PreRish SS || Darmiyaan || [Chapter 10 - Pg 63] *Completed* - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

It's like watching the whole show afresh, with a brand new POV😮❤️

Niyati, you are too good babe👏

Thank you Sanu, I’ll try not to disappoint you 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: rinku95

interesting concept

continue soon

Thank you.. I’ll update it today 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: awesome

Awesome concept.

Please update soon.

Thank you! I’ll update it today 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting concept

Waiting for 1st part

Thank you so much! I’ll update the first part today 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Pori

What a beautiful start. Totally in love with the concept.
continue soon

Thank you so much for the comment😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

Niyati 🤗

Thank you so much for writing this SS and that too so fast 😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗

I just knew you are the best choice for writing this SS 😄

Though the concept is mine but after reading the prologue am intrigued to read more

So RB n P met through Rajesh and Rajesh already liked RB do the path is clear

Update the 1st part soon🤪

I can't wait to read more 😳

And am waiting for HIS entry (you know na whom and it's not RB) 😉

Kriti 🤗

Thank you for giving me a chance to write this Story. I’ll try my best to not disappoint you 😳

Oh yes, I have planned his HIS entry and he will bring a lot of twists and turns don’t worry 😈

Will update the first part by end of the day. 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: MR21

A fresh take on PreRish, Niyati this is awesome❤️

Coming to character sketch, RB/P/Kukki are interesting. RB needs a companion, Kukki understood this and wanted the same for her father, Prerna wants someone who can understand the pain behind her smile.

Now coming to the prologue, it looks like though A is a Mumma's boy, he is decent and helpful like his father. Rishabh Bajaj, an unknown to many who think he is unapproachable, but would change their opinion once they know him👍🏼. Basus, just because Bajaj is successful in less time and they can't do it, they think Bajaj is doing dirty tricks.

It's very interesting to see Rajesh and Bajaj bond. And only Prerna knows about this secret. Prerna & Kukki's bond is hearts❤️. So Prerna is hiding about her closeness with Bajaj from her dad. Let's see where this would lead her. What all she needs to go through to reach her happiness. Another thing I liked about Prerna is she is studying and also earning giving private tuition👍🏼.

This is Amazing Niyati🤗. Now give us the first chapter soon.

Ramya!! 🤗

The story is different from what it was in the show Lekin characters almost waise hi hain toh Basu’s ka Rishabh ko galat samajhna is normal 😆

Somewhere I know that if Rajesh would have been alive in the show as well, he would have liked Rishabh Unlike the rest of them. And I also wanted to continue portraying Prerna as she actually was in the initial stage of the show. A happy girl who was ambitious about life and wanted to become independent. 😊

With time you will come to know what tests she will have to give but at the same time I’ll try to not change the basis traits of these characters. I hope you’ll like the story. I’ll update the first part today 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: oa2019

a new story from a great writer. the start is very good, it's intriguing & interesting. I'm sure your story would be how the show actually should have been. great start & can't wait to read more.

Awww!! Thank you so much for your comment Love!! I’ll update it by end of the day!! 😳🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Saving the thread to read it later.

That’s so sweet of you!! Thank you 😭😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Yush001

Interesting and new concept! This is like a breath of fresh air from the cringefest we were watching.🤪

Glad to read that prerna is studying, unlike the show.😵 so prerna is getting close to rishabh, interesting!☺️

Update soon niyati! 🤗

Thank you so much for the comment!! 🤗

I’ll update it by the end of the day 😳

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