FF: PranBir/KrishDha - In Love With Devil CH17+Writer's Note Pg 37 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Sofna

Wohooooo this update was a blast!

It was intense from the word go!

They're both in turmoil. The hatred is there to suppress the niggling emotions bubbling beneath the surface!☺️

I found it filled with double meanings - saying one thing - meaning something other. Feeling one thing - conveying another.😈

You did absolute justice to your story and don't really require any inputs. ..

The next update has your be quicker .....but loooooonnnnggeerrrr😛

I feel my screen will set on fire with your next chapter!🤬😛

I know right! loving seeing all these fan stories.

And this update was eventful!

First of all, I hope you’re recovering well & not being careless *glare*

First I laughed hard at those retorts of Prachi 🤣

“Are you done venting?” Reminded me of PC 😆

Things are getting pretty interesting, with the fact that RGV is with Prachi, I’m gonna enjoy every moment of this story.

Ranbir surely doesn’t know what’s gonna hit him 😛

PS: Don’t update till your fully recovered! ❤️

When you get better, I can't wait to read more.

@manu, sorry for this delay. I just read this update today. Was busy, so just read some articles in the forum. It's I wanted to read at leisure and with pleasure. 🙂 And enjoyed every bit of it. U know how to get a good writing. Wish some CVs read half of urs to progress the original serial.

U asked for ideas, I can't give any. Very poor at those.

I know it takes time to plan to write a proper story even if u have an outline. Take ur time. Also a suggestion, bring in Pragya Prachi interactions as well as whoever is Prachi's dad. Wondering if it would be Raghuveer.

Originally posted by: Janas2017

@manu, sorry for this delay. I just read this update today. Was busy, so just read some articles in the forum. It's I wanted to read at leisure and with pleasure. 🙂 And enjoyed every bit of it. U know how to get a good writing. Wish some CVs read half of urs to progress the original serial.

U asked for ideas, I can't give any. Very poor at those.

I know it takes time to plan to write a proper story even if u have an outline. Take ur time. Also a suggestion, bring in Pragya Prachi interactions as well as whoever is Prachi's dad. Wondering if it would be Raghuveer.

I’m going to write a romantic scene myself for my next pranbir ff.

Send me too. I am skipping some horrible threads, so txt me a msg. I will know.

divya is so heartless.how can she be like this?will she harm prachi? pranbir nok jhok was funny.raghuveer praising what prachi did...ranbir saying that its not easy as he thinks..raghu saying that his thinking is making it complicated was nice.sad to see pranbir fighting like this.omg ranbir is going to make prachi regret what she said to him.hope everything will go well

Originally posted by: Deepidj

ThANk u so much for the update. Finally prachi is in ranbir home, studyroom nd bedroom. Loved their tashan dear. Was waiting for it. Divya such a dangerous women, wants ranbir at her feet nd now she came to know about prachi. Something is cooking in her mind. Ranbir has a stepbrother also. He was not ok with involving prachi in his family matters. Now have to see what she does after ranbir had blocked all her accounts. Loved kaka nd ranbir bonding. Kaka thinks prachi is perfect for ranbir. She is right nd correct person who ranbir needs now. Ranbir was concern about prachi, he also likes her but doesn't not want to accept because of his past. Their frost day encounter was nice, next 6 days will be blast. Now have to see will ranbir accept his feelings about prachi, as she is near him now or will he ignore it. What will divya do with prachi to hurt ranbir. Will jai support her. Will have to wait for ur next update. Nd pragya prachi bondings I miss it. Do add a small part of it in ur next part. Am sure prachi nd neha have hid the accident news to her, but still pragya was worried, because she knew prachi was in some trouble. Nd lastly where is abhi nd his son. How will u make prachi meet her dad. Expecting tooo much from u but can't help myself. But thanks, as ur hand was injured u still updated a big part nd added our suggestion also.

Originally posted by: Sociopath

Wow the whole last scene b/w prachi and ranbir was intense. Ranbir is being an asshole to prachi. Poor girl and divya is quite evil. The chapter was so good. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: sammy17

Ranbir was so horrible to prachi. Hope ranbir never speaks to prachi like that in the show though 😭