When your lips touches mine ~ Complete the story . - Page 2

Originally posted by: sneha_17

Obviously someone will interrupt.

Pillu or Arthava or Anupriya or other Rane clown

Forgot our Kalyani is more than enough to do such antics

I am continuing from titli part only.....

Malhar ::: Kalyani in hothon ko milna hoga .

Kalyani ::: Par par malhar ji

Kalyani feels a least touch of his on her lips but but

Atharv put his hand in between their lips. 😆🤣

Malhar continue to suck his palm while Kalyani was busy in his eyes. As a sudden malhar realize that surface which he was sucking is not lips .

He open his eyes and see atharv coming towards him with a pout.

Malhar push him in all of a sudden and yells.

Malhar ::: Yeh kya Kar raha hai . 🤣

Atharv ::: Aai aai, baba Mar rahe hai 😭. Aai bachao baba ki satak gayi hai.

Malhar ::: Pagal ho gaya hai ab uski aai ka beta. 😈

Atharv ::: Aisa kya kiya Maine. Aap aai ko lip kiss Kar sakte hai , to main kyun nahi Kar sakta aap ko. 🤣. Mujhe mera haq do. 🤣. I want my rights. Baba meri mange ( demands) puri Karo. 😆

He Start hugging Kalyani........

Malhar ::: Ye ladka pura pagal ho gaya. Straight hai ye pagal par ab apne baba ko chumna hai. Mai ja raha hoo. 🤣.

Atharv ::: Aai dekha baba Kitne khadoos hai . 😡Apko bhi kiss nahi karte aur apne atharv ko bhi nahi. Gande papa. 🤢

Aai aai aap toh gandi nahi ho, aap toh kiss karongi na. Plz 😵

He start moving toward her with a pout... 😘

Malhar heard all this as he was peeping in the room from window.

Malhar ran toward the room and push him toward the bed.

Malhar ::: Dur reh 25 sal ke ghode meri Biwi se. Ab yeh kiss ki baat kiya na toh ek laga doonga. 🤬

Atharv Start crying very badly. All deshmook and Ranes get gather in his room.

All this while Kalyani was standing numb and just watching father son Duo.

So guys now let's part is in your hand. Good luck. 😊

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

So funny Neera🤣

Thanks bhagya. You should continue this in your way na.

Originally posted by: Vermilion

I am continuing from titli part only.....

Malhar ::: Kalyani in hothon ko milna hoga .

Kalyani ::: Par par malhar ji

Kalyani feels a least touch of his on her lips but but

Atharv put his hand in between their lips. 😆🤣

Malhar continue to suck his palm while Kalyani was busy in his eyes. As a sudden malhar realize that surface which he was sucking is not lips .

He open his eyes and see atharv coming towards him with a pout.

Malhar push him in all of a sudden and yells.

Malhar ::: Yeh kya Kar raha hai . 🤣

Atharv ::: Aai aai, baba Mar rahe hai 😭. Aai bachao baba ki satak gayi hai.

Malhar ::: Pagal ho gaya hai ab uski aai ka beta. 😈

Atharv ::: Aisa kya kiya Maine. Aap aai ko lip kiss Kar sakte hai , to main kyun nahi Kar sakta aap ko. 🤣. Mujhe mera haq do. 🤣. I want my rights. Baba meri mange ( demands) puri Karo. 😆

He Start hugging Kalyani........

Malhar ::: Ye ladka pura pagal ho gaya. Straight hai ye pagal par ab apne baba ko chumna hai. Mai ja raha hoo. 🤣.

Atharv ::: Aai dekha baba Kitne khadoos hai . 😡Apko bhi kiss nahi karte aur apne atharv ko bhi nahi. Gande papa. 🤢

Aai aai aap toh gandi nahi ho, aap toh kiss karongi na. Plz 😵

He start moving toward her with a pout... 😘

Malhar heard all this as he was peeping in the room from window.

Malhar ran toward the room and push him toward the bed.

Malhar ::: Dur reh 25 sal ke ghode meri Biwi se. Ab yeh kiss ki baat kiya na toh ek laga doonga. 🤬

Atharv Start crying very badly. All deshmook and Ranes get gather in his room.

All this while Kalyani was standing numb and just watching father son Duo.

So guys now let's part is in your hand. Good luck. 😊

Hahahahahah....this is even funnier 😝😝😝

Enjoyed it alot....aisa scene aana chahiye yr aage show mai...but tab jab kalma actually kiss krne jaare ho😜..oh gosh I can already imagine that!!

K - Malhar ji kya aap bhi, Atharva ab 5 saal ke bacche jaisa behave karta hai to aisi hi harkate karega na

M - Wa! Taaliya bajao. Kalyani ab tum bhi iss Atharva ki side le rahi ho. Filmon mein aisa nahi hota hai Kalyani. Yaad hai na tumhare filmy logic ke hisab se ye villain hai. Aur tum issi ki side le rahi ho! Hadh hai

K- Malhar ji, Kya aap bhi! Ek minute, matlab aapne bhi maan liya ki main heroine aur aap hero hai! Wow I am so happy

M- Khair chodo main bhi kis se baat kar raha hoon. You both mother son continue your filmy things. I am leaving for police station

K- Thik hai jaiye.

Malhar leaves

At night, Kalyani gets into thinking that why she was stuttering while having gola and at one moment she was lost in him and having gola even after Swara left. She thinks what is happening with me..I have changed a lot. And today I wanted to take feel of kiss.

Kahi mujhe pyaar...to nahi ho gaya

she hits palm on forehead and says

Uff! Tu kitni stupid hai Kalyani. Filmon mein aisa hota hai to kya hota hai? Aur dekho hindi filmein, tabhi pata chalega

waise bhi Malhar ji ghar pe nahi hai

dekh hi leti hoon filmein, mera gyaan aur badhega

aur main unhi mein se aur bhi ideas use kar sakti hoon

Malhar ji kitna proud feel karenge🤣

@,Vermilion I want retrospect ur brain .I mean chal kya raha tha yar teri dimag mein . I was almost falling from my couch laughing and my mom.wZ like what's wrong with this girl ! What she is up to ,!It's awesome dear awesome !!

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

@,Vermilion I want retrospect ur brain .I mean chal kya raha tha yar teri dimag mein . I was almost falling from my couch laughing and my mom.wZ like what's wrong with this girl ! What she is up to ,!It's awesome dear awesome !!

🤣🤣

Thank you so much titli. Actually when I start writing I don't have single idea in my mind, but as I promised to you to, write a part in night. So I start writing it and chain of thoughts come to my mind.

Aur haste raho

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

K - Malhar ji kya aap bhi, Atharva ab 5 saal ke bacche jaisa behave karta hai to aisi hi harkate karega na

M - Wa! Taaliya bajao. Kalyani ab tum bhi iss Atharva ki side le rahi ho. Filmon mein aisa nahi hota hai Kalyani. Yaad hai na tumhare filmy logic ke hisab se ye villain hai. Aur tum issi ki side le rahi ho! Hadh hai

K- Malhar ji, Kya aap bhi! Ek minute, matlab aapne bhi maan liya ki main heroine aur aap hero hai! Wow I am so happy

M- Khair chodo main bhi kis se baat kar raha hoon. You both mother son continue your filmy things. I am leaving for police station

K- Thik hai jaiye.

Malhar leaves

At night, Kalyani gets into thinking that why she was stuttering while having gola and at one moment she was lost in him and having gola even after Swara left. She thinks what is happening with me..I have changed a lot. And today I wanted to take feel of kiss.

Kahi mujhe pyaar...to nahi ho gaya

she hits palm on forehead and says

Uff! Tu kitni stupid hai Kalyani. Filmon mein aisa hota hai to kya hota hai? Aur dekho hindi filmein, tabhi pata chalega

waise bhi Malhar ji ghar pe nahi hai

dekh hi leti hoon filmein, mera gyaan aur badhega

aur main unhi mein se aur bhi ideas use kar sakti hoon

Malhar ji kitna proud feel karenge🤣

Bhagya tumne accha likha. They both realize that they are hero and heroine of their life.

Kalyani really should watch more movies, that what are some different levels of love and in marriage. ☺️.

Thank you.

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Bhagya tumne accha likha. They both realize that they are hero and heroine of their life.

Kalyani really should watch more movies, that what are some different levels of love and in marriage. ☺️.

Thank you.

thanks Neera

aise hi fun ke liye likha

Bhaggu u wrote really well. Kalma humari andar ki writing skill ko bahar le hi ati hai.Thats why always keep saying ki u must write more often really .