Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 48

I’m going to punch her in the face. And then punch you in the face.

Sohaaaaaa why is your Prerna so relatable? I had threatened my boyfriend a while back in the same exact way!!

A hammered Prerna is a joy to read because she is doing everything I would’ve done and more. I LOVED the petty her who tripped that fake....

Can I just awww for several minutes over how indulgent Bajaj can be with her? The lava instance, clarifying that there’s no mistress and my favorite part is him confessing that he actually prefers knobby knees!!!

Oooh also him making a deal about clothes staying on sounded like a commitment to me...

I think it’s easier if I just admit that I love every moment of Bajaj right?

PS: I hope you find a way to sort the pm mess!! ❤️

Hi.. I have come across your story just days back and was absolutely blown away... this is one of the best prerish stories I have read..😊😊 I love bajaj here.. angry, not-so-young man😋. I would love to get pms as well when you update next. This part was amazing. Jealous prerna is a treat to read. Hope to get more such scenes in future.. please update soon and keep up the good work. Much love❤

I love your story and I love this drunk Prerna. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: najma123

YES PARADISE is the one!!! FINALLY someone who knows Paradise. Movie star is Perfect and I find that a little boring and it DRAGS. I like the 3rd part Night Whispers better but nothing can match upto Paradise. It's so different to show the girl rich for once! That never happens with these steamy romances. 😆 I have read Paradise some hundreds of times. Don't worry, people will go read. Anyways that's what is described in the gist as well. Yeah, I want Prerna to be insanely jealous

HAYEEEE MERE ZACHARY BAARE MAIN BAATH MAT KAROOO my movie director/star 😆 Perfect was so perfect for me LMAO. But I would die for Paradise, I can't believe I read that book at 15 I don't know why my mother wasn't keeping a cap on the books I was bringing home from the local library 😆 But I LOVE that there are fellow Judith readers here!!

First off I gotta say I absolutely LOVE jealous Prerna!! And she came out teeth bared and claws sharpened today! It's so fascinating to see Prerna as a multifaceted character, seeing as you know in the show she's not 😆 God the way Rishabh is her knight in blackened armour, so he can speak to the women at the party but his wife can't even chat in her drunken stupor with her ex? ACCHA BHAI 🤣 But his very soft 'well what do you know I like knobby knees' omg why is he LIKE THIS!! He's too much for my heart. And then the way he snapped 'behave' ughhhhhh si r. ☺️ SO excited to see the fallout of her embarrassment, heck yes!!

On a side note it's so fascinating to see and read Rishabh through the eyes of the other writers on this forum. Like I have a very certain image in mind when I write him, but to see how he comes to life for others such as in your and Arya's stories, is so much fun. So many times I catch myself thinking 'oh god that's so Rishabh' or agreeing with how he shines in your stories. I just love seeing him through other people's eyes. It's the same way with Prerna, she is so different in your story versus Arya's, and both are so much at their core Prerna. Idk if I'm making sense but I just love your story!

Sohaa,

Bae you're perfect! I love this update. I love that she's more effected than RB is. I love the way you write. Anurag's POV.. 🤣. Going by the show, I don't want good things for him. I love the drunk Prerna. Torturing RB..🤭🤭 And her rocking the boyfriend look.

I love everything about this story!

I love you to the Mars and back.

~Aparna.

Originally posted by: MaroRudra

Hey! I just came across your story today only and have binge read all 20 parts in one go! Hence why you won’t have seen me engage in the comments section earlier. I would hate to miss out on any new parts so if you could add me to the PM list that would be most appreciated- I hate the idea of not knowing what is going to happen next!

As for everything I’ve read so far, I love that you developed a relationship between Mr Bajaj and Prerna before it jumped straight to marriage. I wish they had done that in the show too, I actually feel the audience would have been far more receptive to a love triangle had it been slowly played out. But the writers jumped the gun and went straight to marriage which is why so many people can’t digest Prerna and Bajaj’s relationship. I love that we got to see how Prerna did so much for Anurag and he didn’t have any trust in her at all. Intrigued to see where the story goes next and hopefully the CVs come across your story too so they can take some tips on how to take it to the next level!!

Hi,

I'm so glad you liked the story. If I ever figure out how pms works, I'll send you one. No worries. But seeing how much trouble I had the first time around, I'm still hella annoyed with the system and seriously considering discontinuing the story.

But I'm thrilled to bits that you've liked what I've written so far. <3

Originally posted by: vena.cava.

HAYEEEE MERE ZACHARY BAARE MAIN BAATH MAT KAROOO my movie director/star 😆 Perfect was so perfect for me LMAO. But I would die for Paradise, I can't believe I read that book at 15 I don't know why my mother wasn't keeping a cap on the books I was bringing home from the local library 😆 But I LOVE that there are fellow Judith readers here!!

Matt is probably the one reason, I stopped having real life crushes in high school itself.😆☺️

Originally posted by: vena.cava.

First off I gotta say I absolutely LOVE jealous Prerna!! And she came out teeth bared and claws sharpened today! It's so fascinating to see Prerna as a multifaceted character, seeing as you know in the show she's not 😆 God the way Rishabh is her knight in blackened armour, so he can speak to the women at the party but his wife can't even chat in her drunken stupor with her ex? ACCHA BHAI 🤣 But his very soft 'well what do you know I like knobby knees' omg why is he LIKE THIS!! He's too much for my heart. And then the way he snapped 'behave' ughhhhhh si r. ☺️ SO excited to see the fallout of her embarrassment, heck yes!!

On a side note it's so fascinating to see and read Rishabh through the eyes of the other writers on this forum. Like I have a very certain image in mind when I write him, but to see how he comes to life for others such as in your and Arya's stories, is so much fun. So many times I catch myself thinking 'oh god that's so Rishabh' or agreeing with how he shines in your stories. I just love seeing him through other people's eyes. It's the same way with Prerna, she is so different in your story versus Arya's, and both are so much at their core Prerna. Idk if I'm making sense but I just love your story!

Hahahah! I think just about anyone would write Prerna better than the one seen on tv. There, she's just shown as a plot device. I can't stand self-sacrificing, weak, portrayals of women on celluloid. It makes NO sense when every woman in real life, fights 10 different battles at the same time.

I actually try so hard to make Rishabh unreadable and mysterious and closed off. Sometimes I wonder if I'm over doing it. I read Aparna's story and love the way she writes. <3

Which one are you writing? I'll start reading immediately.

Plz don’t discontinue n add me to ur pm list if you make one I m ur fan u hav done a gud job cont n let us know wen ur update will be done