand "Abhi nahi , woh toh suhag" Naina blurted out and bit her tongue.

"Kab dekhni hogi Naina " he face was close , she forgot to breathe

"Chachaji! " She shouted. Sameer's eyes flew up in shock, She ran away saying " Dekh kar jaana aur apna khayal rakhna " . It was too late before he understood her prank, squeezing his eyes shut he placed his hand on his heart " Dil sambhal jaa zara , uski ada teer aur chalne hai"

The Sangeet celebration was a riot of color, everyone a little more hyped up than they should be. Naina and Sameer each was the center of the universe for the other. Sameer forgot to breathe at the sight, clad in a pink lehenga she looked innocent as the flowers that fell from blooming apple trees. The fitting was perfect highlighting her curves. Her hair flying behind her back. Sameer could not resist and sang

Kajal ka ek til tumhare labo pe laga lu la la la
Haan chanda aur Suraj ki Nazaro se tumko bacha lu hmmm
Oh Palkon ki chilam mein aao mai tumko chupa lu Aaaa
Khayalo ki yi shokiya maa ho har dam tumhe sochti

Jab hosh mein hota hai Jahan Madhosh yeh karati hain

He kept his gaze on her making her go red again. His song marked the start of Sangeet. Naina blushed scarlet when she heard this. Her eyes pleading him not to tease. Sameer was enjoying the blush oh her face and watching her, a wry smile on his face and with an amused twinkle in his eyes.

"Oh Bai sharm laaj bech khayi hai in logoun ne" Taiji blabbered from her window but felt sad as none noticed.

Tilak was performed by Karthik and his family. A simple ceremony was held with just the exchange of bride and bride-groom dresses. Munna's parents blessed them. Though Rakesh had not agree to this marriage, his heart somewhere felt content that Naina got the love she deserved. Taiji was fuming with anger and jealousy. But it was ignored by the rest of the family.

The sangeet ki raat demanded both old and young attending to let down their hair and have a gala time. A well-crafted sangeet sequence was planned. Munna,Pandit along with Preeti, Swati and Kamya performed on the song " Wah Wah Ramji jodi kya banayi ". Later Sameer and his friends performed "Mehendi laga ke rakhna, Dholi saza ke rakhna " whereas Naina and her side performed on "Bole Chudiyan Bole Kangana, hai mai hogayi teri sajana Naina's eyes ate up the scene like a Diwali feast, her limbs feeling supercharged and her head giddy. Everything about the flowing silks made Naina dance, her feet moving with grace and her heart beating with joy. In the end, Naina and Sameer performed on " Chal Pyar karegi and Aakhoun ki Gustakiyan maaf ho". It was a fun-filled evening.

With every spare hour spent on wedding planning, it is inevitable that hopes and fears will continue to play out in the head when one hits the pillow. Even worries and wishes that never existed will pervade the subconscious and manifest as dreams. He dreamt what his mind conjured up.

Is pal ko Mohabbat mein dhal jane do
Na rok mujhko kareeb apne aane do
Is pyar ki aag ko aur bad jane do
Aaj do jismo ko lipat kar ek ho jane do

He leaned to kiss her and hit the floor with a thud and the room went hazy for a minute or two. "Sapna tha ! " he sighed and sat on the bed.

"Sameer kya kar raha hai ,sambhal khud ko. Naina yeh sab janti bhi hai ya nahi yeh tujhe pata nahi " his inner voice warned him. He had seen passion and desire in her eyes but was not very sure if she was comfortable or how much she had knowledge. He decided to give her the time and space to understand the dynamics of physical intimacy. After marriage, it would be comfortable to discuss on this topic.

He tightly squeezed the soft pillow "Kab hogi Naina meri bahoun mein,?" he questioned as he looked at the off white pillow. A soft giggle escaped, he was asking a pillow. He caressed its cotton cover and said

Nazar mein neend ki hasrat liye chup chap baite hai

Koi dur rehkar bhi humein sone nahi deta

Naina was exhausted but sleep seemed unlikely. Finally, she was getting married. She believed marriage isn't a ritual or a paper signed. It is not something endured but savored. It is the union of two hearts beating as one, each that would sacrifice for the other's happiness and well being. Marriage is the blessing we give to one another, an eternal bond of soul-mates. She had known Sameer now for more than six years and he had always made her comfortable, gave her the warmth of his love and stood by her in difficult times. She had seen intense desire and passion in his eyes but he had never crossed the limits. "Tumhare har arman pora hoga Sameer. Ab tumhe khud ko kabhi rokna nahi padega. Thoda darr thodi gabrahat ho rahi hai par tum ho saath toh har pal khoobsurat hi hoga " she promised to fulfill all his wishes and wrapped her arms around the pillow dreaming about him.

Edited by Saji79 - 6 years ago

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