Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 86

Yayyy finally every body is settled....every body got der love....um kinda sad that this story is ended....hoping you would start another one....

Thank you for giving us wonderful story to remember. As always well written

What a beautiful story dear, loved reading each part of it, the way relationships grew, the way Arnav khushis love blossomed admist mystery, surprises and shocks torment everything..cherry on top was the climax where it was revealed that Payal was alive, had always felt bad about her death, th

e whole journey of investigation everything was awesome, will miss this story, keep writing waiting to read ur next story😊

beautiful end to a beautiful story... oh im going to miss this story!

oh wow, a proposal in ice cream parlor with the ring in the ice cream! sweetest proposal ever!!

all the couples are finally together like they all deserve to be 😊

thank you for sharing this wonderful story with all of us!

I hope you have something else planned so that you can come back soon with our beloved arshi and a new wonderful story!

no pressure though...yeh dil mange more! 😉

Amazing update

Finally everything sorted out. Akash Payal, Manav Anjali, Aarav Rashmi, and last Arnav khushi settled in their life. Everyone especially Payal, Anjali have faced a lot in their life. They deserve happiness.

Happy ending

Hi Vandana

Thanks for you comments :-)

May I know why you thought it was rushed? What was lacking in the wrapping?

Hi Kavi,

Thanks for asking.

Kavi, I liked the plot , the suspense was clever and caught us unaware . The build up was so intriguing that I created a chart with all the characters. I added my observations as story progressed. I had never done this with any story that I read.

Please, consider this as constructive criticism. I appreciate your beautiful effort and dedication to devote personal time to write. I don't want to dampen your enthusiasm to write a new story.

So here it goes.

The story presented a murder case and number of characters/ suspects to the reader. It takes its time to develop the intrigue and romance between the main characters at the same time . It leaves some vital questions regarding the motives of some characters.

When it comes to chapter 18 The story suddenly starts sprinting with twists and turns. Chapter 19 leaves you with at least 4 major turns , chapter 20 introduced a new character Sia, Akash's revelations with again couple of twists and turns. Chapter 21 to chapter 23 , Sia's convenient death and magic found of Satish the driver.The story is in hurry to tell everything about everyone and finish it off ...feww!!!

I could not help but feel rushed with a chapter having more than 4-5 twists and turns. I thought it deserved better wrapping up.

Kavi, forgive me if you did not like my views.

Vandana

Thank you Kavita for a wonderful story.

I always like suspense stories with romance as their back drop and this story is just my kind of story.

Finally all the characters had their HEA.

Just one question though, did Rashmi have feelings for Arnav and did think that she can have a second chance with him before she came to know about Arnav liking Khushi?

Can I request one more epilogue about Arnav and Khushi's marriage and their honeymoon hopefully in the USA?

Thanks again for this awesome story.

Happy Deepavali to you and to all the readers here!!!!

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Ok ....

btw..ur dp tells us u r PRETTY

The best pics go the DP 😃

End of another beautiful story... loved the characters and twists.... looking forward to read another one from you

Hi dear,

Amazing story and awesome epilogue. Each and everyone of your stories did promise a world of love and hope. I do read almost all of them . Even in your hiatus I just hunted down your whereabouts, was so worried what happened to my favorite author.

Just go on writing dear. Ans make us happy

Love 🤗

Anna