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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just an half baked idea of mine ......... I hope you guys enjoy it



Rohit!!!!!!!! Rohit !!!!!!!!!!!

Sonakshi rushed into Dr Rohit’s cabin shouting his name ,Rohit looked up a bit shocked and a bit amused and a bit happy as he was working on some administrative work and needed distraction , although her hypervoice did not bode well for him , He signed ,He had barely got some things settled today Now what happened? He thought !

Sonakshi slow down I am right here Kya hua ? He asked her as she entered his cabin in full panic mode

Sonakshi : Woh Ja rahi hai , Woh Ja rahi hai , Woh hamesha ke liye Ja rahi hai!!!!

Rohit : Calm down , baitho , paani piyo pehle toh aur aaram se batao , Kaun ja rahi hai , kyun ja rahi hai aur kahan ja rahi hai ?

Sonakshi :Paani peene ka time nahi hai tum chalo mere sath abhi ....

Rohit sitting down on his chair and smirking: Kahan jaun aur yeh serial nahi hai ok yahan jab tak life aur death ka sawaal nahi hota tab tak panic nahi karte .... Paani peene ka time toh sabke pass hota hai baitho woh saamne glass rakhi hai paani piyo ,tumhare mathe par bahut pasina hai pocho aur phir bolo

Sonakshi : Raima ja rahi hai Rohit !!!!!! Hamesha ke liye tumhe chod ke , woh!

Rohit standing up :Yeh tumko kaise pata

Sonakshi : Usne mujhe abhi text kiya .... woh airport pe baithi hai , woh ja rahi hai , hum abhi ja ke rok sakte hain use , chalo maine Ravi ko kaha hai gaadi start karke rakhne ke liye

Rohit : Acha usne tumhe text kahan se kiya boarding area se ya checking in se area se ?

Sonakshi : ROHIT!!!!!!! Usse kya fark padhta hai woh AIRPORT pe hai aur Ja rahi hai , Hume rokna hai use

Rohit mumbling , arre agar boarding area mein thi toh use mujhe bhi text karna tha na

Sonakshi : tum bewakoofon ki tarah khade kyun ho chalo

Rohit : lekin kyun ? main kyun rokun use....

Sonakshi : Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya , operation karte waqt kahin tumne toh anasthasia nahi smell kar liya ? Rokoghe nahi toh woh chali jayegi hamesha ke liye

Rohit standing up and speaking saracastically ......: Tum kya chahati ho ki main gaadi mein baith ke Ravi ko bolun ki gaadi jitni tezzz chala sakte ho chalao mujhe airport jaana hai , aur phir main airport pahuchun aur wahan gate keeper se binti karun ki sir pyar ka mamla hai mujhe jaane dijiye aur , aur phir mujhe woh nahi jaane dega kyun guards filmy nahi hote toh main usse do punch maar ke andar ghusun aur chirtee hue Raima ke paas pahunchun hain na !

Sonakshi : Nahi Rohit hatha paayi nahi karni hogi I will explain it all to gate keeper and use my celebrity status and get you inside ab chalo Jaldi

Rohit : yeh sab filmom mein aur tv serials mein hota hai Sonakshi , asli life mein nahi , itna hyper mat ho ! Waise bhi Raima hamesha keliye nahi ja rahi hai woh bas 6 mahine ka air hostess ka course karne Germany ja rahi hai

Sonakshi stared at Rohit for a long minute ....... Tumhe yeh maloom tha .. Main itni derr se yahan chillla rahi thi ......... Tum Tum kuch bole kyun nahi

Rohit sitting down and smiling : I was enjoying the show....... The GREAT PARVATI at her best !!!! and then frowning ,kafi samay hogaya na mujhe tumhari taang khinche hue

Sonakshi sat down ... and avoided his piercing eyes ... TumTum chodne nahi gaye usse Airport

Rohit : For your kind information madame Sonakshi I had a major. surgery today and kisne kaha chodne nahi gaya , Ravi hi toh Raima aur uski mummy ko Airport chodne gaya tha , aur ab ek meherbaani aur karo aur Ravi Kokaho GAADI KO BAND KAR DE PATA NAHI KITNA PETROL WASTE HOGA

Sonakshi looked at Rohit for a long moment .........and then..... Agar sab thik hai toh main chalti hun...She stood up and turned towards the door

Rohit : Sonakshi puchogi nahi ki .... Main itne din Raima ke bina kaise rahunga .....aur kaise jeeyunga and whatever (He was speaking sarcastically) or ya whatever tv serial mein ek aashiq ke sath hota hai jab woh apni priyatama se durr hota hai

Sonakshi :Rohit why do you do this mere tv ke bare mein

Rohit had by that time reached Sonakshi and holding her :Han han tumhare Tv ke bare mein kuch nahi bolunga .........lekin ab tum meri ek kahani toh sunti jao ,kahani kya reality jo actual life mein hota hai .. Saying this he sat her down and again offered her water

Sonakshi : Batao !!!! Reality mein kya hota ... Main bhi sunun

Rohit : Reality mein ...... EK ladka hota hai bahut handsome and successful and then he meets a girl who is also a bit beautiful and they fight a lot at first and then they become friends, best friends because both have had pasts which have shaped them and made them into human beings today , they both start to like each other and also understand each other ,have fun together and adventures ........ Then the boy’s ex returns, his best friend whom he knew he loves and maybe she loves him too tries to avoid him ..... doesn’t speak to him,.. thinks she is doing good by pushing the ex and her friend together but she hurts the handsome boy.......

Sonakshi looked at him with confusion in her eyes :Rohit tumkya kehna chahate ho

Rohit : Main kuch nahi keh raha , kahani suna raha hun.........Socho woh handsome ladka kya karta ,ek taraf toh uski ex jiski buri halat ka woh khud ko jimmedaar manta tha aur dusri taraf uski best friend uski humdard aur uska...... khair chodo......kya karta woh ladka batao

Sonakshi looking downat her hands ........:Wohi jo use sahi lage kyunki ..

Rohit : Kyunki kya Sonakshi ....... Kya tumne socha tum mahaan ho , jab mujhe tumhari sabse jyada jarurat thi tab tumne mera sath chodne ki koshish ki , Main Raima ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tyar tha lekin tumhe chod ko nahi ....... SHAYAD ISI HOSPITAL MEIN MAINE TUMHE KAHA THA KI I WANTED TO SAY SORRY TO RAIMA , USKI WOH HALAT MERE KARAN HUI , USKE CHAR SAAL MERE KARAN KHOYE .. AUR MAIN USKE LIYE USKE WOH CHAAR SAAL TOH LAUTA NAHI PAAYA LEKIN USKI LIFE BACK IN TRACK LAANE KE LIYE MUJHSE JO BAN PADHA MAINE KIYA...AUR TUMNE BHI YAHI SOCHA KI TUMHARA ROHIT RAIMA KE PAAS WAPAS CHALA GAYA

Sonakshi stood up during the speech ... I wanted to help you Rohit , I wanted to be there for you..but everytime I came forward to stand by you , all I felt was that I was intruding . I was intruding and being a thirdwheel in the story of Raima and Rohit...... Phir mujhe laga ki shayad yahi acha hai ki main piche hatt jaun , kya pata

Rohit : Kya Pata kya Sonakshi ...... You forgot everything ,I told you that you were as important to me as my hands ...... I stood by you and I fought with my family for you ... I LOVE YOU DAMMIT

Sonakshi very teary eyed...... I ..I Oh Rohitttt I thought you loved Raima ..I thought I ....she broke down

Rohit came and hugged her and started patting her hair and then removed them immediately ..and then asked : Shooting se straight aayi hokya ,itna gel laga rakha hai balon mein ???????

Sonakshi glared at him and distanced herself a little , han shooting se aayi hun

Rohit pulling her closer again : Han toh maine toh bas pucha hi na.. ab chalo

Sonakshi : Kahan Airport !!!!!!

Rohit : Parvati maata ji ke roop se bahar aayiye Sonakshiji, Hum airport nahi jayenge

Sonakshi .... Toh ?

Rohit : Hum mere ghar jayenge , , nahi hum pehle tumhare ghar chalte hain aur tumhari mummy ko leke mere ghar jayenge aur sath mein baith ke hamari shadi ki date fix karenge

By this time Sonakshi was sitting on his lap ...... Sonakshi looked into his eyes and said but you didn’t propose and ..and I never said I loved you ...... and Rohit mom nahi maanengi aur achanak se bataenge toh kahin unke heart ko ...

Rohit gazing lovingly at her ........Your mom is so luckyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Sonakshi ; why???????????

Rohit : She is a heart patient and she is getting the best cardiologist as her damad and that damad is 100 % in his surgery rate and not only that she will be getting Sukhmani Sippy’s Hopsital as a dowry... its deal which your mother can’t refuse

Sonakshi laughed and snuggled a bit closer

Rohit : Say you love me and will never leave me and tumhara mera janmon janmom ka sath rahega aur hum mar jayenge bichachenge nahi.........aur whatever you wish to say .

Sonakshi glaring again: Rohitttttttttttt

Rohit : Kya maine dekha tha tum Kunal ko yahi sab keh rahi thi ek din show pe toh mujhse bhi kaho na

Sonakshi ..laughed and said : DR Surgeon tumne kabse hindi serial dekhne shuru kar diye

Rohit growing serious : Jabse tumne mujhe avoid karna shuru kiya aur sirf tumhe dekhne aur awaaaz sunne ke liye mujhe Parvati ke episodes ka intezaar karna padhtha

Sonakshi : I am so sorry Rohit ........i just wanted you to be happy , and if your happiness meant being with Raima I wanted that for you.....

Rohit : Even at the cost of your love and happiness s?

Sonakshi : Anything for you ..... I love you my DR Surgeon

Rohit cuddling her : Sonakshi .. its true I loved Raima ,and shayad at one point of my life she was my life , I was consumed by my love for her ........ then she left and I became a shell of myself ...... and then you entered my life I ...I liked you at first ........ then I admired you and respected you trusted you.. Then you became a part of me ....... You were such a part of my that I could just convey my thought by looking at you,you are my soulmate , I don’t need a love which consumes , I need someone by my side to help me grow , with whom I can laugh and in front of whom I can cry , with whom I can trust myself , Tum ho jo mujhe har tarike accept karti ho...... You are my hands , my heart and my mind ,

Sonakshi blushing ; Bas Bas Dr Sippy warna aapko Surgery chod ke poet banna hoga

Rohit : Thik hai madam ....... ab toh baki zindagi padhi hai hamare paas ....... Ek aur fayda hogaya , ab mujhe KPK nahi dekhna padhega rozroz .. Pata hai saare hospital staff ko shak hone laga tha mujh pe ki aakhir mein main 2-2;30 ke bich koi surgery ya checkups kyun nahi schedule karta hun

Sonakshi : Agar tum mujhse shaddi karoghe toh tumko dekhana hi hoga woh har serial jisme main kaam karungi aur aur

Rohit : bas bas , shadi kar rahi ho ya punishment de rahi ho......... Ok Ok main serial dekhunga , lekin fan sites mat join karne ko kehna....... aur main tum logon ke woh award functions pe nahi jaunga

Sonakshi pouting :kyun ... main na

Rohit : Ab bas ....... chalo meri Gaadi ka petrol phunk raha hoga Ravi ..........

Sonakshi and Rohit moved across the hospital hand in hand animatedly talking

Sonakshi : Hum Sunita ki aur Ravi ki bhi shadi karwa dete hain....... Same day pe nahi unki pehle aur apni baad mein kyunki woH NA...

Rohit mentally thinking ... Iss tarah se toh Sonakshi jab tak poore KPK ke cast ke shadi nahi karwa degi meri dal nahi galegi .. but outwardly smiling and mumbling... han han kyun nahi ...

And they walked hand in hand towards their always


And thats the end ....... very sentimental I know ........this idea was bubbling in my head for some time

I can’t write angst ......and I am a poor writer ....... SO anyways Thanks for reading

Edited by atikna - 6 years ago

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alvina thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Its good

I was laughing at the title of ur post

Bandi serial mein puri tarah aayi nahi and u already wrote abt her exit🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Oh dear! We r so much invested in this. Kaise jhelenge raima aur Rohit ko🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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How desperate we are about Raima's track that lay d first stone of u to draw a literal door way to Raima even before her entry in d show 😆

Ur thread title is soo comforting 😳🙈

Awesome OS, hope it follows d same in the show as well...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omg!!! That was so cute and hilarious. You should do this more... I really loved how Rohit being himself pulled her legs effortlessly. Sona wanting Ravi and sunita to be married, Sukhmani Sippy hospital as dowry, the lists goes on! What comic timing! Hahahahah

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was so sweet! It’s nice to see some one shots coming up. Was craving to read one! Keep writing more❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wat a perfect os yaar perfect blend of evrythng.. raima k entry ne tumhe writer bana diya😆 exactly dr surgeon parvati vibes😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Whoa!! Title read karake I thought ki yeh kab hua? I was so happy... Fir dekha ki OS hai... Fir socha ki yeh writer toh badi hai chalak hai... Aane se pehelhi exit ka OS likh diya... Bohot maza aaya.



And it was a great OS. Really liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: alvina

Its good

I was laughing at the title of ur post

Bandi serial mein puri tarah aayi nahi and u already wrote abt her exit🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Oh dear! We r so much invested in this. Kaise jhelenge raima aur Rohit ko🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

Arre I wrote it in so much hurry , had this idea bubbling in my head but couldn't put it into words and then today I started writing and as I was writing I got calls from friends to watch a movie ... Had to rush it all and never thought of the title and just posted and left

I just saw the post now and saw the numerous mistakes I have made... Thanks for reading

I saw Farnaz 's interview ... She is so enthusiastic about her role and it being very positive that I think we can rest assured that hat this track will be treated well

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: l-NiklausFan-l

How desperate we are about Raima's track that lay d first stone of u to draw a literal door way to Raima even before her entry in d show 😆

Ur thread title is soo comforting 😳🙈

Awesome OS, hope it follows d same in the show as well...

I wanted to have a scene of Rohit and Raima too ,but it got too lenghty and I am very impatient so I just turned this half baked idea into words ... Wrote in a hurry and just posted it

Thanks for reading

Maybe I will write an scene for Rohit and Raima tooo

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Omg!!! That was so cute and hilarious. You should do this more... I really loved how Rohit being himself pulled her legs effortlessly. Sona wanting Ravi and sunita to be married, Sukhmani Sippy hospital as dowry, the lists goes on! What comic timing! Hahahahah

Thanks for reading ... I can't write angst .. it's too difficult so made it into small cute scene

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