Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 79

Originally posted by: pravallika

Omgggggg!!

My guess was right, kavi 👏😆 After akash's entry into the story, I somewhere felt that payal must be alive. You have not mentioned clearly about Payal's body anywhere in the story. When I asked you about the same, you didn't give away anything about it. I understood that you want to keep it as a suspense till the end. So I didn't bother you much. I read the whole story before asking you that one question, kavi 😆

Finally everyone is with their deserved partners. Shyam is a creep and he proved it again. Shyam had just financial problems in his childhood compared to arnav who had lots on his plate from childhood. But look at the two of them. One is turned out to be a hero and the other one a villain.

So now Payash has a child. That means payal was carrying when she left that place. Godd!! How much she might have endured in these 8 yrs. Eager to read the next chapter, kavi. This is one of the best arshi mystery.

Hope you will start a new story after this Take care dear.

I know but I answered you in the best way I could without giving away too much 😆

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Gauri,

You used to be so close to what was going to happen that it used to scare me 😆

LOL! I used to come up with sooo many speculations, some of them had to be right

But the last wala twist was mind blowing. That option didn't even cross my mind. Brilliant! 👏

Kavi, oh bhai, kya twist ke upar twist tha yeh!!!

After Khushi mentioned in earlier chapters that Nandita resembles Payal a lot, I kind of hoped that Payal was alive, but then I thought it would mean Nandita would be dead, so kind of dropped that idea in my mind.

But it was indeed sad how the goons killed her. Why was she at the abortion clinic? Was she pregnant too ?

IPK kind of never explored the evilness of Shyam completely but here reading him as a total villain, it was actually nice. Though I do agree that we humans can never be totally black or white, but reading a villain who is more or less black is always a welcome.

After so many years of suffering, it is nice to know that there are happier days ahead for Payal, Akash and their child.

Khushi is good to be a detective. Maybe she should join the police force and help this invisible yet liked by all the readers, Rathod (Who oddly reminds me of the invisible Aman from the original IPK)

Chalo, all is well that ends well.

Awesome story Kavita. Enjoyed reading the story and interacting with all the readers here too.

Thank you for penning it down. And hope the ink in your pen never dries up.

Kavi Avare - super mega twist. Haila! 👏

You made sure that not just Arnav and Khushi, but Akash and Payal (along with Akshat) have a happily- ever-after. Akash and Payal deserve it.Hopefully even Anjali and Manav (with Ananya) get together soon.

You weaved it all together very well, with every explanation delivered. Awesome!!

Kavi - while we all thought about Shyam as the super villain, you emerged as the super story-teller, with this an-dekha plot. Desert Rose is among my all time favorites with its dose of romance, drama, location etc. But Sea Mist beats them all in the suspense quotient. Some day, I would like to know how you withheld all the suspense (and mann-hii-mann laughed at our speculations 😃)

Beautiful, subtle way of ending the story. I am so happy to be a part of this journey with you. Thank you for sharing such a lovely creation of art with us. 🤗

What's next Kavi? ❤️

Love,

Vini.

Oh my god.. i never imagined that payal is alive and it was such a wonderful twist. And the whole chapter felt like a climax scene of movie with fight and all.

Awesome update

Fabulous ending. Didn't expect Payal will return that too with a child. Shyam,the creep couldn't succeed in his evil plans. Everyone had a happy ending. This is one of the best mystery story. Hopefully you will come with one more wonderful story on Arshi.

After reading the final chapter I can only say omg yeh kaisa twist tha one could never imagine Payal was alive. Anyway as you said in the beginning you ended the story on a happy note.

Shyam babua’s true nature and his real self was revealed wonder what would Arnav’s dad and mom say after hearing about Shyam Shyam’s greed and his thirst to become powerful and influential landed him in a mess. Poor Anjali also suffered on account of him.

In spite of Arnav doing all the background work and was in touch with Mr Rathod regarding Payal’s case. In the end it was kushi who unearthed main facts relating to the case and declared that the girl who was brought by shyam’s goons was none other than payal.

Felt happy for Aakash his happiness knew no bounds when Payal told him they had a son. Would have loved to read Payal’s side of the story of how she remained incognito all these years.

Wonderful update....

I knew it that Payal is alive specially when u mentioned Nandita & Payal resemble to each other bt the twist is Akash- Payal having childcan't wait to read more bt wt will be the reaction of Akash's mother ❓

Superb update !! I was so shocked that Payal is alive. It had so many twists and turns. So Shyam was the real culprit. Good he got punished for his sins. All's well that ends well.

So, is Shyam’s chapter finally closed ? I am so happy Payal is alive. Akash does have some hope of true love and happiness coming his way.