MERI MISHTY KAUN?? **UPD. Pg. 150**13/03/2020 - Page 14

Wow! What an update!

So the truth about the past finally revealed & maan is shocked!

Geet is actually dead? I was secretly hoping she was still alive.

I am glad that maan now knows the truth & does not doubt geet anymore.

Thanks for pm & update!😀

Amazing, emotional n wonderful update

Finally Maan knew the truth about Geet and was shocked

Hope he will cope with the hard reality

Maan nd geet are so alike nd but Maan nd anjali are so different...Anjali is cold nd Maan also has become cold...he didn't even once try to talk to her nd ask answers why ...they just didn't talk in these months...it's going to be interesting

Really is geet dead ?..I can't believe ...I m not able to understand is this story focus on Maan nd geet or concept of love ...I mean who is lead ...Maan nd geet or Maan nd anjali...it's soo sad geet is dead...Maan can only be with geet be whatever the definition of love

Nd now Maan knows the reality how he is gonna cope up ...the way he lead his life in past thinking geet betrayed him nd now she is no more how will he cope up nd anjali thinks he is a womaniser...it will be interesting to see

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CHAPTER 7(a)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, hospital/office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE.

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY!

Maan sat on the sofa with a thud, alarming Nakul.

“Maan baba, Maan baba!”

“Kya hua?” (What happened?)

“Kuch toh boliye?” (Please say something.) Nakul was shaking Maan but he was not able to get rid of Maan’s trance. Nakul ran to call Maan’s Mama, Pitamber Khanna and Mami, Vaidehi Khanna.

Maan was in a trance refusing to admit the bitter truth, “No it can’t be. Geet had promised never to leave me so how could she?” His thoughts went to to all the six months of their meeting and before Geet had finally disappeared.

FLASHBACK

After lot of struggle and enquiring on his part when nothing happened, Maan finally took the help of a reputed Detective Agency. Within a week, they were able to locate whereabouts of number of girls. As Geet’s eyes were closed while praying in the Dargah, hence, initially the detectives got photographs of all sort of girls who resembled Geet with their eyes closed. A month later, finally Maan lost his temper and threatened to close their Agency if they don’t find Geet. Finally a week later they got two photographs and one was of Geet. The detectives discovered that Geet use to go every evening at 5:30pm to a music class called ‘Sargam’. The music class was very near KC. Hence, now every evening Maan was at KC, waiting for his sweetheart’s music class to get over.

First day when Geet saw Maan outside her music class she was shocked and asked him to stay away from her as his life can also be in danger like her family’s. But Maan refused and said to just think of him as a friend and tell him all her problems and tensions nothing else. As Geet was very lonely and scared she started telling him a little about her life i.e. she is from US. She has come here as an exchange student. Geet is here in India along with her parents and younger sister for only six months. Her grandparents have recently passed away. Her father’s cousin wants to usurp her father’s ancestorial property and business and won’t hesitate to kill them if needed.

Slowly when their friendship (latent love) turned into expression of love both don’t remember. Maan started getting small and romantic things for Geet i.e. chocolate, flower, taking Geet to eat chaat etc. However Geet refused to recieve any expensive gifts from Maan i.e. diamond bracelet, luxury watch and jewellery, because Geet said that she has agreed to be Maan’s friend but not Maan’s girlfriend.

Once Maan had convinced Geet to become “his friend” he said that like a friend he will like to take her to one of his hobby which he enjoys the most and she agreed. Maan took her to one of wrestling matches he loved to watch.

Men’s grunt, cheering, sweat smell and sounds of punches all raised Maan’s and other men in the audience their adrenalin whereas Geet was getting sick with the sight and noise of masculine strength and smell of masculine sweat. Maan was so engrossed in the game that he didn’t see what Geet was going through. Finally when the round finished, Maan found Geet lying unconscious on the floor next to him.

Next day, Geet refused to talk or meet Maan. Finally after lot of apologising and cajoling Maan managed to cool down Geet’s temper by saying that he will also go with her to one of her hobbies. Geet took Maan to a beautiful garden and made him sit in a secluded area and asked him to sing. Maan was taken aback as he was tone deaf. Maan saw Geet angry for the first time and the pout of her kissable lips was a proof of it. Hence, to calm Geet down, Maan said that as Maan doesn’t know how to sing, Geet should sing so that he will copy her. Ultimately they both sang. Geet’s sweet, melodious and tuneful voice along with Maan’s hoarse, baritone and out of tune voice.

“Sa…re…ga…ma…pa…pa…”

(Movie: Abhinetri)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Wt8UHaotb8

Five months later (Two weeks before Geet was to leave for US), Maan gave Geet two packets. Before she could refuse, Maan said, “Mishty, I love you. I want to marry you.”

“Magar......” (But......)

“Mai jaanta hoon ki tum bhi mere liye kuch feel karti ho. Kyunki tum abhi choti ho shayad yeh feelings tum samajh naa paao. Magar agar tum mujhe trust karti ho toh kya kal subah saath (7) baje yeh pehan kar Birla Mandir aaogi.” (I know that you also feel something for me. But as you are too young, you may not be able to comprehend them. However, if you trust me, please wear these and come tomorrow at 07:00a.m. to Birla Mandir.)

“Aap jaante bhi nahi aap humare beirang jeevan mein kya mahetrav rakhte hain? Aur yadi humare kaaran aapko koi bhi taqleef hui toh hum sehan nahi kar paayenge.” (You don’t even know what your importance in my life is? You have filled my dark and grey life with sunshine and colours! I will not be able to bear if something happens to you.) Geet said as if talking to herself but Maan overheard it.

“Agar tum kal Birla Mandir yeh sab pehan kar nahi aaogi toh mujhe zarur taqleef hogi.” (If you don’t wear this and come to Birla Mandir I will definitely be hurt and in pain.)

“Theek aapki khushi ke liye hum kal yeh pehan kar Birla Mandir aayenge.” (Alright if it gives you happiness I’ll wear all this and come to Birla Mandir tomorrow.)

Next day Geet came dressed in the beautiful silk saree. It was plain red in colour with narrow and an elegant zari border.

Maan had also given her a classy kundan set matching to the saree.

She was looking gorgeous and Maan was unable to take his eyes off her.

Whereas Geet was shocked to see the temple’s main sanctum beautifully decorated and Maan also traditionally dressed. After few seconds Geet said, “Maan Sir, yeh sab kya hai?” (What is all this Maan Sir?)

“Humari shaadi.” (Our wedding.)

“SHAADI! Magar hummein toh laga..........Maan Sir yeh sab theek nahi hai. Bina mata-pitah ki sehmati (approval) aur unki upastithi (presence) ke yeh sahi nahi hai.” (WEDDING! But I felt that..... Maan Sir this is not right. Without parents permission and their presence its not correct.)

“Dekho Geet tum do hafte baad US jaa rahi ho aur mai bhi tumhare saath jaaonga. If we travel without being legally bound to one another my and your family will be horrified.” (Listen Geet, in two weeks time you will leave for US and I will also be accompanying you. If we travel without being legally bound to one another my and your family will be horrified.)

“Kintu aap US kyun jaa rahe hain?” (But why are “you” going to US?)

“Kyunki yahaan tumhare liye rehna safe nahi hai. Iss liye mai abb US mein practice karna chahta hoon aur tumhare saath rehna chahta hoon.” (Because its not safe for you here. Hence, I will now live with you and practice in US.)

“Magar, kya aapke mata-pitah aur parivaar ko aapka yeh nirnaye manzoor hai?” (But will your parents and family accept your this decision?)

“Maan Beta, muharth beeta jaa raha hai. Kripya sheeghr vivaah vidhiyaan prarambh karen.” (Son, auspicious time is getting wasted. Kindly hurry up and start the wedding rituals.)

“Panditji kewal paanch minute aur. Dulhan zara bhaav khaa rahi hai.” (Just five minutes Panditji. The bride is showing attitude.) Maan smirked making the priest also nod his head at now-a-day’s childish young adults.

Hearing Maan’s saying Geet’s attitude as ‘bhaav khaana’, Geet was annoyed. Maan came near Geet and placed his hand around her shoulders and said softly, “Theek hai gussa matt ho! Mai promise karta hoon ki jab tak tum iss ke baare mein apni family aur society ko battana naa chaho mai bhi apni family ko nahi battaonga.” (Alright, alright don’t be angry! I promise that until you are comfortable to tell your family and society, I will also not tell my family.)

Geet was in deep thought while Maan went and sat in mandap in front of the havan kund.

(Mandap)

(Havan kund)

When Panditji called Geet she slowly and hesitantly went and sat near Maan.

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loved the update...

Maan and geets sweet love story...

how they met fell in love and then got married...cute how maan took her to a wrestling match and Geet fainted and she took him to her hobby which was singing...

Beautiful update maan recollection his past so both have married in mandir waiting for next update

Chapter 7 (a)

can understand Maan's reaction!

liked the blast into the past!

Maan was smitten with Geet! friendship turned into love! Geet's reasons are justified as she feared his life! but Maan was adamant!

Maan managed to convince her to marry him!

Maaneet got married!

continue soon, thanks for the pm