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Wasu🤗

Baby!!! You killed it right from the start!

I mean I was awestruck. The sentiment,vehemence, emotion description was marvelous. You have incredibly good hand of writing which I truly admire.

Thankyou for this lovely OS.

Love

Arayna

Originally posted by: columbia

Your writing is so heartfelt and the story you have woven can easily be made into a track on TV. Thank god for fiction writers.

I have only one small critique - mera haq toh nahi banta phir bhi, I think it is important aspect of writing- your Hindi dialogues - grammar, gender and tense need heavy editing. Just check na.

My apologies if it seems offensive, I just thought it affected me while reading. Pls ignore if you think it’s not necessary

From her very first update she filled us about her weakness in Hindi. But she's such an amazing writer that the Hindi flaws never overpowers her outstanding creations.

But I concur with you as well. It would be impeccable if the Hindi dialogues are ameliorated.

Wasu ,if you need any kind of help on that we are always there!

Hope you didn't mind us !

Loads of love

Originally posted by: Sehrish-Arayna

From her very first update she filled us about her weakness in Hindi. But she's such an amazing writer that the Hindi flaws never overpowers her outstanding creations.

But I concur with you as well. It would be impeccable if Hindi dialogues are ameliorated.

Wasu ,if you need any kind of help on that we are always there!

Hope you didn't mind on that.

Loads of love

I am sorry I missed the disclaimer. Thank you for that and also many thanks for the offer to help her, I so wish the author takes you up on that. To her (Wasu) I would like to reinstate, you are a brilliant writer, because you conceptualize the story movement superbly and the technicality of language is actually an easy fix. It’s an enhancement to an already beautiful soul which your writing already has. Please believe me, if I didn’t think that, I would not have even commented.

Jst one wrd fr this wasu ' wowwwww' 😍😍😍 aisa kuch dikhaya makers tabh jakar it will mk some sense

Originally posted by: haribol79

Thanks for wonderful write up..👍

Thank you so so much hariiii🤗means alot!!!!

Originally posted by: columbia

Your writing is so heartfelt and the story you have woven can easily be made into a track on TV. Thank god for fiction writers.

I have only one small critique - mera haq toh nahi banta phir bhi, I think it is important aspect of writing- your Hindi dialogues - grammar, gender and tense need heavy editing. Just check na.

My apologies if it seems offensive, I just thought it affected me while reading. Pls ignore if you think it’s not necessary

Bold: thank you so much dearie.🤗(I would love to know your name by the way) and as i always say these appreciations you guys shower on me always keep me going and help me in growing.

Italic: arey nahiiiii baaba of course haq banta hein tumara.i am not be offended at all. 🤗Actually i am not an indian and my hindi is extremely borderline-bad because all what i have learnt is by catching up hindi from bollywood movies and serials, not by any kinda proper learning😒I truely apologize for the mistakes and i honestly understand it would be sorta hard for you guys to read the language with mistakes in them. I am sincerely very sorry about it and will try to correct my mistakes. Thank you for this honest comment,and for the love and appreciation. It means alot to me!!!

Originally posted by: Sehrish-Arayna

Wasu🤗

Baby!!! You killed it right from the start!

I mean I was awestruck. The sentiment,vehemence, emotion description was marvelous. You have incredibly good hand of writing which I truly admire.

Thankyou for this lovely OS.

Love

Arayna

Awwww aray!!!! (May i call you that?) this made my day🤗😳 thank you thank you thank you so much baby for this love and appreciation. Its what keeps me going. Means alotttt to me, more than i can ever say.

Sending you virtual hugs all the way.

Tc and much love.

❤️

Originally posted by: Sehrish-Arayna

From her very first update she filled us about her weakness in Hindi. But she's such an amazing writer that the Hindi flaws never overpowers her outstanding creations.

But I concur with you as well. It would be impeccable if the Hindi dialogues are ameliorated.

Wasu ,if you need any kind of help on that we are always there!

Hope you didn't mind us !

Loads of love

Thank you baby for this!!!! I am truely touched to see this on behalf of me*happy tears* i am happy beyond words to be bonded with all the forumwaasis like this ❤️

Bold: i agree. It would be much great if i had connected with you all in the story by proper hindi. I apologize for all the mistakes i have made in the language and writing, from all of you sincerely. I am very sorry about it.

And thank you for letting me know i am not alone in this. Thank you for offering to help and i am honestly very grateful for that. It means so much arayna. I know you all are always there for me.

I did NOT mind at all,babyyy!!! Hugs and much love.

Originally posted by: columbia

I am sorry I missed the disclaimer. Thank you for that and also many thanks for the offer to help her, I so wish the author takes you up on that. To her (Wasu) I would like to reinstate, you are a brilliant writer, because you conceptualize the story movement superbly and the technicality of language is actually an easy fix. It’s an enhancement to an already beautiful soul which your writing already has. Please believe me, if I didn’t think that, I would not have even commented.

Arey don’t be sorry baaba.🤗 i thought you would have missed the disclaimer and i too just gave a very little detail about it only in my first update.😔My bad. I believe in you and It was you being very honest and that itself means alot to me. Thank you for appreciating me, bearing with me and my weak hindi and i will try to minimize my mistakes from here on. Thank you again and again and much love.Glad to have met you over here in the forum. Hugs and much love.😳❤️

Originally posted by: roshni_az

Jst one wrd fr this wasu ' wowwwww' 😍😍😍 aisa kuch dikhaya makers tabh jakar it will mk some sense

Arey yeahhhhh roshhhhhhh🤗 thank you so so so much my dearieeeee!!! Means alottt and much love. Hugs all the way!!!!