MERI MISHTY KAUN?? **UPD. Pg. 150**13/03/2020 - Page 16

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Nice part... waiting for more....

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Nice update 😊

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Awesome part

Maan refuses to believe geet is dead and started remembering old memories with her

I hope geet come back soon

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Thanks for PM. Nice update.

Maan took Geet to wrestling event. That was strangely funny. Geet reluctantly married Maan. Though she too loved him.

Maaneet got married in past. What about present? Waiting for the same. Update soon.

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Nice update.

maan remember his past when he merry geet and they fall in love.

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Amazingly beautiful, lovely n interesting update

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Waiting to know more about past ..........

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Awesome start for a new story

And sorry for the late comment was busy

Loved this

But is geet really dead

But then why maan felt peace with anjali around.

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CHAPTER 7(b)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, hospital/office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE.

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY!



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When Panditji called Geet she slowly and hesitantly went and sat near Maan. The wedding ceremony started.




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Throughout the wedding ceremony, Geet’s tears did not stop but she did not even once ask Maan to stop the wedding.



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Once the pheras were over,




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Geet was still crying now alarming and worrying Maan. Then he filled Geet’s maang




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and made her wear mangalsutra.




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Later, Maan and Geet went to touch the priest (panditji)’s feet, Panditji blessed them. When Panditaain (wife of the priest) blessed Geet, “Sada suhaagan raho betiya! Aapki hridaya ki peedha hum bhali bhaanti samajhte hain. Kissi bhi kanya ke liye uske mayike ko chodhna kitna kasht deta hai hum samjhte hain. Aur aapke naa toh mayikewale yahaan hain aapke saath aur naa hi aapke sasurwale. Chinta matt kariye betiya, jab aapke sasuralwalon ko patta chalega ki Maan bitwa ka vivaah ho gaya hai toh woh bahut harshit honge. (Always remain happy my dear. I can understand your pain and how painful it is for you to leave your maternal home. Besides neither is your maternal family here nor your in-laws. But don’t worry. Once your in-laws come to know about Master Maan’s marriage, they will be exhuberant)



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Finally Geet hugged a stranger i.e. Panditaain tightly and cried her heart out! Until now Maan felt that Geet is upset because he pushed her into this marriage.



(Please assume Geet is hugging Panditaain instead of Manchandaji)





Maan went near Geet and gathered her in his arms and made her sit in his chauffer driven car.






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On the way to the farmhouse, Maan made Geet wear beautiful Khurana’s ancestorial kangans. Maan said, “Yeh kangan “Khurana Khandaan ki Badi Bahu” ko shaadi ke waqt pheron par milte hain. Dulhan ko yeh kangan apni poori zindagi pehane honge kyunki mangalsutra ki tehre ismei bhi uske pati ki jaan bassati hai.” (These broad bangles (Kangans) are given to the “Eldest Daughtrer-in-law (Badi Bahu) of Khurana family(Khurana Khandaan)” at the mandap after pheras. These bangles the bride is expected to wear all her life for her husband’s long life).





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On reaching Khurana Farmhouse, Maan’s distant aunt and uncle (family friends/neighbours from his great grandfather’s village) whom he was very close to did Geet’s “grahpravesh”. Elderly couple left the newly weds after having breakfast with them but by now Geet had relaxed.




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After being given the tour of the farmhouse and spending some romantic time with her husband, she got an urgent SMS making Geet leave the warm and secure circle of her husband’s arms.




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“Suniye, abb hummein jana hoga.” (Now, I shall have to leave.)

“Thodi der aur ruk jaao. Mai tumhein lunch ke baad chodh doonga.” (Wait for some more time, I will drop you home after lunch.)

“Nahi hummein abhi jaana hoga warna humare chacha aur chachi........” (No I’ll have to leave immediately otherwise my Uncle and Aunt........)

“Tum darr kyun rahi ho? Unhein phone karke keh do ki tumhein der ho jaayegi.” (Why are you scared? Call and tell them that you will be slightly late.)

“Aap samajh nahi rahe. Woh humare gaurdian hain. Iss liye hummein abhi.......” (You are not understanding my plight. They are my gaurdian. Therefore, I have to immediately........) Geet said with deep fear in her eyes.


“Mishty, tum bhool rahi ho ki aaj se tum meri ho. SIRF MERI!” (Mishty you are forgetting that from today you are mine. Only mine!) Maan said pointing to her hair parting having sindoor (vermilion) and neck adorned with mangalsutra (string of black beads).



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“Yeh aapne kya kar diya? Aapne hummein kiss bandhan mein baandh liya? Aap toh jaante hain ki hum do hafte baad Delhi chodh kar chale jaayenge.” (What have you done? You have tied me in an unbreakable bond. You knew that I will be leaving Delhi in two weeks.) Geet said touching her parting and mangalsutra thereby remembering her new marital status.

“Abb tum meri ho aur meri consent ke bina kaheen nahi jaa sakteen.” (Now you legally belong to me and cannot leave me without my consent.)




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Just then her phone rang and she answered the call immediately, “Theek hain hum aa rahe hain. Aap royiye matt. Woh aapka kuch nahi bigadh sakte hain. Hum dus minute mein pauhchte hain. Aap swayam ko apne kamre mein bandh kar lijiye aur darwaze ko andar se lock kar lijiye.” (Yes, yes I’m coming. Don’t cry. He cannot even touch you. I’ll be there in ten (10) minutes. You lock yourself in your room.) She disconnected the phone.



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Then looking at Maan she said, Hummein jaana padhega. Humari behan ki jaan khatare mein hai.” (I will now have to leave as my sister’s life is in danger.)

“Mai tumhare saath chaloon?” (Should I accompany you?)

“Nahi. Aap yaheen rahiye. Hum nahi chahte ki hum dono behano ke saath-saath aapki jaan bhi khatare mein padh jaaye.” (No. You stay here. I don’t want that even your life is in danger along with both of ours.)

“Abb tum meri patni ho aur mujhe tumhein protect karne se koi nahi rok sakta.” (Now you are my wife. No one can stop me from protecting you.) Maan said with possessiveness and aggression.





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“Aap kitne bahadur hain.” (You are so brave) Geet came forward and hugged Maan tightly while gently pressing a nerve on Maan’s shoulder (Writer’s Liberty) and then her newly wedded husband lost his consciousness and slumped on her shoulder. Making him lie as comfortably as Geet could single handedly on the bed she covered him with a duvet. Geet quickly went to the washroom and changed into the salwaar-kurta she was carrying with her removing all her marital signs i.e. Bridal saree,





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chunri,



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payals,




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kundan set etc.




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The only thing which she didn’t remove was Khurana’s ancestorial kangans (Kangans are given to the “Badi Bahu of Khurana Khandaan” for her husband’s long life),




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her mangalsutra and sindoor in her parting although she did remove excess sindoor from her forehead so that it could be camflouged in her long hair. She went in Maan’s bedroom and placed a kiss on his lips and left saying, “Hummein maaf kar dijiyega ki humne yeh chhal aapke saath kiya hai. Kaash aap hummein iss vivaah bandhan mein nahi baandhte to humari bewafai aap ke liye sehan karna saral ho jaati.” (Please forgive me for playing this charade on you. I wish you would have not tied me with you in this holy matrimonial bond. Then my this betrayal would have been easy for you to bear.)




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Then covering her whole face except her eyes with a dupatta she left.


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PRESENT

Location: Private Suite in St. Micheals Psychiatric Hospital (SMPH) Baltimore, US (FICTITIOUS NAME AND PLACE)

The beautiful girl in her late twenties named “ANNIE” with a child like innocence on her face was sitting brushing her doll’s hair and talking with her private nurse saying, “She will come and meet me today, Beth?” Nurse patiently nodded for a millionth time in affirmative. “My Geet didi will come to meet me today?” Nurse patiently nodded in affirmative.

Yes, but Annie should now sleep then get up and have lunch so you are not sleepy when your didi is here. Then get dressed and recieve your DIDI.” Nurse Elizabeth replied.

The girl named ‘Annie’ bobbed her head like a child, climbed into her bed and then dozed off. Once Nurse Elizabeth Graham was sure that Annie had slept off she went to make a call.


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Edited by LM1991 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 7 B


Maan probably did not want to lose Geet and perhaps that's his reason

for such a quick secret marriage when Geet herself was not ready

the fact that Maan knew Geet was leaving India in two weeks did not bother him

as he felt he will accompany her to USA but instead Geet just left ,actually she ran away

yes its a betrayal , because loved her he trusted her and she took his love as some game

I'm waiting to learn more about Annie

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