Samaina FF - The Reluctant Groom and His Accidental Bride CH 49 pg 81 - Page 62

I'm feeling heavy hearted as RGAB's journey ends here. I want to think this is just the beginning. Expecting more stories from you. You are really talented writer. We readers are always hooked to your story. Sometimes I feel low that we won't be getting RGAB hereafter. Thanks a lot dear for giving us this wonderful story.

Hi May

Finally the beautiful journey has come to an end. Today I will not comment on the update but on he journey with this FF . As a silent reader i hardly commented and I remember this was the first story I started to give a feedback I really wanted the writer of this story to know that its sooooo amazing. Every Firday was the day everyone would wait for RGAB. The punctuality and the response to each comment made you stand out and I think I had said this earlier as well but wanted to stress again., its not easy May to manage work, personal life and give a update so beautiful.

Ab IT ke hai toh Steve Jobs ka ek quote yaad aaya

" Details matter and its worth waiting to get it right" I have not seen such detailing of a situation, a character , every small details of the expression as I have seen in this story. You made our wait worth giving us a beautiful update.

The way you protrayed the relationship it was aesthetic. Broken hearts united by fate which blossomed into a beautiful relationship by patience trust love care. With little words this is what I can summarize. Ek accha rishta hawa ke jaisa hota hai khamosh par hamesha aas pass ❤️

Few topics like periods, working women challenges, financially independency and ignorance of intimacy har ek pehlu ko bahut acche se define kiye ho.👏

U know May I dont think my words are enough to say how beautiful this journey was bas samaj lo yeh ek kahani mere dil ke kareeb hai and atlast thanks a ton for that. 🤗

Finally a sher on relationship that blossomed from nothing to a beautiful like the one here

Rishtoun mein wahi sambhand hona chahiye

Jaise haath ka Aakhoun se hota hai

Haath ko chot lage toh aasoun nikaltein hai

Aur aakhoun se aasoun nikle toh haath hi saaf kartein hai.

Thanks a lot for this beautiful story.. do take a break and come up with another beautiful one.

Take Care and lots of Love💕

Sajida

Originally posted by: hj42928

woww woowww..yr so awsome update they r so adorable...the night before anniversity how cutely they celebrated nd the card by sameer was cherry on top..😍

sameer's dialogue "baqi ksi k pass meri naina jo ni ha"...nd in the end seeing party naina's feelings.... so beautiful so natural... naina feeding sameer was so heart whelming sameer always craved for this love💗💗

i am glad k vishaka bhi ayi party ma but all sameer wanted was his wife beside him nd her happiness...he made their anniversity so special...i have happy tears reading this update the last pragraph about love nd destiny was soooo beautiful nd inspiring....😍😍😍

i dont knww mjhy khush hna chahyie k mjhy itni achi samaina story puri prhny ko mili ya iss bt py dukhi hona chahye k kyu kyu ye story khtm ho ri ha...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

phlyy ma ny samaina ko kho diya or ab RGAB b khtm ho gya...why why why dear...😥

ma bhttt bhttt bhttt bhttttt miss kru gi RGAB ko, ap ko, hr friday or weeknd ky intezar ko, is story py cmnt krny ko or sb sy brh kr ap ki story py cmmnts prhny ko ap yaqeen ni kro gi shyd pr may hr dafa jb update k bd baqi readers ap ki tareef krty hain na to eik alag khushi hti ha or bht proud feel hta ha jesy jesy mry ksi bht apny ki tareef ho ri ha uski achievement py...such ma mjy bht acha lgta ha jb sb RGAB k lye itny achy cmnts krty ha ap ko appriciate krty hain... u truly deserve this love🤗🤗

i wish u a happy life ap jidhr bhi raho hmesha khush raho or hmsha successful ho...u r a great writer nd great human...i hope ap jld hi samaina ki story k sath wapis ao...❤❤

dear may kbhi mry ksi cmnt ya ksi bt ny ap ko hurt ya offnd kiya ho to really sorry dear...😁🌹🌹

take care & lots of love may...💟💟💗💗😍

Thank you so much dear for all your love dear 🤗

I am so amazed by this bound that I have seen blossoming between writers and readers on the forum. The age and distance gap just doesn’t matter!

Wishing you much joy and success in your life too!

Love, May

Originally posted by: Itsflora

This is soooooooo beautiful .

I Don't why I'm feeling so emotional.

It has been an awesome journey may.

Lots of love

Thank you so much! 🤗 I and so happy that you enjoyed the FF and Samaina‘s journey.

Lots of love to you too!

May

Originally posted by: Dhudhu

May love u for this beautiful update so soothening to read it . Plzzzz come with RGAB season 2 . Miss this story sooooo much . Craving for more n more thanku once again for this wonderful writing. Take care n lots of love . All bestest wishes to u my dear .

Srilatha

Thank you so much Srilatha 🤗

Season 2 of this FF is difficult... but I am considering another plot for a Samaina story.. still in the early stages but let’s see if I can come up with something interesting.

Thanks again for your love and support for this FF!

Love, May

Good to know MAY that ur coming with another FF it's really a great treat to the readers n fans . Tons of love for this dear . Thanku once again for beautiful journey of RGAB . I always love n cherish reading this story . I some what relate to naina of 90's n lam blessed with my sameer in life . So this story is special for me . Now eagerly wait for the next FF . Lots of love n God bless u dear .

Srilatha

Dear May

Today I logged into indiaforums after like may be more than a month...sorry haven't yet gone through the updates (though in the back of the mind was constantly thinking abt it)..will try to catch up soon and drop the reviews as well...Feel like I have missed so much. There was so much going around and with the renovation and festive season together...😧 had a very tight schedule. Finally got some "me time" today.

Bye dear, take care.

Hey May,

I somehow lost track of my previous 'reserved' comment. Hence, putting up a new one here.

First things first, a big, warm hug and many congratulations to you on completing your first FF. The only thing is- I wish you'd taken it to 50 Chapters. I see an Epilogue being demanded, and I'm keen on it too, if you do plan to write! 😳

Completing a story, well this is almost like a novel right is no mean feat. I can really understand the elation, the contentment that one gets one is able to bring the story in their minds on paper and to drive it to the end we'd thought of.

I remember, you'd once told me- during our initial interactions that you too wanted to write a full fledged story, and I'm so happy that Minu motivated you and finally you shared the tale here.

RGAB is and will always be a gem of this forum, and of course, a story which is very close to our hearts.

When we used to watch the show, it was all on screen. We could decipher the moods, the situations, the sparkling chemistry that their eyelocks conjured, but you May, you drafted another vivid version that was so close to the characters I love, yet so different. Despite your Samaina being adults, even during their honeymoon phase, never once did I feel disconnected to the core traits or the innocence of their love.

For me the school time episodes were the best, and to be really frank, I would say, I prefer the married version you gave over the one we saw in the serial.

Your very idea of closing the loop- with the anniversary was special. Yes, Samaina deserved their own moment here and nothing better than a surprise party.

Wo kehte hai na, koi kisi se kuch bhi cheen le, par kisi ki qismat nahi cheen sakta. Wo qismat hi tha- ki Taiji ke hazaar taanon ke bavjud, Sameer raazi nahi tha...families mein itna difference tha....fir bhi, Naina aur Sameer ki qismat judi huyi thi.

As I've said multiple times before, whenever I read this story of yours May, the song that echoes in my ear is:

"Rishta nahi hai...dono ko fir bhi baandhe koi dor hai...is dosti ko kya naam dein hum, yeh baat kuch aur hai!"

I seriously got those 90s ke feels...Samaina ke feels...the anticipation about when Sameer will finally fall for her.

The starting days were a bit tumultous for them both- Sameer stuck in his insecurities, Naina amidst the pressures of her family. Yet, Sameer had been irked to see her talk to another guy, had hid the kangans on purpose just so she'd be more careful of them in future. He hardly realized that he cared deep down.

The fasting during teej, Sameer being rude later on, the fight on the topic of bidai- all these phases got me sad and heartbroken along with Naina.

But Naina's true love overpowered everything. Nanaji knew Sameer in and out and began to understand and appreciate Naina. Deep down, he knew Naina might just give him the love he'd ached for all his life.

"Wo Jab We Met ka dialogue hai na Nanu style wala...hamari umar mein waqt nahi lagta, ek jhalak kaafi hoti hai yeh batane ke liye ki ladka aur ladki ke beech kya chal raha hai.." :P

Another thing I really liked about this story was- there were hints of grey, lows and ups, but no character was really negative here. Not Vishakha, not Vivek. Infact, I really giggled whenever Vivek opened his mouth- especially the day after their "supposed" first night had me in splits.

I really appreciated the way you broached intimacy in this entire story- be it the mayaan and talvaar analogy (had a good laughs there too when Naina asked if Sameer owned a sword and later on when Sameer laughed at it during their honeymoon), or the way the honeymooning couples talked or stood close, or the way Naina find out all about it through books was very innovative! That was also so much in line with the brainy Naina. It was obvious she would look for answers in books.

Naina being the quintessential housewife, the loved bahu, the ideal student, a hardworking intern and a businesswoman with acumen- at times, I was actually comparing myself to her and felt I really needed to buckle up as the lady-in-charge.

Munna, Pandit were as adorable as they'd been in the show and Preeti too. Swati aur Munna ki love story ka angle bahot cute tha- unka confession, unke rishte ki baat and Munna ka rukna for his sister.

Preeti ki bhi shaadi fix ho gayi matlab. Ek beti itne ameer khandaan mein, dusri videsh mein- Taiji to jal bhun ke raakh :P Sameer jo Taiji ki insult krta hai waah!

The entire anniversary surprise idea was lovely- even the cake cutting at night. I loved all their romance sequences, the fake dating phase- the making of gulkand from roses (that was epic matlab :P), the ice-cream treats, the heart-to-heart talks in that guest room over the 'khidki band karo' abhiyaan, the sleeping and cuddling together, the movie dates- everything made me smile!

All in all, I'd say, 'The Reluctant Groom and the Accidental Bride' has been cast under my bucket of feel good stories, with its impeccable writing (tonnes better than some of the so-called bestsellers in market), the wit and the blossoming of love between the characters I've come to admire.

The most important thing in a story is for a writer to make its reader feel for the protagonists- smile with them, cry with them. Everything else, I guess, just falls in place. And you did exactly that!

I know I've been pretty lax with my comments here. In fact, I kept waiting to draft out a review, and until then a next update was posted and I'd think, maybe I'll write for that one too and so on. I'd thought of messaging you my comments over our personal chats too (I think most of us find that more convenient) as we've lost touch with the forum now. Thank you for being so understanding and patient with me May. I'm really sorry for all the delays.

Since this is the final part, I figured out I'd try to give a review on the update and the story as a whole. I know I've blabbered for most part, but I hope you know that your story has been one of my favorites on the forum!

I love you for writing it. I'm sad that it's ended, but happy that you completed the story the way you wanted to. I've said it before and I'll say it again- I would wait for more works from you May, irrespective of whether they are on Samaina or not.

Loads of love,

Sur

First of all really sorry for very late reply....

Actually inbetween navratri me nd my kids were not well.... fortunately my husband was there with us for 3 weeks in india.....so he helped me a lot but was not able to keep in touch with the forum nd writers.....aur beech mai phone bhi bandh ho gaya tha...mere bete ne phone ko nariyal pani pila diya tha😆

Again in Diwali we went for holidays nd for us (Gujarati's) day after Diwali our new year starts nd my husband went back within 3 days as soon as we came back from the holidays....so lots of guests nd lots things were going on....

Kan pakad ke mafi mangati hu dear....

Please really really really very sorry😭

Actually i missed you ppl nd this forum so much....

Now a big hug to you dear🤗

Congratulations to you for completing this lovely,beautiful story..💐💐💐💐

This story is really near to my heart dear.....

You are amazing writer....

In this story there are so many emotions...i can feel it....it seems all this is happening just in front of me......aisa lagata hai jaise ye story nahi par hamare apane logo ki hi baat hai....

U mentioned so many things into it very beautiful....

Eagerly waiting for the epilogue.....

Aur aapki nayi story ka besabari se intazaar rahega dear May di😊

Hope ki aap ne muje maaf kar diya...

Love dear May di....🤗🤗

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

May Congratulations on completing ur first ff you have been among my favt writers of the forum .... Loved the entire journey of 49 chapters ... 1 aur bnta tha waise😆 but khair mazaa aaya throughout ....though i havent commented regularly a big sorry for that ...but maine har chapter ko padha and enjoy kiya. ..thank u for writing an entirely different version of samaina ....but hn journey yahan rukhni nahi chahiye 😉 abhi aur stories ki chahhat hai ... Already looking foward to them ....love u loads 🤗 aise hi likhte raho aur humein padate raho

Thanks so much Suman! It was the love showered by readers like you that kept me motivated to keep this story focused on Samaina’s emotional growth and bonding and not rush the physical intimacy.

I am glad I was able to keep you hooked for the 49 chapters! Believe me, I did not expect the story to make to more than some 20 odd chapters! Grossly underestimated it 😃

Will let you know when I start something new 🤗

Love, May